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雅思小作文各种图题、表格题技巧总结

雅思小作文各种图题、表格题技巧总结

雅思小作文各种图题、表格题技巧总结雅思作文Task 1受图表内容的限制,遣词造句的要求非常有限,只需针对考试,把核心表达用准用熟即可,所谓博大不如精深。

下面是威学教育雅思教研组总结的雅思小作文线图题、柱形图题、饼图题、表格题以及流程图等的写作总结!线图、柱状图、饼图,表格题介绍段introduction介绍段内容几乎完全不用创新,就是对题目文字部分的第二段做改写,paraphrase the rubric.所谓改写,要么换词,要么换句式。

例如:(I4-100)The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and most popular countries for UK residents to visit.换词(1) 图 The charts图:chart, graph(雅思写作中完全等价,无差别)线:line / curve chart柱图:bar / column graph饼:pie chart表:table / statistics / figures(2) 动词“表明”give information about介绍段是客观描述,用一般现在时态,give information about 虽然在这篇作文中最好不再用,但是informal learning,随手学到的东东,留作其它文章再用。

替换的词语和结构很多,比如我常用的show /illustrate / demonstrate/compare,大家也可以选几个自己喜欢并且拼写准确的形成风格。

第二段其余部分的替换因题而异,比如travel换成visitthe UK换成Britain(注意不是England,英格兰只是Britain的一部分)popular换成fashionablecountry换成nationUK residents to visit换成UK tourists不过随着练习作文数量的增加,你会惊喜的发现,雅思图表作文,连描述的对象都是类似的。

雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文写作技巧及范文一.图表类型饼状图,直方图或柱形图趋势曲线图表格图流程图或过程图程序图二.解题技巧A. 表格图1 横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势2 纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势3 无需将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值,对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的说明:考察例举数字的能力和方法。

注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

B. 曲线图1 极点说明: 对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明2 趋势说明: 对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平3 交点说明: 对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明说明:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会 general classification, 即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。

接下来在分类描述每个阶段的 specific trend, 同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。

注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较 native 的单词和短语来描述 trend。

C. 饼状图1 介绍各扇面及总体的关系2 各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较3 重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的D. 柱状图1. 比较 : similarity2.对比 : difference)3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征E.流程图1.首先说明:做什么工作的过程,目的是什么 2.准备工作 3.按时间/过程先后描述4.结果 5.简单总结说明:注意流程图里的“因果关系” 或每一流程的“承前启后” 关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。

F. 实物/器具工作过程 1.实物的名称,功能 2.基本结构 3.工作过程 4.简单总结G. 综合图1 不求甚解,不拘泥于细节2 分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表3 不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系三.写作结构框架结构1.开头:该图阐述的是______ 的______.共有以下几个部分组成。

雅思11test1写作范文

雅思11test1写作范文

雅思11test1写作范文一、开头段。

Hey there! When it comes to university education, the big question of whether it should focus more on theoretical knowledge or practical skills is like a hot potato. Some people firmly believe that theory is the king, while others think that getting your hands dirty with practical skills is the real deal. Well, let's dig into this topic a bit deeper.二、主体段1 阐述理论知识的重要性(站在支持理论知识的角度)On one hand, theoretical knowledge is like the foundation of a big, shiny skyscraper. Without it, the whole building would just come tumbling down. In university, students study all kinds of theories. For example, in physics, they learn about the laws of motion. These theories might seem a bit dry and abstract at first, but they are super important. They give students a framework to understand how the world around them works.It's like having a map before you go on a journey. Theoretical knowledge helps students develop their critical thinking skills. They learn to analyze different concepts, make connections between different ideas, and question the existing knowledge. This kind of intellectual exercise is really valuable. Also, a strong theoretical background can open up many career opportunities in fields like research. Scientists need a deep understanding of theories to make new discoveries. So, it's not just about passing exams, but about building a solid base for future development.三、主体段2 阐述实践技能的重要性(站在支持实践技能的角度)On the flip side, practical skills are like the tools in a toolbox. You can't build a house just by looking at the blueprints, right? You need topick up those hammers and nails and start working. In university, practical skills are becoming more and more crucial. Take engineering students, for instance. They can't just know all the equations and theories aboutbuilding structures. They need to know how to actually build things, test materials, and operate machinery.Practical skills also make students more employable right after graduation. In today's job market, employers are often looking for people who can hit the ground running. If a student has already had some hands on experience in their field, they are more likely to get a job. Moreover, practical skills can enhance students' creativity. When they are working on real world projects, they often come up with innovative solutions to problems. It's like they are learning by doing, and this kind of learning can be really effective.四、结尾段。

