丁往道英语写作手册精品PPT课件
丁往道英语写作手册范本
(1) Emphatic sentences 整句强调
1. short sentences 短句 2. sentence fragments 不完整句 3. inverted sentences 倒装句 4. parallel constructions and balanced sentences平行结构和对称句 5. periodic sentences 圆周句
My National Day
P41 Ⅲ. Effective Sentences 有效句
1. Unity 统一性 2. Coherence 连贯性 3. Conciseness 简洁性 4. Emphasis 强调性 5. Variety 多样性
P41 1. Unity 统一性
A unified sentence expresses a single complete thought. It does not contain ideas that are not closely related, nor does it express a thought that is not complete by itself.
3) (including words following hypens in compound words包括复合词中在连 字符后面的词)
About titles关于题目
4）except articles, coornidating conjunctions, short prepositions, and the to in infinitives. 但冠词、并 列连词、介词和不定时的to除外
2. interrogative 疑问句 Who is your favourite author?
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》考研真题详解(命题作文)【圣才出品】
◆命题作文<社会热点类>题1 [四川师范大学2015研]In September 2014, the Chinese e-commerce giant Alibaba’s flotation in the US has caused a stir in the work. Undoubtedly, Ma Yun becomes the center of attention in public again. What do you know about Ma Yun and what inspiration you’ve gained from his life ex perience and success? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.【参考范文】The Unstoppable Power of PersistenceIn last September, Alibaba, a counterpart to eBay or Amazon in China, floated on the stock market with a value of £140 billion approximately. With such a record-breaking IPO, Ma Yun, the founder of this prosperous company, has become the centre of public discussion again. From my perspective, it is his persistence in chasing his dreams that impresses me most.Throughout his life, Ma Yun himself admitted that he had experienced rejections for many times, including less good performance in entry exams for colleges in China, setbacks in finding a job and so on. However, being clearly aware of his strengths and weaknesses, he chose to sharpen his proficiency in English. Inspite of the limited resources and less ideal environment for learning English, he managed to practice his oral English as well as broaden his horizons by giving foreign tourists free guide every morning in his hometown Hangzhou. And this experience lasting for nine years proved to be conducive to both the improvement in his languages abilities and the formation of a brand new world view.While working as a translator for a US trading company, Ma Yun decided to start his own online business in China, aiming to build a large Internet market to connect consumers and companies from different regions or countries. And that is how Alibaba began. At the beginning, there were only fifteen employees in 1999. But by now, this Chinese e-commerce giant has, according to Ma Yun, directly or indirectly created 40 million jobs in China. And its founder plans to expand market abroad. Nevertheless, the transformation from a startup to a listed company with the largest initial public offering in history, did not proceed smoothly. If he had not manages to attracted investment in 2000, Alibaba could have failed like many other Internet companies did at that time. What’s more, rumors or doubts have never completely disappeared, whether it was at the early stage or at the prosperous period of Alibaba. As for Ma Yun, scarcely does he allow these noises to overwhelm his inner voices. It’s his persistence and commitment that make his dreams come true in the end.To sum up, just as the old saying goes, constant dropping wears the stone. As long as we pursuit our dreams like what Ma Yun does, nothing could stop us from realizing them, since persistence not only gives us the hope to hold on to ourdreams, but also enables us to fight against obstacles all along.【范文点评】题目要求围绕阿里巴巴在美国成功上市这一事件，谈谈作为中国互联网巨头传奇人物马云，他的经历给了你怎样的启发，撰写一篇约400词左右的文章。
英语写作方法指导ppt课件
C、难词解释法：
不少考生平时不注重记忆必要的单词，写作时 碰到生词就绕道走，最后只好用解释法、定义 法来说明，结果语言晦涩难懂，文意错乱，表 达不畅。
病原体侵入 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
病原体侵入机体，消弱机体防御机能 ，破坏 机体内 环境的 相对稳 定性， 且在一 定部位 生长繁 殖，引 起不同 程度的 病理生 理过程
④组织语言、正确叙述是整个写作过程中的重要环节。
知道了内容、抓住了要点后，再根据要点确定句型，扩展句 子，把这些内容有机地连接起来。在联句成文的过程中，还要 注意，句子或者段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻 辑思维方法的问题，这两者是不能截然分开的。例如，两个意 义单位之间是递增、选择、对比、转折、概括、举例、时间顺 序或是因果关系，都要使用得当，并且用一定的词句加以表达， 否则，文章就会松散或含糊不清。
二、语法正
在写书面表达时，每一个句子都要尽 可能避免语法错误，考生们通常在下 列语法方面最易出错。
A、动词错误
a.多用动词。如： There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor.
(改为Hundreds) b.缺少动词。如：It is said that they often careless in class. (加are)
（去掉was）
不少基础较差的同学喜欢在行为动词前面加be动词， 例如：I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer（. 去掉am）
英语写作手册diction(课堂PPT)
denotative and connotative
Country means an area of land and its population and its government,
nation emphasizes the people of a country,
state refers to the government or political organization of a country, and
good food: tasty, delicious, nourishing, rich, wholesome, fresh, appetizing, abundant
house: mansion, villa, chateau, cottage, bungalow带 走廊的平房, cabin, hut, shack小室, shanty棚屋, shed 货棚, barn
laugh: smile, grin, beam微笑示意, giggle咯咯地笑, titter嗤笑, snigger窃笑, chuckle吃吃地笑, guffaw狂笑, chortle得意的高笑
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It is easy to see that the specific words on the right are much more concrete and colorful than the general ones on the left; they seem to make the reader see, hear, or feel what the writer wishes to describe.
A student learning to write should learn to use the words that are most useful and most often used to express him.
Unit 1 Face to Face with Hurricane Camille
板书设计
Internet;PowerPoint课件及板书
作业
与
思考题
1. Questions for discussion:
1.Why did John Koshak decide to stay and face the dangers of devastating hurricane? Suppose you were the protagonist, what would you do, to leave or to stay, why?
5.掌握重点词汇、短语；分析并解释长句、难句；
教学内容
1.背景知识导入
2．语篇分析（genre; structure; theme; writing techniques）
3．语言理解：关键词汇、长难句解析及其翻譯；
4．文体分析及修辞的识别与理解；
5．主题讨论、课堂练习。
6.课后写作与翻译练习
教学重点
4). Whom do you admire most in the story?
2. Written work:Write a short narration of around 300 words relating your experience of an earthquake, a flood, a typhoon or a hailstorm.
4. To comprehend the difficult sentences by paraphrasing, interpreting and translating
教学内容
1.Reviewing the key points in Para.1-6.
2. Detailed study ofPart II (Para7-27)
英语写作基础教程(1)
第 二 章 用 词 (Using Proper Words)
第三章造句
(Making Correct and Effective Sentences)
第四章
段 落 (Developing Paragraphs)
第 六 章 完 整 的 作 文 (Composing Essays)
第七章 应用文(Writing for Practical Purposes)
Chapter one
Manuscript Form and Punctuation 1. why is it important to write in correct
manuscript? 2. What are the rules for titles?
Focus 1 Manuscript Form (P1)
学习方法例举
根据自己的情况，选择不同的学习方式： 方式一：如果你能够写出语法基本正确的句子和
段落，那么，你就可以直接开始学习第六章（完整的 作文）或第七章（应用文写作）。将前面四章的学习 内容作为自学内容，如：标点符号的运用、信件的格 式等；
方式二：如果还没有自信能写出语法基本正确的 句子和段落的同学，可以从第一章开始逐章学习。基 础学习准备好后，对教学重点的内容也就容易把握了。
教学重点
1. 第六章“短文的写作” (Composing Essays) 2. 第七章“应用文的写作” (Writing for Practical Purposes)
巴基斯坦驻华大使鸿德致辞
非常感谢院长先生。谢谢您做介绍时的友好言辞。今天我们很 高兴来到这里。我夫人与我为有这次机会再次来到贵校访问感到 荣幸。感谢贵校对我们的欢迎，特别感谢鸿德学院的热情接待， 我们为此感到不胜荣幸，谢谢你们，我们此行带来了大使馆统和 巴基斯坦人民的良好祝愿。
丁往道英语写作手册
Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
1 Arrangement 安排 2 Capitalization 大写 3 Word Division 移行 4 Punctuation 标点 5 Handwriting 书法
What is a good manuscript form?
writing the title 写标题 leaving margins 纸边留空 indenting 段落开端缩进 capitalizing 大写 dividing words 词的移行
1 Arrangement 安排
About titles关于题目
P 35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(use)
1. Declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences 陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句
1. declarative sentence 陈述句 She is my fiance.
