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TASK ONE
1、Evaluation Subscales（评分标准）：
TA： Task Achievement （完成度）
CC： Cohorence and Cohesion（承接得当）
LR： Lexical Resource（词汇量）*LR&GRA要求词汇和句型的多样及全面。
GRA： Grammatical Resource and Accuracy（语法&精准度）
2、Structure（文章形式）
①齐头式分段落。（开头不空格，每段空一行）
②语言要正式，不省略引导词不缩写单词。注意美式、英式单词拼写的统一
③重视客观。（小作文多为“客观数据报告”，即多使用无灵主语）
④由Introduction、Body、（Conclusion）组成。在小作文当中一般不写最后一部分，但在大作文中必须加入。
3、题型分类：
Ⅰ给出图形形式：
①Line Chart（线图）
②Pie Chart（饼图）
③Bar Chart（柱形图）
④Table（表格）
⑤Map（地图）
⑥Flow Chart（流程图）
Ⅱ图形变化特征：
①Trend（动态）
②Static data（静态）
③Mixture （Trend+Static）（混合）
④Picture（图形）
4、写作结构思路梳理
整体思路：明确文章逻辑（先写什么后写什么）+细化内容写出句子+选用恰当逻辑连接词或短语连接①How to write Introduction?
ⅠMethod : 句子改写（1段）
4 factors：
⑴Picture（图）：diagram，chart，graph
⑵When（时间）：in the year …/in the year of …/since…/by the year of…/until…/from…to…/between…and…/over,during the period from…to…
⑶Where（地点）:in Australia=in the selected/certain country——Australia.
⑷What happened（事件）:participation/involvement/taking part in…/join in…
ⅡUseful sentence structures：
⑵Change the structures of sentences（that从句）
It is clear from …
It can be clear seen that…
⑶+complete sentence（as定从）
As the graph shows
As is shown by the graph
According to the figure
⑶+phrases
...Give information about...
...give a summary of...
...provide an overview of...
⑷change the words of sentences
⑸非谓语结构
①How to write Body?（2~3段）
Ⅰ线形图：
§4factors
⑴When（时间）
⑵数据
⑶变化趋势
⑷变化幅度
§Sentence structure
⑴主体+show+a/an+adj+n+数据+时间
Nina’s:The number/percentage(of …)show an (upward/downward) trend from… to …
Eg：Sales of coffee showed a steady increase between 2004 and 2006.
⑵主体+V+adv+数据+时间
Nina’s:The number/percentage(of…)…+表示上升或下降的动词或短语+between…and…
Eg：Sales of coffee increased steadily between 2004 and 2006.
⑶There be +a/an+adj+n+数据+时间
Nina’s:There is a +上升或下降的名词形式+in the number of…/over the period of…
Eg：There was a steady fall in the number of British households using their own shopping bags when shopping between 1965 and 2005.
⑷sth作主语（适应单一趋势变化）
Nina’s:限定修饰词+上升或下降的名词形式+can be found in the number/percentage of…from…to…
⑸时间段+witness/experience/undergo+a/an+adj+n+数据(with…)+时间
Nina’s:The year of 1990 witnesses a+变化趋势名词形式+in the amount of…
§以“the percentage of international students in a certain university in Sydney”变化趋势为例总结单一趋势图的写法(满足时间数据趋势幅度四要素)
①A&B
The percentage of international students in sydney showed a sharp rise from 10% in 1960 to 25% in 1980.
The percentage of international students in sydney went up slowly by 15%（10% to 25%）from 1960 to 1980.
C、D&E
The percentage of international students in sydney showed a moderate increase with some drastic fluctuations from 10% to 25% between 1960 and 1980.
There was a moderate increase with some slight fluctuations from 10% to 25% during 20 years from 1960 to 1980.
There was a moderate decrease with a fluctuation from 25% to 10% during the past 20 years(1960 to 1980).
F&G
The percentage of international students in sydney stayed at 15% with some fluctuations from 1960 to 1980.
The percentage of international students in sydney kept sdeadily at 20% brtween 1960
and 1980.
⑤H&I
句型：level off at…
The percentage of international students in sydney went up sharply from 10% during the early few years between 1960 and 1970 and it leveled off at 25% until 1980