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如何回复审稿人意见(Response to Reviews)

Dear Editor,We have studied the valuable comments from you, the assistant editor and reviewers carefully, and tried our best to revise the manuscript. The point to point responds to the reviewer’s comments are listed as following:Responds to the rev iewer’s comments:Reviewer 1Comment 1: in page 3, line 40, we fed rats..." changed to rats were fed with... Response: According to the reviewer’s comment, we have corrected the sentence. Furthermore, we have had the manuscript polished with a professional assistance in writing.Comment 2:page 25. The style of reference 40 is not right (using initials for the first names). Since this paper has been published, the volume and page Nos should be provided.Response: Thank you for your careful work. We have added the volume and page numbers for reference 40.Reviewer 2Comment: I would like to thank the authors for their efforts in addressing the criticisms with additional experiments. The one criticism that they did not address was relating to energy expenditure as the reason that the animals on the low calcium diet gained more weight. While I understand that performing this experiment will not affect the conclusion of this manuscript, I do believe that this point could be discussed in the Discussion section.Response: Thank you for your valuable advice. Based on the previous revision, we further address the relationship between low calcium diet and energy expenditure in the section of discussion according to your thoughtful comments.Reviewer 3Comment 1: In the text you often write: “As previously described”. Unless that paper is from your lab or one of the method paper co-authors is on the present MS this is not quite proper since the statement infers method development from your lab. There are numerous instances like that in the methods section; these should all be changed “according to those described by…..”Response: We are sorry for this language mistake. We have carefully corrected this phrase throughout the manuscript according to your comment.Comment 2: There are still some wording, sentence structure and grammatical issues even in this basically well put together MS. For example, while authors may have been excited about the data you cannot start a sentence with “Excitedly” in line 418 or “Whatever” in line 395.Response: Thank you very much to point out the sentence structure and grammatical issues in our manuscript. According to the comments from you and the editors, we polished the manuscript with a professional assistance in writing, conscientiously.Comment 3:In my view a big omission in this work is ignoring the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues. For example all animals consumed the same amount of feed but we had extra fat storage in the low Ca diet groups. So where did the extra energy go? Zemel et al (citation 34) in similar work indicate that increased thermogenesis on the high Ca diet explains the dissipation of dietary energy. Further even though Zemel et al (#34) indicated lipogenesis was enhanced in the low Ca diets that was in 2000 and you should have monitored expression of FAS and UCP either as mRNA abundance or actual FAS/UCP changes via proteomics or blotting techniques. In any case these controls are missing here and not emphasized in the MS. Casual reading of this paper would lead to the conclusion that the dietary Ca effect on fat deposition is strictly a function of increased or decreased lipolysis. While lipolysis appears to be a major player, lipogenesis and thermogenesis cannot be ignored for completeness. In Fig 8 you also show a decline in cAMP for the low Ca diet. Well beta agonists or cAMP enhancers regulate