英语二大小作文真题解析

英语二大小作文真题解

析

集团标准化小组：[VVOPPT-JOPP28-JPPTL98-LOPPNN]

2017年英语二大小作文真题+范文+解析

51 Directions:

Suppose you are invited by Professor Williams to give a presentation about Chinese culture to a group of international students. Write a reply to

1）Accept the invitation, and

2）Introduce the key points of your presentation.

You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET.

Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead.

Do not write the address .(10 points)

范文：

Dear Professor Williams,

I feel really delighted and honored to be invited by you to give

a presentation to the foreign students, and I will certainly be careful to prepare for the making of it.

To let the overseas students know much about our Chinese culture, I think that my presentation is supposed to include at least two key points. On the one hand, I will put much stress on the history of China. You must know that our China is an ancient country with a pretty long history. On the other hand, my second strong point should be put on the main diet in China. The reason is that Chinese people in different regions have totally different inclination to choose food and Chinese food everywhere is quite delicious.

Those two points are what I would like to emphasize, and I would like to know of your opinions on this and I wish you could give me some further ideas on it. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

真题解析

今年的小作文可谓既特别又不特别。特别之处在于历史上真题从来没有提及过presentation写法相关的话题被提到且并非直接考察邀请，而是考察对于邀请的回复；而并不特别的地方在于考察形式非常稳定，依然是书信，这个类别是平时考生除了拿出10%的精力在告示类题目上之外依然需要90%的精力去复习的内容。

此书信从内容上看与2012年英语一真题小作文的写法如出一辙，2012年

的真题是要求给留学生提出一些校园生活的建议。而2017年的这一篇非常技巧性地拐了两个小弯，一个是邀请信不直接考而考察回复的句型，另一个是表面上是做presentation的准备而实质上在表达上完全是建议信的套路。

从该书信的称呼来看，属于知道对方姓名且知其职业或身份，那么如果写成Dear Sir or Madam, 或者To Whom It May Concern，是不合理的，而且直呼其名不加头衔也同样不合适，因此要使用Dear Professor Williams. 注意

这几个单词全部都需要大写开头字母。尤其大家直接用笔来写的时候，一定要尽量突出首字母。

该书信首段需要表达对于威廉姆斯教授的邀请的接受，由于考纲明文规定除关键词外任何字词都最好不要照抄，因此如果为了避免照抄accept这个词，可以首先表达高兴和荣幸的心情，然后直接说自己一定会好好准备。

第二自然段实际上就是建议信，一般大家都会写对别人的建议，而这封信相当于给自己写建议，分条列款写出presentation的内容，但是千万不要忘记分别解释原因，因为如果单纯写内容会是什么而不写原因，会让内容显得非常没有逻辑，且更加现实的一个理由是，不解释原因很可能导致文章的字数会不够。而考生在思考具体内容落脚点的时候，应该尽量选取比较简单的词汇和比较好扩展原因的方面，比如中国的历史文化、饮食文化等等，这样一来我们的文章会更加有话可说。

而第三段则可以作一个小总结。最后期待一下对方的建议和回复即可。

落款： Yours sincerely, 特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢；

签名： Li Ming特别注意 Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。落款和前面左、右

对齐都可以。

52. Directions:

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

You should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15points) The chart shows great changes in the number of museums and their vistors during the period from 2013 to 2015. According to the data given, what we can not fail to see is that there is a sharp growth in the amounts of museums from 4165 to 4697 over the period from 2013 to 2015, while it is also pronounced that the number of their vistors increased sharply from 637.8 million to 781.1 million during this period.

At least two fundamental factors could be identified to contribute to this phenomenon. To begin with, it is widely admitted that with the rapid economic development in the whole social climate has been the dramatically upgraded living standard, which results in the common phenomenon that people in growing numbers can afford the once-deemed-expensive experience. In addition, there is no denying that the authorities concerned have issued a series of preferential policies to protect and promote the development of cultural industry, which encourages a widespread extension of visitors.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that this trend will certainly maintain for quite a while

in the near future, which will be of great benefits to our country and individual as well.

