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经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇4

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇4
译文:苔丝和她现在挨肩儿的妹妹中间,本来还有两个娃娃, 却都在襁褓中就死了,因此她和这个挨肩儿的妹妹,相差四 岁还多;这种情况,使她独自和弟妹们在一块儿的时候,俨 然以“老姐比母”自居。(张谷若译)
赏析:“a deputy-maternal attitude”实在不好译,而张谷若 先生的“俨然以‘老姐比母’自居”却译得那么轻松自然, 准确得当,让人不由得不叹服。吕叔湘先生也有一译,与此 译有异曲同工之妙:Now and then he turned his eyes from the girl's face to that of the partner, which, in exhilaration of the dance,had taken on a look of impudent ownership.他 时而转移他的目光从女子的脸上到她的舞伴的脸上,那张脸 在跳舞的狂热之中俨然有“佳人属我”的神情。
9. Oh, we are proud! (George Bernard Shaw: Pygmalion)
译文:吓,好大架子。(杨宪益译)
赏析:翻译对话,要生动活泼。日常生活中,人们常用的 一些词语、表达方式,大多具有生动活泼的特点,翻译中, 如何充分利用这些有声有色的语言,是一门学问。杨宪益 先生细揣摩说话人的心理,用生动活泼的汉语口语来译原 文,得到的译文“信”、“达”且“切”。
译 她文母:亲她的母病亲已已好经转见,好不,用不她用时她刻时在刻跟在前病伺床候前了伺,候囚了在,病她房 在 里病这房些里 日和子病,人有缠空了出这来么散些散天心,,一她旦当跑然到很外高面兴地了里。,当然 很高兴。(张谷若译)
赏析:先译“her mother’s improvement”,接着译“she was not now required'’,再译“after the confinement of the sick chamber”和“doing it",最后译“she liked”, 翻译顺序是从后依次向前,可谓之倒拆法(“从形式看,[倒 拆]就是按意群把句子拆散,逆着原文的句法排列,逐片往上 倒译”,黄邦杰《译艺谭》,第133页),这样译出来的文 字因是因,果是果,符合汉语的行文顺序。此外,“见好”、 改“译缠:”等词的选择也非常精当。

经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析

经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析

经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析在现实学习生活中,我们最不陌生的就是文言文了吧?文言文是中国文化的瑰宝,古人为我们留下了大量的文言文。

相信很多人都在为看懂文言文发愁,下面是小编为大家收集的经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析,欢迎大家分享。

经典短篇文言文翻译及赏析1鱼我所欲也孟子及其弟子〔先秦〕鱼,我所欲也;熊掌,亦我所欲也。

二者不可得兼,舍鱼而取熊掌者也。

生,亦我所欲也;义,亦我所欲也。

二者不可得兼,舍生而取义者也。

生亦我所欲,所欲有甚于生者,故不为苟得也;死亦我所恶,所恶有甚于死者,故患有所不辟也。

如使人之所欲莫甚于生,则凡可以得生者何不用也?使人之所恶莫甚于死者,则凡可以辟患者何不为也?由是则生而有不用也,由是则可以辟患而有不为也。

是故所欲有甚于生者,所恶有甚于死者。

非独贤者有是心也,人皆有之,贤者能勿丧耳。

一箪食,一豆羹,得之则生,弗得则死。

呼尔而与之,行道之人弗受;蹴尔而与之,乞人不屑也。

万钟则不辩礼义而受之,万钟于我何加焉!为宫室之美、妻妾之奉、所识穷乏者得我与?乡为身死而不受,今为宫室之美为之;乡为身死而不受,今为妻妾之奉为之;乡为身死而不受,今为所识穷乏者得我而为之:是亦不可以已乎?此之谓失其本心。

(与通欤;乡通向;辟通避)译文鱼是我所想要的,熊掌也是我所想要的,如果这两种东西不能同时得到,那么我就只好放弃鱼而选取熊掌了。

生命是我所想要的,道义也是我所想要的,如果这两样东西不能同时都具有的话,那么我就只好牺牲生命而选取道义了。

生命是我所想要的,但我所想要的还有比生命更重要的东西,所以我不做苟且偷生的事。

死亡是我所厌恶的,但我所厌恶的还有超过死亡的事,因此有灾祸我也不躲避。

如果人们所想要的东西没有能比生命更重要的.,那么凡是能够用来求得生存的手段,哪一样不可以采用呢?如果人们所厌恶的事情没有超过死亡的,那么凡是可以躲避祸患的办法什么不可以做呢?采用某种手段就能够活命,可是有的人却不肯采用;采用某种办法就能够躲避灾祸,可是有的人也不肯采用。

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇7

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇7
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10. “Did you say 'pig' or„fig‟?”said the cat.
(“I said 'pig”‟, replied Alice.)
译文:“你刚才是说‘猪’还是‘鼠’?”(赵元任译)
赏析:“pig”和“fig”发音相似,“the cat”才可能没 听清。既然“pig”译成了 “猪”,“fig”也必须译成一 个与“猪”在发音上类似的汉字。译者大胆地舍弃“fig” 的本意“无花果”,挑选了个“鼠”字,同“猪”字声母相 似,韵母相同,这样一来,译文从逻辑上就说得过去了。从 这个译例里也许可以得出这样的结论:译文当然要忠实于原 文,但译者不应被原文束缚手脚,很多时候大胆创造是必要 的。
11. A quick brain and a better education elsewhere showed the boy very soon that his grandsire was a dullard; and he began accordingly to command him and to look down upon him.(William Thackeray: Vanity Fair)
经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇7
1. Whom every thing becomes, to chide, to laugh, To weep; whose every passion fully strives To make itself, in thee, fair and admired. ( William Shakespeare: Antony and
13. A quick brain and a better education elsewhere showed the boy very soon that his grandsire was a dullard; and he began accordingly to command him and to look down upon him.(William Thackeray: Vanity Fair) 译文:那孩子脑子快,在别处受过好教育,过了不久就发 现爷爷足个蠢东西,因此看不起他,把他呼来喝去。(杨 必译) 赏析:一个已臻“化境”的译例。结构上的精妙调整,显示 了译者翻译技巧运用之纯熟,原句带有淡淡的幽默,译句选 词也致力于传达这种淡淡的幽默,所选“呼来喝去”、“蠢 东西”词语准确、形象,富有调侃意味,与整句乃至句子所 在的整个篇章的风格相吻合。

经典翻译赏析(1)

经典翻译赏析(1)

经典翻译赏析(1)经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇2一、单句Kissinger felt the massive bombing would strengthen the President's hand in China.2. That Home is Home though it is never so Homely.3. A particular fine spring came round, and the stir of germination was almost audible in the buds.(Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d’Urbervilles)4. Thus the initiative to partition Poland completely, to deny the Polish people any independent existence of their own whatsoever, came from the Russians. But the Germans did not need much urging to agree.5. “If only I know how the young men nowadays are changing,” (P.G. Wodehouse: When the Doctors Dispute)6. His discourse, says Speidel, “became lost in fantastic digressions.”7. Chilly gusts of wind with a taste of rain in them had well nigh dispeopled the streets.8. Only let us be thankful that the darlings are like the beasts of the field, and don't know their own power. They would overcome us entirely if they did. ( William Thackeray: Vanity Fair)9. Every family is said to have at least one skeleton in the cupboard.10. If you think me in a way to be happier than I deserve, I am quite of your opinion11. No greater misfortune can be fall a country than to be governed by an old tyrant.12. Hearing Debs was an experience.13. Charity begins at home, they say.(Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d’Urbervilles)14. The large cities absorb the wealth and fashion of the nation.二、段落1. Girl: Don't you remember me? Verdoux: Ah, yes, yes. How's the world treating you? Girl: Hah…I could complain, but l won't. What I need is a good manager. Do you know anybody that wants a job? (Mr. Verdoux, directed by Charlie Chaplin)译文:拉塞妮:还记得我吗? 凡尔利:啊,记得,记得。

经典英译汉文章翻译赏析

经典英译汉文章翻译赏析

英译汉文章翻译赏析时间:2009年06月01日【英译中选段六】原文(by Robert Frost)The Gift OutrightThe land was once ours before we were the land’s.She was our land more than a hundred years.Before we were her people. She was oursIn Massachusetts, in Virginia;But we were England’s, still colonials,Possessing what we still were unpossessed by,Possessed by what we now no more possessed.Something we were withholding made us weakUntil we found out that it was ourselvesWe were withholding from our land of living,And forthwith found salvation in surrender.Such as we were we gave ourselves outright(The deed of gift was many deeds of war)To the land vaguely realizing westward,But still unstoried, artless, unenhanced,Such as she was, such as she would become.(原载 )译文(余光中译):全心的奉献土地先属于我们,我们才属于土地。

她成为我们的土地历一百余年,我们才成为她的人民。

当时她属于我们,在麻萨诸塞,在佛吉尼亚,但我们属于英国,仍是殖民之身,我们拥有的,我们仍漠不关心,我们关心的,我们已不再拥有。

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇5

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇5

2. My sweet, clever, attractive, economical, sensible little girl, free at last. 译文:我那性子又好、又聪明、又好看、又会当家、又识 大体的女儿,这可自由了。(吕叔湘译) 赏析:吕先生的这句译文是翻译界公认的佳译。译句几乎是 顺着原句逐词直译的,原句分两个句段,前长后短,译句也 分两个句段,前长后短,传达了原文形的美(句子前长后短, 象征了说话人经过了很长时间的期待,终于看到女儿自由了, 迫不及待地与外人道的欣喜)。原句中几个词也译得很不落 窠臼:“sweet”译为“性子好”(用在这里似乎没有此这 更恰当的了),“economical”译为“会当家”, “sensible”译为“识大体”,都是精雕细凿的结果。 另译:我那性子好、又聪明、又好看、 又懂事、又会过日 子的小女儿,终于自由了。(吕叔湘译)
8. Not a soul passed that way for a long while, and the faint notes of the band were the only human sounds audible within the rim of blue hills. (Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d'Urbervilles) 译文:那条路上,许久没再过一个人影儿。在青山环绕的 山谷里,那轻渺的铜管乐声,就是惟一能听到的人籁。 (张谷若译) 赏析:在拥挤、嘈杂、吵闹的都市里每天为不绝的噪音折磨 得寝食难安,读到这样的描写,您是否有一点点心动? 另译:路上久久不见人影,青山廓里传来的幽幽管乐声算是 唯一能听到的人为之音。
经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇5
1. He was sixty-five, his hair was grey, his face lined and there were pouches under his eyes, but he bore his years gallantly.(W.S. Maugham: The Razor's Edge) 译文:他六十五,头发花白,皱纹满面,眼下边两个肿眼 泡,但是他不服老。 赏析:将抽象的“he bore his years gallantly”译成 具体的“他不服老”,可谓简洁明了,读来痛快。 改译:他已六十有五,一头白发,满脸皱纹,泪囊鼓起, 还就是不服老。

经典翻译赏析一-单句篇

经典翻译赏析一-单句篇
改译:听德伯一席话,胜读十年书。
13. Charity begins at home, they say. (Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d’Urbervilles)
译文:人家不是说,行善得由已及人吗? (张谷若译)
译文:基辛格觉得这场大规模的Fra bibliotek炸会使总统在中国的
Kissinger felt the massive bombing would
赏析:文化不同,用以表达类似概念的形象化词语也不一样。在英文中可以说“strengthen...one’s hand”,在汉语中却不能说“增强了某人的手”,但汉语中有表示类似意思的形象化词语“使……腰杆子硬一些”,放在译句里,既传达了原文的意思,又没有丧失形象感。
译文:国之横祸,莫过于暴君当政。
赏析:现代汉语是在古汉语的基础上发展起来的,相对于现代汉语来说,古汉语有它自己的优势,如词汇丰富、语法有弹性、表情表意能力强等等,在写作和翻译时,适当地运用一些古汉语的语素或词,能给文章带来一种书卷气,显得庄重典雅。上面这个译例就体现了这种特色,译者灵活套用了古汉语的句子结构,使用了古汉语的个别语素(词语),译出的句子简洁、庄重,读来好似看见了一个学识渊博的老学究在摇头晃脑地评说历史。
改译:常言道:家丑家家有,羞于外人道。
10. If you think me in a way to be happier than I deserve, I am quite of your opinion
译文:如果你认为我的幸福来之太易,得之有愧,那我完全同意你的看法。 ( 张经浩译)
译文:阵阵寒风,带着雨意,街上冷冷清清,儿乎没有什么人了。
赏析:英文是形合的文字,英语句子讲究结构严谨;汉语重意合,遣词造句推崇形散而神不散。请看这里的英文句子,主、谓、宾一目了然,原因和结果清清楚楚,如果按这样的顺序、结构直译成汉语,势必凝滞不化。为了使译句能体现汉语句式的特点,译者大胆地进行了结构调整,将原文一句切分成了译文四个短语(小句),充分利用句子内部语义上的联系,不用任何关联词,由风到雨,到街,再到人,用白描的手法将一幅寒夜凄雨图呈现在读者面前,处理之妙,令人击节。

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇7解析

经典翻译赏析(一)——单句篇7解析
译文:那孩子脑子快,在别处受过好教育,过了不久就发 现爷爷足个蠢东西,因此看不起他,把他呼来喝去。(杨 必译) 赏析:一个已臻“化境”的译例。结构上的精妙调整,显示 了译者翻译技巧运用之纯熟,原句带有淡淡的幽默,译句选 词也致力于传达这种淡淡的幽默,所选“呼来喝去”、“蠢 东西”词语准确、形象,富有调侃意味,与整句乃至句子所 在的整个篇章的风格相吻合。
9. He who would search for pearls must dive deep.
译文:不入虎穴,焉得虎子。 赏析:每种语言都有它的惯用语或成语,有些英语惯用语或 成语在汉语里可找到相当贴切的、对应的表达,翻译这样的 惯用语或成语,只需套用汉语里对应的惯用语或成语就行了, 上面的译句就是一个代表性的例子。不过,这种套用一定要 谨慎,最好不要用汉文化色彩太浓的惯用语或成语来译英语 中的惯用语或成语,如将“Talk of the devil and he is sure to come”译成“说曹操,曹操到”,两句惯用语意思虽完全 一样,但文化色彩不同,套用是不行的,如果原句出自一个 英国人之口,译成如此的汉语,读者(听众)还以为英国人 也熟悉曹操呢。 另译:不入深水,焉得宝珠。 或:欲寻宝珠,须探深水。
7. Who has not admired the artifices and delicate approaches with which women ‘prepare’ their friends for bad news? (William Thackeray: Vanity Fair) 译文:女人们把坏消息告诉朋友的时候,惯会用些花巧,先缓 缓的露个口风,那种手段,没有人看了不佩服。(杨必译) 赏析:比较原句与译句的结构,会发现很大的差异,译句几 乎是顺原句倒着译过来的,先译“women ‘prepare' their friends for bad news”时如何费尽思量,小心翼翼( with the artifices and delicate approaches),放句前,作外 位成分,然后用“那种手段”指代前面文字中陈述的内容, 引出后面的“没有人看了不佩服”,句子自然、流畅。有人 说,“外汉翻译处理原文某些语法现象组织汉语外位语句式, 是使汉译文合乎现代汉语规范的重要手段之一”(《中国翻 译词典》,第680页),此话值得牢记。译句选词也极地道, 这里不多分析,读者朋友宜多体会其中深意。
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经典翻译赏析3
I.单句经典翻译
1.He was a fool for danger.
2.Friendship and play shorten the day.
3.I repair to the enchanted house, where there are lights, chattering,
music, flowers, officers(I am sorry to see) and the eldest Miss Larkins,
a blaze of beauty.
4.She has beauty still, and, if it be not in its heyday, it is not yet
in its autumn.
5.“So much for honesty towards ’ee!”(Thomas Hardy: Tess of the
d’Urbervilles)
6.Who dares do all that may become a man, and dares no more, he is a man
indeed. (William Shakespeare)
Either a flat ‘yes' or a flat‘no’- Go back where you came from. (Isaac Bashevis Singer: Gimpel the Fool)
7.Its waters, in creeping down these miles of meadow-land, frequently
divided, serpentining in purposeless curves, looping themselves around little islands that had no name, returning, and re-embodying themselves as a broad main stream further on.(Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d’Urbervilles)
8.I had not thought that brush and heart had so failed each other.
9.Colonel Korn acted decisively to arrest what seemed to him to be the
beginning of an unwholesome trend in Major's squadron.
10.There was an interval off our years and more between Tess and the next
of the family, the two who had filled the gap having died in their infancy, and this lent her a deputy-maternal attitude when she was
along with her juniors.(Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d'Urbervilles)
11.Don't make it hard for us again.
12.She liked doing it, after the confinement of the sick chamber, where
she was not now required by reason of her mother's improvement. (Thomas Hardy: Tess of the d'Urbervilles)
II.I.段落经典翻译
1. I chanced to rise very early one particular moming this summer, and took a walk into the country to divert myself among the fields and meadows, while the green was new, and the flowers in their bloom. As at this season of the year every lane is a beautiful walk, and every hedge full of nosegays, Ilost myself, with a great deal ofpleasure, among several thickets and bushes that were filled with a great variety of birds, and an agreeable confusion of notes, which formed the pleasantest scene in the world to one who had passed a whole winter in noise and smoke. (Joseph Addison:“Tulips")
译文:今年夏天的一个清晨,我偶然起了个大早,信步走向乡间,期望在田间和草丛之间寻求一份惬意。

其时,绿草茵茵,百花吐艳。

每年的这个季节,任何一条小道都是一派美丽景色,每一丛篱笆都缀满花束。

我心中允满欢欣,陶醉流连于那一丛丛灌木之间。

林中鸟儿,数不胜数,奏出各种混杂但悦耳的音符,对一个在噪音和烟雾中度过了整整一个冬天的人来说,这一切构成了世界上最舒适的景致。

(金衡山译)
2. One wintry evening…a keen north wind arose as it grew dark,and night came on with black and dismallooks.A bitter storm of sleet, dense and ice-cold, swept the wet streets, and rattled on the trembling windows. Sign-boards, shaken past endurance in their creaking frames, fell crashing on the pavement; old tottering chimneys reeled and staggered in the blast; and many a steeple rocked again that night,as though the earth were troubled.(Charles Dickens: Barnaby Rudge)
译文:一个冬天的夜晚,当天色渐渐暗下来时,剐起起了凛冽的北风,接着夜晚带着阴沉忧郁的脸色降临了。

刺骨的寒风夹着密集而寒冷的雨雪,打过湿漉漉的街道,打得颤抖的窗子格格作响。

在吱吱嘎嘎的框架里被摇撼得再也支撑不住了的招牌,哗啦啦跌落在人行道上;旧炯囱在狂风中晃动震颤,摇摇欲坠;那天夜里许多教堂的尖塔又摇晃起来,仿佛大地在动荡不安。

(叶华年译)
2.“How much did you suffer?”
“Plenty,”the old man said.(Ernest Hemingway: The Old Man and the Sea
译文:“你吃了多少苫?”
“一言难尽,”老头说。

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