11. 高中英语写作高级句型

高中英语写作高级句型高考英语写作高分策略1. 审题——审要求，审文体，审人称，审时态；2. 要点齐全，滴水不漏；3. 好的开头，靓的结尾；4. 用好过渡性词汇；5. 使用复杂结构，高级词汇。

什么是高级词汇呢?一般认为，不常用的词汇或者超纲词汇均可视为高级词汇。

什么是复杂结构呢？如定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，倒装句，强调句，感叹句，非谓语动词，插入语，with的复合结构，省略，独立主格结构等；很多考生的英语作文句式单一、呆板，语言缺乏多样性和灵活性，这与高考作文要求考生的语言结构富于变化、错落有致差距甚远。

要想使语言富于变化，考生就要多练习英语句型的改写或转换，为写作打好句型基础。

下面就讲讲多种能使文章靓丽的方法。

第一部分：使用高级句式的策略一. 改变句子开头。

许多考生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词，经常用名词和代词作为句子的开头，如People, We, I, He, They, She等。

但这种开头见多了，难免让人厌倦。

试比较：A. People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.B. There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.改变句子的开头常用以下四种方法：1. 用同位语开头Air, water and oxygen, everything is necessary for life.2. 用表语开头Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language is intense interest plus persistent effort.3. 用宾语开头My advice you would not listen to; my help you laughed at. Now you will have what you asked for.4. 以短语修饰语开头(1)以介词短语开头To me the news was very interesting, but to my wife very boring.(2)以分词短语开头Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades, John took flight for the Pacific islands.(3)以不定式短语开头To pass the exam, you should work very hard.二. 巧用连词。

有的考生在作文中过多地使用简单句，成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄就用so, and, then, but, or, however, yet等，这样非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。

为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用其他连词，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连词，如that, because, since, whenever, although, after, as, before, when, if, unless, as if 等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。

如：三. 长短句交叉。

长句和短句是就句子的词数多少、形体长短而言。

长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。

长句因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，所以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼简便。

短句由于词数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。

在具体语言活动中，最好长短句交替使用。

这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。

看下列句子：1. We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.2. There are many trees along the streets.3. There is a clean river in the city.4. There are many fishes in the river.5. There are willow trees on the one side.6. There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.7. There are many flowers on them.以上七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短统一都在七八词左右，十分单调。

下面是修改后的段落:1. Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.2. Green trees line the streets.3. A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound.4. On the one side stand rows of willow trees.5. On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.改写后的这段文字，有长句1、3、4，也有短句2和4，一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。

不仅句子长短交替,而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然、生动活泼。

再如：The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in spring time it often overflows its banks, and the lives of many people are endangered.四. 主动句与被动句的互换。

英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。

所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。

佳句欣赏：We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.→About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(2013·广东高考书面表达)体会：每次可以借五本书最多借十天(2006NMET)We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.哪种表达法分数会更高？【学以致用】使用被动语态转换下列句子1. Above all, we must do something to stop pollution.Above all, something must be done to stop pollution.2. They carried out a survey among 260 students.A survey was carried out among 260 students.3. The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.4. People suggest that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off.五. 使用强调句。

1. As a saying goes, the little thing matters most.→As a saying goes, it is the little thing that matters most.(2013·上海高考满分作文)2. With sincerity and faithfulness we created a harmonious atmosphere.→It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. (2014·江西高考满分作文)当我们要刻意强调某个成分时，我们可以用强调句型，注意强调句不能强调谓语。

比较：A. I saw John in the street in the classroom this morning.B. It was John that I saw in the classroom this morning.C. It was this morning that I saw John in the classroom.D. It was in the classroom that I saw John this morning.【学以致用】使用强调句转换句型：1. I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.2. The children won’t come home until 5pm..It is not until 5pm. that the children will come home.3. He went there yesterday.He did go there yesterday.4. Smoking did great harm to his health.It was smoking that did great harm to his health.5. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.6. We had to stay at home because it was raining hard.It was because it was raining hard that we had to stay at home.7. The first clock with a face and an hour hand was made about 600 years ago.It was because it was raining hard that we had to stay at home.六. 使用倒装句。