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托福写作冲刺课程电子讲义
托福写作冲刺课程大纲一、独立写作二、综合写作独立写作考试形式一、考试时间：30分钟二、话题作文三、字数要求：300以上（400左右）题型分类一一、利弊类二、事实类利弊类一、标志词：should, …is better than…, …is more important than …, which would you prefer二、答题角度：该不该，好或坏三、同意与否：今天应该下雨吗？四、Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should play sports everyday.事实类一、标志词：无二、与利弊类题目非此即彼三、答题角度：是不是，存不存在四、同意与否：今天下雨了吗？五、Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students now play sports everyday.分类意义一、避免跑题二、快速构思避免跑题一、经典错误：把事实题当做利弊题二、几个容易跑偏的题举例1、A or D? Advertisements are exaggerated.2、A or D? People now pay too much attention on their dressing and looking.3、A or D? Young people now are less dependent on their parents than they were in the past.快速构思一、利弊类：“万金由”二、事实类：“万金由”/拆分举例利弊类解题思路一、找出多个受益方与受损方二、“万金由”找出多个受益方与受损方一、对谁好？对谁不好？二、举例1、A or D? Parents should help their children do homework.2、A or D? Universities should offer students better job preparation before they start working.3、A or D? Working three days a week with longer hours is better than working five days a week with shorter hours.“万金由”一、起到提示思路作用的万能理由二、“便”“健”“安”“情”“成”“品”“环”“学”便利(convenience)一、节省时间(save time, not time-consuming)二、时间灵活(time is flexible)三、就近解决(short distance)四、提前完成(keep the schedule ahead)健康(health)一、充分休息(enough rest)二、营养均衡(balanced nutrition)三、体育锻炼(body exercise, sports)四、远离疾病(away from diseases)安全(safety)一、食品安全(food safety)二、人身安全(body safety)三、财产安全(property safety)四、生活稳定(stability, sustainability)情感(affection, love, feeling)一、亲情(family love, family accord)二、友情(friendship)三、爱情(love)四、人际关系/社会圈子(interpersonal relationship, social circle)成功(success)一、成就感(a sense of achievement)二、荣誉感(a sense of honor)三、自信(self-confidence)四、尊敬(respect)品格(virtue)一、诚实(honesty)二、勤奋(diligence)三、独立(independence)四、体贴(considerateness)五、团队精神(team spirit)六、坚韧不拔(persistence, tenacity)环保(environment protection)一、环境污染(environment pollution)二、全球变暖(global warming)三、滥砍滥发/植树造林(deforestation, afforestation)学习(learning)一、必修科目(compulsory course)二、选修科目(optional course)三、在线课程(on-line course)利弊类解题举例1、父母应该帮助孩子做作业吗？2、学校应该给毕业生更多就业指导吗？3、花钱旅游还是为了未来存钱？4、高薪离家远还是低薪离家近？5、高中应该要求所有学生都学习经济学吗？事实类一、“万金由”二、拆分举例“万金由”解事实类举例1、住大城市比住农村能够更好地照顾家庭成员吗？2、孩子现在比过去更独立于父母吗？3、运动员收入过高吗？拆分举例一、对题目中已有的关键名词进行拆分二、合理拆分到具体类别分别讨论拆分举例解题示范1、住大城市比住农村能够更好地照顾家庭成员吗？2、运动员收入过高吗？3、20年后学生还会使用打印书籍吗？抽象题目的拆分举例1、观察动物能够了解人性吗？2、人们工作是为了钱还是为了社会地位？3、现在社会中最严重的问题会在我们有生之年解决吗？4、人们过分关注衣着和长相了吗？5、人们穿衣服是为了美观吗？利弊类与事实类的解题总结一、“万金由”与拆分举例都适用；二、“万金由”提示观点，拆分举例细化讨论范围；三、理清思路，避免跑题。
托福写作讲义
（一）综合写作All the more 尤其At best 充其量姑且Hold water （理论、计划等）证明正确合理，说得通，（容器）不漏水;言之有理综合写作（1+3）综合写作流1、Direction(1min)2、Reading(3min)——230-300 words academic articles3、Listening(2min)——the topic is same as reading4、Writing(20min)——200-220 words best综合写作要求：1、topic: academic2、不能写自己的观点3、写阅读和听力之间的联系（OPPOSE 三驳三）驳斥的种类：（1）优点被驳斥（2）缺点被驳斥（3）证据被驳斥应试攻略：（1）找例子：typically, suppose, for example, take..example, especially, actually, in fact （2）找原因：since, because, the reason why, due to, thank to, owing to（3）找结构性连词：a)“结果”: so, therefore, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a resultb)“让步”和”转折”：in contrast, on the contrast, nevertheless, still, yet阅读要义读完一句，用简洁中英文或符号记下大意重点关注两类词：（1）文中反复出现的词（2）实义动词听力要义（1）阅读中出现过的词（2）听具有知己意义的词（实义动词、形容词）写作要义（1+3）1、开头段：写一段表明Reading 和Lecture 的联系（1）综合写作话题（2）阅读中心论点（3）听力中心论点2、主体部分：写三段（1）每段一对一的阐述（2）每段结构：过渡性连词（首先，其次，再次）句群1：阅读的分论点+阅读的细节句群2：听力的分论点+听力的细节开头段框架:The reading and listening materials have a conflict of opinions about……The writers believe that ………...which is contradicted by the following lecture.（1）Conflict——>debate/argument/discussion/dispute/controversy（2）About——>concerning/regarding/as to/with regards to/pertaining to（3）Believe——>consider/deem/advocate/insist（4）Contradicted——>disagree/oppose/refute/retort每段框架表达句（1）The reading states that…….On the contrary, the lecture points out that….（2）Although it is said in the passage that…..The lecture holds the view point that…..