雅思大作文分析解决类题型写作解析

雅思大作文分析解决类题型写作解析

【大作文真题】

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

肥胖在许多国家是一个严重的问题，特别是在富裕国家。讨论解决问题的方法。提供具体的理由和例子来支持你的回答。

【雅思大作文模板推荐】

With the advent of urbanisation and the rise in popularity of fast food, there have been accompanying issues with rising obesity rates –especially in developed countries like England and the USA. After providing a careful analysis of why obesity has risen so sharply in these countries, I shall suggest a number of ways in which the obesity epidemic can be ameliorated.

To begin with, it should be unsurprising that fast food is incredibly popular in wealthy countries (like England and the USA). Due to the high levels of development in these countries, consumers possess more money and can therefore consume vast amounts of fast food without seriously diminishing their income. For example, the American Dietary Association found

that (compared to the average Indian household), the average American household has a six times larger budget for food per month. Consequently, it is to be expected that obesity rates are much higher in countries with larger amounts of wealth. However, despite the severity of the obesity problem, there are a number of ways in which developed countries could battle it more effectively. Firstly, developed governments could put far more pressure on fast food outlets to provide healthy alternatives to hamburgers, french fries and soft drinks. Secondly, public exercise initiatives could be advertised and promoted far more vigorously. Lastly, modules that inform teenagers about healthy dietary requirements could be taught at schools.

In conclusion, although obesity is a serious issue in the developed world, if the above steps are taken, the situation will surely improve in the coming years.

重难点词江信息

accompanying

释义

adj.陪伴的，附随的;

v.陪伴( accompany的现在分词); 陪同; 伴随…同时发生; 伴奏; Perhaps the accompanying illustration will explain it.

可能所附的图表能对此作出解释。

Accompanying the letter is a parcel of books.

信外随带书籍一包.

She taught him to read and even to sing two or three little ballads, accompanying him on her old piano.

她教他读书,还教他唱两三首民谣, 弹着她的旧钢琴为他伴奏. unsurprising

翻译:令人惊讶的

alternatives

释义

n.选择的余地( alternative的名词复数); 可供选择的事物; 取舍; 非传统(或他择性)生活方式的追随者(或鼓吹者);

The opportunity had gone. His mind scrabbled for alternatives. 机会已经失去。他苦苦思索别的方案。

There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.

有4个基本的选项，简述如下。

It is wrong to suggest that there are easy alternatives.

如果认为有更容易的选择,那就错了.

雅思写作范文：国家给艺术家补助

Task 2 Question: Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists includes