【高考英语满分作文】2020 浙江卷(读后续写)
2020年浙江卷读后续写continuation writing精品课件
Analyze the 2 given sentences
Climax 高潮
moment
ran...
helicopter arrived
headed back
kept tearing...
smelled...bread;to camp... pulled the fence;bit...
Continuation writing
Learning Aims
In this class, you will learn 1. how to read an unfinished story effectively; 2. how to analyze the two given sentences; 3. how to design the plot; 4. how to write vividly.
ran...
kept tearing...
smelled...bread;to camp... bit the wire...
Beginning
sprayed... tried defense...
cooked dinner
Climax 高潮
？ Ending
Predict the end
1：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. 2：At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
What happened in the middle of each paragraph?
Climax 高潮
moment
ran...
helicopter arrived
浙江省2020届高三12月最新英语试卷精选汇编：读后续写概要写作
浙江省2020届高三12月百校联考英语试卷精选汇编：读后续写概要写作第一节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Craig watched his old sister, Riley, and her friend Liz race up and down the lake on their skates, avoiding other hockey(曲棍球) players. Their skate blades looked like silver smoke. When the game was over, the girls skated up to the bench where Craig was sitting. Craig asked Riley what skating felt like.“When I go really fast, I feel like I’m flying,” she said.That’s silly, thought Craig. Flying is something birds do in the air, not something people do on ice skates.Then he watched Riley go back out on the ice. She skated around and around the edge of the lake with her arms pumping and her scarf trailing behind her. Soon she went so fast that her arms looked like wings and her scarf looked like a feathery tail. Maybe skating really was like flying.When Riley sat down to take her skates off, Craig said, “I wish I could fly.”Riley retied her skate laces and crouched next to Craig. “Get on my back,” she said, and Craig did. Riley started skating, but Craig didn’t feel like he was flying. It just felt like a shaking piggyback ride.“You’re too heavy,” Riley said. “I can’t go fast when I’m carrying you.” She skated slowly back to the bench. Craig got off her back. “Even if you could go fast, I wouldn’t be flying.” he said sadly. “I need skates to fly.”Riley didn’t say anything on the walk home, but a few days later she asked Craig if he wanted to go skating.“To watch?” he asked. “No, to skate,” she said cheerfully. “Mom and I found a pair of my old skates. They might fit you.” The skates were a little big, but when Riley stuffed newspaper in the toes, they fit. Craig couldn’t stop smiling. He didn’t want to take them off, but he had to so he could walk to the lake. Riley and Liz went with him. They carried their hockey sticks and a wooden chair. Hardly had they got to the lake when Craig put his skates back on and Riley helped him onto the ice.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2020年10月浙江十校联考高三卷--读后续写下水作文 讲解
2020.10浙江十校联考高三卷--读后续写下水作文一、续写原题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum (起泡的浮渣). Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.”The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead." Harry urged. “Try it. You're lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. I'll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack (裂缝)! I stretched out (伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful downthere, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The holewidened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I can't get out!" I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江省2020届高三最新英语试卷精选汇编：读后续写附参考答案
浙江省2020届⾼三最新英语试卷精选汇编：读后续写附参考答案读后续写浙南名校联盟第⼀次联考第⼆节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下⾯短⽂：根据所给情节进⾏续写，使之构成⼀个完整的故事。
Dannis was waiting at the airline ticket counter when he first noticed the young woman withshiny black hair pulled tightly into a knot. She wore black boots of soft leather. Dannis struggled to sec her face, she was ahead of him in line, but it was not until she bought her ticket and turned to walk away that he realized her beauty, which was fair-skinned and big-eyed. She seemed aware that he was staring at her and lowered her gaze abruptly.His flight was leaving in an hour. To kill time, Dannis stepped into an airport bar and ordered aScotch. While sipping it, he watched the flow of travelers through the terminal （航站楼）until he caught sight of the black-haaired girl in the leather coat again, deep in conversation with a blonde girl （⾦发⼥孩）."Invite her for a drink?" Dannis hesitated. In another instant ,the two women separated, neither of whose directions was toward him.When next he saw her, Dannis was buying a magazine and became aware someone waspushing him. At first, he was startled （受惊吓的）that anyone would be so close as to touch him, but when he saw who it was, he smiled.“Busy place," Dannis said. She looked up at him and blushed. Wordlessly, she moved away and joined the crowds in the terminal. Dannis was at the counter with his magazine, but when he reached into his pocket for his wallet,the pocket was empty. Where could I have left it? His mind was racing, the credit cards, the cash, the identification card..? His stomach stirred with something very like fear. "The girl who was so near to me!" he said to himself. All at once he understood she had picked his pocket. What shall he do? First, find a policeman, tell him what has happened. He would probably never see his walletagain. Dannis gritted his teeth. When glancing around for the police, suddenly,he spotted thet -. *kblack-haired girl, seated against a front window of the terminal?She seemed absorbed in a book注意：1.所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；2.应使⽤5个以上短⽂中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请⽤下划线标出你所使⽤的关键词语。
2016-2020历年浙江高考英语读后续写真题及范文
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
（2020年7月浙江卷）One fall，my wife Elli and I had a single goal：to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear，I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner，a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified，Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter （相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence，sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江卷英语2020年7月续写作文
