雅思作文题目和范文详细分析

雅思作文题目详细分析

题目：It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed without a job they enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (对于人们来说，失业比从事不喜欢的工作好。你同意还是不同意这个观点?)

首先，正方观点可以概括为，宁可不工作，也不要做自己不喜欢的工作。我们不难分析到，如果一个人对自己的工作没有兴趣的话，那么每一份工作都将很难做长久，尤其在面对困难或者更好薪水的工作机会面前，很容易放弃现有工作，这无疑不利于个人职业以及公司的长远发展。有关这个论点给一段例文：

It is undeniable that engaging in a job without enjoyment hardly lasts long. This is mainly because they are more likely to give up and hunt for other job opportunities especially when encountering difficulties. With low motivation， employees tend to be reluctant to do their utmost when dealing with tasks in the workplace， which would be totally different from those who insist in discovering new areas and conquering obstacles due to inner motivation without being disturbed by outer hindrances or worries， such as a shortage of a grant or lower salaries.

相反，反方观点是不论喜欢与否，都应该先做一份工作。这一观点的论据更为突出，比如人们总要先求得生存，再考虑个人兴趣和喜好，这是对自己、对家庭以及对社会负责任的做法。此外，还应该考虑到对工作的喜好是可以培养和发展的，人们的兴趣会随着时间的推移而变化，对一份工作也可能在自己努力投入的过程中，寻找到其意义，因而爱上这份工作，而不应该从一开始就拒绝一切工作机会。下面笔者围绕这两个思路，再给两段例文：

However， it is quite fortunate for a person to find a job that caters for his/her own taste. In other words， it is common for the majority of people to take part in an occupation only for survival. Instead of being paid super salaries， we people are always occupied in ordinary positions and it could not be a strong argument in favour of quitting such careers because it is necessary for us to survive and support our families rather than relying on the local government or aged parents， which would be irresponsible to a large degree.

Further， enthusiasm for a job can be generated and developed throughout our working lives and not a single job can be tagged '100% enjoyable'. What employees should do is to seek and discover the value of a career， not to complain or leave it negatively without careful consideration. And with a positive and optimistic attitude， every job is worthy of being focused on.

雅思作文真题分析

接下来我们通过看一篇雅思考官写的文章来了解一下雅思写作真题及分段方式解析。

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

这是一篇关于先天与后天的问题。我们看一下雅思写作考官的中心段的前两段。

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.

However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.

我们发现在这两段中作者并没有急于给出自己的想法，而是通过别人的观点(based on the

belief;some people believe)来浅显的对先天和后天进行解释。然后作者的重点放在了中心段第三段上，即自己的观点。

I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility(天赋)for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

雅思写作考官最后选择了折中的写法，即二者缺一不可。好，我们来总结一下这种写作方法。首先在前两段对正反方的观点进行必要的观念解释，但不必深入。最后在第三段中给出自己的观点，辩证的分析。

接下来看一个实例。

Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as a good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这是2011年8月13号的雅思大作文真题。问的是学校应该培养孩子成为好市民还是让他们个人受益。我们试着用考官的方式来做这个题目。

中心段一：教育是用来造福国家的。→政府拿钱办教育，目的是为了国家的强大。→教育学生今后成为好的市民和工作者是每个教育机构的责任。

中心段二：教育应该服务于个人。→政府的职责就是造福市民。→只有人民幸福了国家才会被成为好的国家。