transcription of adipose and liver FAS (in rats (J Biol Chem 271:2307, 1996) and recently with large animal models (Hausman et al J Animal Science 87:1218, 2009 and Halsey et al J Animal Science 89: 1011, 2011). In additioncAMP levels could have been monitored. I really do not like the last sentence in the Abstract line 47-50 where you state that “low calcium diet-induced increase in fat mass was due to enhanced lipogenesis mediated by an upregulated CaSR signaling pathway” Your results here show no such thing, this is a completely false statement based on data herein. Correct. You show that high Ca diets enhance lipolysis and low Ca diets are antilipolytic. You did not monitor lipid anabolism here at all. See also line 255-257 and lines 333-335 of your MS. Response: Thank you for your valuable and thoughtful comments. As you suggested that the anabolic side of lipid metabolism as well as thermogenesis issues should be monitored. We really agree with your viewpoints. In the present study, we did find that low calcium diet increased the mRNA level of fatty acid synthase (FAS) in white adipose tissue. Furthermore, the FAS mRNA level were also increased in adipocytes after treatment with 1,25-(OH)2D3in in-vitro experiments. However, the increased FAS mRNA levels were not affected by preventing either the nuclear vitamin D receptor (nVDR) or calcium-sensing receptor (CaSR), suggesting that FAS might not be involved in the CaSR pathway. In addition, we thought that FAS played its role in fatty acid synthesis mainly in liver previously. Besides, the manuscript was required to restrict number of total words and our previous focus was on the antilolytic role of CaSR in the process of fat accumulation. So we ignored to provide the data of FAS mRNA levels in the submitted manuscript. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the mRNA levels according to your helpful suggestion.We have reported the effects of dietary calcium on UCP2 mRNA levels in adipose tissue and UCP3 in skeletal muscle in our previous studies (1, 2). Thus, we believed that low calcium diet led to decreased thermogenesis in the present study. It was a pity that we did not measure the rat core temperature in those studies. The UCP2 mRNA levels in adipocytes were observed to be decreased after treatment of 1,25-(OH)2D3. This effect was prevented by using nVDR CaSR gene silencing but not by CaSR gene knockdown, suggesting that UCP2 was not involved in CaSR pathways. In the newly submitted manuscript, we have provided the UCP2 results.Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. We are very sorry for our fault statement in the abstract. We have corrected it in the new manuscript.Comment 4: A point that does not emerge well from the discussion is how low Ca intakes result in higher intracellular [Ca] concentrations and really the effects on fatdeposition in the cells in many ways are due to an increased intracellular Ca level mediated via CaSR expression increases and the effect of VitD3 on nVDR show in Fig 8. The authors must remind readers that Ca levels in the blood are under hormonal regulation (Calcitonin, PTH and VitD3). Thus when diets low in Ca are consumed and blood Ca decline, PTH and VitD3 are called upon to mobilize bone Ca to replenish the blood Ca. Then coupled with an increase in CaSR more Ca actually is found in AT despite the fact that many would think the AT Ca level should decline. The reason is that tissue/circulating Ca levels are not diet depended but regulated. The vast bone stores of Ca will provide ample Ca here especially during a study of this length. While authors address these issues maybe could be presented in a less complicated discussion.Response:Thank you for your instructive