浙江卷英语2020年7月续写作文Zhejiang Province English Test July 2020 Writing SectionPrompt: Write a continuation of the following story:As Sarah entered the old, abandoned house, she felt a chill run down her spine. The floorboards creaked beneath her feet, and the dim light filtering through the dusty windows cast eerie shadows on the peeling wallpaper. She had always been fascinated by the history of the house, rumored to be haunted by the ghost of its former owner, a wealthy businessman who mysteriously disappeared many years ago.Feeling a mixture of excitement and fear, Sarah cautiously explored the various rooms, each filled with decaying furniture and forgotten belongings. As she climbed the creaky staircase to the second floor, a sudden gust of wind slammed a door shut behind her, making her jump in surprise. Heart pounding, she hesitated for a moment before mustering up the courage to continue.Upon reaching the top of the stairs, Sarah noticed a faint glow emanating from a room at the end of the hallway. Intrigued, she cautiously approached the door and slowly pushed it open. To her astonishment, she found a beautifully preserved studyfilled with dusty books and a grand mahogany desk. Curious, she began to browse through the books, each one revealing snippets of the businessman's life and the secrets he had kept hidden for so long.As Sarah delved deeper into the past, she uncovered a series of clues that led her to a hidden compartment beneath the desk. Inside, she found a tattered journal filled with the businessman's handwritten accounts of his struggles and triumphs. It was a story of love, betrayal, and redemption, painting a vivid picture of a man haunted by his past and seeking absolution for his sins.Filled with a newfound sense of purpose, Sarah knew that she had stumbled upon a treasure trove of history waiting to be unearthed. With determination in her heart, she vowed to unravel the mysteries of the old house and honor the memory of its long-forgotten owner.And so, as the sun set on the horizon, Sarah left the abandoned house, her mind racing with excitement for the adventures that lay ahead.The End.。
2_2020年高考英语读后续写真题再利用
2020年高考英语读后续写真题再利用【母题来源一】【2020年1月·浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see you back home in a month, okay？" His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2020年高考英语作文读后续写
2020年高考英语作文读后续写全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1The 2020 national college entrance examination is finally over, and millions of students across the country are now eagerly awaiting their results. For many high school seniors, the past few months have been a period of intensive preparation and hard work, with the hopes of getting into their dream universities riding on their performance in the exam.One of the most challenging subjects in the exam is English, with many students finding the reading and writing sections particularly daunting. However, with dedication and practice, many students were able to overcome these challenges and perform to the best of their abilities.After completing the exam, students now have the opportunity to reflect on their performance and think about the future. Some may be feeling anxious about their results, while others may be excited about the prospect of starting a new chapter in their lives. Regardless of the outcome, it is important for students to remember that the exam is just one part of thejourney towards their goals, and that there are always other opportunities for success.In the months following the exam, students may have to make some tough decisions about their future, such as choosing a university or deciding on a major. These decisions can be overwhelming, but with the support of their teachers, parents, and peers, students can make informed choices that will set them on the path to success.As students await their results, it is also important for them to take some time to relax and celebrate their hard work. Whether it is spending time with friends and family, pursuing a hobby, or simply taking a well-deserved break, students should take the time to recharge and rejuvenate after the stress of the exam.In conclusion, the 2020 national college entrance examination was a challenging but ultimately rewarding experience for students across the country. As they await their results and plan for the future, students should remember to stay positive, stay focused on their goals, and stay resilient in the face of challenges. With hard work and determination, they can achieve their dreams and make the most of the opportunities that lie ahead.篇2Title: The Future After the 2020 College Entrance Examination English CompositionThe 2020 college entrance examination is finally over. After months of preparations and hard work, students across the country can finally take a break and relax. However, the journey is far from over. What lies ahead for these students after the exam?For many students, the next step is to start preparing for the upcoming stage of their education. Some may choose to pursue higher education by enrolling in a university or college, while others may opt to enter vocational schools or take a gap year to explore different opportunities. Whichever path they choose, it is important for them to have a clear goal in mind and work towards achieving it.In the current digital age, having a strong command of English is essential for success in many fields. Therefore, students who have just completed the college entrance examination should continue to improve their English proficiency. They can achieve this by participating in English language courses,practicing speaking and listening skills, and reading English books and articles regularly.Apart from academic pursuits, students should also focus on developing their personal and social skills. Building strong relationships with peers, teachers, and