西安郭杜大学城学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
西安郭杜大学城学校初中英语九年级全一册Starter Unit 2经典题
考试范围：xxx；满分：***分；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx 学校：__________ 姓名：__________ 班级：__________ 考号：__________一、选择题1．It's a ______ for Chinese to eat dumplings on the Spring Festival.A．tradition B．traditional C．traditionally D．traditions 2．-___________wonderful the music is! What’s its name?-Victory.A．How B．How a C．What D．What a 3．—How do you celebrate______?—We usually eat zongzi and watch boat races.A．the Spring Festival B．the Mid-Autumn FestivalC．the Lantern Festival D．the Dragon Boat Festival 4．—Excuse me, can you teach me how to this new word?—No problem. Look at my mouth and listen carefully.A．prove B．pronounce C．prepare D．produce 5．He asked me _________.A．what did my mother say B．what I will do next yearC．why I didn't pass the exam D．that I failed the exam6．The little boy promised _________ better from now on.A．to do B．do C．doing D．did7．He thinks that he needs to take more exercise because he’s _________ weight. A．putting off B．putting up C．putting out D．putting on 8．Nowadays people who smoke in public places will be _________ .A．hurt B．stolen C．punished D．admired 9．____my grandpa is over 80 years old, he still looks strong and healthy. A．Although B．Because C．Unless D．Until 10．Don’t hurry him. You will just have to be and wait until he finishes the work. A．active B．careful C．patient D．famous 11．________ mooncake on the plate looks delicious.I want to eat ________．A．A；one B．The；it C．The；one D．A；it 12．Andrew decided ______ for a walk in the forest.A．go B．to goC．going D．goes13．Linda has a garden, Garden is beautiful.A．a B．an C．the D．/ 14．good time we are having!A．What a B．What C．How D．How a15．He never others.A．plays tricks on B．plays trick onC．play tricks on D．play a trick on16．The young man kept _______the little boy _______away from the big dog .A．to warn , keeping B．to warn, to keepC．warning , keeping D．warning , to keep17．It is cold outside. Please keep the door _________ to keep ________ .A．close, warm B．closed, warm C．to close, warmth D．closing, warmth 18．My grandmother always treats others with _______.A．warm B．warmly C．warmth D．warmer 19．________ Chinese culture, many college students go to foreign countries every year. A．Spread B．Spreading C．To spread D．Spreads 20．The waiter is busy serving the ________.A．workers B．customers C．strangers D．listeners 21．Don't hurry. He ________here as soon as the meeting is over.A．comes B．will comeC．will get to D．gets22．--What do you often do _____ classes to relax yourselves?--We often do eye exercises ,listen to music or do some running around the school.A．in B．among C．between D．through 23．一Could you please teach me how to "red envelops(红包)" on WeChat?一Sure. Let me show you.A．give away B．give upC．give back D．give out24．Last week，some students an English play at Rosie Bridge School.A．put out B．put away C．put on D．put up 25．beautifully little Simon dances in front of the camera!A．What B．What a C．How D．How a 26．The police warned the thief _______again.A．not to steal B．to not stealC．not steal D．not stealing【参考答案】一、选择题1．A 2．A 3．D 4．B 5．C6．A 7．D 8．C9．A 10．C 11．B 12．B 13．C 14．A 15．A 16．D 17．B 18．C 19．C 20．B 21．B 22．C 23．D 24．C 25．C 26．A【参考解析】一、选择题1．A解析：A【分析】【详解】句意：春节吃饺子是中国人的传统。
西安汇知初级中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
西安汇知初级中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。
请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。
内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。
要求：1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。
西安市中考英语模拟试卷分类汇编英语阅读理解(及答案)(1)
西安市中考英语模拟试卷分类汇编英语阅读理解(及答案)(1)一、英语阅读理解专项练习试卷1．阅读理解A wealthy man asked an old scholar to tell his son away from his bad habits. The scholar took the young man for a walk through a garden. Stopping suddenly, he told the boy to pull out a tiny plant growing there.The young man made it easily. The old man then asked him to pull out a little bigger plant. The young man pulled hard and the plant came out with its roots. “Now pull out that one,” said the old man, pointing to a little tree. The boy had to use all his strength to pull it out.“Now take this one out,” said the old man, pointing at a big orange tree. The young man held the trunk (树干) and tried to pull it out. But it would not move. “It's impossible”, said the boy, panting (喘息) with the effort.