suggestions. We are sorry for not describing the effect of low calcium diet on intracellular calcium concentrations mediated by CaSR, as well as the impact of hormone regulation on serum calcium levels clearly. According to your helpful advice, we have rewritten these two parts in the section of discussion. Thank you again.Comment 5: Not all citations are in JN styleResponse: We have careful recheck and corrected the style of the citations according to the requirement of JN.Comment 6: Abstract conclusion differs from lines 255-257 and 333-335; WHY? Response: Thank you for your careful reading of our manuscript. The conclusion from lines 255-257 is about the effect of low calcium diet on serum levels of free fatty acids (FFAs) and lipids. We considered FFA and glycerol as indicators of TG hydrolysis in adipose tissue. The low calcium diet caused decreased serum FFA and glycerol levels without influencing lipoprotein lipase (LPL) activity, so we thought the lipolytic effect of adipose tissue to be suppressed by low calcium diet. The conclusion from lines 333-335 was about the effect of 1,25-(OH)2D3 whose levels were increased under low calcium conditions on lipolysis. We used the glycerol level as the indicator of TG hydrolysis in adipocytes. Both the in vivo and in vitro experiments showed low calcium status caused an antilipolytic effect.Comment 7: Line 150-153. The qRT-PCR methodology is not at all understandable as you cite a Texas A&M published paper. This is completely insufficient with the newly established standards on gene expression via qRT-PCR. There is no mention of efficiencies of amplifications in these data nor how the use of the reference gene was established etc. I think Pfaffl and Bustin have recently written an article on this; please totally revise 150-153 in line with what you did and applying the new standards.Response: Thank you very much. Because the JN restricts the number of total words of manuscript, we cited the Texas A&M published paper. In the newly submitted manuscript, we describe the detailed protocols in our lab.Comment 8:Line 179 on Not clear as in sentences talk about different AT cell sources etc..revise.Response: We are sorry for not addressing the adipose tissue cell sources clearly. We have rewritten the methods.Comment 9: Any previous documentable work with siRNA?Response: Yes, we have documentable work with siRNA in our research team. The results were published in the journal of Biochem Biophys Res Commun (3).Comment 10: Line 214.. Cultured primary rat adipocytes and SW872 adipocytes ……Response: Thank you very much. According to your comment, we have had the manuscript polished and corrected the mistakes.。
reply的用法有哪些 如何运用

reply的用法有哪些如何运用reply的释义:v.回复;答复;回答;回应;作出反应;n.答复;回答。
例句:He said in reply that the question was unfair.他回答说这个问题不公平。
reply的用法1.reply用作名词的意思是“回答,答复”,引申可指“答案”。
2.reply常与介词to连用。
3.当reply指“回答”时,是及物动词。
4.当reply指“答复”时,是不及物动词,如有宾语应加介词to,宾语应该是答复的具体对象。
5.reply后不可接人和that从句;6.answer与reply有区别:answer是及物动词,可以直接跟宾语,也可以用answer to的结构,前者更常用。
而reply作“答复”解时,是不及物动词,必须用to。
answer有具体回答问题的意思,而reply 仅仅是回复。
7.reply可用作及物动词,也可用作不及物动词。
用作不及物动词时常与介词to或for连用; 用作及物动词时接that引导的宾语从句,有时也可引出直接引语。
reply的例句Please reply as soon as is practicably possible.请尽早回复。
I’m always emailing her, but nine times out of ten she doesn’t reply.我常常给她发电邮,但十之八九她都不回复。
I asked her what her name was but she made no reply.我问她叫什么名字,但她没有回答。
You should receive a reply within seven days.你会在七天之内收到答复。
Morocco scored four goals without reply to win the game.摩洛哥队在一球未失的情况下连入四球,赢得了这场比赛。
reply和answer的用法与to

Reply和Answer的用法与to在英语中,我们经常使用词汇来表达回应或回复某人的话。
其中,“reply”和”answer”是两个常用的词汇,但它们的用法略有不同。
在本文中,我们将深入探讨这两个词汇的用法及其区别。
首先,让我们来看一下”reply”的用法。
“reply”通常用来指作为回应或答复某人的话。
例如,当别人给你发来一封邮件时,你可以用”reply”来表示你收到了并作出了回应。