解析：

今年的大作文备考方向和我们压的方向完全相同，具体体现在几下几方面。

第一、出题形式。2015年和2016年连续两年考到的是饼状图，所以预测中我们已经讲到今年第一备选题型为柱状图和折线图（这两种图形属于同一种描述方式），而今年考得是折线图，正中押题中心。

第二、考试内容：英语二的考试内容一般为社会正向风气的拓展和人数的增加而今年又正中下怀。此外今年的话题方向其实和真题的出题方向也是一致的，如2010年发展中-发达国家手机订阅量发展、2011年2008,2009年国内轿车市场品牌市场份额以及2015年我国某市居民春节假期花销比例的出题方向完全相同。

第三、下面我们来解析今年的大作文这一部分

首先，拿到图表，我们应该观察其主要特征。在以往课堂中我们讲到柱状图和折线图主要描写事物变化趋势。所以，第一段第一句话总写图表是关于什么的，第二三句分写细节。

其次，第二段我们一般进行分析原因论述，为什么会有上图现象。一般会包含两到三点。

最后一段一般是三种情况，包括总结，解决措施和预测趋势。其中预测趋势最为简单明了。

具体范文如上，大家可以参考。

文章来源：跨考教育

2011年考研英语二真题答案与解析

2011年考研英语二小作文真题： suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to: (1)Congratulate him/her,and (2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life you should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter,Use "zhangwe 2011年考研英语二小作文范文： Dear friend, I am writing to congratulate you on your being successfully admitted to Harvard University, which enjoys an international reputation for its academic excellence and give you some suggestions as to how to make preparation for the coming college life. In order for you to adapt yourself to the university life, you are advised to get prepared physically and intellectually. First and foremost, you need to build a strong body for the future academic pursuit, so you can take some exercises during the breaks. Secondly, since the study in university is more demanding than in your secondary school, you are highly suggested to find some introductory books from the library so as to have a good idea of the specialty you are going to take in your college life. Given your sound ability, you are sure to have a successful college life. Congratulate you again and wish you a fruitful college life. Sincerely yours, Zhang Wei

考研英语(二)大作文真题解析及参考范文

2016考研英语（二）大作文真题解析及参考范文考研英语已经落下帷幕，以下是跨考教育英语教研室刘老师为考生解析英语（二）大作文。（一）大作文真题： Section IV Writing 48.Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. you should 1） interpret the chart and 2） give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points). 某高校学生旅游目的调查（二）作文解析今年英语二作文的题目比较好写，因为标题和图示非常清晰明白。图表显示了某高校学生旅游目的调查, 考生分析原因的话也会很简单。下面分三段简要地说一下这三段应该怎么写。第一段主要是描述图表。图表一目了然，数量词百分比也是大家熟悉的词汇，表述数据时，图中有四五组数据，由于字数的限制以及为了写作的便利可以突出较大比例的“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”，注意引入百分比的表达方式。第二段给出你的评论，主要写这种情况的原因。主要要结合图表描述的内容从两个方面写起。一方面为什么为了欣赏风景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面为什么缓解压力会占到33%比例。最后结尾段落可简要得出结论，这种现象并不奇怪，还将继续下去。（三）参考例文： As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purpose of students

travelling abroad demonstrates obvious differences in one college of China. According to the data given, the purpose of enjoying the beautiful landscape takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 37%, while that of relieving pressure also takes away 20% of the whole proportion. What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this phenomenon. To start with, with the rapid economic development of economy, people, including college students, are becoming increasingly wealthy, which enables them to afford the once-deemed- expensive oversea traveling. In order to enjoy the charming landscape all around the world, a large proportion of students choose to travel abroad. What’s more, along with the ever-accelerating improvement of economy and society is also the ever-increasing work and life pressure. Consequently, the purpose of relieving pressure ranks the second among all the purposes for folks to travel around the world. In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that admiring the scenery and alleviating pressure will still be the main purpose for people to arrange a traveling to other countries. 总有一天你会渐渐明白，对自己笑的人不一定是真爱，对方表面的伪善是为博取信赖，暗里他可能会伺机将你伤害。总有一天你会渐渐明白，不是所有人都对你心门敞开，即使你用善良和真心对待，有的人依然会悄悄将你出卖。总有一天你会渐渐明白，哪怕你拿到了幸福的号码牌，命运之神也不一定对你温柔相待，你的余生仍有可能会被忧伤覆盖。