“So it is with bad habits,” said the old man. “When they are young, it is easy to pull them out. But when they go deeply, they cannot be uprooted.”The conversation with the old man changed the boy's life.（1）The scholar asked the young man to take a walk with him in the__________.A. forestB. parkC. gardenD. school（2）The scholar asked the young man to pull out plants for _____times.A. fourB. twoC. threeD. five（3）According to the passage, the scholar must be __________.A. a stupid manB. a lazy manC. a wise manD. a funny man（4）This passage mainly talks about___________.A. we need exercise more to pull trees outB. how to get away from bad habitsC. talking with a scholar is very importantD. the earlier getting away from bad habits, the better【答案】（1）C（2）A（3）C（4）D【解析】【分析】短文大意：一个富人请求一位智者去除儿子的坏习惯。
西安 中考英语 语法填空训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析
西安中考英语语法填空训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、英语语法填空汇编1．语法填空The Chinese first ________ （make）paper about 2,000 years ago. China still has pieces ________paper which were made as long ago as that. But Chinese paper was not made from the wood of trees. It was made from the hair-like parts of certain plants.Paper was not made in ________ （south）Europe until about the year 1100. Scandinavia （斯堪的纳维亚半岛）,which now makes a great deal of the ________ （world） paper, did not begin to make it until 1500. It was a German ________ （name） Schaeffer who found out that one could make the best paper from trees. After that, the forest countries of Sweden, Norway, Finland, and the United States ________ （become）the largest paper producers. Today in Finland, which makes the ________ （good） paper in the world, the paper industry is the biggest on the land. New papermaking machines are very big, and ________ （them） make paper very fast. The biggest machines can make a piece of paper that is 300 metres long and 6 metres wide ________ one minute.When we think of paper, we think of newspapers, books, letters, envelopes and writing paper. ________there are many other uses. Only half of the paper that is made is used for books and newspapers, etc.【答案】 made；of；southern；world's；named；became；best；they；in；But【解析】【分析】本文介绍了全世界的造纸工艺。
西安市中考英语模拟试卷分类汇编英语阅读理解(及答案)
西安市中考英语模拟试卷分类汇编英语阅读理解(及答案)一、英语阅读理解专项练习试卷1．阅读理解When I was ten, my mother worked all day so I had to take care of my younger brother. At that time my little brother was about four years old and he missed mum all the time.One day, after I had given him his dinner, he started crying for mum. He was so young and really needed mum. So I dressed him, put on his shoes, carried him on my back and walked out. Soon he fell asleep. About half an hour later, I found that he had lost a shoe while sleeping. I took him off my back and put him down. I knew we needed to find that shoe, for our mother couldn't afford new shoes. We had to go back to find it, so I told my brother to wait right there. A man heard it and stopped me just before I walked off. He asked me, "You are leaving your brother here to find the shoe? What would you do if he is not here when you return?" I did not know how to answer that question. He continued, "It's OK if you can't find the shoe, but it is not OK to lose your brother." Then he sent us to mum's workplace by taxi.I have depended on（依靠） the kindness of many strangers in my whole life, I feel regretful that I can't find them and say thank you. I do not even remember what the man's face looked like, but he taught me a lesson—people are more important than things.（1）Why did the younger brother cry for his mother?A. Because he was hungry.B. Because he missed his mother.C. Because he wanted to sleep.D. Because he wanted to play outside.（2）What does the underlined word "regretful" in the last paragraph mean?A. Sorry.B. Excited.C. Happy.D. Angry.（3）What did the man mean by saying "It's OK if you can't find the shoe, but it's not OK to lose your brother"?A. People are more important than things.B. Things are more important than people.C. Both the shoe and your brother are important.D. The shoe is more important than your brother.【答案】（1）B（2）A（3）A【解析】【分析】主要讲了作者的妈妈整天工作，所以作者照顾弟弟，一天弟弟哭着找妈妈，作者背着弟弟出去了，结果把鞋子掉了，作者想丢下弟弟找鞋子，一位好心人告诉作者不要把弟弟独自丢下，并且带他们去找妈妈，这让作者明白了人比东西更重要。
