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英语考研作文范文(精选十一篇)英语考研作文范文(篇一)Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to1) inform them about the details, and2) encourage them to participate.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not use your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead.Do not write your address. (10 points)【范文】My dear classmates,May I have your attention, please? On the evening of January 4th, 2023, namely, this Friday night, we will hold a charity sale at the school auditorium for the purpose of helping the children who need help.Those kids who come from remote areas lack proper and fine education. Our assistance can improve their lives and even may change their destinies. Some stars, local industrial bosses and all thestaff of our school will attend the activity.I trust that everyone has a kind heart and believe that our help can really make a big difference. Thank you very much for your kindness and I am looking forward to seeing you on time.Yours sincerely,Li Ming(注:电子邮件的格式可以采用“齐头式”,即为了换行方便而每行开头都以顶头的格式对齐。
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顾家北 0813精品班作文大作文Man.peopl.thin.i.i.ver.importan.t.protec.th.environmen.bu.t he.mak.n.effor.t.d.i.themselves.Wh.d.yo.thin.i.i.th.case.Wh a.action.ca.b.don.t.ensur.tha.individual.protec.th.environm ent?顾家北Environmenta.problem.hav.threatene.th.worl.bu.fe.peopl.hav. chose.t.tak.an.actio.t.dea.wit.thes.problems.althoug.the.re alis.th.impac.o.thes.environmenta.woe.o.thei.lives.W.shoul. implemen.som.change.t.improv.th.situation.Man.peopl.spen.mone.wisely.s.the.ar.no.willin.t.purchas.env ironmentall.friendl.products.despit.th.fac.tha.thes.product .ca.hel.preserv.th.environment.Thes.product.ar.normall.mor.expensiv.tha.conventiona.counte rparts.Fo.example.LE.lightin.device.ar.energ.efficient.bu.n ormall.charg.consumer..highe.pric.tha.traditiona.ligh.bulbs .Electri.car.ar.normall.likel.t.cos.mor.mone.tha.thos.vehic le.powere.b.petrol.A.consumer.d.no.op.fo.thes.gree.products .i.i.no.eas.t.conserv.resource.an.reduc.pollution.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.man.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.way. o.life.eve.thoug.thes.lifestyle.ca.b.harmfu.t.th.environmen t..o.electrica.equipmen.ha.le.t..shar.ris.i.electricit.c onsumption.whic.mean.tha.th.powe.generatio.secto.ha..highe. deman.fo.fossi.fuels.Peopl.als.prefe.t.trave.b.car.bu.ca.em ission.ca.caus.globa.warming.whic.i..threa.t.th.environment .Th.relianc.o.differen.electroni.product.includin.mobil.pho ndfil.si tes.●ernment.ca.enaw.t.forbi.thos.behaviour.whic.ca.caus.damag.t.th.environment.suc.a.disposin.o.wast.carelessly.Thos.wh.dro.li tte.shoul.b.fined.s.th.environmenta.impac.o.thi.behaviou .ca.b.reduced.Anothe.solutio.i.t.offe.subsidie.t.encourag.peopl.t.g.green.Fo.example.thos.consumer.wh.bu.fue.efficien.car.ca.b.subsidised.s.ca.emission.ca.b.reduce.sign ificantly.●Currently, more and more people are aware of the importance ofenvironmental protection but the public never give priority to protect environment during their daily life.On.reaso.account.fo.th.phenomeno.i.tha.peopl.liv.carefull.w ithou.spendin.thei.mone.o.environmenta.products.Household.l iv.wit..tigh.budge.ar.no.willin.t.spen.thei.mone.thes.produ cts.whos.price.ar.highe.tha.othe.simila.goods.Fo.instance.L E.light.ar.energ.saving.bu.the.ar.mor.expensiv.tha.incandes cen.bulbs.Similarly.price.o.electri.vehicle.ar.highe.tha.th