2015年考研英语二大作文范文word文本

3、写作方法从2010年开始，英语(二)大作文只有两点提纲，但最好写成三段，首段描述图表，首句应写总体描述：主题(春节假期花销比例)+对象(我国某市居民)。次句应写细节描述，分别描述占比最高的新年礼物和其次的交通、聚会吃饭与其他。第二段最好写成原因列举，首句可写主题句，承上启下进行过渡。其次具体说明二至三点原因，可写为何新年礼物花销最大或交通、聚会吃饭也占据一些比例。第三段可预测图表发展趋势、进行归纳结论或提出建议措施。 4、注意事项值得注意的是，2015年考研英语(二)答题卡出现了重大变化，一张A3纸，正面左侧为客观选择题，含完形填空、阅读A节、阅读B节，右侧为翻译。反面左侧为小作文，约20行;右侧为大作文，约20行。大作文写150-230词左右即可，无需太多。参考范文大作文一、不错范文，可供改造 The pie chart above presents the different proportion of residents’ consumption in a Chinese city during Spring Festival. To be specific, the percentage of consumption on New Year’s gifts, party, traffic and others is 40%, 20% , 20% and 20% respectively. Surprisingly, the pertinent number about gifts is 40%. Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely. Undoubt edly, the purpose of the graph is to showcase the diversity of residents ’ consumption during holidays in China, especially over-consumption on gifts as a frequent way of interpersonal communication. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, advertisements of mass media, such as radio, television and Internet, might be misleading. Plus,pertinent action taken by the government to put an end to this trend might be little and limit. Therefore, people, men and women, old and young, in mounting numbers are spending too much on holiday gift which floods everywhere. To sum up, there is an upward tendency for people these days to spend money on festival presents rather than other things, which I believe will not change in a short time. To reverse the trend is not a piece of cake, which requires a good awareness of consumption value and interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have colorful festivals and relaxing times. (223 words)

2012年考研英语二小作文题目和范文

suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to：（1）Congratulate him/her，and（2）give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life you should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use "zhangwe 考研教育网考研英语二小作文范文： Dear friend， I am writing to congratulate you on your being successfully admitted to Harvard University，which enjoys an international reputation for its academic excellence and give you some suggestions as to how to make preparation for the coming college life. In order for you to adapt yourself to the university life，you are advised to get prepared physically and intellectually. First and foremost，you need to build a strong body for the future academic pursuit，so you can take some exercises during the breaks. Secondly，since the study in university is more demanding than in your secondary school，you are highly suggested to find some introductory books from the library so as to have a good idea of the specialty you are going to take in your college life. Given your sound ability，you are sure to have a successful college life. Congratulate you again and wish you a fruitful college life. Sincerely yours， Zhang Wei

英语二考研大作文范文

第一段（一升一降一不变，一缓慢） What a thought-provoking and illuminating chart it is! As is apparently depicted in the chart, it is obvious that（内容）soared from（数据）in（年份） to（数据） in （年份）, While, as a sharp contrast, （内容）decreased from（数据）in （年份） to（数据） in（年份）.In addition ,（内容）was almost the same in（年份）and（年份）./（there was only a slow increase from（数据）in （年份） to（数据） in（年份））第二段（解释具体原因） Why does this phenomenon revealed in the chart above appear? Several reasons accounting for the situation can be what follows. To begin with ,I am strongly convinced that this is partly duo to the fact that（原因一）, In addition, this is partly because ，（原因二）, Last but not least,this is partly because（原因三）. Maybe there are some other reasons bring about this phenomenon. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable. 第三段（发表个人观点） From the analyses made above , we may come to the conclusion that（结论）. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

考研英语20篇必背范文：

20篇必背范文：小作文4篇书信，3篇告示，3篇摘要。大作文1篇提纲，2篇情景，2篇图表， 5篇图画【1998,2001,2002,2003,2004】小作文（一）2005-2009大纲样题： Dear Sir or Madam, As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (NETEM) , I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2008. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 尊敬的先生或女士：由于我计划参加全国硕士研究生入学考试英语考试，充分考虑到贵书店的良好声誉和书籍的优良品质，我决定订购一些考研英语书籍。首先，请给我关于这些书的书名、作者、出版社、价格的详细信息。其次，我也想知道付款方式和售后服务。第三，我想知道您是否方便把这些书通过特快邮政专递在2008年9月1日前送到北京新东方学校总部。非常感谢您好心考虑我的请求。期待着尽快得到您的答复。您真诚的，李明（二）2005： Dear Mr. Wang, I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as an editor for your magazine Design & Fashions. I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other colleagues. The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life. However, as a young man whose primary interest is in computer science rather than fashion designing, I find my present job doesn't fall in with my previous training and strength. I therefore decide to quit this job for something else that may conform to my former preparation. Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leaving may occur. Yours truly, Li Ming 尊敬的王先生：十分感激您两个月之前聘用我为杂志《设计与时尚》的编辑。我非常珍惜这个和您以及其他同事共事的机会。这将是我一生中的难忘经历。但是，对于一个喜欢计算机科学远多于时尚设计的年轻人来说，我认识到目前的工作并不符合我的教育背景与个人能力。因此，我决定辞职，找一份与我从前教育背景相关的工作。我为离开可能造成的不便深表歉意。您真诚的，李明（三）2006：