西安郭杜大学城学校初中英语九年级全册Unit 6经典题
一、选择题1．This book _____ Lucy’s. Look! Her name is on the book cover.A．must be B．may be C．can’t be D．mustn’t be A解析：A【详解】试题分析：must be一定，必须；may be可能是；can’t be不能是；mustn’t be 一定不要。
联系下文，她的名字就在书的封面上。
可知这本书一定是露西的。
故选A。
2．________ may have a chance (机会) to be successful if he tries his best.But ___ doesn't believe it.A．None，somebody B．Nobody，everybody C．Somebody，anybody D．Everybody，somebody D解析：D【解析】【详解】句意：如果尽力而为，每个人都可能有机会成功。
但是有人不相信。
考查不定代词。
1.everybody：每个人，人人，所有人，强调的整体。
2.anybody指任何一个人，是泛指其中一个，侧重于强调个体。
用于否定句、疑问句、条件句是指任何人, 无论谁（什么人）；用于肯定句指任何一个人。
3.nobody：无人，没有人，或作名词讲，意思是“小人物”。
4.somebody：某人，一般用于肯定句，做主语时也可用于否定句，意思是“有人”，部分否定；或作名词讲，意思是“大人物，重要的人物”。
结合句意和选项可知选D。
3．He is the writer________won the Nobel(诺贝尔) Literature Prize.A．which B．whose C．who D．whom C解析：C【解析】【详解】句意：他是获得诺贝尔文学奖的作家。
考查定语从句。
A. which指物，当先行词是物，引导词which在定语从句中作宾语或主语；例如，The book which is on the table is mine.（作主语）B. whose指所有关系，在定语从句中作定语，它既可以指代人，也可以指代物，例如，They lives in a room whose window opens to the south.（他们住在一间窗户朝南开的房间里。
西安郭杜大学城学校完形填空中考英语专项训练含答案解析
西安郭杜大学城学校完形填空中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语完形填空1．通读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后在各题所给的四个选项A、B、C 和D 中选出一个最佳选项。
When my family moved to Ohio over the summer, I feared going to another new school and knowing no one because I was able to 1 what was coming. I had bright red hair and huge glasses. Besides, I was 2 and not very popular. 3 on the school bus that first day, I felt like all eyes on me. I could hear the words "She's huge!" Clearly, the kids on the bus had known each other well. I spent that first bus 4 in silence.The following day was even worse. I did not notice that a few boys had tied a rope across the aisle（通道）and then fell face first on the bus, 5 everything I was carrying. 6 I was uneasily gathering my things, I could hear the laughter, and then the words “That felt like an earthquake!”Anyway, I 7 to find a seat. Looking out of the window, I held back the tears running out of my eyes.It was then 8 I went into myself. I began walking everywhere. I would walk through the woods behind our house. I would also walk to a church. I began 9 the afternoon school bus on purpose, walking home instead. Then, 10 , I started losing weight. And as I became satisfied with myself, I began making 11 .One of my newly found friends also fought with her weight. She lived near my neighborhood so we would meet and 12 together. This became a daily activity with talking and laughing13 the way—different from the lonely walks I had taken. While I would no longer want to experience that time of loneliness and sadness again, I am 14 I made it through. Whenever I am fighting with any other problem in life, I always remember the saying "This too shall pass（一切都会过去的）".If you can find a path with no obstacles（障碍）, it probably doesn't 15 anywhere.1. A. expect B. understand C. express D. explain2. A. thin B. overweight C. short D. tall3. A. Running B. Sleeping C. Jumping D. Getting4. A. drive B. lift C. ride D. travel5. A. throwing B. losing C. leaving D. dropping6. A. While B. Though C. Since D. Because7. A. decided B. remembered C. failed D. managed8. A. when B. who C. that D. which9. A. catching B. missing C. taking D. stopping10. A. unexpectedly B. uncertainly C.unluckilyD. uninterestedly11. A. changes B. friends C. efforts D. decisions12. A. study B. play C. chat D. walk13. A. along B. across C. around D. above14. A. excited B. worried C. proud D. sad15. A. appear B. step C. lead D. stay【答案】（1）A；（2）B；（3）D；（4）C；（5）D；（6）A；（7）D；（8）C；（9）B；（10）A；（11）B；（12）D；（13）A；（14）C；（15）C；【解析】【分析】本文通过作者就经历告诉我们，如果我们能够正确地面对困难，我们就会克服它，困难必须成为过去。
西安郭杜大学城学校八年级下册英语完形填空测试卷附答案