（3）The passage maintains that…..However, professor offers a different idea about….（4）The writer contends that……..while the speaker views this issue from an oppo site angle.According to her/him…..（5）The author asserts that….Nevertheless, the speaker oppose this claim by saying that……（6）The passage argues that…..By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, the writer’s view does not hold water.综合写作框架：The reading and listening materials have a debate of opinions concerning that……The writers support that ………...which is opposed by the following lecture.First of all, the reading maintains that………However, the lecture points out that……Secondly, although it is said in the passage that ………., the speaker holds the view that……. Finally, the author asserts that ………..By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, the writer’s view does not hold water.综合写作注意点：1、阅读材料的论点和细节的关键信息都要写！2、重点写听力的内容（越多越好）3、要更加注意整体篇章的把握，不要过于注重细小的错误。
托福突破作文(2014.12.26)
1.Make a decision alone or not 小马page 56 and 高分page 110高分seek advice but make decisions alone例子continuing one’s education or finding a jobChange or quit a job within family members小马vary from situation to situationAlone when facing personal affairsConsulting others or starting a poll when involving the interests of a group of people or organization例子parents influence on choice of lifeCompany, member board, collaborator to chooseAll staff evaluate logistical serviceNational and international issuesConsult the professional or experienced people for social issues2.Should adults make important decisions for their older teenage children? Page 122, 可以参照page 110第一段Should not make decisions on behalf of their children but should take an active part in the decision-making process by giving advices, providing information, experience, knowledge and boosting confidence.While parents should guide or direct their child, sometimes it is helpful to allow him/her to make a mistake. This will teach the child to live with the consequences of a wrong decision and also to ponder future choices more carefully.3.Support the arts or protect the environment 高分page 112Protect the environment since a healthy environment is the perquisite to produce and enjoy the arts and each company has an obligation to secure environment which it pollutes either directly or indirectly.4.Movies: serious or entertaining 高分page 114I derive a greater sense of enjoyment from movies that get me to think, because I can find better light entertainment elsewhere and I consider movies a serious art form.诚然，看movies that amuse or entertain lights can distract oneself from the seriousness of everyday life and can serve as a kind of escape. However, it’s nothing more than diversion. Serious movies, on the other hand, can present an important social issue from a point view that has not been thoroughly discussed. Thus, the audience can begin to think about questions that they had not considered before. In this sense, movies can add to discussion and make a contribution to culture and society.5.Should businesses do anything they can to make a profit? Page 116In the course of pursuing the greatest profit, the companies should also abide by the laws and regulations and have an ethical responsibility to both their employees and the community in which they do business.don’t include illegal means and bend the rules of the trade. 例子，some companies deliberately ignored government standards for environmental pollution limits or tried to bribe government officials to allow them to bypass these regulations. Government should set strongmeasures to punish violatorscompanies cut jobs, move jobs to another country or just close down an entire manufacturing plant simply to make further profits. However, they are not fully aware of the consequences of their actions on the lives of their employees and communities. Short-term后果，mass unemployment and sudden death of local economy, long-term: social problems such as crime, homelessness, domestic violence and drug abuse, etc.6.Live life in a hurry or at a slower pace? 