这个动词强调的是作为对话或通信的一部分,是一种回应或答复的行为。
比如,你可以说:“I replied to his email promptly.”(我及时回复了他的电子邮件。
)而”answer”则更多地侧重于回答问题或提供信息,通常更具体地指对问题或要求的回答。
当你”answer”一个问题时,你在给出具体信息或解释,而不仅仅是对某人的话作出回应。
举个例子,你可以说:“I answered all the questions on the test.”(我回答了测试中的所有问题。
)在一些情况下,“reply”和”answer”可以互相替换使用,但细微区别仍然存在。
“reply”更加抽象和广泛,可以包括任何形式的回应,而”answer”则偏重于解决问题或提供信息。
另外,值得注意的是,当我们使用这两个词汇时,有时需要加上适当的介词”to”。
“reply to”和”answer to”表达了回应或回答某人或某事的行为。
比如,“She replied to my question with a s mile.”(她微笑着回答了我的问题。
)或者,“He answered to the accusations calmly.”(他冷静地对指控作出回应。
)这里的”to”起到连接作用,使得回应或回答与特定对象联系起来。
总的来说,虽然”reply”和”answer”都可以表示回应别人的话,但在细微之处仍有不同。
“reply”更加通用和抽象,着重于作为对话或通信的一部分的回应;而”answer”则更具体,强调解决问题或提供信息。
论文根据审稿意见修改后如何给编辑回信

论⽂根据审稿意见修改后如何给编辑回信论⽂根据审稿意见修改后如何给编辑回信回信⽰例Dear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: ⽂章编号). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper.The main corrections in the paper and the resp onds to the reviewer’s comments are as following:Responds to the reviewer’s comments:Reviewer #1:1. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)Response: xxxxxx2. Response to comment: (…...简要列出意见……)Response: xxxxxx……逐条意见回答,切忌⼀定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列⼏个礼貌术语可适当⽤⽤:We are very sorry for our negligence of ……We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……It is really true as Reviewer suggested that ……We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion.As Reviewer suggested that ……Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……最后特意感谢⼀下这个审稿⼈的意见:Special thanks to you for your good comments.Reviewer #2:同上述Reviewer #3:同上述Other changes:1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “……”2. Line 107, “……” was added3. Line 129, “……” was deletedWe tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestion.Best regards,xx, xx and xx给编辑回信常⽤语1. In reply to the referee’s main criticism of paper, it is possible to say that – One minor point raised by the referee concerns of the extra composition of the reaction mixture in Figure 1. This has now been corrected. Further minor changes had been made on page 3, paragraph 1 (line 3-8) and 2 (line 6-11). These do not affect our interpretation of the result.2. I have read the referee’s comments very carefully and conclude that the paper has been rejected on the sole grounds that it lake toxicity data. I admit that I did not include a toxicity table in my article although perhaps I should have done. This was for the sake of brevity rather than an error or omission.3. Thank you for your letter of –and for the referee’s comments concerning ourm anuscript entitled “”. We have studied their comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with their approval.4. I enclosed a revised manuscript which includes a report of additional experiments done at the referee’s suggestion. You wil l see that our original findings are confirmed.5. We are sending the revised manuscript according to the comments of the reviewers. Revised portion are underlined in red.6. We found the referee’s comments most helpful and have revised the manuscript.7. We are pleased to note the favorable comments of reviewers in their opening sentence.8. Thank you for your letter. I am very pleased to learn that our manuscript is acceptable for publication in Cancer Research with minor revision.9. We have therefore completed a further series of experiments, the result of which are summarized in Table 5. From this we conclude that intrinsic factor is not account.10. We deleted the relevant passage since they are not essential to the contents of the paper.11. I f eel that the reviewer’s comments concerning Figures 1 and 2 result from a misinterpretation of the data.12. We would have include a non-protein inhibitor in our system, as a control, if one had been available.13. We prefer to retain the use of Table 4 for reasons that it should be clear from the new paragraph inserted at the end of the Results section.14. Although reviewer does not consider it is important to measure the temperature of the cells, we consider it essential.15. The running title has been changed to “”.16. The Materials and Methods section now includes details for measuring uptake of isotope and assaying hexokinase.17. The concentration of HAT media (page12 paragraph 2) was incorrectly stated in the original manuscript. This has been rectified. The authors are grateful to the referees for pointing out their error.18. As suggested by both referees, a discussion of the possibility of laser action on chromosome has been included (page16, paragraph 2).19. We included a new set of photographs with better definition than those originally submitted and to which a scale has been added.20. Following the suggestion of the referees, we have redrawn Figure 3 and 4.21. Two further papers, published since our original submission, have been added to the text and Reference section. Theseare:22. We should like to thank the referees for their helpful comments and hope that we have now produced a more balance and better account of our work. We trust that the revised manuscript is acceptable for publication.23. I greatly appreciate both your help and that of the referees concerning improvement to this paper. I hope that the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication.24. I should like to express my appreciation to you and the referees for suggesting how to improve our paper.25. I apologize for the delay in revising the manuscript. This was due to our doing an additional experiment, as suggested by referees。
SCI回复审稿人的回信技巧

SCI答复审稿人的回信技巧一篇稿子从酝酿到成型历经艰辛,投出去之后又是漫长的等待,好容易收到编辑的回信,得到的往往又是审稿人不留情面的一顿狂批。
这时候,如何有策略有技巧的回复审稿人就显得尤为重要。
好的回复是文章被接收的重要砝码,而不恰当的回复轻则导致再次修改从而拖延发稿时间,重则导致文章被拒,前功尽弃。
下面把我平时总结的一些答复审稿人的策略和写回复信的格式和技巧跟大家交流一下。
首先,绝对服从编辑的意见。
在审稿人给出各自的意见之后,编辑一般不会再提出自己的意见。
但是,编辑一旦提出某些意见,就意味着他认为这是文章里的重大缺陷,至少是不合他的口味。
这时,我们唯一能够做的只能是服从。
因为毕竟是人家掌握着生杀予夺的大权。
第二,永远不要跟审稿人争执。
跟审稿人起争执是非常不明智的一件事情。
审稿人意见如果正确那就不用说了,直接照办就是。
如果不正确的话,也大可不必在回复中冷嘲热讽,心平气和的说明白就是了。
大家都是青年人,血气方刚,被人拍了当然不爽,被人错拍了就更不爽了。
尤其是一些名门正派里的弟子,看到一审结果是major而不是minor本来就已经很不爽了,难得抓住审稿人的尾巴,恨不得拖出来打死。
有次审稿,一个审稿人给的意见是增加两篇参考文献(估计也就是审稿人自己的文章啦),结果作者在回复中写到,making a reference is not charity!看到之后我当时就笑喷了,可以想象审稿人得被噎成什么样。
正如大家所想的那样,这篇稿子理所当然的被拒了,虽然后来经编辑调解改成了major revision,但毕竟耽误的是作者自己的时间不是?第三,合理掌握修改和argue的分寸。
所谓修改就是对文章内容进行的修改和补充,所谓argue就是在回复信中对审稿人的答复。
这其中大有文章可做,中心思想就是容易改的照改,不容易改的或者不想改的跟审稿人argue。
对于语法、拼写错误、某些词汇的更换、对某些公式和图表做进一步解释等相对容易做到的修改,一定要一毫不差的根据审稿意见照做。
「回复、回应」英文怎么说?秒懂reply、response中文意思跟用法差异!

「回复、回应」英文怎么说?秒懂reply、response中文意思跟用法差异!回复、回应英文应该怎么说呢?常见的「回复」相关英文说法有reply、response…等等。
虽然上面这两个英文字汇都有「回复、回应」的意思,不过意思上还是有些差异的!下面整理了「回复」的相关英文说法与英文例句,赶快学起来吧!1.reply 回复、答复「回复」最常见的英文说法是reply,reply的中文意思就是指「回复、答复」。
reply可以当动词或名词用,中文意思都是回复的意思。
reply相关英文例句:例: I have just received her reply. 我刚刚收到她的回复。
例:Please give her an immediate reply. 请给她立即回复。
2.response 回应、反应「回复」的另一个英文说法是response,response的中文意思更像是「回应、反应」的意思。
response可能会跟reply搞混,当你想说的是某人回复你的时候,你应该用reply,而response偏向是反应、回应的意思。
response相关英文例句:例: You must make an immediate response. 你必须立即作出反应。
例: Jenny has received a response from that college. 珍妮已经从那所大学收到了回应。
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replytosb还是replysb
reply to sb还是reply sb
1、回答某人一般要用reply to sb。
2、使用场合不同:reply to sb是以别人为第一人称;reply sb是以自己为第一人称。
3.含义不同:reply to sb,释义:明确的答复某人;reply sb,直接回答某人。
用法不同
1.reply to sb
用法:reply to sb是被动的,表示做某事给某人,或者是某人是动作的承受者,reply与介词to连用时接that引导的宾语从句,有时也可引出直接引语。
2.reply sb
用法:基本意思是“回答”“答复”“作答”,主要指用语言文字对问题、指控、辩论、质问、起诉或致意等给予回答,也可指用行动回答,是较为正式的书面用语。
(完整版)一些英文审稿意见及回复的模板
一些英文审稿意见的模板最近在审一篇英文稿,第一次做这个工作,还有点不知如何表达。
