中考英语复习宝典(四)：书面表达常见错误解析

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中考英语书面表达常见错误分析（一）审题错误

中考英语书面表达常见错误分析(一) 审题错误要点领悟要点领悟与汉语作文一样,英语书面表达的审题也十分重要。

审题包括此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

由于英语书面表达的篇幅很有限,所以要求作者在写作时要精心组织材料,紧扣主题。

信息提示信息提示太白山是陕西著名的森林游览胜地。

一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)。

不过,游览太白山的最佳时机是春天。

每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。

可几年前,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草,猎杀野鸟,点火野餐,致使环境一度恶化。

请你写篇报道,说明太白山旅游环境的变化。

习作实况习作实况Taibai Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shaanxi Province.It has its special scenes all the year round, and spring is the best timeto visit it. When spring comes, the days get longer and longer and the weatherget warmer and warmer. Trees are beginning to turn green, and flowers comeout. Everything begins to grow (1). The mountains are covered with a lotof green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowers. It is so beautifulthat a lot of visitors come here and enjoy its beauty every day. But a fewyears ago, some of the visitors paid no attention to protecting theenvironment. They used to throw lots of rubbish such as plastic bags, fruitskins and waste paper on the ground. They don’t know that cleaners workfrom morning till night to sweep away the rubbish and waste things (2).Sometimes they broke some branches, picked flowers and even killed birds.Some even made fires in the forest to cook food. How dangerous it was! Luckilyenough, the local government has begun to do something to stop pollutingthe area. Great changes have taken place here. New roads and nice hotelshave been built; trees and flowers are planted around them. Visitors areasked to take plastic bags and put their rubbish in them (3).精讲点拨精讲点拨(1)这一部分应当删掉。

【英语】中考英语书面表达易错大盘点(word)1

【英语】中考英语书面表达易错大盘点（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她询问如下信息：1．你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担的家务劳动；4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 字数约110词。

Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。

中考英语书面表达易错题

中考英语书面表达易错题一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她询问如下信息：1．你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担的家务劳动；4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 字数约110词。

Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yest erday._____________________________________________ Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。

中考重点短文改错与书面表达

中考重点短文改错与书面表达为了帮助同学们在中考中取得好成绩，下面将介绍中考重点短文改错与书面表达的要点与技巧。

一、短文改错短文改错是中考英语试卷中的一大重点。

常见的错误类型有单词拼写错误、动词形式错误、时态错误以及语法错误等。

下面是几个常见错误类型的示例及改正方法：1. 单词拼写错误错误示例：She like playing the piano.改正示例：She likes playing the piano.2. 动词形式错误错误示例：I'm prefer reading books than watching TV.改正示例：I prefer reading books to watching TV.3. 时态错误错误示例：Yesterday, I go to the park with my friends.改正示例：Yesterday, I went to the park with my friends.4. 语法错误错误示例：He is don't come to school yesterday.改正示例：He didn't come to school yesterday.改错技巧：1. 注意动词形式的正确使用，包括时态和主谓一致；2. 注意常见的单词拼写错误，可以通过多读、多写来提高拼写能力；3. 注意名词的单复数形式，以及动词的正确形式；4. 注意常见的语法错误，例如前后一致、词序等。

