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【雅思写作】小作文完整版

【雅思写作】小作文完整版
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In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.
Three of these countries shared similar figures with 6.63% in Turkey, 6.51% in Spain and 6.43% in Ireland respectively.
tendency to focus on details
评分标准-Coherence and Cohesion
合理分段 有逻辑 连接词
评分标准-Lexical Resource
正确自然 拼写正确 同义词替换
评分标准-Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法正确 句式多样
总体介绍-题目要求
a. 抓特征;而不是罗列所有信息 b.有比较;而不是孤立信息 c. 客观;不加个人观点!
总体介绍-题型分类&考题频率
2014(48) bar-12 line-8 table-11 pie-2 map-6 flow chart-6 mixed-3
评分标准-Task Achievement
6-presents an overview with information appropriately selected
- clearly presents and adequately highlights key features but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate
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雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文写作技巧及范文一.图表类型饼状图,直方图或柱形图趋势曲线图表格图流程图或过程图程序图二.解题技巧A. 表格图1 横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势2 纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势3 无需将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值,对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的说明:考察例举数字的能力和方法。

注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

B. 曲线图1 极点说明: 对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明2 趋势说明: 对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平3 交点说明: 对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明说明:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会 general classification, 即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。

接下来在分类描述每个阶段的 specific trend, 同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。

注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较 native 的单词和短语来描述 trend。

C. 饼状图1 介绍各扇面及总体的关系2 各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较3 重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的D. 柱状图1. 比较 : similarity2.对比 : difference)3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征E.流程图1.首先说明:做什么工作的过程,目的是什么 2.准备工作 3.按时间/过程先后描述4.结果 5.简单总结说明:注意流程图里的“因果关系” 或每一流程的“承前启后” 关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。

F. 实物/器具工作过程 1.实物的名称,功能 2.基本结构 3.工作过程 4.简单总结G. 综合图1 不求甚解,不拘泥于细节2 分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表3 不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系三.写作结构框架结构1.开头:该图阐述的是______ 的______.共有以下几个部分组成。

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文

雅思写作小作文模板及范文雅思写作小作文模板及范文。

雅思写作小作文是雅思考试中的一个重要部分,它要求考生在有限的时间内写出一篇简短的文章,表达自己的观点和看法。

为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作小作文,下面将介绍一些常用的写作模板和范文,供考生参考。

模板一,提出观点。

首先,引出话题,简要介绍自己的观点;其次,列举2-3个支持自己观点的理由或例子;最后,总结观点,得出结论。

范文一,提出观点。

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to work from home rather than in an office. In my opinion, working from home has several advantages.Firstly, working from home can save commuting time and reduce stress. Many people spend hours commuting to and from work every day, which can be tiring and frustrating. By working from home, they can avoid the daily commute and have more time for themselves.Secondly, working from home can improve work-life balance. With the flexibility of working hours, people can better manage their time and allocate more time to their families and personal interests. This can lead to a happier and more fulfilling life.In conclusion, working from home has many benefits, including saving time, reducing stress, and improving work-life balance. Therefore, I believe that working from home is a preferable option for many people.模板二,对比观点。

雅思写作 小作文讲义

雅思写作 小作文讲义

Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, but she only spends 25 per cent of her money on study materials==Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, 20 per cent more than the money on study materials.But: while/however/whereas3. Tomoko spends more on study materials than she spends on clothes.Tomoko’s expenditure on clothes is 10% less than that on study materials.4. Tomoko spends as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together. Tomoko spends almost as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together.5. Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as many as entertainment and clothes.Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as much as on entertainment and clothes respectively.The two pie charts show the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.In 1962: P-phone-35%; C-computer-15%; L-letter-50%In 1982: P-60%; C-30%; L-10%T h e percentages exhibited in the two pie charts compare different means of communication usedin 1962 and 1982. The three media surveyed are: phone, telephone and letter.It is apparent from the left pie chart that letter writing was the most popular form of communication in 1962, taking up 50% of the total. However, its use decreased dramatically after that. By 1982, this figure dropped to only 10%, the smallest of that year’s figure. According to the left chart, we can see that during this same period, the use of phone and computers both increased significantly .In 1962, the use of the telephone just occupied 35% and the computer was the least used form of the three (15%). In 1982, the telephone, with a percentage of 60% , has become the most used form of communication. Similarly, the use of computers doubled to 30% .O verall, we can see some important changes in the forms of communication used during the twod e cades. More and more people appreciate the convenience brought about by the telephone and computer.曲线图曲线图的写作要点:•注意横竖坐标的单位及意义;• 极点说明;• 趋势说明;• 交点说明;•1. 数据的起点In 1960, the proportion of the 15-46 age group stood at approximately 65%, compared to 30% and 5% of other two age groups.在描述数据起点的时候,标准的动词词组是 stand at, 当然我们还可以使用其他动词来引导,比如 begin, start 等。