幸亏遇上我的处女审稿,我想不会枪毙它的,给他一个major revision后接收吧。
呵呵网上找来一些零碎的资料参考参考。
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++1、目标和结果不清晰。
It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical methods used in the study.Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments should be provided.3、对于研究设计的rationale:Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not showif the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:A hypothesis needs to be presented。
reply和answer的用法和例句
Reply 和 Answer 的用法和例句在日常生活中,我们经常会用到“reply”和“answer”这两个词来表达回复或者回答的意思,但有时候我们可能会混淆它们的用法。
本文将详细介绍这两个词的用法和区别,并提供一些例句帮助大家更好地理解和运用。
Reply 的用法和例句“Reply”通常用来表示对某人的言论或行为作出回应,可以是口头或书面的回复。
它更侧重于对对方所说或所做的内容作出回应,可以包括回答问题、提供信息或表达观点等。
以下是一些使用“reply”的例句:•She replied to my email promptly.•He replied with a simple “Thank you.”•Please reply to this message by tomorrow.在这些例句中,我们可以看到“reply”被用来表示针对某个特定信息或行为做出的回复,强调了对方的回应。
Answer 的用法和例句与“reply”相比,“answer”更常用来指对问题或询问进行回答,强调提供一个明确的解决方案或回答。
它通常用于回应直接的问题或提出的要求。
以下是一些使用“answer”的例句:•Can you answer this question for me?•She couldn’t answer the phone at that moment.•What is the answer to this riddle?这些例句中,“answer”用于直接回答问题或者询问,强调了提供一个准确的答案或解决方案。
区别与总结总的来说,虽然“reply”和“answer”都可以表示回复或回答的意思,但它们在用法上有些许区别。
简单概括来说,使用“reply”时更着重于对方的言论或行为作出回应,强调回应的传达;而使用“answer”则更侧重于对问题或要求进行明确、准确的回答。
在实际运用时,可以根据具体语境和需要选择使用合适的词语。
如何回复SCI投稿审稿人意见
如何回复SCI投稿审稿人意见(精典语句整理)如何回复SCI投稿审稿人意见1.所有问题必须逐条回答。
2.尽量满足意见中需要补充的实验。
3.满足不了的也不要回避,说明不能做的合理理由。
4.审稿人推荐的文献一定要引用,并讨论透彻。
以下是本人对审稿人意见的回复一例,仅供参考。
续两点经验:1. 最重要的是逐条回答,即使你答不了,也要老实交代;不要太狡猾,以至于耽误事;2. 绝大部分实验是不要真追加的,除非你受到启发,而想改投另外高档杂志----因为你既然已经写成文章,从逻辑上肯定是一个完整的“story” 了。
以上指国际杂志修稿。
国内杂志太多,以至于稿源吃紧,基本没有退稿,所以你怎么修都是接受。
我的文章水平都不高,主要是没有明显的创新性,也很苦恼。
但是除了开始几篇投在国内杂志外,其他都在国际杂志(也都是SCI)发表。
以我了解的情况,我单位其他同志给国内杂志投稿,退稿的极少,只有一次被《某某科学进展》拒绝。
究其原因,除了我上面说的,另外可能是我单位写稿子还是比较严肃,导师把关也比较严的缘故。
自我感觉总结(不一定对):1)国内杂志审稿极慢(少数除外),但现在也有加快趋势;2)国内杂志编辑人员认真负责的人不多,稿子寄去后,少则几个月,多则一年多没有任何消息;3)国内杂志要求修改的稿子,如果你自己不修,他最后也给你发;4)国外杂志要求补充实验的,我均以解释而过关,原因见少帖)。
还因为:很少杂志编辑把你的修改稿再寄给当初审稿人的,除非审稿人特别请求。
编辑不一定懂你的东西,他只是看到你认真修改,回答疑问了,也就接受了(当然高档杂志可能不是这样,我的经验只限定一般杂志(影响因子1-5)。
欢迎大家批评指正。
我常用的回复格式:Dear reviewer:I am very grateful to your comments for the manuscript. According with your adv ice, we amended the relevant part in manuscript. Some of your questions were an swered below.1)2)....引用审稿人推荐的文献的确是很重要的,要想办法和自己的文章有机地结合起来。
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a rXiv:as tr o-ph/96851v11Aug1996Reply to Comment on ”Dispersion Velocity of Galactic DarkMatter Particles”by Gates et al.R.Cowsik ∗,Charu Ratnam and P.BhattacharjeeIndian Institute of Astrophysics,Bangalore 560034,INDIA.(Received:)Typeset using REVT E XAmongst the various issues raised by Gates et al(GKT)[1]the most crucial one is their claim that our result disagrees with the observations;this is not true.Their claim stems from(i)confusion of model-dependent results(obtained on the basis of certain mass models) with actual observational constraints,(ii)confusing the classical mass models of the halo with models that probe its phase space structure,and(iii)using the notion of superposition not allowed by the self-consistent Boltzmann-Poisson equations which involve a non-linear coupling among the various components.Indeed,the very purpose of our Letter[2]was to present a method which would sensitively probe the density and dispersion velocity of dark-matter particles in the solar neighborhood,circumventing some of the problems encountered in previous analyses.Let usfirst address the claim that the velocity dispersion of the dark matter particlesin the solar neighborhood, v2 1/2DM,⊙=270km s−1,based on the formula v2 1/2DM= 2V c,∞.For this claim to be valid,two conditions need to be satisfied:(1)The dynamics has to be that of a single component isothermal sphere