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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件

a result of, for the reason that 让步关系: though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系:what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系:if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
3
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后:first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系:but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语写作公开课课件(共15张PPT)

HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?
Why writing is so difficult for you?
Reason 1. don’t know what to write. 写什么 Reason 2. don’t know how to write it . 怎么写
书面表达: 假设你是李华,你校拟定于下周五举行一 次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市 就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件, 邀请她一起参加。内容包括:
表达3 升级表达 I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.
直译
定语从句
升级表达
询问对方意见:我知道你很幽默,并且擅长讲故事,所以想了解 你你是否有意愿参加?若有,我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期 待你的回复。
直译
定语从句
升级表达
Reason 3:
希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友,共同学习,共同进步。
表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together. 表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.
表达1. I know you are humorous and good at telling stories so I want to know whether you are interested in the competition or not. If your answer is yes, I will offer you more detailed information. I am looking forward for your reply.
Why writing is so difficult for you?
Reason 1. don’t know what to write. 写什么 Reason 2. don’t know how to write it . 怎么写
书面表达: 假设你是李华,你校拟定于下周五举行一 次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市 就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件, 邀请她一起参加。内容包括:
表达3 升级表达 I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.
直译
定语从句
升级表达
询问对方意见:我知道你很幽默,并且擅长讲故事,所以想了解 你你是否有意愿参加?若有,我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期 待你的回复。
直译
定语从句
升级表达
Reason 3:
希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友,共同学习,共同进步。
表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together. 表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.
表达1. I know you are humorous and good at telling stories so I want to know whether you are interested in the competition or not. If your answer is yes, I will offer you more detailed information. I am looking forward for your reply.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)

Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练,所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里,还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节:
语言表达:
连词成句:
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多,影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息,写的内容与要求无关
要点完整;语言准确且多样;结构清晰; 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准:
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文(申请信)
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达:中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事(具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势)
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练,所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里,还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节:
语言表达:
连词成句:
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多,影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息,写的内容与要求无关
要点完整;语言准确且多样;结构清晰; 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准:
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文(申请信)
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达:中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事(具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势)
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

PPT内容要精炼简洁,避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了,避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中,避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语,突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比,避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人:
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文:注意叙事顺序,情节曲折,人物塑造 议论文:论点明确,论据充分,论证严密 说明文:抓住事物特征,条理清晰,语言准确 应用文:格式规范,语言得体,内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文,提炼写作技巧
逐句分析,提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧,引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中,颜色搭配合理
字体大小:根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整,确保清晰易读 字体颜色:与背景色形成对比,突出重点内容,避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版:遵循简洁明了原则,避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量:精简文字内容,突出重点,避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂,增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合,增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题,清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了,易于理解 色彩搭配要合理,避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容:根据本节课所学内容,写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求:认真审题,结合本节课所学知识,注意语法和单词的拼写,书写工整。 上交时间:下节课上课前提交,逾期不候。 奖励机制:对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)

Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进:besides, as well, in addition 表示比较:just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意:达到8至10项标准为优秀,6至8项为良好;4 至6项为合格;4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense (时态)
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件

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句子1 翻译
句1:学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的: 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题:“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句: 感叹句,倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句,名词性从句,名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时:要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4: 奖项:3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1:学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的: 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题:“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句: 感叹句,倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句,名词性从句,名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时:要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4: 奖项:3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件

What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
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❖ B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.
❖ Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ Eg. 我从来不买日货 ❖ A.I will never buy any products made in
Japan.
❖ B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan.
❖
❖ 天空中繁星点点 . ❖ In the sky hang little stars. ❖ 河岸上有很多花 . ❖ On the bank grow lots of flowers.
❖ Group 3
❖ A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.
Beautify your sentences (闪亮你的句子)
步骤
❖1.好句赏析 ❖2.技巧指导 ❖3.巩固提高
Enjoy a song
❖ When I was young I________ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______ I'd sing along.
❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
lost friend.
❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
Task I Rewrite the sentences
❖ 1. In order to reach this goal, we will put up nosmoking signs in all indoor public places.(用被动 结构)(10广东)
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which is number 1 in the world. (09广东)
❖ Task 2 Translation ❖ 1.他建议学生不要过度用眼(09广东)
❖ He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes
❖ 2. 近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈 近视。(09广东)
❖ So complicated are the causes of shortsightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.
❖ 1. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.
❖ 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.
❖ But they're back again just like a long lost friend.
❖ 思考: ❖ What is a beautiful sentence?
❖ Translation
❖ 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高 的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团(THD Group) 总裁黄药师的女儿。
❖ Group 4
❖ A. If I am given the chance , I will try my best .
❖ B. Given the chance, I will try my best .
❖
❖ Tip 4分词结构不能少 ❖ 口诀:一去,二看,三改。 ❖ 一去:去连词; ❖ 二看:看主语; ❖ 三改:改分词。 ❖ 1.童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回
❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 (08广东)
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响,死亡人数超过 10万/年 。(10广东)
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
❖ 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys choose sports stars. (06广东)
❖ 4.Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.( 用分词结构) (08广东)
❖ Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group . ❖Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.
忆
❖ Back flies the paper-airplane abnrdinitgbirninggs me
the fragrant memory of my childhood.
❖ Tips to beautify your sentence
❖ 1.高分词汇是首要 ❖ 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 ❖ 3. 主动不如被动巧 ❖ 4.分词结构不能少
❖ B. At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。(07广东)
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
❖ 3. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.
❖ 4. Shooting, originated as a means of survival ,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
❖ 3.避免重复
❖ A. I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
❖ B. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
❖ Group 2
❖ A. This village built a school in 2008.
❖ Read the followings and make your wise choice!
❖ Group 1 ❖ A. We have much homework to do . ❖ B. We have endless homework to do . ❖ C We are burdened with endless homework. ❖ Tip 1 高分词汇是首要 ❖ 高分词汇原则 ❖ 1.后、高、长(后学的、较高级、较长词汇) ❖ good ❖ very ❖ 2.词组优先 ❖ try to do