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雅思五段作文范文模板

雅思五段作文范文模板

雅思五段作文范文模板第一段,引入话题。

在引入话题的部分,我们需要简要介绍文章要讨论的内容。

我们可以使用一些引人注目的事实、数据或者引用一些权威人士的观点来引起读者的兴趣。

在这一部分,我们需要明确表达我们的立场或者观点,为后面的论证做好铺垫。

第二段,论证第一个观点。

在这一部分,我们需要详细论述第一个观点。

我们可以列举一些具体的例子或者数据来支持我们的观点。

同时,我们也可以引用一些权威人士的观点来加强我们的论证。

在论证完第一个观点之后,我们需要总结本段内容,并过渡到下一个观点的论证。

第三段,论证第二个观点。

在这一部分,我们需要详细论述第二个观点。

同样地,我们可以列举一些具体的例子或者数据来支持我们的观点,也可以引用一些权威人士的观点来加强我们的论证。

在论证完第二个观点之后,我们需要总结本段内容,并过渡到下一个观点的论证。

第四段,讨论对立观点。

在这一部分,我们需要讨论一些对立的观点。

我们可以列举一些对立观点的理由,并对这些理由进行逐一反驳。

我们需要展现出我们对这些对立观点的理解,并通过论证来证明我们的观点更加合理。

第五段,总结全文。

在这一部分,我们需要对全文进行总结,并重申我们的观点。

同时,我们也可以展望一下未来的发展趋势或者给出一些建议。

在总结全文之后,我们可以用一些积极的话语来鼓励读者对我们的观点持有开放的态度。

雅思五段作文范文模板。

近年来,全球气候变化日益严重,给人类社会和自然环境带来了巨大的影响。

因此,我们迫切需要采取行动来应对气候变化。

本文将从减少碳排放、发展可再生能源和保护生态环境等方面,探讨应对气候变化的策略。

首先,减少碳排放是应对气候变化的关键。

碳排放是气候变化的主要原因之一,因此减少碳排放是非常重要的。

政府可以通过制定相关政策来限制工业企业和汽车排放的碳量,推广绿色出行方式,鼓励居民节能减排。

同时,企业也可以加大技术投入,提高生产效率,减少能源消耗,从而减少碳排放。

其次,发展可再生能源也是应对气候变化的重要举措。

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The pie charts show the amount of oil production and consumption measured in million barrels per day (MB/D) in seven regions in 2001.
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• 跟时间推移有关换曲线
• 跟时间推移无关换饼状
多线
• According to the graph, there was a dramatic rise in the percentage of radio audiences from 8% at 6am to 25% at 8am. After that, the trend showed a gradual decline in the proportion of radio listeners to 3% at 6am on the next day, although the percentage went up slightly from 3pm to 5pm and from 4am to 6am respectively. • ……
1把一条线当中的好几个区间合并在一起先写出这段时间的变化总趋势然后通过exceptexcluding之类的词汇表述出其中的小例2把两条线的一段时间由于趋势一致数据差不多合并在一起写出这段时间的共同变化过程引水枢纽萨兰河倒虹吸古河倒虹吸恰里卡尔水电站和扬水站五座建筑物主体结构基本完好但由于自然老化各战争毁坏结构表面有磨损剥蚀弹坑及麻面有些上部结构破坏严重

雅思小作文写作方法

雅思小作文写作方法

雅思小作文写作方法雅思小作文写作方法要做到短期内拿下雅思小,你就需要深入了解小作文的类型,写作难点。

图表描述题虽然在形式上复杂多变难以掌握,但是万变不离其宗,语言固定,形式固定,你需要做的就是以不变应万变。

下面就是小编为您收集整理的雅思小作文写作方法的相关文章,希望可以帮到您,如果你觉得不错的话可以分享给更多小伙伴哦!一、寻觅小作文需要表达的重点见到图形表达题,你心中就需要思考这个图形题需要表述的重点在哪里。