so that the formula is applicable,and(2) the asymptotic circular speed,V c,∞,should be∼220km s−1.Thefirst of these conditions is violated in the problem at hand;in the central regions of the galaxy the density of the visible matter exceeds that of the dark matter by factors∼1000.Even the integrated mass of the dark matter within a sphere of radius R⊙∼8.5kpc is smaller than that of thevisible matter.Thus the above asymptotic relation between v2 1/2DM and V c is establishedonly at much larger distances,as we discuss in our response[3]to the comment by Evans [4].Secondly,there is no observational basis for the claim that V c,∞=V c,⊙=220km s−1. After extensive review Fich and Tremaine(cited in[2])concluded that the rotation curve continues to rise beyond R⊙.Indeed all available rotation curve data up to R∼20kpc have been incorporated into Fig.1of[2]which forms the basis of our results.The observations of halo stars and globular clusters are also not in conflict with our results.Frenk and White,as well as Norris and Hawkins(Ref.2of GKT),have discussed both the limitations and the uncertainties involved in the analysis of the problem.It is to be emphasised that all previous analyses of the problem,including those in Ref.2of GKT,were concerned with the mass distribution in the halo,rather than its phase space structure.Even for the simpler problem of determining the density distribution,it is necessary to measure the six variables( r, v)for each of the objects under study,and furthermore,a large statistical sample of these objects is needed.GKT’s comment[1]seems to foster the impression that the results of our analysis are inconsistent with observation.However,the so-called observations are in fact no more than model-dependent inferences.This is clear from the fact that out of the six variables only four,namely,( r,v r),have been measured,leaving the models highly underconstrained.Also contrary to the assertion of GKT,inspection of Fig.5of Frenk and White shows that the parameters of the halo mass models have a wide dispersion,but they are not inconsistent with our results.In this context,we do not know how GKT obtainedthe value of v2 1/2DM,⊙∼200km s−1,as this value does not appear in any of the papers citedin Ref.2of GKT.The analysis by Gates et al(Ref.3of GKT)also does not probe the phase space structure of the halo.Different components of the mass density distribution cannot simply be superposed because of non-linear couplings amongst the components.Moreover the value v2 1/2∼30km s−1that they quote for the disk stars has little to do with the problem at hand,because the disk stars are supported against the galactic gravity mainly by theircircular motion about the centre of the Galaxy.Also,in Ref.4of GKT,there is no attempt tofit the rotation curves to the actual data.In contrast with all earlier analyses,we have formulated the problem to directly address the phase-space structure.There are two adjustable parameters in our model,the centraldensityρDM (r=0)and the velocity dispersion v2 1/2DMof the dark matter particles.Byfittingthe rotation curve of the Galaxy up to R∼20kpc,both the parameters were determined,even though we placed particular emphasis on the value of v2 1/2DM .Theχ2for v2 1/2DM=300km s−1is more than4times the value for v2 1/2DM =600km s−1,ruling out smallerdispersion velocities.In summary,we maintain that the conclusions reached in our Letter[2]are correct, robust and not in conflict with any established observational facts.REFERENCES[1]E.Gates,M.Kamionkowski and M.Turner(GKT),astro-ph/9606132.[2]R.Cowsik,C.Ratnam and P.Bhattacharjee,Phys.Rev.Lett.76,3886(1996)(astro-ph/9605001).[3]R.Cowsik,C.Ratnam and P.Bhattacharjee,astro-ph/9608035.[4]N.W.Evans,astro-ph/9606155.。