高中英语Summary Writing公开课PPT课件
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高考英语写作——summary-writing(共29张PPT)
desirable). Ideas and facts need not be rearranged.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
6. Use complete sentences
restatement: ★ it reproduces faithfully the theme
of the original in our own words;
★ one should not interpret or comment;
★ All one has to do is to give the gist of the author’s exact and essential meaning.
brief: ★ a sBiblioteka mmary can’t cover
everything and must be shorter than original writing;
★ usually it includes the thesis and the main supporting points.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
7. Use our own words Use different words with the original one. Don’t copy the language.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
6. Use complete sentences
restatement: ★ it reproduces faithfully the theme
of the original in our own words;
★ one should not interpret or comment;
★ All one has to do is to give the gist of the author’s exact and essential meaning.
brief: ★ a sBiblioteka mmary can’t cover
everything and must be shorter than original writing;
★ usually it includes the thesis and the main supporting points.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
7. Use our own words Use different words with the original one. Don’t copy the language.
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高 考 英 语 写 作—— summar y-writ ing(共 29张PP T)
高考英语概要写作 Summary Writing课件 (19张PPT)
Structure (结构)
• In the UK, Physical Education (PE) is compulsory in state schools until the age of 16 – that is, sports are compulsory for as long as education is compulsory. Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to. Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic (有氧的) exercise.
• Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools. If schools don’t have compulsory PE, it is much harder to pick out, develop and equip athletes to represent the country on a wider stage. However, it’s much easier to find suitable individuals if there’s a full sports program in every school.
最新高考作文概要写作Summary-Writing(必修三第四单元课文)精品ppt课件
Para 3-water
Topic Sentence: Water made life develop possibly
Tips: 补充说明第二段水的作用，可以作为次要点 放在第三段结合处理。
Para 4
Topic Sentence: None points:plants in water, shellfish, fish, plants on land land animals, forest, reptiles,dinosaurs,mammals.
It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章 的主要内容和观点。
not look after the earth well. the earth may be too hot to liveon , whether ...depend on
Main idea: Fianlly, Humans rule the earth but the time of their existence is uncertain.
高考作文概要写作SummaryWriting(必修三第四单元课文)
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What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
Unit 4 Astronomy: the science of the stars
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
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➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
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Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
SummaryWriting-浙江省台州市书生中学高中英语课件(共19张PPT)
Coherent: Rather than an outline listed as key words and phrases, a summary is a paragraph with necessary transitions and function structures to make it flow
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章 的主要内容和观点。
舒运祥谈summary
Brief:
Omit unnecessary details like examples, explanation, and other unimportant information
5. Proofread for grammatical, spelling and punctuation mistakes.
03 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the author’s purpose
Steps to write a summary
1. Skim the text to find the general theme
2. Analyze the text’s structure to divide it into several sections, find out the main idea of each section and write it out briefly with your own words(one sentence).
Complete: To include all the main and supporting points delivered in your own word and a densed manner
读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、 体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章 的主要内容和观点。
舒运祥谈summary
Brief:
Omit unnecessary details like examples, explanation, and other unimportant information
5. Proofread for grammatical, spelling and punctuation mistakes.
03 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the author’s purpose
Steps to write a summary
1. Skim the text to find the general theme
2. Analyze the text’s structure to divide it into several sections, find out the main idea of each section and write it out briefly with your own words(one sentence).
Complete: To include all the main and supporting points delivered in your own word and a densed manner
高中英语：Summary writing(概要写作)课件
句型转化：
This is not recommended— Teachers are advised not to...
Teachers are advised not to use FLCAS to measure students' language anxiety instead of observing it in class .
Read and write
What can make students feel anxious?
Language Anxiety
Reading
1. What&
A. Narrative
(记叙文)
B. Exposition (说明文)
C. Argumentation (议论文)
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
词数少于40的和多余80的， 从总分中减去2分
3
Steps to help our writing
Step 1: Read Step 2: Underline key words/Make an outline Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways Step 4: Make the summary coherent Step 5: Check to make the summary better
换词：observable—can be observeSd /ingontiaceldw/seoern/dfosund...
______consider — think/believe/hold the belief that… / in one's opinion…
高中英语概要写作Summary writing示范课PPT课件
Doctors face such choices often. At times, they see important reasons to lie for the patients’ own sake. Should doctors ever lie to benefit their patients---to speed recovery or to cover the coming of death?