mentors can help them grow as individuals and expand their network. Additionally, engaging in extracurricular activities such as sports, arts, or volunteering can provide valuable experiences and help them discover their interests and passions.Furthermore, students should also start thinking about their career goals and planning for their future. They can explore different career paths through internships, part-time jobs, or summer programs to gain insights into various industries and professions. Setting short-term and long-term goals, creating a career development plan, and seeking guidance from career counselors can also help them make informed decisions about their future.In conclusion, the journey after the 2020 college entrance examination is filled with endless possibilities and opportunities. By continuing to improve their English proficiency, develop personal and social skills, and plan for their future, students can pave the way for a successful and fulfilling life ahead. The key isto stay motivated, stay focused, and never stop learning and growing. The future is bright for those who are willing to seize it.篇3The 2020 College Entrance Examination (高考) in China was an unprecedented and challenging experience for many students due to the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic. With strict safety measures in place, including social distancing and temperature checks, students had to adapt to a new way of taking the exam.After the exam, many students felt a sense of relief, but also anxiety about their results. Some may have performed better than expected, while others may not have reached their goals. However, regardless of the outcome, the important thing is that they did their best under difficult circumstances.In the aftermath of the exam, students are faced with the daunting task of deciding on their future paths. Some may choose to pursue further studies in universities, while others may explore vocational training or employment opportunities. Whatever they decide, it is crucial for them to have a clear vision of their goals and work towards achieving them with determination and perseverance.As they embark on this new chapter of their lives, it is essential for students to remember the values of hard work, resilience, and integrity. The high-stress nature of the exam may have tested their abilities, but it has also equipped them with valuable skills that will serve them well in the future.Overall, the 2020 College Entrance Examination was a unique and unforgettable experience for many students. It challenged them to adapt to unforeseen circumstances and pushed them to strive for excellence. As they look towards the future, it is important for them to carry forward the lessons learned from this experience and continue to grow and develop in pursuit of their dreams.。
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高考英语满分作文：2020•浙江卷(读后续写)一、试题展示(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and T had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying u, research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the world"— the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears—like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgunshells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though— he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)，I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para. 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Para. 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.二、思路点拨本文延续了2020年1月份高考的读后续写题型，主题是人与自然，讲述的是夫妻二人在加拿大拍摄照片时偶遇北极熊的故事。
语篇的结尾，夫妻二人为自救用胡椒粉喷雾剂驱赶北极熊之后，北极熊前往湖边清洗眼睛。
所给续写内容中第一段的第一句话是北极熊返回营地，第二段的第一句话是直升机在危急时刻赶来。
试题材料情节简单，没有大的时间地点转换，这种情况下，写作时一般会侧重描写北极熊的动作和对人物的威胁，以及在危险来临时人物的情感和心理活动。
三、满分作文1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. It was Elli who came up with the idea to throw our bread to the bear. Fortunately, he showed great interest in the bread, thus offering us a short time to relieve anxiety and take pictures. However, the bear seemed not to be adequately fed. He raised his head, with a look of unrestrained greed in his covetous eyes. Once again, he attacked the fence so violently that it might collapse at any time.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The noises of the plane scared the bear away. Without a second thought, I grabbed the pepper spray and ran towards the helicopter... Having settled down, I took out of the camera to go through the pictures, finding that they turned out to be satisfactory. “What anexciting experience!"I said to myself. “Dangerous but rewarding! Look at these pictures! They are so amazing!”高级词汇e up with提出；想出They always come up with some contrivance to raise prices.他们总是想出一些诡计来提价。
2.adequately adv.足够地；充分地Many students are not adequately prepared for higher education.很多学生没有为高等教育做足准备。
四、满分作文2A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. I was anxious to fight against the bear again using the spray, but unfortunately, it had run out already. Seeing the bear pushing the fence violently, I felt an urge to do something. At this critical moment, Elli ran out of the cabin with a bag of garlic bread. Before I realized her intention, she had tossed the bag across the fence, which landed in a bush far away. We watched the bear nervously, wondering if he would leave away.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. Terrified by the loud noise or attracted by the bread we threw, the bear walked away from the fence and started making his way toward the bush. Now we were safe! I quickly took out my camera and managed tocapture some pictures before the bear wholly disappeared into the forest. Together with the workers who came down from the helicopter, we were leaving for the main camp, with an idea that he must be a hungry bear, and we should do something for these hungry animals.高级词汇1.run out用完，耗尽Conditions are getting worse and supplies are running out.情况越来越糟糕，补给也用完了。
2.critical adj.极重要的；关键的；至关紧要的Your decision is critical to our future.你的决定对我们的将来至关重要。