高分page 118By living life at a slower pace, I have become a better student, a more reliable friend and a person who enjoys life much more than before.Get rid of several extracurricular activities and focus more on studies.Slow down the tempo and take a step back in order to prioritize the things in my life. Keep track of friends and families.Concentrate on the moment, pay more attention to detail, appreciate the good things in life without being worried about what to get accomplished next.7.Are games equally important for adults and children? 高分page 120Through games children learn gross motor and fine motor skills, they practice and develop the ability to use language, and they learn important interpersonal and social skills. Adults can use games to strengthen these areas, but their abilities are already much more advanced, and therefore games are more important for children.8.What do you appreciate most in a friend? Page 124Intelligent: some conversations on meaningful topics can be intellectually stimulating. Humorous: can entertain and ease sorrows by making me laugh in difficult timesReliable: can stand by me in difficult times, cheer each other up and rely on each other.9.Be self-employed, work for someone else or own a business? Page 128Owing one’s own business: the fastest way to fortune but have responsibilities toward the financial security of my employees and their families and is very risky.Working for an employer: less risky and there are fewer responsibility; but I have less freedom to choose what types of jobs to do. Sometimes I have to work on assignments that don’t interest me very much. Besides, it is hard for me to balance personal life and career. Sometimes, I am forced to work overtime to finish a task. In other words, I have to sacrifice my personal time to cater to my boss’ needs or maximize the interests of the company.So in sum, I would like to be self-employed. In this way, I have more freedom. On one hand, I can decide which jobs to take and which one to reject and on the other hand, I can have a more flexible work schedule that will not interfere with my personal life. Furthermore, I can be involved in every step of the development process, which is quite cool.。
新托福突破口 综合作文阅读听力原文(文本)全集 满分范文
新托福突破口TPO（1-33+纸质版4、5）综合作文阅读、听力原文（文本）全集+满分范文综合写作是作文部分，必不可少的一部分。
但是在此之前，我们很多考友都将这一部分给忽略了，我们总是将独立作文放在了第一位，但是实际上，综合作文也是占到了作文总分30分里面的50%的分值。
我们很多考友都是在分数出来之后，才发现综合作文的limited或者fair极大的影响了自己的分数。
其实我们之所以综合作文分数不高，很大程度上是受我们的听力实力的影响，换句话说，当我们很多考友的听力分数只有15分上下的时候，我们对于综合作文的听力妥妥的是束手无策，而且很多考友还感觉自己都听懂了，那也只能说明你听懂了大意，但是听力里面要的是每一个细节！请注意，是每一个细节！因此，你就需要今天的，《新托福突破口TPO（1-33+纸质版4、5）综合作文阅读、听力原文（文本）全集+满分范文》包含2个部分，分别是TPO1-30综合作文部分的阅读和听力文本全集，与1篇综合作文的满分作文，以及满分作文的解析。
力图给各位考友一个写作的目标，也就是给自己一个提高的方向。
毕竟，如果自己的综合作文分数如果可以很给力的话，就已经搞定了15分的分数，可以极大地缓解独立作文的压力。
至于很多考友不知道纸质版TPO为何物，其实很简答，纸质版TPO就是ETS在中国大陆出版的一本真题集，一共只有5套，前3套与TPO 现有的内容重复，但是第四套和第五套是全新的试题。
每每提到的纸质版4、5套就指的是这两套题。
那么如何使用这个文件呢？首先，就是在自己做模考之后，可以根据这里面的听力的文本，来检验自己的听力内容是否抓的足够好，尤其是要看写的够不够全！很多时候，我们的综合作文之所以分低，就是因为听力写的不全！第二点，也可以用于很多考友在考前来做跟读，因为很多考友，都是在感叹自己的口语实力不够，那么做跟读，仔细地来模仿ETS官方素材，是一个很好的提高自己口语的方式。
毕竟口语最终考的，是口语本身说的是否足够流畅，要想在考试的时候说的很流畅，就是要在平时张口多说，只有多说，我们才能够做到足够的流利。
TOEFL写作讲义
TOEFL写作讲义（主讲：戴云）第一章总体介绍一、我的赏与罚封赏与晋升：普通教徒---罗汉---金刚---护法---菩萨---佛---高级佛---教主助理---副教主---常务副教主课堂可以获得最高功名为护法考试95及以上为菩萨，100分以上佛，105分以上高级佛，110分以上教主助理，115 分以上副教主，118分以上常务副教主，121分以上教主。
批评与惩戒：Curse---赠送白绫---开除出教二、托福写作圣经要多记笔记：1、可以保证focus on my lecture，不会absent-minded2、保证将来会有复习的clues写作的第一要务是把观点表达清楚。
1、写作必须有观点2、要给出一个清楚的观点写作考试不基于考生的真实身份。
托福作文中所有的例子和细节可以是真的，也可以是假的。
写作考试只考察语言水平，不考察思想水平。
举例：建工厂不同意的理由有三：1、造成污染；2、交通堵塞；3、物价上涨写作考试不测试考生的真实想法。
作文不是写想写的，而是写好写的、能写的。