os.o.traditiona.vehicle.averagely.Fo.th.sak.o.money.peopl.q ui.buyin.gree.product.an.thi.i.contrar.t.ou.purpos.o.enviro nmenta.protection.Anothe.reaso.ca.b.tha.peopl.ar.no.willin.t.chang.thei.livin .styles.whic.nee.t.consum.variou.kind.o.energy.Fo.example.e lectroni.appliance.consum.electricit.whil.drivin.consume.pe trol.Especiall.thos.wh.ar.fon.o.plent.o.material.consum.mor e.w.t .ba.citizen.fro.doin.detrimenta.behaviour.t.environment.Pun ishment.ar.imperativ.fo.thos.wh.littered.O.th.othe.hand.i.iernmen.t.giv.subsidie.t.encourag.en vironmenta.protection.Som.countries.suc.a.China.provid.subs idie.fo.thos.wh.purchasin.vehicle.unde.1.6L.All in all, only through the joint efforts of government and individuals can we live in a sustainable environment.rg.proportio.o.childre.ar.expose.t.a.ocea.o.co mmercia.advertisement.da.t.day..a.o.th.sid.tha.th.ads.whic. purposel.incit.kid.t.bu.snacks.toy.an.electroni.games.shoul .b.limite.o.even.banned.Suppos.tha.ad.ai.t.kid.wer.rectified.childre.wil.no.reques. c.sensiti vit.t.price.nevertheless.parent.ten.t.satisf.thei.materia.n eeds.Fo.instance.som.childre.lik.expensiv.toy.an.girl.ar.i. favo.o.clothes.Thi.wil.brin..heav.burde.fo.th.middle-clas.f amilies.Onl.b.minimiz.th.impac.o.ad.o.kid.ca.th.proble.b.av oided.Childre.ma.hav.eccentri.behaviour.an.ba.livin.habit.du.t.th .ads.Som.kid.ar.fan.o.fas.food.sinc.the.se.ad.o.i.ever.day. Other.ar.i.ba.temper.du.t.th.violen.game.the.pla.daily.Th.p redominanc.o.game.i.als.resulte.fro.merchants.propaganda.Al .thes.problem.wil.influenc.th.health.growt.proces.o.kid.bot .physicall.an.mentally.However.w.canno.den.tha.som.ad.d.hav.thei.advantage.t.kids. k.wheat.etc. cationa.toys.Parent prehensiv.v erdic.accordin.t.advertisements.ernmen.ba.ad.whos.targe.c onsumer.ar.kids.especiall.i.thei.product.ar.harmfu.t.childr en.Bu.i.th.product.th.advertisement.focu.o.ar.beneficial.th e.th.ad.shoul.b.allowed.小作文第一篇i.of.i.Pola nd.Denmark.Germany.Ital.an.Hungary.Th.tw.colon.ar.th.figure .o.youn.peopl.(age.fro.15-24.an.al.citizen.respectively.Th.highes.unemploymen.rat.fo.youn.goe.t.Poland.whic.reache.37.an.i.twic.mor.tha.th.rat.o.it.overal.rat.15%.Comin.nex.i .Italy.Th.proportio.o.it.youn.citizen.wh.ar.ou.o.wor.i.23.a e.t.to.a.18%.Hungar.show. mediocr.rate.o.21.an.17%.An.Germa.figure.ar.4.an.3.lowe.tha .Denmar.respectively.Denmar.keep.bot.figure.lowest.wit.th.u nemploymen.rat.fo.15-2.ag.grou.8.an.fo.overal.onl.3%.Al.o.th.fiv.countrie.sho.3~5.rate.lowe.o.overal.unemploymen rges.ga.betwe e.th.tw.figures.第二篇The bar charts provide us information about how families in an Asian country spent their money in 1998 and 2008..glanc.a.th.chart.tell.tha.expenditur.o.differen.good.i.200 .overweighe.tha.i.199.excep.tha.spen.o.clothes.Peopl.gav.mu c.mor.priorit.t.spiritua.enjoymen.whic.lea.t..hug.increas.o.expenditur.o.holiday.eatin.out.readin.(newspaper.an.magazi nes.an.goin.t.cinema.risin.fro.8.t.15%.6.t.15%,3.t.8.an.3%t .5.respectively.Th.cost.fo.electroni.good.als.increase.fro.12.to14.durin.th.decade.Th.onl.differenc.i.expenditur.o.clothe.whic.wa.totall.oppos it.t.th.mainstream.Th.proportio.o.i.wa.10.i.1998.howeve.i.d roppe.t.hal.o.it.origina.rate.i.2008.All in all, the past 10 years witnessed a huge change of the expenditure on various of aspects for households.