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浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作

浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点 4)1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards dirt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin. 范文中的要点1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”概括非常精炼。

浙江高考英语写作概要写作

最新浙江高考英语写作概要写作1.题型介绍◆选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

◆评分参考（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；【（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。

注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。

相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。

2.考查能力概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达二者的有机结合体。

简言之就是简要概括所给文章中心大意。

要求读者把文章的具体信息用具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而非抄袭文章原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。

这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。

3.写作步骤（1）通读全文。

明确文章类型，主题，结构。

记叙文：5W+1H&议论文：观点、论点、论据说明文：说明对象，说明方式（2）要点获取(4-5点)。

寻找主题句；关键词；提问题。

（3）要点转述。

同义替换；语态转换；词性改变；句子重构（4）要点衔接。

过渡型词句，逻辑连接词。

Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.~I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience andkindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。

浙江新高考作文概要写作summarywriting

Argumentation Exposition Narration
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were
beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint
immediately spread on China’s social media.
received 3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government
departments would also be investigated and punished.
tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.

浙江高考英语概要写作一篇

浙江高考英语纲要写作一篇纲要写作（满分 15 分）阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容纲要。

In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell offsome steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online.“ And sorry about the focus,” he wrote,“自it拍was).”aselfie(That was the first recorded use ofthe word“ selfie” , according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.“ Selfie ” was declared Word of the Year for 2013 by Oxford Dictionaries. In recent years, theact of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject centre-stage, has wongreat popularity with everyone from Britain’ s Queen Elizabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining in.But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world ’most beautiful, and dangerousplaces has also inspired a lot of risk -taking behaviour, such as hanging from a tall building,standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will neverstop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. As a matter of fact, there have beenseveral reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several governments have nowbegun treating selfie as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangerswhen taking selfies.“ Walt Disney World is also banning selfie -sticks from its theme parks because selfie -stickshave become a growing safety concern for our guests, ” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said. Under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks ’entrances. They will make a choice of turning in their-sticksselfiefor pick -up later or to go back to their cars or hotel rooms to keep.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:The word “ selfie was” first used by an Australian man in 2002. ( 重点 1) Today, more and morepeople are crazy about taking selfies, including some famous people. ( 重点 2) But the popularity ofselfie has brought about some safety problems. ( 重点 3) As a result, some governments show greatconcern about visitors safety’. ( 重点 4) Walt Disney World also don ’ t allow visitors to use selfie -sticks in its theme parks. ( 重点 5)1 / 1。

浙江高考英语概要写作一篇

概要写作（满分15分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(11)含答案解析

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（11）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

The everyday signs of conscientiousness (认真尽责) ——being punctual, careful in doing work, self-disciplined, and scrupulous (一丝不苟的) in attending to responsibilities ——are typical characteristics of the model organizational citizen, the people who keep things running as they should. They follow the rules, help out, and are concerned about the people they work with. It’s the conscientious worker who helps newcomers or updates people who return after an absence, who never abuses sick leaves, who always gets things done on deadline.Conscientiousness is a key to success in any field. In studies of job performance, outstanding effectiveness for almost all jobs, from semi-skilled labor to sales and management, depends on conscientiousness. It is particularly important for outstanding performance in jobs at the lower levels of an organization: the secretary whose message taking is perfect, the delivery truck driver who is always on time. Conscientiousness also offers a buffer (缓冲) against the threat of job loss in today’s constantly changing market, because employees with this quality are among the most valued.But conscientiousness in the absence of social skills can lead to problems. Since conscientious people demand so much of themselves, they can hold other people to their own standards, and so be overly judgmental when others don’t show the same high levels of model behavior. Factory workers in Great Britain and the United States who were extremely conscientious, for example, tended to criticize co-workers even about failures that seemed unimportant to those they criticized, which damaged their relationships.When conscientiousness takes the form of living up to expectations, it can discourage creativity. In creative professions like art or advertising, openness to wild ideas and spontaneity (自发性) are scarce and in demand. Success in such occupations calls for a balance, however; without enough conscientiousness to follow through, people become mere dreamers, with nothing to show for their imaginativeness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Conscientious people have a lot in common: they are strict with themselves and helpful to others while at work. (要点1) On the one hand, conscientiousness contributes to better job performances especially for those who work at lower levels and therefore means lower chance of unemployment.（要点2）On the other hand, for lack of adequate social skills and novel ideas, their relationship with co-workers can be unpleasant and their work less satisfactory. （要点3）【解析】【分析】本题要求写一篇概要，属于说明文。