举例：父母是最好的老师，你同意吗？同意的理由：1、how to behave myself；2、value system；3、experience上述理由都不能证明该题目“后天的知识是老师教的，而不是父母教的”存在逻辑错误，将老师与父母并列起来，应该在老师前面加上修饰语“学校的”。
写作是基于表达，而不是基于翻译。
举例：婀娜多姿：beautiful；妩媚动人：lovelyY ou are extremely smart. extremely means very托福考试30分钟最低要写300字，一般要求写400到500字写作内容和语言同等重要。
把内容表达清楚可以拿到高分clarity高于variety，variety高于complexityclarity is the priority观点的层次比观点的数目更重要。
逻辑错误比语法错误更严重。
托福写作材料讲解
托福写作材料讲解托福写作热门材料讲解古来一切有成就的人，都很严肃地对待自己的生命，当他活着一天，总要尽量多劳动，多工作，多学习，不肯虚度年华，不让时间白白地浪费掉。
以下是店铺为大家搜索整理的托福写作热门材料讲解，希望能给大家带来帮助!task 1托福写作素材模板：体育和团队合作素材段落Teamwork is important in sports because achieving a victory almost always requires the effort of every team member. That is to say, every athlete’s performance matters when participating in team sports. For example, in baseball, each player relies on his teammates to perform different functions than his own. Soccer is similar in this respect, as a defensive player strives to keep the other team from scoring, but must depend on offensive players to score in order for the team to win. Even sports that are considered individual sports can often become team sports. Competitors in the 100-metre dash often form teams that include coaches, nutritionists and therapists who serve as a support system for the individual athlete.单词和词组in this respect 在这个方面=in this way/aspect✎ with respect to/in reference tostrive to 努力做某事=endeavor to, make great efforts to, exert oneself to✎ In order to prosper economically, every nation in the world strives to build working forces with desirable health conditions.话题词汇团体项目 group/teamwork project合作伙伴关系 partnership需要协作的工作 collaborative work提高工作的.斗志 lift morale/spirits合作精神 sense of collaboration/cooperation/teamwork强调团队协作重要性address/stress the importance of teamwork提出可行的解决方案 propose a feasible solution成功的概率更高 have a better chance of successtask 2托福写作素材模板：养宠物的益处素材段落Pets can provide us with companionship. When we come back home from an exhausting day, our little buddies provide good reasons for us to take a walk outside. Obviously, pets would bring us relaxation and refreshment, not to mention the feeling of being needed and relied upon. Keeping pets is an effective way of keeping us from feeling lonely. Besides, pets can enhance positive behavior in children. Research shows that children who play with pets are more caring and they would know how to take care of other people. Children will become affable because of the love they give to their pets, which in turn will create far-reaching implications for their future. To conclude, pets are just like our friends who help us drive away loneliness and satisfy some of our mental and spiritual needs.单词和词组rely upon 依靠、依赖=depend on✎ No individual is strong enough to face the overwhelmingchallenges of competitors by relying upon his/her own strength.affable 和蔼可亲的=friendly, gentlecreate far-reaching implications 产生深远影响✎Parents’ behaviors will create far-reaching implications on their children’s growth.话题词汇休息和放松 rest and relaxation释放压力 release pressure和家人一起去野营go camping with one’s family members去附近的购物中心 go to a close shopping mall/center橱窗浏览 go window-shopping养宠物 raise pets选择田园生活 prefer the natural life重新振作 fully refreshed【托福写作热门材料讲解】。
托福独立写作范文三两招突破独立写作系列
托福独立写作范文三两招突破独立写作系列为了让大家更好的预备托福考试，我给大家整理一些托福考试作文小技巧，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。
托福独立写作范文| 三两招突破独立写作系列(一)写作范文今日一招：“四两拨千斤”解读：一句话完成“对比”性的争论“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to work for a business owned by someone else than to work for a business owned by your family.”我们以【立场：work for a business owned by someone else】为例，展现这一招“四两拨千斤”：先争论对方的劣势：假如work for a business owned by my family，可能会让我感到不适。