西安郭杜大学城学校八年级下册英语完形填空测试卷附答案一、八年级英语下册完形填空专项训练1．完形填空I was always busy and had too many things to do. Whenever my daughter caused me to changemy plans, I thought to myself, "We don't have time for this." So the two words I always said to her were: 1 .The other day, the two of us rode to a supermarket near our home. After shopping I bought heran ice cream, and she sat down at a table 2 , looking at the ice cream in her hand. Suddenly a 3 look was on her face. "Do I have to eat it up in a hurry, Mum?"I nearly cried when hearing this—the pains of a hurried life influenced（影响） my poor girl so deeply! As she looked at me, waiting to know if she could 4 her time. I knew I had to make a 5 . I thought of the times when I rushed my child through life, I began 6 what is really important in life…"You don't have to hurry. Just enjoy it." I said gently. Her whole face brightened and her shoulders 7 . We sat side by side talking about things that interested us.When she got to the last bite （一口）, she held it out to me, " I 8 the last bite for you, Mum," she said happily. As the icy taste put out my thirst（解渴）, I realized I just got the present of a lifetime. I 9 my child a little time… and in return, she gave me her last bite and reminded（提醒）me that things taste sweeter and love is easier to get when you stop rushing 10 life.1. A. Keep quiet B. Take care C. Hurry up D. Work hard2. A. happily B. sadly C. angrily D. nearly3. A. worried B. tired C. excited D. surprised4. A. waste B. take C. lose D. spare5. A. book B. plan C. wish D. change6. A. exercising B. forgetting C. discussing D. wondering7. A. lifted B. relaxed C. turned D. raised8. A. bought B. carried C. saved D. tasted9. A. caught B. gave C. made D. taught10. A. across B. above C. under D. through2．完形填空Tom was a college student. He often made excuses not to attend classes. Also, he spent muchof his free time 1 computer games. He never went to the library 2 .How time flew! At the end of the term, there was 3 important event that he was afraid of—the final exam. "What should I do？" Tom walked up and down in the room the day before the exam .He was 4 . Suddenly he thought of 5 idea.The next morning, Tom went into the exam room very early. He found a young man 6 looked so confident and took a seat next to him. "Hey you！" Tom greeted ."What？" theyoung man asked." Can you do me a favor？" Tom begged（恳求）."Please let me 7 your paper during the exam. I have to depend on you！" When hearing his words, the young man just smiled but said 8 .When the bell rang, the young man 9 immediately and came to the front, saying, "It is time for the final exam! Now I will hand out the papers to all of you and collect them 10 an hour."Tom sat there with his mouth wide open.1. A. play B. plays C. playing D. played2. A. to study B. to have a rest C. to see a film D. to play computer games3. A. one B. two C. three D. four4. A. satisfied B. excited C. brave D. nervous5. A. a B. an C. the D. /6. A. what B. which C. who D. whose7. A. keep B. copy C. use D. take8. A. something B. everything C. anything D. nothing9. A. sat down B. stood up C. lied down D. sat back10. A. in B. after C. before D. when3．完形填空A few days ago, I sat in the sofa watching TV. Just then, I got a 1 from a friend of mine. I haven't seen him 2 a very long time. We talked about our school days on the phone, and then he started talking about his 3 .His mother was badly ill in hospital. She couldn't sleep at night and often 4 to herself.My friend was angry 5 her and asked his mother 6 talking. After that, his mother didn't say anything. The doctor said she had a kind of mental disease （心理疾病），and she couldn't look after herself like a normal person. My friend was very sad. He thought it was his fault （过错）. My friend 7 like a baby on the telephone. He said that he could do 8 if his mother became better.Do you know 9 our parents love us and care for us all the time? I think we should 10 love our parents and take care of them. A good relationship with your parents can make you be a better and happier person. It is worth having a try!1. A. letter B. e-mail C. call D. message2. A. in B. for C. at D. of3. A. mother B. father C. brother D. sister4. A. talked B. talk C. to talk D. talking5. A. to B. about C. for D. with6. A. stop B. to stop C. stopped D. not to stop7. A. cried B. shouted C. laughed D. heard8. A. something B. anything C. nothing D. none9. A. what B. whom C. where D. that10. A. too B. either C. also D. else4．