考研英语二小作文真题

考研英语二小作文真题英语二小作文：教授邀请你做presentation，给留学生将中国文化，接受邀请并回复他，需要列出presentation的要点。 2017考研英语写作出题思路分析 2017年考研英语的两篇小作文，都和“文化”有着密切的关系。新东方在线全国研究生入学考试研究中心几位政治老师看到这个话题，异口同声地说：政治没有考的，全考到英语里面去了。英语一的小作文，是对于旅游景点的推荐。从信函体裁角度来说，这是一篇推荐信，但是和通常的推荐信又有所差异。但是分析历年英语一的真题，在11年考过对于一部电影的推荐，在15年考过对于一个活动的推荐，所以这个考法也算是在套路当中。而推荐旅游景点，这个曾经在2014年6月四级考试中考过类似的内容：请给你的外国朋友写一封信，介绍一下你的家乡的一个景点(英语二的小作文，同样和文化有关：写一封接受中国文化讲座邀请的回复信。这个考查从形式上算是英语二的第一次了。可以看作回复信+建议信的写作模式。第一段是对于原信函的回复，采取回复信的写作模式;第二段是列举Presentation的要点，可以归为建议信的写作模式。而关于中国文化的内容，只要你认真背了政治的，应该都不会没有话写。 2017年考研英语的大作文，英语一考查的是关于读书的话题;英语二考查的是关于博物馆数量和参观博物馆人数的线状图。英语一的作文话题，可以从文化的角度进行阐述，也可以从个人成长的角度进行阐述，甚至可以从图书市场发展的角度进行阐述。这也体现了考研作文慢慢透露出来的一个趋势是：主题多样化——也就是说，一张图片/图表，可以从多个角度进行解析。只要能够自圆其说，就不存在任何偏题的情况。并且，在作文的评分标准里面只有“内容信息是否完整”，而并没有提及主题是否准确这一话题。再考虑到阅卷时候的状态，所以，只要你能够将你自己准备的内容和这个话题套上去，就肯定没有问题了。英语二的大作文第一次考查了线状图。线状图也是可以转化为柱状图的，只要把线的每个节点当作一根柱子即可，从这一角度看来，线状图和

2016考研英语二大作文例文

2016考研英语二大作文例文 The pie chart above clearly shows the proportion of the consumption of urban citizens during Spring Festival. The total expenditure on the holiday is classified into four types as follows: New Year gift, get-together, transportation, and others. New Year gift has the largest proportion, which accounts for 40%; then next is get-together and transportation both with 20%, followed by other expense, constituting 20%. It can be concluded from the pie chart that New Year gift is most popular factor that people tend to spend on while people also pay equal attention to gathering and transportation. Why does this phenomenon revealed in the pie chart above appear? Several reasons account for this situation. To begin with, I am strongly convinced that this is partly duo to the fact that the lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people, and giving each other presents at Spring Festival is an old traditional convention. In addition, this is partly because nowadays, people attach more attention to interpersonal relationship and social connection. Therefore, people choose to join a party and enjoy reunion dinner with their friends or family members. From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people would like to spend much money on New Year gift whereas they also pay equal attention to transportation and get-together. For centuries, Chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year, and their consumption model reflects not only their personal life style but also our traditional custom. 一、考研英语考什么在备考之前，先要了解一下考研英语都考哪些题型，因为有同学之前问听力怎么复习、口语如何提高之类，了解只清楚之后才不至于南辕北辙走冤枉路。考研英语考五大题型：阅读、写作、翻译、新题型、完形填空。阅读是占的分值比例最大的模块，2/5的比例，每个小题2分，每篇文章设有5个题目，共有4篇文章；写作中大作文英语一是图画作文，一般围绕社会现象，20分，英语二是图表作文，15分，小作文均为10分；翻译英语一是从一篇文章里划出5句话让翻译，10分，英语二是段落翻译，15分；新题型英语一为七选五、小标题、排序题，英语二为多项对应（连线题）、小标题、正误判断，都为10分；完形填空每个0.5分，20个小题。二、阶段备考安排考研过程一般分为基础、强化、冲刺。在寒假阶段，建议大家着手准备单词，基础不错的可以自己准备，基础不好的，可以报个词汇班，比如刘一男的课程，比较生动有趣，结合词根词缀方便大家记忆，书的话推荐大家刘一男的《考研词汇速记指南》和何凯文的《1575必考词汇突破全书》。