浙江高考英语概要写作专项训练

概要写作1．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Online schools are becoming very popular today. Whether it is working professionals who cannot afford the time to go to a full-time college because of their huge workload or stay-at-home mums who have many duties and cannot join in a college, online schools are much enjoyed at all. And now, even regular students, who have the time to go to college, are going in for online education, as it leaves them with enough time to pursue other things, such as a part-time job or a hobby, along with studying. However, as with everything, there are both advantages and disadvantages of online schooling.Let’s start with the positives. These schools cost much less. You don’t have to spend money on buying books or bus fees. Another advantage is the flexibility it provides. You can study at any time during the day. You can study wherever you want---in your house, at a cafe or even in a park.Move on to the disadvantages of online schooling. Those students who always need a push from their teachers to do well, are very likely not to do well in online schools. And the greatest disadvantage going to school online is that there are many employers who prefer students with a traditional degree to those who have an online degree. The employers feel that students who go to full-time colleges are more knowledgeable compared to those who have online degrees. Since the very purpose of education is to land a person a good job, online degrees, many a time, do not serve this purpose.No doubt that online schools offer the freedom which no regular college can provide. However how much the employers will value the degrees and whether a student can actually make his own study schedule and most importantly, stick to it, depend upon individuals( AA). So in the end, it can be rightly said, online schools are good for some, while others should give them a skip.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____2．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

浙江新高考英语作文概要和续写

2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. Howe ver, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a mea ns to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with h ot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when t he rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, Kin g of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifica lly speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standard s of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements r epeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever soft er, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents n ervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsib le for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immuno logist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.（原创范文，仅供参考）One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a lon g time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began t o change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told tha t washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) However, some scient ists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点4)【范文点拨】(一)要点分析1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is n othing fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have differen t attitudes towards dirt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have diffe rent attitudes towards dirt on the skin. 范文中的要点1“People have mixed opi nions towards dirt on our skin. ”概括非常精炼。

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概要写作（满分15分）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

In 2002, an Australian man went to his friend’s 21st birthday party. He got drunk, fell off some steps and cut his lip. He took a picture of his injuries and shared it with his friends online. “And sorry about the focus,” he wrote, “it was a selfie(自拍).” That was the first recorded use of the word “selfie”, according to some experts at Oxford Dictionaries.
“S elfie” was declared Word of the Year for 2013 by Oxford Dictionaries. In recent years, the act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone, placing the subject centre-stage, has won great popularity with everyone from Britain’s Queen El izabeth II to U.S. President Barack Obama joining in.
But the rise of selfie photography in some of the world’s most beautiful, and dangerous places has also inspired a lot of risk-takingbehaviour, such as hanging from a tall building, standing in front of a rushing train and crossing a busy street. People who get addicted will never stop taking selfies, completely ignoring where they are. As a matter of fact, there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies. Several governments have now begun treating selfie as a serious threat to safety, warning visitors to pay attention to the dangers when taking selfies.
“Walt Disney World is also banning selfie-sticks from its theme parks because selfie-sticks have become a growing safety concern for our guests,” Disney World spokeswoman Kim Prunty said.Under the new policy, guests will be checked for the equipment during the routine bag check that happens near the parks’ entrances. They will make a choice of turning in their selfie-sticks for pick-up later or to go back to their cars or hotel rooms to keep.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version:
The word “selfie”was first used by an Australian man in 2002. (要点1)Today, more and more people are crazy about taking selfies,including some famous people.(要点2)But the popularity of selfie has brought about some safety problems. (要点3)As a result,some governments show great concern about visitors’safety. (要点4)Walt Disney World also don’t allow visitors to use selfie-sticks in its theme parks. (要点5)。