If I work for a business owned by my family, the atmosphere of the company may feel strange, making me uncomfortable. This is my case, actually. I declined the offer from my uncle’s company for theconsideration that since I may be recognized as the nephew of the company’s owner, other staff may show a defensive attitude and gesture when they work with me. They may exchange ideas behind my back, and although those ideas may not be bad words about the company, they would not involve me in the discussion. Meanwhile, the office may be a stressful place, because there in their eye is a spy or a snitcher, which is me. I do not think that I could feel comfortable working in such an environment as my coworkers would behave with too much discretion in front of me.至此，我们发觉，我们充分争论了对方的不利之处。
高分突破英语作文书
高分突破英语作文书Title: Mastering English Composition Writing。
Mastering English composition writing requires a combination of skills and strategies that enable you to express your ideas clearly and effectively. In this article, we'll delve into some key techniques to help you achieve high scores in your English composition.First and foremost, it's essential to understand the prompt thoroughly. Take your time to analyze the topic or question provided, and identify the main points you need to address in your essay. This initial step lays thefoundation for a well-structured and focused composition.Once you grasp the prompt, brainstorm ideas and create an outline before diving into writing. Organize your thoughts logically, ensuring a smooth flow of ideas throughout your essay. An outline serves as a roadmap, guiding you through each paragraph and helping maintaincoherence in your writing.When crafting your introduction, aim to grab thereader's attention and provide a clear thesis statementthat outlines the main argument or purpose of your essay. A compelling introduction sets the tone for the rest of your composition and entices the reader to continue.In the body paragraphs, support your thesis with relevant evidence, examples, and explanations. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or argument, with smooth transitions between them to maintain coherence. Be sure to use varied sentence structures and vocabulary to keep your writing engaging and dynamic.Moreover, pay attention to paragraph unity and coherence. Each paragraph should develop a central idea, supported by evidence and analysis, and should flow logically into the next. Avoiding abrupt shifts in topic or tone enhances the readability of your essay and reinforces your argument.Additionally, integrate quotations and citations appropriately if you're drawing upon external sources. Be mindful of citation formats and ensure accuracy in referencing to avoid plagiarism. When incorporatingevidence from sources, provide context and analysis to demonstrate your understanding and critical thinking skills.As you approach the conclusion, summarize your main points and restate your thesis in a concise manner. Avoid introducing new information in the conclusion; instead, leave the reader with a memorable takeaway or thought-provoking insight related to your topic.Revision is a crucial step in the writing process. Take the time to review and edit your essay for clarity, coherence, grammar, and punctuation errors. Considerseeking feedback from peers, teachers, or tutors to gain different perspectives and identify areas for improvement.Finally, practice regularly to hone your writing skills. Set aside time for writing exercises, essay prompts, or journaling to build fluency and confidence in expressingyour ideas in English. Remember that improvement takes time and effort, so persevere and stay committed to your writing goals.In conclusion, mastering English composition writing requires careful planning, organization, and practice. By following these strategies and techniques, you can enhance your writing skills and achieve high scores in your English essays. Keep challenging yourself, and don't hesitate to seek guidance and feedback along the way. Happy writing!。