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文雅思写作小作文模板及范文。

雅思写作小作文是雅思考试中的一个重要部分,它要求考生在有限的时间内写出一篇简短的文章,表达自己的观点和看法。

为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作小作文,下面将介绍一些常用的写作模板和范文,供考生参考。

模板一,提出观点。

首先,引出话题,简要介绍自己的观点;其次,列举2-3个支持自己观点的理由或例子;最后,总结观点,得出结论。

范文一,提出观点。

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to work from home rather than in an office. In my opinion, working from home has several advantages.Firstly, working from home can save commuting time and reduce stress. Many people spend hours commuting to and from work every day, which can be tiring and frustrating. By working from home, they can avoid the daily commute and have more time for themselves.Secondly, working from home can improve work-life balance. With the flexibility of working hours, people can better manage their time and allocate more time to their families and personal interests. This can lead to a happier and more fulfilling life.In conclusion, working from home has many benefits, including saving time, reducing stress, and improving work-life balance. Therefore, I believe that working from home is a preferable option for many people.模板二,对比观点。

雅思小作文柱状图

雅思小作文柱状图

雅思小作文:柱状图柱形图Bar类作文是雅思[微博]小作文中的一个比较重要的类型。

在写柱形图作文时有哪些注意的点?本文对此做了总结。

关于柱状图我们主要分两种写法:1.如果横轴有明显的时间推移的话,烤鸭们应连接柱子顶点,重在描述柱子的升降起伏,写法类似于线状图。

2.如果无时间推移,则写法和饼状图一样。

即按照各比较对象所占比例的高低写,同时要注意各所占比例之间的比较。

可以用到的词汇有:1.表示“占多少”的动词Account forTake upMake upContribute toHaveRepresent2.表示“最高级”和“比较级”第一/最小the largest/biggest proportion of第二the second/next largest/expensive(+ 形容词的最高级)第三followed closely by最低/最小the smallest percent of all3.表示“相同比例”即在饼状图中遇到了比例相同或者差不多的饼,如有A B两个比较对象。

A accounts for the same percentage asB 。

The proportion of A is as high as BA andB contributed equally/evenly to (all )在观察柱形图的时候首先要留意横轴的数据,若横轴为时间轴或者是年龄趋势,那么我们在主体段写作时候的基本思路就为从左到右;若横轴数据为具体专有名词诸如地点,交通工具等时,主体段的写作思路就可能是按照柱形的长度排列。

本文根据上述的分析做以下的总结:一、按照横轴从左到右排列数据:1. 两根柱且趋势截然相反在这种写法中,我们要注意观察2根柱的上升/下降的幅度。

以下我们就来看一个例子:The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers。

雅思五段作文范文模板

雅思五段作文范文模板

雅思五段作文范文模板第一段,引入话题。

在引入话题的部分,我们需要简要介绍文章要讨论的内容。

我们可以使用一些引人注目的事实、数据或者引用一些权威人士的观点来引起读者的兴趣。

在这一部分,我们需要明确表达我们的立场或者观点,为后面的论证做好铺垫。

第二段,论证第一个观点。

在这一部分,我们需要详细论述第一个观点。

我们可以列举一些具体的例子或者数据来支持我们的观点。

同时,我们也可以引用一些权威人士的观点来加强我们的论证。

在论证完第一个观点之后,我们需要总结本段内容,并过渡到下一个观点的论证。

第三段,论证第二个观点。

在这一部分,我们需要详细论述第二个观点。

同样地,我们可以列举一些具体的例子或者数据来支持我们的观点,也可以引用一些权威人士的观点来加强我们的论证。

在论证完第二个观点之后,我们需要总结本段内容,并过渡到下一个观点的论证。

第四段,讨论对立观点。

在这一部分,我们需要讨论一些对立的观点。

我们可以列举一些对立观点的理由,并对这些理由进行逐一反驳。

我们需要展现出我们对这些对立观点的理解,并通过论证来证明我们的观点更加合理。

第五段,总结全文。

在这一部分,我们需要对全文进行总结,并重申我们的观点。

同时,我们也可以展望一下未来的发展趋势或者给出一些建议。

在总结全文之后,我们可以用一些积极的话语来鼓励读者对我们的观点持有开放的态度。

雅思五段作文范文模板。

近年来,全球气候变化日益严重,给人类社会和自然环境带来了巨大的影响。

因此,我们迫切需要采取行动来应对气候变化。

本文将从减少碳排放、发展可再生能源和保护生态环境等方面,探讨应对气候变化的策略。

首先,减少碳排放是应对气候变化的关键。

碳排放是气候变化的主要原因之一,因此减少碳排放是非常重要的。

政府可以通过制定相关政策来限制工业企业和汽车排放的碳量,推广绿色出行方式,鼓励居民节能减排。

同时,企业也可以加大技术投入,提高生产效率,减少能源消耗,从而减少碳排放。

其次,发展可再生能源也是应对气候变化的重要举措。

雅思写作如何写好开头段

雅思写作如何写好开头段

雅思写作如何写好开头段一、抛弃冗长模板"使用模板,一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张,但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。