考研英语二小作文必背十篇

小作文冲刺必背十篇 1. direction：you want to invite your friends to participate your solo concert, write an invitation letter to them individually; 1)invite them to the concert 2)what activities will be arranged after the concert 说明：你想邀请你的朋友参加你的个人演唱会,单独写一个邀请函给他们; 1)邀请他们去听音乐会 2)什么活动将安排在演唱会之后 Dear Xiao Li, I will be holding a solo concert in the largest concert hall in our university at 16:30 next Sunday to celebrate my graduation. With you being my intimate friend, I would very much like you to participate in the concert, which, I assure you, will be wonderful and will definitely become one of the most unforgettable and precious memories in our heart. I will play some music you love most. After the concert, I have also arranged a dinner party and I have invited the distinguished experts, our teachers and our best friends. At the dinner party, we can share each other’s life. I am looking forward to your coming urgently. Your sincerely, Liming 亲爱的小李, 我将举行个人演唱会在我们大学最大的音乐厅下周日下午来庆祝我的毕业。你是我的亲密朋友,我非常喜欢你参加音乐会,,我向你保证,将是美好的,一定会成为最难忘和珍贵的回忆在我们的心。我将玩一些你最喜欢的音乐。音乐会结束后,我也安排了一个晚宴,邀请了著名的专家,我们的老师和我们最好的朋友。在宴会上,我们可以分享彼此的生活。我迫切期待着你的到来。 2. Directions: You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for: 1）detailed information about the books you want, 2）methods of payment, 3）time and way of delivery 你正在准备一个英语考试,需要一些参考书。写一封信给书店的销售部门要求: 1)详细的信息关于你想要的书, 2)付款方法, 3)交货的时间和方式 Dear Sir or Madam, As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (NETEM) , I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.

考研英语二写作历年真题及解析2016-2010

Mba英语二写作历年真题及解析 2016年 Section IV Writing Part A 47。Directions： Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend，Jack，wrote an email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation。Write him a reply to 1）thank him，and 2）give you advice You should write about 100 on the ANSWER SHEET。 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter。Use Li Ming instead。 Do not write the address。（10 points） Part B 48。Directions： Write an essay based on the chart below。In your writing，you should 1）interpret the chart，and 2）give your comments。 You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET。（15 points）

Section IV Writing 47、 [参考范文] Dear Jack， Your letter of congratulations was received。Thank you for your nice words on my winning the c ontest。In the letter， you asked me about the skills to do translation，so the following are my a dvice for you。 Firstly， you should analyze the sentence structure， thus catching the meaning of the sentence。 Secondly， find the proper words to translate the meaning of the source language into the target l anguage。 Thirdly，revise your translation at least three times to check if there are any mistransl ations or missed meanings。 I hope my advice helpful。 Wish to see you soon。 Yours sincerely， Li Ming 第一段：写作内容需涵盖两点：写信目的，表明感谢来自朋友的祝贺;可以采用这样的表达方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest. 第二段：写作内容应以建议为主体。在这个过程中可以把日常我们如何提高的方式写进正文，比如多加练习、多与外国人交流，多多接触国际事务等。本篇老师主要从这些方面进行论述，表达如下As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals i n this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience. 第三段：再次强调重申写信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study. 落款：Yours sincerely,特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;签名：Li Ming特别注意Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。 48、 [参考范文] Portrayed in the above pie chart is a survey of college students’ purposes of traveling。 The numb er of students who take traveling as a chance to see beautiful scenes accounts for 37%，while stu dents who would like to travel to relieve pressure from study take up 35 %。 There are several reasons behind the trend revealed in the above chart。To begin with， as the pr esent society is filled with fierce competition， most college students nowadays are under great pr essure to stand out among others or to lunch a decent job after graduation。Therefore， they tend to choose traveling as an outlet to relieve their stress。 Secondly，with the fast advancement of t he living standards of Chinese families， traveling is increasingly affordable to most college stude nts。 For this reason， students prefer to travel to see different views to enjoy themselves or to m ake some friends。 From my perspective， no matter what reason it is for， traveling is of great benefit for students 今年英语二作文的题目比较好写，因为标题和图示非常清晰明白。图表显示了某高校学生旅游目的调查, 考生分析原因的话也会很简单。下面分三段简要地说一下这三段应该怎么写。第一段主要是描述图表。图表一目了然，数量词百分比也是大家熟悉的词汇，表述数据时，图中有四五组数据，由于字数的限制以及为了写作的便利可以突出较大比例的“欣赏风景”和“缓解压力”，注意引入百分比的表达方式。第二段给出你的评论，主要写这种情况的原因。主要要结合图表描述的内容从两个方面写起。一方面为什么为了欣赏风景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面为什么缓解压力会占到33%比例。最后结尾段落可简要得出结论，这种现象并不奇怪，还将继续下去。