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5段式1.名人名言,不记得就编,编辑数据. 然后简单解释,再编个故事作为背景.最后提出论点.A proverb says,It goes without saying that,As everyone knows, no one can deny that,Accounting to a recent survey, about 78.9% peoples thought that,如果真的想不出编什么,就用一些论证直接引出观点或者引出提问, 提问自己, 编故事说明. 最后重复主要观点. It is often said that…without doubt, then:Primarily, 反驳的观点有的好处,说完好处之后In spite of the commonly-accept belief is that, a recent investigation indicates whether the argument could bear much analyze. Accounting to a recent survey, about 78.9% peoples thought that.2.In addition, 第二个观点, what’s more, 第二个子观点,3.Finally, 第三个观点,4.有几种架构,1)解决问题类型: Consequently, to solve the problem, somemethods should be taken, I recommend that/ just like/ such as/ for example.1.升华类型: Obviously, we can draw out the conclusion that, then.Amultitude of examples could contribute to facts that 重复观点的主要可以升华部分, then, we can do our best for our country to make it better, stronger, and more beautiful/ 可以让孩子健康成长,或者家庭幸福美满. Enlighten my future career path. So from the global perspective, it is very crucial.5.中间3段架构, 选择自己熟悉的,感兴趣的,好写的.不一定自己赞成的. 写作方法为:1)举例,举例,还是举例: Raise my opinion, than provide at least oneexample, than explain the example, conclusion, raise my opinion again.2)对比分析法: Raise my opinion, and illustrate the advantage for Ais that, on the other hand, and so on.3)结果分析法: Raise my opinion, then demonstrate the effect, thenanalyze its cause, then the reasons for this fact, then draw my conclusion, then again the opinion.重点连词: Thus/ therefore/ due to/ hence, in contrast/ nevertheless/ on the contrary, likewise/ in comparison, furthermore/ moreover, absolutely/ undoubtedly/ in particular, in spite of, for instance/ by way ofillustration, in brief/ to sum up/ on account of this, opposite/ afterward. 万能理由: Efficiently, effectively, convenient/convenience, time-saving, economical, traditional, 可用上pleasure/ environmentally friendly/ helpful and useful/ achievement and accomplishment/ character training/ better communication/ healthy.美丽词句:Great = magnificent, brilliant, remarkable, desirable.Important = significant, essential, vital, crucial.Better = admirable, commendable, superior, eminent, optimal.Good = unexceptionable, consummate, faultless.Many = abundant, plentiful, a large amount of.万能例子:1.History/ our society abound with the examples of…2.This proves a typical/ notable/ concrete instance of…3.To the already familiar evidence, numerous further facts may beadded. Let me cite another common example.4.A general investigation conducted at a factory/ university by officials/scientists experts reveals that 78.9% people…5.According to the recent survey, it can be predicted that…6.There is sufficient proof in favor of something/ to show that…Allavailable evidence points to the fact that…7.Personal experience leads me to conclude that…8.We must admit the profound fact that…9.The advantage of B outweigh any benefit we gain from A. Good as Ais, it brings its own problem, too. For one thing, another…10.T here are no reasons for us to accept/ reject that.11.T hey may be right for about… but they seem to neglect to take intoaccount the fact that…12.W hen the advantage and disadvantage of B are compared, the moststriking conclusion is self-evident.13.I t would be reasonable to take a view that…, but it would be foolish toclaim that…, and it would be much absurd to believe that…14.Why …? A multitude of factors could account for the change/development/ increase/ decrease/ success/ failure in…/ that…One factor of… is…, another contributing cause of… is…, also playing a part is…15.A mong the most convincing reasons (given by people) for using acomputer, one should be emphasized that it is so convenient.16.T he increase/… in… mainly result from/ arises from/ is due to/ owingto…17.O ne may regard this phenomenon as a response to the fact that.18.例子:1). Character training: Faster a good habit of living (父母对子女)/studying/ working establish correct value of world. Pave way to future success/ lay solid foundation to future career/ preparing for better job… Inspiring/ open one’s vista/ broaden one’s horizon/ enrich one’s knowledge.2). Better communication: Making the world smaller/ enhancecommunication between people/ bridge the gap between different culture. Retrieve up-to-the-minute information/ keep up will the latest news/ keep abreast with cutting edge technology.3). Environmentally Friendly: Pollution free/ clean air/ get close tonature and release yourself from daily stress.4). Pleasure: Fun/ entertaining/ amusing/ add pleasure to life/provide people will new means of entertainment/ fill up vacant hour with excitement/ melody/ laughter/ joy.5). Efficient and effective: Time saving/ raise the efficiency/ cut downcost…6). Convenience: Provide more options/ choice/ good/ diverseshopping/ entertainment offer better education and public facilities/ increase new jobs and employment opportunities.故事.