刘晓艳英语作文模板

刘晓艳作文：小作文顶多120字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面2，切忌！页面2用于写大作文，220字左右，相当于B5纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应！大作文单号版：What a compelling and thought-provking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……（句1）,in contrast,……（句2）。

What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?注释：thought-provking 中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不同的行。

Compelling and thought-provking 两个ing 押尾韵，俗称绝句Interesting and instructive 两个押头韵in contrast 路标性词汇，前后形成对比。

句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比例如：06年的一个小男孩。

另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述）04年起点也是终点穿中国服装的美国女孩。

前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。

00年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样）温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样）On earth:究竟加强语气Drawer=作者。

不能写author显得俗气Really:可去掉，但不丰满第二段Simple as the image is the implications（启示）mirrored（反映）are apprantly far-reaching （深远的）。

Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social concern（关注）。

Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth（其中of sth也可省略不写）been talked about so much as in our society today（历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情）In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story（事情）and similar events happened and happening are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life.（27字）Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs（一揽子项目，计划，方案）should be initiated to reverse the grim stuation----（此处是破折号）lauching（发起，发动）a nationwide education campaign,setting up relvant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.（36字）三段To conclude,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases .And it is imperative （necessary）actions be taken to curb（扭转不好的趋势）such practices（综上所述，结论如下：早该重视这种现象了）.There is reason to believe that as long as all the society ,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved ,make concerted effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least reduced.注释：All the society,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved 是用来扩充用的，如果自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1，2个不写“There is reason to believe that ”可以删除，句子意思不变第一段双号版What on earth can we derive from（从什么中获得）this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cases are far from being (=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels (类似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。

Additionally ,to reverse (扭转) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed （定制）by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行为) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任务) of the agenda. (议事日程)注释：在第二段中几乎没写东西（指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用），希望考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。

第三段Judging (非谓语动词) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclusive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced.I’m strongly convinced that only when such happenings (事情) come to an end,can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society (和谐社会) as well wish.呵呵。

好了，我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了，剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础上建立起来的（站在巨人的肩膀上）强调两点哦：首先把，部分考生担心射门雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要哦。

因为一般人多多少少都是会修改的。

其次，物以稀为贵，东西多了就不值钱了。

所以呢各位牛人高手可以在这个基础上采取各种方法对其进行修改（替换词语，换句型，被动，主动，强调句，定语从句如此种种，添加一些自己的宝贝）。

下面单刀直入，切入正题吧。

讲述可能出现的一些新情况：3个万一：万一大作文漫画是2幅而不是1幅万一作文时非讽刺类的呢万一作文时“图表类”呢（如97，99）柱状，曲线，饼状下面我们针对单双号分别展开单号1.双漫画所有的单数改复数，当然有一些地方时不能修改的哦2.讽刺“Additionally到末尾”删除，我们将其修改为举例（例下）Let’s come to an example concerning .an acquaintance of mine ,which serves well as a good example to the point……第三段句子中的curb修改为ensure第三段最后一句“such upsetting 。

”全删，修改为We can maintain a happy ,a healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.双号非讽刺修改1.第二段中primarily句中删除upsetting2.第二段中what’s more 一句删除，“worsening”3.It’s hard……if we fail to guasp such cases and can’t put them into pratices4.把Additionally——段尾换成“举例“To make the point even clearer,let’s come to an example regardingAn acquaintance of mineThat it is high time all parties concerned took effective and efficient measure to practice .The authorites the mass media ,aswell as each invidual are involved And I’m strongly convinced that we’ll properly ensure such practices,thus maintaining a happy, heathy society as we all wish.3.万一表格，则仅仅修改第一段As is vividly presented in the ******above,……in contrast,……what on earth does the,……What’s apprantly illustuated in the——is that ……in contrast 2后面接上一两个描述性句子用下2、3段落都不用修改除非要求分析原因等等（重点是漫画，讽刺）一般作文的三个部分是1，describe 2，imply 3，comment suggest小作文Dear sir or madam,Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter and I’mwriting to present my complaint/inquiry/application/apology/推荐concerning sth that……（引述事实或理由例concerning computer that I’ve bought in your shop last weekend）There’re an array of factors contributing to (同result in 同一个意思)this.第一第二第三（同大作文一样）。