第三篇The charts tell the proportion of different categories of house people live in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006.I.2001.Victori.ha.76.resident.i.house.12.i.semi-detache.hou se.11%i.apartment.an.th.res.i.othe.types.I.NSW.hous.als.acc rges.par.o.66%.wit.10.an.13.i.duple.an.fla.re rges .proportio.o.hous.livin.population.whic.reache.88%.ter.th.rate.fo.hous.al.droppe.2.i.th.thre.region s.A.fo.semi-detache.house.Victoria.NS.an.Tasmani.sa.1.incre ase.1percen.decreas.an.stabilit.respectively.Th.figure.o.fl a.al.ha..slightl.increase.An.fo.th.res.unmentione.types.the .remaine.th.sam.a.1.excep.NS.ros.fro.11.t.12%.pare.fiv.Europea.countrie.i.term.o.th.proportion .o.unemploye.peopl.a.wel.a.th.figure.fo.thos.youn.peopl.ou. o.work.Polan.ha.th.highes.yout.unemploymen.rat.a.37%.nearl.fiv.tim e.th.leve.i.Denmark.Th.level.o.unemploymen.fo.youn.peopl.wer.simila.i.othe.coun tries.wit.th.highes.see.i.Ital.23.an.th.lowes.i.German.a.17 %.I.i.clea.fro.th.tabl.tha.i.al.thes.countries.th.unemploymen .rat.fo.th.younge.generatio.wa.highe.tha.th.overal.unemploy men.figures.Interestingly.Poland.Germany.Ital.an.Hungar.ha. simila.unemploymen.rates.rangin.betwee.15.an.18%.Th.figur.f o.Denmar.wa.significantl.lowe.a.3%.Overall.yout.unemploymen.wa.mor.seriou.i.Polan.tha.i.othe.c ountries.Denmar.ha.th.lowes.figure.fo.bot.yout.unemploymen.an.overal.unemployment.whil.othe.countrie.ha.simila.figure. fo.thes.problems.流程图写作.coco.bean.t.produc.severa.foo.it em.fo.customers.Firstly.whol.bean.ar.carefull.pickin.befor.dryin.i.th.shell .The.the.ar.presse.int.coco.liquor.whic.i.th.mai.materia.o. th.secon.stage.The.coco.liquo.i.furthe.presse.unti.i.become ..coc.cake.whic.i.directl.sen.t.industr.t.mak.cake.an.drink .o.i.sol.t.th.consume.afte.grinde.int.coco.powder.Th.coco.l iquo.ca.als.conver.int.coco.an.the.b.sen.t.relevan.industry .Coco.liquor.afte.furthe.refining.mi.wit.coco.an.suga.turn. t.industr.chocolate.Finishe.chocolat.product.wil.b.pu.o.th. shell.befor.th.fina.process.e.t.produc.coco.powder.chocolat.p roduct.an.ingredient.fo.relevan.industr.throug.thre.simpl.s tage.startin.fro.pre-processin.ra.materia.t.fina.packagin.f o.sell.顾家北Th.whol.bean.ar.picke.a.th.firs.stag.wit.shell.removed.an.t he.drie.an.presse.unti.coco.liquo.i.created.Thi.mark.th.sta r.o.th.secon.stage.whic.involve.thre.processes.Th.coco.liqu e.t.mak.coc.cake.i.th.firs.option.Anothe.choic.i.t h.manufactur.o.cocoa.whil.coco.liquo.i.refine.i.th.thir.pro ces.t.produc.industria.chocolate.I.th.fina.stage.thes.material.ar.processe.furthe.t.creat.di fferen.en.product.fo.eithe.corporat.client.o.ordinar.consum ers.Coc.cake.ar.groun.int.coco.powde.fo.individua.consumers .o.directl.delivere.t.caterin.businesse.whic.provid.drink.a n.cakes.Coco.i.th.secon.procedur.mentione.earlie.i.als.tran sporte.t.thes.businesses.I.contrast.th.industria.chocolat.i .flavore.wit.sugar.an.finishe.chocolat.product.ar.subsequen tl.availabl.fo.consumers.第一篇The table provides us with data of the percentage of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.Th.bigges.numbe.existe.i.Turkey.wher.peopl.spen.32.14.o.the i.incom.o.food.drin.an.tobacco.almos.fiv.time.th.numbe.o.pe rcentag.spen.o.clothin.(6.63%.an.eigh.time.th.figur.o.percein.nex.i.Ireland.whos.per centag.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.o.eatin.wa.28.91%.Cost. fo.clothin.an.footwea.accounte.fo.onl.6.43%.thre.time.th.ex cation.Spai.too.th.thir.plac.thoug. th.proportio.o.it.nationa.consume.expenditur.wa.th.lowes.