自己总结2.For example, Richard Rodriguez was a disabled student whoachieved great success through his higher education experience. If he were denied access to the university at the very beginning, there would be no benefits he had made for the society.3.Emil Durkheim, through his studies of groups and communities, isone of the founders of this functionalist theory.4.For example, when we look at the paintings from St Peter's Basilica,we find that they reflect the strong religious values and beliefs of that particular era. 文化的重要This influence is much significant. 5.Ford motor company, one of the biggest leading global automakers, by carrying out the flow production line, saved time in producing and transmission, moreover became very vital for the development of transportation facility in the world.6.The debate of this question (whether or not) in this field is heated.7.Base on the criteria of the functionalist theory, I argue that:8.The criteria for “” or “” shouldn’t be simply identified as “good” or“better”. The only principle should be what:9.The homeless rummage through trash cans for food. Numerous offamilies are crowd in a minuscule house for living. A large amount of undergraduate and laid-off workers can’t seek a job. Our country is in desperate need of economic stimulation to some degree. Economic stimulation is vital for our countryside.10.The transportation in my countryside is in extremely bad shape.11.Therefore, compared with the past, the knowledge of the worldand human beings we have now has increased in a tremendous speed. With the quality of life improved in such a tremendous speed, I argue that.12.Firstly, following the traditional moral merit in world, especially inchina, it goes without saying that thrift is gain. English proverb says: a penny saved is a penny earned. The essential thing we should do as living in china is that we must learn how to practice thrift. In other words,13.Firstly, this choice is owing to my personally preference, becauseI like to do. As we all know, appetency is a design from god. Everynation has its own peculiar character, moreover, habit from character, and character decide fortune. Thank to my childhood, I foster this character.14.Human invariably pursuit for fame and luxurious lifestyleincluding me. Furthermore, with all of this stimulation, I encourage myself to struggle for the factors that impede me, such as poverty living, poor learning condition.15.First of all, communication is much significant. Currently, abilityand knowledge in a person is limited, hence how to communicate and cooperate with others is essential to be successful. We can exchange opinions each other. When we are face to face, we may be an eyes or gestures contact, moreover, this visually stimulation should be helpful to erase gap, as learning how to be a good temper too. What’s more, how to keep a consummate character in communicating with others is vital for our success.16.With just becoming freshman of the university, I felt strange foreverything was alien, and everyone seemed to dislike me.However, I used to bare my heart with my classmates, keeping contact with them. There would be a hospitable society atmosphere and the distance among us would be shortened. We all form an emotional attachment. Furthermore, we avoided embarrassment and be ease with each other while in trouble. After that, I turned back to be confident and pleasure.17.Firstly, we must keep in step with the times. In current,transportation problems would be an essential thing needed to be solved at once because of the increasing of the population, cars, and interests in driving a private car by a driver. Various way oftransportation just like the subway, public bus will be comfortable.Moreover, we could get away frustration and be more effective and efficient to accomplish other urgent business. By the way, the subway was faster than driving a private car at traffic rush hour.18.Health is consisted of physical health and mental health. Aproverb says:” Health is above wealth.” It goes without saying thata good health is the first step on the way of pursuit to fame andluxurious. Meanwhile, we are asked to be concerned with our mental health. We should build plentiful positive hobbies, such as swimming, claiming. Not give up till the peak, focus on the front sight. We also temper our willpower, steel spirit for social competition.19.We could get accumulation of knowledge during that time. Weturn to be more skillful than freshman, and easier not only to be appreciated and admired by colleagues, but also get a promotion.Besides, with large amount of experience, I do be self confident, also can be offered welfare. I will enlighten the career path.20.Firstly, our environment should be protected. It has caused uslots of pollution such as noise pollution, solid pollution. These directly affect our health life. Moreover, it also impairs the appearance of the city. Due to the bad impressions for visitors, it will cause the income of tourism decrease. This discourages the development of the city.21.Firstly, it is called “acknowledgement”- a sense of belonging- thatwe all want to be affirmed. Meanwhile, another feeling called “achievement”– a sense of being recognized- makes us elevate self-esteem. After that, we will do better in our work and study, with creating more and more brilliant achievement, to success finally.。