P35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(structure)
2 .simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex sentences 简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复 合句
simple sentence 简单句
It has one subject and one predicate verb. To see is to believe.
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》复习笔记(造句)【圣才出品】
第三章造句Ⅰ. 完整句和不完整句1. 完整句（1）完整句的语法结构必须完整，即一个完整句必修至少有一个主语和一个谓语动词；如果该谓语动词是及物动词，还得有一个宾语；若是个系动词，则必须有一个表语或补语：He came.She wrote a letter.Dr. Smith is a professor.（2）一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句号结束。
2. 不完整句有时为取得特殊效果可用到不完整的句子。
如：It is hard to hear a new voice, as hard as it is to listen to an unknown language...Why? Out of fear. The world fears a new experience more than it fears anything. Because a new experience displaces so many old experiences. And it is like trying to use muscles stiff for ages. It hurts horribly.—D. H. Lawrence He was, I think, very handsome. I gather this from photographs and from my own memories of him, dressed in his Sunday best and on his way to preach a sermon somewhere, when I was little. Handsome, proud, and ingrown, “like atoe-nail,” somebody said.—James Baldwin 在上面第一篇中有三个不完整的句子(“why?”“Out of fear.”以及“Because a new experience...”)，在第二篇中有一个(“Handsome，proud”)。
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About titles关于题目 2）capitalize the first and last words of the title and all other words.题目的 第一个和最后一个词应用大写字母开始。
What is a good manuscript form?
writing the title 写标题 leaving margins 纸边留空 indenting 段落开端缩进 capitalizing 大写 dividing words 词的移行
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1 Arrangement 安排
About titles关于题目
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利伯缇大学公开课：英文写作
American Liberty University
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Part 2 The Sentence
Ⅰ. Complete Sentences and Sentences Fragments 完整句和不完全句
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subject 主语 predicate verb 谓语动词 transitive verb 及物动词 object 宾语 link-verb 系动词 predicative 表语 complement 补语
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About titles关于题目 7） use quotation marks with quotes or titles of articles 题目中的 引用词语或文章的标题，应加引号。
8) underline/italicize names of books. 书名应用斜体或在下面划线
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P 35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(use)
1. Declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences 陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句
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1. declarative sentence 陈述句 She is my fiance.
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attributes 定语 adverbials 状语
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逗号错 comma fault
The use of a comma in place of a period, a semicolon, a colon, or a dash in English writing is called the comma fault. 中文里可以用逗号将两个完整的句子分 开，英文则不可以。 英文里需要用句号，分号、冒号、破折 号分开两个句子，否则就叫“逗号错”
英语基础写作
English Writing
Wu Haiping (武海平)
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A game to start with...
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A game to start with Titanic is going to sink...
There are 8 passengers. However, there are only 7 seats in the lifeboat.
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2. interrogative 疑问句 Who is your favourite author?
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3. imperative sentence 祈使句 Don't touch me.
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4. exclamatory sentence 感叹句 How well you look! What a mess!
Байду номын сангаас
Part1 Manuscript Form文稿格式
Indent the first line of every paragraph, leaving a space of about 4 or 5 letters. 每段的开头应缩进，即留出4 到5个字母的空白。
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Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
3) (including words following hypens in compound words包括复合词中在连 字符后面的词)
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About titles关于题目
4）except articles, coornidating conjunctions, short prepositions, and the to in infinitives. 但冠词、并 列连词、介词和不定时的to除外
1 Arrangement 安排 2 Capitalization 大写 3 Word Division 移行 4 Punctuation 标点 5 Handwriting 书法
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鸡肉炒面 Chicken chow mein
视频\中餐速成.Chinese.Food.Made. Easy鸡肉炒面.mp4
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The passengers :
1 a cleaner 2 a doctor 3 a farmer 4 a singer
5 a teacher 6 a pregnant woman 7 a policewoman 8 a college student
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Part1 Manuscript Form 文稿格式
5）No period is used at the end of a title. 题目后不加句号
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About titles关于题目
6）use a question mark if the title is a direct question, but do not use one if the titleia an indirct question 如果题目是疑问句 ，应加问号：如果是间接引语形式 的疑问句，则不加问号
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P35 Ⅱ. Type of Sentences 句子类型
(structure)
2 .simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex sentences 简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复 合句
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simple sentence 简单句 It has one subject and one predicate verb. To see is to believe.