作答时先说明再梳理数据。

切不可将文章写成账本式的文字,否则,你就会得到很低的分数。

例如:The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 2000.文章的主句应该对文章要表达的趋势,量的大小作出说明,相关的数据则补充在后面。

雅思小作文考察的精髓还是查看考生的英文表达能力,精简凝练。

你的描述要让阅卷者脑海中浮现出图形的样本,数量和趋势等等相关变量。

如果你能达到以上这些要求,那么小作文本身也就基本上合格了。

二、了解图形的分类规律图形描述题,按照标准图形来分,可以分为line graph (curve), bar chart, pie chart以及table,按照表达重点来分,分为趋势类和大小类,分类依据于题中的时间列表。

一般来说,出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主。

三、准备必要的表达方式1. 与趋势有关的词语:上升(动词):increase, rise, climb, ascend, surge, shoot up下降(动词):decrease, decline, drop, fall, descend, plunge持平(动词):remain stable, keep constant, level o第一文库网ff, flatten out波动(动词):fluctuate, wave, go up and down快速(形容词/副词):considerable/considerably, significant/significantly,substantial/substantially,remarkable/rem arkably, dramatic/dramatically稳步(形容词/副词):steady/steadily, stable/stably, moderate/moderately, modest/modestly缓慢(形容词/副词):slight/slightly, minimal/minimally, marginal/marginally顶点(名词 /动词):peak趋势 (名词):trend/ tendency2. 与大小相关的词语:Outnumber (动词):在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the policeExceed (动词):在数量上超过Triple (动词):变成三倍The figure has tripled.Double (动词):变成两倍The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few years.Mount to (动词):达到Counterpart (名词):对应的另一方,比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts此外,建议考生还应考虑一下题中数据和百分比有没有联系,如果有的话还应添加一些数据所占百分比的语句。

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表示变化程度很小、不明显
Adjectives Slight 轻微的 Slow 很慢的 Moderate 温和的
Steady 稳定的 Gradual 逐渐的
Adverbs Slightly Slowly Moderately
Steadily Gradually
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• A decreasing trend in general
most second most last
Adj. +属性
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• The highest percentage of vehicle companies that are used in the USA are GM. It accounted for 19.1% in the market in 2010.
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The bar chart 柱状图
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The line graph 线形图
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The pie chart 饼图
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The table 表格
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The flow chart 流程、地图
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图表组合
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图表的种类
• 趋势型 • 比例型 • 流程型
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趋势型(trend)图表
• The lowest proportion of car brands are Nissan,
only 7.9%.
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比例之间进行比较的常用表达
More Far more Much more Slightly more
As many Twice as many Three times as many Not as many
• 时间,阶段 • 变化,升降
Line graph, bar chart,
table
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表示趋势的常用表达
趋势变化 上升 下降
不变 波动
动词表达(过去) 名词表达
rose, increased, went up,
A rise, an increase, a
climbed, boomed, ascended growth, an upward
A fluctuation from…to…,
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表示变化程度很大、很显著
Adjectives Dramatic Sharp Significant Considerable Huge Enormous Rapid Quick Sudden
Adverbs Dramatically Sharply Significantly Considerably Hugely Enormously Rapidly Quickly Suddenly
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First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths 精品课件 eventually emerge from
• 逻辑关系 • 起承转合,顺序
Flow chart
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流程图常用逻辑用语
To begin with First of all First Secondly Then Next Before, followed by After that
Finally, Eventually Alternatively Otherwise In addition Further more Meanwhile while At the same time
• Sharply dropped from 1981 to 1982
• Gradually dipped between 1982 and 1986
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• Slightly more Nissan cars are sold in America than Hyundai/Kia.
• Twice as many Honda vehicles are sold in the US as GM.
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流程型(procedure)图表
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比例型(precentage)图表
• 百分比 • 除法、减法比较
• Bar chart, pie chart, table
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表达比例常用句
The highest The greatest The lowest The most The smallest Sth. Is the
percentage of … Sth. +句子 proportion of… number of…
+ to
trend, a boom + in
Fell, decreased,went down,declined, dropped, dipped, slumped, reduced, descended + to
A fall, a decrease, a downward trend, a drop, a dip, a slump, a reduction, a descend + in
Levelled off, levelled out,
A levelling off/out, no
remained stable, kept steady, change
stayed constant, maintained
the same level + at
Fluctuated from…to…, moved up and down
IELTS Writing Task 1 图表作文
Captain 2019
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共有5种图形 1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
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