其实模板套句并不是不能用,而是要运用灵活,不留痕迹。

在很多文章中,开头结尾的.两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目,这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明,更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。

建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句,如:我们的生活已离不开…We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。

我们随处都可以看到…/使用…(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。

(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。

…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。

(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。

There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。

越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。

More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。

…已经不再罕见It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。

雅思写作必备高分技巧

雅思写作必备高分技巧

雅思写作必备高分技巧雅思写作想得高分,这些技巧不行不知道,今日我就给大家带来了雅思写作高分技巧,希望能够关怀到大家,下面我就和大家共享,来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作想得高分这些技巧不行不知道一.词汇的问题很多同学在雅思写作的时候都会背很多高难的词汇,但这并不是雅思评分标准的核心。

他们想要知道的是你有没有精准的用到了这些词,把认识的词汇进行稳固了解才是真理。

如何做到这些呢,把6级词汇和雅思词汇拿出来,你会看到很多你认识的词,但真要说到用法,还是有很多不确定。

把这些单词整理下来,用例子和语义重新梳理一遍。

二.拓展词汇在做到精准的用词之后,就可以想想拓展词汇事情。

雅思写作的题材是特殊固定的,分类题材,在每一个分类里面找出常用的词汇。

背诵范文只是一个步骤,最关键的是在每个题材下面练习写一篇自己的文章,里面用到这些语句和词汇,仔细斟酌是否有用对这个词。

三.论述的重要性一篇文章写完最重要的是有没有自己的观点和认识,这也是雅思索官很看中的一个方面。

这时候论述的策论就很重要了,要考虑到扣题,也要考虑到完善的扩展连接自己观点。

这点对于词汇句式相对较好的人是要重点突破的一关,也是7分和6.5的分水岭。

2021年7月21日雅思写作真题回忆及范文题目为Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.雅思小作文类型:流程图题目The diagram shows the how recycled paper is made雅思大作文类型:社会类题目:Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.What do you think the causes of this problem?And how to solve this?范文来自雅思哥:Despite the high level of knowledge, employers today have found that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills needed in an office environment. This essay will analyze the main reason leading to the problem and offer some potential solutions to it.People with interpersonal skills are the people who can vary how they act and what they contribute. They notice the strengths and weaknesses of their group, and they adapt. However, schools and colleges or universities have failed to equip students with such applied skills. Instead, students are encouraged to focus on their academic subjects exclusively, because they are only evaluated by their academic performance which is essential to receiving an academic qualification. Unfortunately, many of them have turned into information recipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way without truly developing abilities and skills required in today s job market. For high schools, educators should think more about how students are learning, rather than just what they are learning. Teaching should reflect the richnessof real-life interactions, and to give students experience in the kinds of settings that are going to be useful to them when they leave school. Assignments and curricula should integrate opportunities to work collaboralively. Group projects, for example, are valuable learning opportunities.In the higher education sphere, professors and administrators should encourage students to seek out real-world experiences. Colleges and universities could ask students to work cotlaboratively in the classroom and pursue internships and volunteer opportunities outside of it. Students should also look for critical growth opportunities within their extracurncular activities, rather than just viewing them as resume-fillers.To conclude, jobs requiring high levels of social interaction are growing. In order to help graduates better prepare for their future career, changes should be considered in the education system.雅思写作精简之道长难句请绕路雅思写作精简建议一:避开空洞的单词和词组1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息,完全可以删掉。

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雅思小作文 主体段写作技巧 即描述数据和趋势的方法
By Jimmy Xu
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总结

1. 雅思写作描述数据句子的特点 趋势特征+数据支持 前半句话是说趋势特征,后半句话给出数据支持 无论是独立主格,还是现在分词,抑或常用句型 2. 同理可得:雅思写作主体段的特点 趋势特征+数据支持 首句给出趋势特征,X句给出数据支持 即1+X句结构
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