高中英语--祝贺信-(公开课)

大声朗读
Yours, Li Hua
Dear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission. In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. This admission is a reward which you richly deserve. I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua
观察思考： 1. 文章的体裁？ 2. 写作目的？ 3. 结构（几个层次？） 4. 时态？ 5. 过渡词？
祝贺信“三步走”：
1.写信的目的和表达听到 喜讯的心情； 2.对喜讯进行积极评价 （包括肯定被祝贺人过去 的努力和优点）； 3.表达衷心的祝福及未来 的祝福。 （注意：语气要真诚、自 然、亲切动人）
So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other. Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li Hua
Homework：熟读范文和关于祝贺信 的核心短语、句型。
课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了 北京大学(Peking University)，他来自贫困地区， 是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信， 要点如下： 1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. This is a new start for you and it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
Dear Wang Qiang, Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I’m truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you.
作文训练之祝贺信
常用语块 congratulations on… 1. 恭喜/祝贺…… _________________________ 2. 实现/成真_________________________ come true 3. 很高兴听到……_________________________ How happy I am to hear … 4. 我想表达我对……的祝贺
课外作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了 “汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你 为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。 3. 希望见面和交流。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest
I would like to express my congratulations on… 5. 我知道这肯定是因为……
6.我希望 I hope (that)… I wish …..
I know this is surely owing to…
套用句式
1. 我很高兴听到你梦想成真。
How happy I am to hear that your dream has come true. 2. 我想表达我对你被北京大学录取的祝贺。 I would like to express my congratulations on your admission into the Peking University.
3. 我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。
I wish you greater success in the university and serve the hometown in the future .
实战演练：
假定你是李华，得知你的好 友王强今年考上了北京大学 (Peking University)，他来 自贫困地区，是村里的第一 位大学生。请你给他写一封 祝贺信 要点如下： 1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。 注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯。
Dear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission. In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. This admission is a reward which you richly deserve. I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon. Best wishes.
Dear Peter, I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.
根据题目要求审题：
1. 文章的体裁？祝贺信 2. 写作目的？ 祝贺王强考上北京大学 3. 结构（几个层次？） 3个 4. 时态？ 一般现在时 5. 过渡词？ ？
实战演练：
假定你是李华，得知你的好友 王强今年考上了北京大学 (Peking University)，他来自 贫困地区，是村里的第一位 大学生。请你给他写一封祝 贺信 要点如下： 1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。 注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯。
Dear Wang Qiang, Congratulations! I would like to express my congratulations on your admission to Peking University, your ideal one! As your close friend, I just want you to know how happy I am to hear your success. This is a new start for you and it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. As for as I’m concerned, you are intelligent. Besides, you have worked very hard in the past years, so I’m really happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I wish you greater success in the university and serve the hometown in the future. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua