高中英语基础写作训练Basic_writing2
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Basic Writing(基础写作)
位于 占地面积 平方公里 人口 大洋洲 气候 沿海地区 雨量 由…组成 组成 以…而著名 而著名 明媚的阳光 牛羊 野生动植物 世界各地的游客 美景 be located in/ lie in …. cover an area of square kilometre a population of Oceania climate coastal area rainfall be made up of / consist of be famous for bright sunshine cattle and sheep wildlife the tourists from all over the world beautiful scenery
1. 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲 大洋洲。 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲—大洋洲。 大洋洲 Australia is located in the smallest continent—Oceania. 2. 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. 3. 澳大利亚的总面积 澳大利亚的总面积7,686,850平方公里。 平方公里。 平方公里 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers.
kilometers with a population of about 20 million.
How to write complex sentences?
巧用连接词, 巧用连接词 如 and，写出规范的并列句 ， 3. 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家， 分沿海地区有充足的雨量 。 3. It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have adequate rainfall.
1. 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲 大洋洲。 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲—大洋洲。 大洋洲 Australia is located in the smallest continent—Oceania. 2. 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. 3. 澳大利亚的总面积 澳大利亚的总面积7,686,850平方公里。 平方公里。 平方公里 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers.
kilometers with a population of about 20 million.
How to write complex sentences?
巧用连接词, 巧用连接词 如 and，写出规范的并列句 ， 3. 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家， 分沿海地区有充足的雨量 。 3. It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have adequate rainfall.
高中英语基础写作训练Basicwriting课件
Conclusion
Writing Practice
03
Summary: By narrating events, characters, and emotions, convey the plot and theme of the story.
Detailed description
Determine the theme and plot: Choose an interesting and meaningful theme and design an attractive plot.
Creativity
Identify key strengths
Point out the student's strengths in writing, such as clear ideas, strong arguments, or creative expressions
Provide constructive feedback
Event Description
Provide a detailed description of the occurrence, development, and outcome of the event, paying attention to using vivid language and detailed descriptions.
Structural arrangement
Reasonably arrange the structure of the article, including the introduction, main body, and conclusion, to ensure rigorous and clear argumentation.
Writing Practice
03
Summary: By narrating events, characters, and emotions, convey the plot and theme of the story.
Detailed description
Determine the theme and plot: Choose an interesting and meaningful theme and design an attractive plot.
Creativity
Identify key strengths
Point out the student's strengths in writing, such as clear ideas, strong arguments, or creative expressions
Provide constructive feedback
Event Description
Provide a detailed description of the occurrence, development, and outcome of the event, paying attention to using vivid language and detailed descriptions.
Structural arrangement
Reasonably arrange the structure of the article, including the introduction, main body, and conclusion, to ensure rigorous and clear argumentation.
Basic Writing(基础写作)
3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 组句
1) 要减少感染病毒的机会，最重要的是要勤洗 要减少感染病毒的机会， 手。
The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected.
组句成文的各种关系的常用过渡词语
• • • • • • • • • • 比较 on the country ; on the one hand; on the other hand ; 转折 but ; yet; however ; though; in spite of ; instead ; 递进 besides ; moreover ; what’s more; in addition ; 举例 for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结 all in all ; in short ; in general ; in conclusion; in brief; in a word.
基础写作训练
你是校报小记者, 最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：
4.成篇 成篇
Announcement Hello everyone. Here is some advice on how to keep yourself healthy and avoid the H1N1 flu. The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Besides, you’d better clean your surroundings, such as your desks and chairs, every day. Drinking plenty of boiled water and taking more exercises will also do you good. May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.
高中英语基础写作训练Basic_writing 2
Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)
2. National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79,532 square meters. It is 31 meters high, 177 meters long and 177 meters wide. There are 17,000 seats in it. covering an area • National Aquatics Center,________________ of 79,532 square meters is 31 meters high, 177 _____________________, meters long and 177 meters wide with ____ 17,000 seats in it. （用现在分词短语+with的复合结构）
ⅡRelevant expressions
4. “东，南，西，北”的表达 • sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处 B A B A B A
A is in the east of B
A is on the east of B
(A与B相邻接)
(A在B的范围之内) A is to the east of B (A在B的范围之外，且不接壤)
1) Guangdong is ___ in the south of China. 2) Beijing is ___ to the north of Guangdong. 3) Guangdong is ___ on the east of Guangxi.
Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)
高中英语基础写作2
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.
2. 我之所以非常喜欢它，主要有下面两个 two reasons. 原因。
I like it very much mainly for the following
1.我经常读你们报社的报纸。
First, it covers both national and international news首先，它涵盖了国内外新闻，因此，只 3. so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important affairs/events that have 要翻一翻看报纸，我就能得知一个礼拜的 happened during the week. 所有重大事件。 Second, equally attractive are the success stories 4. 其次，同样吸引我的是那些世界名人的 of成功故事，这有助我理解一个人是如何努 world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can struggle to 力让世界变得更美好。 make the world a better place.
转换词语，使用高级词汇或短语。
It’s good for our health to eat more fruit and vegetables. We benefits a lot from fruit and vegetables. Eating more fruit and vegetables does good to our health. Eating more fruit and vegetables is beneficial to our health.
英语作文写作训练Basicwriting
ⅡRelevant expressions
1. “某物位于……” sth. lie/ stand / be located /be situated + in/at/on… + 某处 e.g. 国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。 The National Aquatics Center lies / stands / is located /is situated in the Olympic Park.
2. National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79,532 square meters. It is 31 meters high, 177 meters long and 177 meters wide. There are 17,000 seats in it. National Aquatics Center,________________ _____________________, is 31 meters high, 177 meters long and 177 meters wide ____ 17,000 seats in it. covering an area
3.
Let’s combine the sentences . into a short passage!
四、基础写作 要求：用括号中所给词翻 译下列句子
1. Canada is the second biggest country in the world, with an area of 9, 976, 000square kilometres and a population of slightly over 30 million. 2. It is located in the north part of the North American continent, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west, and borders the US on the south.
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ⅡRelevant expressions
2. “面积”的表达 ①The area of+某地+is+……square meters ②某地+covers an area of +……square meters e.g. 国家游泳中心的建筑面积有79，532m2。
The area of the National Aquatics Center is 79，532 square meters.
1.认真审题，明确要求。
1)确定短文的主题和格式； 主题：松桃民族中学 格式：书信
2)确定短文的人称和时态。 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时
2.划分信息块，列出写作要点，明确写作的先后次序。 3.确定可能用到的短语、主要句型。 4.扩展成句，连句成te。 • 教学楼：Teacing and learning
building • 图书馆:library • 艺术楼:art floor • 综合办公楼:office building • 学生宿舍:students’ dormitory • 塑胶足球场:plastic
footballplayground • 体育馆:gymnasium
请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文。
假设你是李华，应你的朋友Bob的要求，写一封信介 绍“松桃民族中学”的基本情况。（满分25分）
名称
松桃民族中学（学校历史悠久，人才辈出，
是黔东名校之一）
地点
贵州省松桃县城南新区梵净山大道，南抵 桂花桥，西临松江河。
规模
面积128，519m2;共100个班级，可容纳 5000人。共有6栋教学楼，1栋图书馆，1 栋艺术楼，1栋综合办公楼，6栋学生宿舍， 俩个塑胶足球场，一个体育馆。每栋楼有5 层，我们教室位于…楼,每间教室3.5米高， 宽8米，长14米，
=The National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79，532 square meters.
ⅡRelevant expressions
3. “长，宽，高”的表达 ① sth. is +数字+量词+in length/width/height ② sth. is+数字+量词+long/wide/high e.g. 国家游泳中心的高度是31米，宽是177米，
ⅡRelevant expressions
1. “某物位于……” • sth. lie/ stand / be located /be situated +
in/at/on… + 某处 e.g. 国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。
The National Aquatics Center lies / stands / is located /is situated in the Olympic Park.
• National Aquatics Center,__co_v_e_r_i_n_g_a_n__a_r_e_a_ _o_f_7_9_,_5_3_2_s_q_u_a_r_e__m_e_t_e_r_s, is 31 meters high, 177
meters long and 177 meters wide w__it_h_ 17,000 seats in it.（用现在分词短语+with的复合结构）
---- How to describe a place
ⅠLook at the following passage and find out
the useful expressions about describing a place:
“位于……” 面积 方位 长、宽、高
Our school is located in the east of Zhaoqing. It stands at No. 3 on the second Duanzhou Road. There are two buildings in it. It covers an area of 22,000 square meters. The teaching building stands in the middle of our school. There are six floors in it. Our classroom is on the sixth floor. And it is 3 meters high, 8 meters long and 5 meters wide.
ⅡSentence Integration : [方法]运用插入结构，with的复合结构 1. 过去分词短语 (past participle phrase) 2. 现在分词短语 (present participle phrase) 3. 介词短语 (prep. phrase ) 4. 定语从句 (attributive clause)
[写作要求] 1. 100字左右； 2. 三段； 3. 开头已给出,不计算在内。 Dear Bob,
Songtao Minzu Senior Highshool is one of the most famous school in the east of Guizhou province.
基础写作基本步骤
Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)
2. National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79,532 square meters. It is 31 meters high, 177 meters long and 177 meters wide. There are 17,000 seats in it.
4. Water Cube, _w__h_ic_h__is__in__th_e__n_o_r_t_h_o_f_B__e_ij_in_g_, lies in the Olympic Park _w_i_t_h_ “Bird’s Nest” next to it.（用定语从句+with的复合结构）
ⅠRelevant expressions: 1.“位于……”： sth. lie/ be located /be situated + in/at/on… + 某处 2. 面积： ①The area of+某地+is+……square meters ②某地+covers an area of +……square meters 3. “长，宽，高”： ① sth. is +数字+量词+in length/width/height ② sth. is+数字+量词+long/wide/high 4. 方位：sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处
长是177米。
The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters in height, 177 meters in width and 177 meters in length.
=The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters high, 177 meters wide and 177 meters long.
ⅡRelevant expressions
4. “东，南，西，北”的表达
• sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处
BA
BA
BA
A is on the east of B
A is in the east of B
(A与B相邻接)
(A在B的范围之内) A is to the east of B
——将简单句转为较复杂的句子
[方法]运用“插入结构”或“with的复合结构” 可用作插入结构的有：过去/现在分词短语，介词 短语或从句，等等。
e.g.1. Our school is located in the east of Zhaoqing. It
stands at No. 3 on the second Duanzhou Road. There are two buildings in it.
Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)
3. Water Cube lies in the Olympic Park. It is in the north of Beijing. “Bird’s Nest” is next to it. Water Cube, _i_n__th__e_n_o__rt_h__o_f_B__e_ij_in__g__, lies in the Olympic Park _w_i_t_h_ “Bird’s Nest” next to it. （用介词短语+with的复合结构）
Our school,l_o_ca_t_e_d_in__th_e__ea_s_t_o_f_Z_h_a_o_q_in_g_, stands at No. 3 on the second Duanzhou Road _w_i_th_ two buildings in it. (过去分词短语+with复合结构)
(A在B的范围之外，且不接壤)
1) Guangdong is _i_n_ the south of China.
2) Beijing is _to__ the north of Guangdong.
3) Guangdong is _o_n_ the east of Guangxi.
Ⅲ Sentence Integration (句子整合)