二、书面表达书面表达是中考英语试卷中的另一个重点。

在书面表达中，要注意以下几个方面：1. 内容要点在写作过程中，要确保包含所有相关要点，并逐点展开，确保完整表达自己的意思。

同时，注意避免内容的重复和冗长。

2. 语言表达在书面表达中，要注意使用准确、丰富的词汇和句式，使文章更加生动有趣。

同时，要注意语法的正确性，避免出现明显的语法错误。

3. 文章结构文章要有明确的结构，包括引言、主体和结论。

中考英语书面表达易错大盘点(word)1

中考英语书面表达易错大盘点（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信询问讨论情况。

请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。

开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。

2023中考英语书面表达难点解析及答案

2023中考英语书面表达难点解析及答案英语书面表达一直是中考英语考试中的一个难点。

很多同学在写作方面遇到困难，不知道如何组织语言，如何准确地表达自己的观点。

本文将对2023中考英语书面表达的难点进行解析，并提供一些答案模板供同学们参考。

一、难点解析1. 语法错误：语法错误是写作中最常见的错误之一。

同学们在写作时往往忽略了英语句子的时态、语态、主谓一致等基本规则，导致语法错误的出现。

2. 词汇搭配错误：同学们在写作中往往使用了一些不准确的词汇搭配，使得句子的意思表达不清楚或者不准确。

3. 表达不连贯：有些同学写作时思维不清晰，导致句子之间缺乏逻辑关联，表达不连贯，影响文章的阅读理解。

二、解决方法1. 夯实基础：要想在写作方面取得突破，首先要夯实英语语法和词汇的基础知识。

同学们应该多读多写，积累语法知识和词汇，掌握各种语法规则和常用词汇搭配。

2. 多做模板练习：同学们可以多做一些模板练习，通过模板掌握一些常用的句型和表达方式。

例如，在写作中常用的引出观点、对比观点、列举例子等表达方式都可以通过积累模板来提高写作的连贯性和准确性。

三、答案模板下面是一些常见题目的答案模板供同学们参考：1. 以写人为题：My Best FriendI have a best friend named Li Ming. He is a kind and helpful person. He always helps me with my homework and encourages me when I’m feeling down. He is also a good listener and offers great advice. I am so lucky to have him as my best friend!2. 以表达观点为题：Should Students Wear School Uniforms?In my opinion, students should wear school uniforms. School uniforms create a sense of unity among students and make everyone feel equal. They also eliminate the distractions of fashion and help students to focus on their studies. Additionally, school uniforms prepare students for their future careers, as many jobs require employees to wear uniforms. Overall, I believe that school uniforms are beneficial for students.3. 以描述事物为题：My Favorite PlaceMy favorite place is the beach. I love the sound of the waves and the feeling of sand beneath my toes. The beach is a place where I can relax and forget about all my worries. I enjoy swimming in the clear blue water and building sandcastles with my friends. The beach is my happy place!总结：通过对2023中考英语书面表达难点的解析及答案模板的提供，希望能够帮助同学们提高英语写作能力。

高中英语英语书面表达中常见句法错误

高中英语英语书面表达中常见句法错误一、词性误用词性误用常表现为：介词错用为动词，形容词错用为副词，名词错用为动词等。

例：They earn some money so that they can independence.他们挣钱是为了自立。

解析：independence是名词，句中误用为动词。

改为：They earn some money so that they can be independent.二、修饰语错位英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语放在句子中不同的位置，可能会引起句子含义的变化。

这一点常被同学们所忽视，因而造成了不必要的误解。

例：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.我相信我会做得很好，而且我将对校园外的世界有更好的了解。

解析：better位置不当，应置于句末。

改为：I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.三、句子不完整在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气等来理解对方的意思，不完整的句子也完全可以被理解。

可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这常常发生在主句写完以后，学生又想加些补充说明的情况下。

例：There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio,newspaper and so on.了解社会的途径有很多，比如，可以通过电视、广播、报纸，等等。

解析：本段后半部分“For example，by TV，radio，newspaper and so on．”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。

改为：There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.四、主谓不一致英语的谓语动词在人称和数上必须与主语保持一致。

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达易错大盘点(word)

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达易错大盘点（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达我的英语学习初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4．词数80－100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。

初中英语中考英语书面表达易错题精选(word)

初中英语中考英语书面表达易错题精选（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。

大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。

请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This wee k we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。

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中考英语复习宝典（四）：书面表达常见错误解析一、书面表达常犯错误分析俗话说：“千里之行始于足下”。

英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。

然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s、前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1.审题不清。

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项课外活动”这一主题。

依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。

有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题。

误：My father and my mother is all teacher.正：My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词。

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。

”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.误：I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正：I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误：The apples cheap. I'll take some.正：The apples are cheap. I'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误：Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正：Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用。

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。

而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误：I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正：My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。

这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。

)正Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致。

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

例1. When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。

)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ；同理，want应改为wants，本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为When one has knowledge, he can do what he wants(to do).9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误。

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。

误：When I get to the station the train leave.正：When I got to the station the train had left.10.综合性错误。

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。

这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

二、书面表达开头结尾人们常说写作文要有“凤头豹尾”，就是说作文的开头要写得像凤凰的头一样引人注目，而结尾要像豹尾那样刚劲有力、戛然而止。

那么，怎样让自己的作文具有“凤头豹尾”呢?下面笔者针对不同的文体和题材对英语作文的开头和结尾的写作方法进行了归纳总结。

Ⅰ. 怎样写好文章的开头开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。

如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。

Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?1. “开门见山”式开头一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

①.对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.②.对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。

如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more im portant than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back，but……2.回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。

这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget (永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3.疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever plant ed trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?4.倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.Ⅱ. 怎样写好文章的结尾文章的结尾没有固定的模式，同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。

一般情况下，记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，以使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。

文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。

1.自然结尾，点明主题随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。

如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)”的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2.首尾呼应，升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.3.反问结尾，引起深思这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。

如“Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)”的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?4.表达祝愿，阐述愿望这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers’ life will be better and better.另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes；I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year；I wish you have a good time等。