c 7 高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 (1)

结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式
固定句型 It is high time that…(虚拟语气)
It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building…
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优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短 语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功 底。
, faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) 在…对面 be opposite to
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词 汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底 蕴。
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Congestion n. 阻塞, 拥挤, 充血
Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. When it comes to traffic jams， it’s crammed with cars during the rush hour. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. As a consequence , it’s of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. According to the phenomenon stated above , it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.
书面表达专题
---How to write a letter for advice
如何算是一篇好文章？ 要 －覆盖了所有的要点 点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 全 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法 多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 条理清楚。
说理逻辑性 一般现在时
三 个
Step 1 List the key points
Step 2 Make sentences
步 骤
Step3. Form a passage and polish
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗 政府应采取措施 , 邻，对着大街，高 如修天桥等。 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小 , 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.
润色小建议
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time， “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
send…to…, fetch…. , which … Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as
简单句 I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass. 表语从句 My suggestion is that the goveLeabharlann Baidunment should…
写作要点： 1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of …
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street… 推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. Our school stands next to a primary school, and it is faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street. Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.
2. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 thread one’s way，when doing
固定句型It is +adj. for… to do…. It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：
思考的问题 第几人称？（person）
文章的体裁是什么？
样题分析
第一人称 一封信
通拥挤的状况
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading 整 体 三 部 分
点题；一两个句子；概括性； 暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
适当运用模 板
Dear _____(对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning ______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry
5.I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
B. 表达建议（body）
1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 3. …is a good/great idea. 4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…
my suggestions. 3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
假如你叫孙军，是实验高中的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点： 问题 建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。 参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
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优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be 句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来 提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。
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优点：考生运用倒装句，so … that句式，精彩的 表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰 显内涵和语言功底。
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