• Not only in medicine, but in other professions such as law and government as well, practitioners（从 业 者 ） may find themselves repeatedly in the dilemma(困境) of choosing between telling the true information and covering it up. Therefore, there is an urgent need to debate this issue openly. Otherwise, people in our society will be blindly comfortable in the old saying, “What you don’t know can’t hurt you.”
• Studies show that most doctors sincerely believe that the seriously ill patients do not want to know the truth about their condition, and that informing them of risks destroys their hope, so that they may recover more slowly, or deteriorate（恶化）faster, perhaps even commit suicide.
• Not only in medicine, but in other professions such as law and government as well, practitioners（从 业 者 ） may find themselves repeatedly in the dilemma(困境) of choosing between telling the true information and covering it up. Therefore, there is an urgent need to debate this issue openly. Otherwise, people in our society will be blindly comfortable in the old saying, “What you don’t know can’t hurt you.”
• Studies show that most doctors sincerely believe that the seriously ill patients do not want to know the truth about their condition, and that informing them of risks destroys their hope, so that they may recover more slowly, or deteriorate（恶化）faster, perhaps even commit suicide.
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Exposition: a type of writing to inform or explain… Argumentation: a type of writing to convince or persuade…
Read for the topic
What’s the topic of the passage?
…argue that the colors we choose affect
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Specific example
Tip 1: Use general words instead of specific examples.
… argue that the colors we choose affect
The topic: our mood, our career prospects and even
Read for the supporting details
How did the psychologists and therapists use the color?
General words
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Examples
Meaning
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Read for the style
What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文
a type of writing to inform or explain…
Mini-dictionary
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
A Summary is a brief restatement of the main ssage.
Procedure
How to What to
Read
Write
writing style, structure, main topic, main idea…
our health The power of color has been used for
centuries… affects us to a greater degree
than most of us realize
① Psychologists and therapists
for influencing mood and state of
Supporting details
mind & various types of treatments
② Companies
③ Clothes
Read for the supporting details
Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products.
affects us to a greater degre③e tChloatnhmesost of us realize.
Exposition: a type of writing to inform or explain… Argumentation: a type of writing to convince or persuade…
Read for the topic
What’s the topic of the passage?
…argue that the colors we choose affect
TheYotuompicg:ht thoinukr tmhoatodw,hoeutrhcearryeoeur pchroosopseecatsbaluned sehviertn
or a yellow oneotuorwheeaarlttho work or college makes no difference to yoTuhredpaoywaenrdotfhcoosleoar rhoausnbdeyeonuu. sHeodwfoerver, aHnowinecvrear,sainngincuremenabtsueinrigoesfn…euxmapfbefertcrstosafuregsxutpeoetarhtgasrtaetrahgteueercodthleoagrtrsee wtheecchooloorssewaeffechcthtoaonusermmaofofsetocodtf,oouuusrrmecaolrioezde,ropuror scpaerecetsr and epvroesnpoeuctrshaenadlthev. en our hea①lthP.sychologists and therapists
Specific example
Tip 1: Use general words instead of specific examples.
… argue that the colors we choose affect
The topic: our mood, our career prospects and even
Read for the supporting details
How did the psychologists and therapists use the color?
General words
It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencfionrginmflouoedncaindg smtaotoedoafnmdinstda,taenodf fmorind variofuosr tvyaprieosuosfttyrpeeastmofetnrtesawtmhentws e are ill. Some pSoemopelepevoepnlebeevleienvebethlieavtethtehabtlitnhdecbalninbdecnaenfibt efrnoemfit tfrhoem‘vtihbera‘tvioibnrsa’ttiohnast’ctohlaotr cgoivloers goifvfe. s off.
Examples
Meaning
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Read for the style
What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文
a type of writing to inform or explain…
Mini-dictionary
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
A Summary is a brief restatement of the main ssage.
Procedure
How to What to
Read
Write
writing style, structure, main topic, main idea…
our health The power of color has been used for
centuries… affects us to a greater degree
than most of us realize
① Psychologists and therapists
for influencing mood and state of
Supporting details
mind & various types of treatments
② Companies
③ Clothes
Read for the supporting details
Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products.