中考英语备考：复习专题讲座(二)：代词

中考复习专题讲座（二）：代词二、英语书面表达专项训练2．环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a be tter place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。

1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。

2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。

3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。

4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。

5.请就此事谈谈你的看法......要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。

2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。

3.词数:80-100。

开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads 在……犹豫不决 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike backhome.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。

【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口，最后我就这件事谈谈我的想法。