(1 .98%).Expenditur.o.foo.item.i.Spai.accounte.fo.18.8%.threef ol.th.figur.o.it.clothin.spending.Ital.an.Swede.citizen.ha. smal.percentage.o.incom.spen.o.food(16.36%, 15.77%),onl.abou.hal.th.figur.o.Turkey.However.thei.clothin.cost.(9 %.5.4%.an.spiritua.pay-out.(3.2%.3.22%.wer.relativel.high.I..nutshell.th.percentage.o.nationa.consume.expenditur.b.ca tegor.i.200.varie..lo.amon.th.fiv.countries.Bu.al.share.som rges.proportio.o.expenditur.o.food.d catio.cos ts.第二篇The bar charts show the number of marriages and divorces in USA and marital status of American adults during the period of 1970 to 2000.lio.i.197.an.1980.afte. lio.i.2000.Th.divorce.numb lio.i.197.an.suddenl.increase.t.almos.1..m lio.i.198.a n.finall.reache.t.it.start(.million).Th.percentag.o.neve.marrie.adult.wa.15.i.197.an.th.figur.in ter.Th.proportion.o.bot.marrie.an.w idowe.adult.sa.drop.durin.th.thre.decades.Marrie.adult.acco unte.fo.70.i.197.whil.th.figur.wa.les.tha.60.i.2000.A.fo.di vorc.rate.i.ha..significan.ris.for.nearl.0.t.almos.10%.Al.i.all.th.perio.fro.197.t.200.witnesse..hug.chang.o.marri age.an.divorce.i.America.Bot.th.tota.numbe.an.percentag.o.m arriag.decrease.whil.th.proportion.o.neve.marrie.an.divorce .peopl.sa.a.upwar.trend.流程图The two diagrams illustrate how to produce cement and how to use cement to produce concrete.e.tw.materials.Firs tly.limeston.an.cla.ar.place.i.th.crusher.wher.thes.materia l.ar.crushe.b.th.crusher.The.powde.i.mixe.b.th.mixer.befor.bein.heate.b.th.rotatin.h eater.A.th.nex.stage.heate.powde.i.sen.t.th.grind.wher.i.i. grounde.int.cement.An.finall.cemen.i.packe.i.th.bags. Concret.productio.i.relativel.simple.15.o.cement.10.o.water l.smal.stone.ar.mi.i.th.concre t.mixer.wher.the.turne.ou.t.b.concrete.All in all, cement production includes 5 stages and the outcome cement is one of the four raw materials of the concrete production.地图Th.map.sho.ho.a.are.change.durin.th.perio.o.178.t.2000.I.1780.ther.wer.10.home.locate.o.th.north-easter.corne.wit. wood.t.th.south..rive.crosse.th.are.fro.sout.t.nort.wit.fou .farm.i.th.middl.o.th.region.ter.th.numbe.o.dwellin.place.double.t.200.whil.th. numbe.o.farm.droppe.b.hal.an.wood.als.shran.i.size..roa.wa. buil.i.th.nort.area.connectin.th.livin.plac.t.th.river.Anot he.majo.chang.i.tha..bridg.wa.constructe.ove.th.river.I.2000.th.numbe.o.home.suddenl.increase.t.50.an..newl.buil. road.headin.toward.sout.replace.far.an.wood.area.whic.linke .th.dwellin.place.t.th.schoo.an.sport.fiel.i.th.south.Sever a.shop.opene.t.th.righ.sid.o.th.downstrea.rive.wit..wetlan. fo.bird.t.thei.south.Overall.thi.are.sa.a.increas.i.construction.suc.a.dwellin.p laces.school.an.facilities.althoug.farmlan.an.forest.wer.re move.fo.ne.building.an.transpor.infrastructure.大作文W.liv.i.citie.o.town.whic.hav.museum.displayin.historica.an .cultura.importance.bu.peopl.d.no.visi.them.Wh.d.yo.thin.pe opl.d.no.visi.museum.i.thei.loca.areas?Wha.i.th.importanc.o.museum.t.society?顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o aniz.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.ar tefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou.th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.Museum.hav.als.bee.operatin.a..cente.o.learning.wher.youn.p eopl.ca.kee.u.t.dat.wit.th.cutting-edg.technolog.i.differen .fields.Th.aviatio.museums.fo.example.giv.childre..glimps.o .th.airlin.industr.an.eve.spac.travel.includin.spaceship.an .equipmen.supportin.astronaut.wh.explore.th.oute.space.Th.m useu.o.archeolog.ca.sho.the.ho.som.specie.hav.die.out.an.po ssibl.inspir.the.t.d.researc.i.biolog.an.exten.ou.knowledg.o.ho.t.preserv.ou.ecosystem.The.coul.no.mak.contribution.t. socia.progress.i.the.di.no.hav.acces.t.suc.knowledge.Recently.a.increasin.numbe.o.peopl.refuse.t.pa..visi.t.muse um.i.thei.loca.places.Personally.followin.reason.ma.accoun. fo.th.phenomenon.Som.peopl.recko.museum.a.borin.place.s.tha.the.ar.neve.will in.t.visit.Fo.example.th.historica.an.cultura.importanc.dis playe.ther.ha.neve.change.an.ther.i.n.entertainment.suc.a.i nteractiv.games.Al.thes.ten.t.lef.peopl..borin.feeling.I.co ntrast.peopl.prefe.t.joi.som.interestin.activitie.suc.a.bal .games.picni.an.dinin.out.Anothe.reaso.i.tha.nowaday.peopl. lear.histor.an.acquir.scienc.knowledg.throug.interne.rathe. rmatio.o.th.exhibition'.th.hist orica.valu.an.stor. ca.b.easil.accesse.o.line.However.visitin.museum.pla.a.importan.rol.i.traditio.inheri ting.Ancien.vessel.provid.u.wit.traditiona.cookin.method.wh prehen.styl.o.ancien.architectur.t.so m.degree.I.i.advantageou.fo.youn.peopl.t.pas.o.th.cultur.i.the.hav..goo.acknowledg.o.thei.ow.traditio.b.visitin.museum s.Additionally.museum.offe.u.th.mos.advance.scienc.an.technol tes. developmen.o.spac.an.univers.i.ou.countr.ca.b.acquire.i.spa c.museum.an.th.youn.ca.understan.th.reaso.o.creatur.extinct io.throug.visitin.archaeolog.museums.Museum.ca.motivat.th.i nterest.o.th.adolescent.an.th.youn.wil.accelerate.th.develo pmen.o.societ.i.th.future.Overall, visiting museums is of great significance for both the individuals’ comprehending of culture and the development of our society.顾家北Visitin.museum.i.hardl..rewardin.experienc.fo.man.people.s. the.wil.no.conside.thi.optio.whe.the.ca.spen.leisur.tim.o.o anis.ne.exhibition.tha.c a.kee.u.wit.th.trends.o.provid.an.for.o.entertainmen.lik.in teractiv.game.t.attrac.th.youn.audience.Thi.i.wh..tri.t..mu pet.fo.attentio.wit.sports.picnic.an.partie rmatio.abou.thos.artefact.o.displa.o.th.Internet.The.wil.increas.knowledg.abou .th.storie.behin.an.th.cultura.valu.o.eac.item.withou.havin .t.visitin.th.museu.i.person.Museum.ca.encourag.visitors.interes.i.thei.cultura.heritag. an.disseminat.knowledg.abou..cit.o..county’.cultura.assets e.b.previou.generat ions.s.peopl.wh.atten.thes.exhibition.ma.hav..goo.ide.o.ho. traditiona.foo.wa.cooked.Som.historica.document.an.painting e.t.predominate.an.ma n.visitor.migh.b.impresse.b.th.architectura.achievement.o.t hei.ancestors.Wit.suc.knowledge.thes.visitor.ma.mak.a.effor .t.preserv.som.tradition.an.kee.som.old-fashione.cookin.ski ll.o.buildin.technique.alive.tes.technologica.advances.w hic.i.beneficia.t.th.developmen.o.th.society.Fo.example.th. tes.knowledg.o.aeronautic.whil.th.a prehen.th.reaso.o.extinction.Thi.i.wh.museum.ca.no.onl.motivat.th.interest.o.teenager.bu.als .encourag.the.t.stud.har.i..lon.run.whic.wil.accelerat.th.i mprovemen.o.th.societ.i.th.future.(Self-writte.paragraph)The aviation museums spaceships, shuttles, astronauts, explore the outer space,catio.shoul.provid.student.wit. skill.o.employmen.i.th.futur.whil.other.believ.tha.peopl.sh oul.focu.o.academi.stud.only.Discus.bot.view.an.giv.you.ow. opinion.Som.peopl.thin.th.increasin.busines.an.cultura.contac.betwe 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我觉得我们应该首先注重基础设施, 只有政府有盈余的时候才去投资艺术。
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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 犯罪A大城市竞争激烈B经济和心理压力大C年轻人犯罪解决Intense competition economic pressures release negative emotionsA: 影视作品追求收视率 R: 接触承认内容 E:年轻人模仿Boost ratings, exposed to adult content, fall into a life of crime led astrayA政府加强教育宣传R认识到犯罪严重性E少年犯罪率下降Launch awareness campaigns, dire consequences of crimes, curb crime年轻人应注重培养各方面的能力(receive a well-rounded education) b. 提高年轻人的竞争力(increase competitiveness) c. 解决生存问题(make a decent living),年轻人犯罪率下降Juvenile delinquency has become a widespread problem in some urban areas and it is important to tackle this problem.The competition is intense in cities and this is possibly a primary cause of soaring youth crime. Young people are likely to face some problems that cause economic pressures, and it is difficult for them to find well-paid jobs and afford property. They may choose to commit crimes to release negative emotions or sometimes to earn a fast buck.Another reason is that media companies give importance to the coverage of violence and crime in order to boost ratings. Exposure to violence can have a negative effect on young people's perception of violence, and they do not realise the consequences of their behaviour. As a consequence, they may fall into a life of crime. This is particularly the case for those who lack self-control.To solve this problem, governments should launch awareness campaigns, which enable young adults to understand the dire consequences of crimes. It is therefore easier to curb crime. Young people should also receive a well-rounded education and improve skills. Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living. This will also lead to a lower crime rate.To summarise, I believe that competition and the media are responsible for juvenile delinquency. This issue can be addressed by government action, such as giving young people educational opportunities.Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be arranged to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.教育类A 小组学习B 互相交流,知识共享C 学生能发现自己知识漏洞(knowledge gaps)Draw upon each other’s ideas pool knowledgeA 单独学习b.不会被同伴拉后腿(held back by peersc. )专心(concentrate on studies) , 时间自由(Manage time freely ),效率高A小组学习-B一起讨论 -C提升交流 (Communication skills)、合作(abilities to work well in groups) 、解决冲突能力(skills to resolve disagreement)It is sometimes argued that students can achieve more if they study in groups. I agree with this idea, although studying independently is sometimes important.If students study in teams, they are able to communicate with each other and share knowledge. Teamwork provides them with opportunities to discover knowledge gaps and acquire knowledge accordingly to fill these gaps. They can make the most of each other’s knowledge and strengths to overcome their weaknesses. By contrast, it is difficult for those students who study by themselves to realise their problems and make progress. On the other hand, opponents argue that it is possible to improve learning outcomes, if students study independently.These students are less likely to be held back by peers, and they do not have to block out distractions in team meetings or assignments. It is easier for them to concentrate on studies and manage time freely, thereby performing well in studies. This benefit is obvious for high-achievers.In my opinion, studying in groups enables students to improve communicationskills.They normally discuss how to solve problems together and how to deal with team tasks. These experiences make it possible for them to improve abilities to work well in groups and upgrade the skills to resolve disagreement. They are thus well prepared for their working lives.To sum up, I believe that both approaches can benefit students, but it appears that studying in groups offers more advantages.Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. 全球化Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 媒体——广告。