完形填空There is an old saying: "Take the time to stop and smell the flowers." I think we should also take the time to 1 flowers.My grandmother knew just 2 to do that. She grew flowers with earth, water and love,so her back garden was filled with beautiful flowers. She would smile when she saw the 3 shine down on them. In her front garden she planted flowers, 4 . You could see red, white, and yellow flowers in it. My mom and I used to walk 5 them and enjoy their smells. Beautiful butterflies （蝴蝶） flew down on them. Grandma also cared for the wild flowers. She would send 6 and my brother out to pick flowers and would then turn them into delicious wine （酒）.Grandma not only planted flowers in the gardens 7 also planted flowers in our hearts. Her delicious dinners made with love encouraged us. Her sweet smile always made us 8 . Her hugs （拥抱） and kisses were the sunshine that kept our own love 9 day after day.Take the time to plant a few flowers yourself today. Show your smiles, kindness and love .Plant your wishes, talents and pleasure. Make this 10 brighter and brighter with your sunshine.1. A. plant B. water C. buy D. sell2. A. who B. when C. how D. where3. A. star B. sun C. rain D. wind4. A. too B. either C. then D. though5. A. .at B. on C. with D. around6. A. me B. you C. him D. her7. A. and B. so C. but D. or8. A. happy B. hungry C. tired D. angry9. A. sleeping B. growing C. standing D. losing10. A. house B. town C. city D. world5．完形填空Long long ago, there was a swan（天鹅）with golden feathers（金羽毛）. She lived in a lake.A woman lived in a small house 1 the lake with her two daughters. They were very poor. They worked hard all year round, 2 still, they lived a hard life and sometimes they even didn't have enough 3 to buy food.The swan was 4 to see that. She said to herself, "I'll give one of my feathers to them each day, then they can live a happy life with the money selling my feathers." That evening, she5 to the poor woman's house and left a golden feather on the table without saying6 From then on, the swam came every day and gave them a feather. The woman was very happy because their life was much7 than before.But day after day, the woman became greedy（贪婪）. She said to her 8 . The swan may fly away one day. If so, we will be poor again. We should take all her feathers when she comes next time.""Oh, no, Mom!" cried the daughters, "This will 9 the swan. She helps us a lot!" But the mother wouldn't listen. When the swan came as usual, the mother caught her and took all her feathers. But suddenly, the golden feathers changed into chicken feathers.Then, the Golden Swan said, "Poor Mother, I came to 10 you, but you wanted to kill me.Now I am leaving and will never come back. Never be greedy!" With these words, the swan flew away.1. A. above B. over C. near2. A. and B. but C. so3. A. money B. time C. room4. A. happy B. sad C. surprised5. A. climbed B. ran C. flew6. A. something B. nothing C. anything7. A. better B. busier C. harder8. A. sons B. daughters C. sisters9. A. hurt B. save C. protect10. A. trouble B. help C. teach6．阅读下面短文，掌握大意，然后从A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
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西安郭杜大学城学校面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习的最好方式之一。
请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。
注意：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当的格合理利用在短文中；3. 词数：100词左右；【答案】例文Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated youare, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。
而非谓语动词结构Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。
”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。
请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。
作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。
审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。
短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。
写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。
为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。
或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。
语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。
短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。
文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。
结构清晰，安排合理。
其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。
语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。
短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。
3．（·山东中考模拟）写作假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。
请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。
2. 陈述自己的理由。
3. 提出至少2条建议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。