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严格的纪律有时很重要,但我认为这会对孩子的问题解决能力产生不利的影响。
有些人坚决主张强加规则,因为规则可以让孩子对自己的行为负责,帮助他们从小就发展良好的行为模式。
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共83句翻译及83句拓展练习翻译1:经常做运动会提高人的自信错误的句子:Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence.错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词,应该用动名词,如果是名词,不能用副词修饰错误2 rise 不及物动词正确的句子:Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence.句子结构:主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence)可以用定语从句扩充:Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only tothe youth but also to the elderly.注:不可以说“regular doing exercise”,因为形容词regular 不可以修饰doing中文翻译:经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心,这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。
翻译2:依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力(mental arithmetic)。
错误的句子:Rely heavily on calculators will have negative impact on human beings` mental arithmetic.错误1 rely 是动词,不能充当主语错误2 impact 可数名词,要有冠词。
错误3 human beings 多余,不是人类莫非是动物么?正确的句子:Relying heavily on calculators will have a negative impact on mental arithmetic.句子结构:主语+及物动词+宾语(impact)也可以用现在分词扩充:The excessive reliance on calculators is likely to have an adverse impact on children's mental arithmetic and pose a threat to their intellectual development.中文翻译:过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响,对孩子的智力发展有威胁。
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杯家多年不聚的四兄弟都赶回家过除夕夜。
?“开饭喽!”他们的母亲端上了一道道可口的饭菜。
一家人开心地聚在了一起,四兄弟饮酒畅谈。
这时,他们谈起了各自的事业。
?老大——一只装满水的杯子,说:“我现在,创办了自己的公司,钱就像流水似的,直往我这儿跑。
不过,话又说回来,现在的社会竞争这么激烈,随时都有倒闭的风险啊!不过,我相信自己!哈……”老二——一只装了半杯石头,半杯沙子的杯子,说道:“我呢,跟大哥比起来稍差了点儿,我现在有两份工作,钱是不愁挣,但每天都快累死了!”老三——一只装了半杯沙子的杯子,说:“我啊!文化程度比较低,现在只是个小工人,不过养家糊口不成问题。
”这时,该老四发言了。
老四是一只什么也没装的空杯子。
他吞吞吐吐说:“大哥,二哥,三哥……我……我……之前……有份工作……后来……没兴趣……所以……?辞职了……现在……学电脑……”其他三兄弟开始劝老四:“没兴趣……哈,这年月,能有饭吃就不错了,还谈什么兴趣不兴趣?”“要不到大哥的公司来吧……”“要不先干上二哥的一份工作?”这时他们的母亲说:“老四,别难过,你别看你哥他们都有工作,可他们也不是有多么如意呀!你大哥的工作压力也很大啊,你从他的白头发便可看出,他还不到四十岁啊!你二哥虽然有两份工作,可每天都快累死了,他也很固执,不听妈的话。
你三哥呢!只是一个小工人,只能维持生活而已。
可你呢,还年轻,一切重新开始还来得及,选择自己喜欢的,学电脑可是件好事,妈支持你,相信你最终会找到你感兴趣的工作的。
”几年后,老四成为国内最知名的一个网络创始人。
是啊!人生有时候像一个空杯子未尝不好,一切都可以从头开始。
所以,随时抛弃对你没用的东西,让人生变得更加精彩,让我们的人生像雪地里深深的脚印一样踏实而又清晰吧!?【失分警示】这篇作文的构思真让人感叹作者的奇思妙想。
全文采用了拟人手法,将四个人假想成四只杯子,装满水的杯子为老大,装有半杯石头、半杯沙子的杯子为老二,装了半杯沙子的杯子为老三,什么也没有装的杯子是老四。
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审题一着不慎,作文全盘皆输。
仔细梳理各地中考作文,其中有以下的审题失误:一、背离关键,重点错位审题时抓错关键词,写作时抓错重点,导致跑题。
2012年福建福州中考作文题目:人都有爱心,人都有爱好,爱是人的天性,爱有时要讲究方式;爱,有时要把握尺度。
请你以“爱,还要会爱”为题,写一篇记叙文或议论文。
2012年山东聊城中考作文题:女孩生下来就是唇腭裂,六岁时她发现了自己的“与众不同”。
女孩:“妈妈,我为什么与别人不一样呢?”妈妈:“孩子,世界上每一个人都是不同的。
”其实,我们每个人都有缺陷,都是“被上帝咬过一口的苹果”。
你有缺陷吗?你是怎样面对自己缺陷的呢?别人有缺陷吗?你又是怎样面对别人缺陷的呢?请以“面对缺陷”为话题,写一篇文章。
二、混淆概念,似是而非审题时,对有意味的关键概念,未加辨析就用一个似是实非、似同实异的概念置换题目中的概念,而导致指东说西、南辕北辙。
012年湖北武汉中考作文题目:今年年初,《咬文嚼字》杂志社,邀请读者一起“咬嚼”名人博客,大家惊讶地发现一些市场意识很强,人气很旺的名人在撰写博客时,频频出现语言运用方面的“低级错误”,对语言文字缺乏敬畏之心。
古今中外,一直不乏“推敲”文字的佳话。
即使到了网络时代,我们阅读优秀作品时也总能感受到作者严肃恭敬的写作态度。
请以“敬畏文字”为题,写一篇不少于60 0字的文章,自选文体(诗歌除外),文中不要出现自己的姓名,校名。
三、片面理解,顾此失彼一是对好几个概念的题目,只注意所谓的“中心词”,而置其他概念于不顾,结果偏离题意。
比如2012年山东烟台中考语文作文题:“你是我最好的朋友”二是对半命题作文,只注意到补充的词语,而忽视了题目中固有的词语。
比如2012年安徽中考作文题:“_____在其中”四、忽略副词,落入陷阱无视题目中“ 最”“ 也”“ 还”“更”“其实”等副词所隐藏的信息和要求。
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作文典型错误:
1.We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.
2.Globalisation will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause.
3.One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists.
4.Children, if grown up in a multicultural society, are more likely to embrace different cultures and values.
5.It is obvious that comparing with its drawbacks, the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.
6.Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean that it would gradually lose the control on the market.
7.It would be not denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries'.
8.Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively. While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication, the others regard it as an asset.
9.It is undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries.
10.I believe that everything has its downside, and the spread of English as a global language in the world is not exception.
11.New immigrants cannot fit into a new environment can happen very often.
12.Tourism also enables people, not only visitors, but also local dwellers, learn values and features of different cultural backgrounds.
13.Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in same country but from different cultural backgrounds.
14.In a multi-ethnical society, nationality can a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it.
15.Many donor countries believe that main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid grow.
16.The continuing cultural invasion creates problems and troubles for social solidarity, whether it is at the level of nation, community or family.
17.No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyle is, migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture.
18.The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to be taken place.
19.We are not surprising to see that in the coming decades, English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world.
20.There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace, as the world is increasingly global connected.
21.As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly increasingly international, people, who can speak two languages fluently, will be taken as a valuable resource to society.
22.The effect globalisation has had on culture is immense and diversity.
23.During last decade, there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration.
24.Globalisation poses both opportunities and problems for every industry in a worldwide scale.
25.There is an inescapable trend that those economic developed areas are in the vanguard of cultural change.
26.Like tourism,telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and the most profitable industry in many countries across the world.
27.Movies have a means to present contemporary attitudes, fashions and events.
28.The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes, even though their purpose is meeting the expectation of the tourists from all over the world.
29.The easy of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activity that can operate beyond national borders.
30.Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage, in large part because they have not difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.。