六级作文评分标准(阅卷时发给阅卷老师的)
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CET-6 Writing
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.”You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 14分
The remark, “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”, emphasizes the importance of smile in our daily life. And I could hardly express how much I agree with it.
Smile does have magic power, which costs nothing but brings more than you can expect. Last month, I was confined to the hospital with flu, feeling lonely and miserable. Many friends came to see me with bunches of flowers and fresh fruits, but what impressed me most was their smiles. Their warm and encouraging smiles were like sunshine, injecting vigor into my heart and I felt they were always around me, loving me and supporting me.
Smile can also narrow the distance between strangers. When the terrible earthquake struck Wenchuan, thousands of people got severely injured. I saw on TV the nurses treated the patients with smiles, and volunteers served with smiles, comforting and encouraging the survivors. Their smile brightened up the days for the misfortune people.
Such is the power of smile. Not only can smile deepen the friendship but also convey the positive energy from people to people. Therefore, smile to people around, and we can change the world into a better one.
11分
A smile is the shortest distance between two people. Through smiles people can eliminate suspect and gain a better relationship.
The power of smiles can make persons understand each other better. Last semester, Mr. Elmore was my teacher. Always being serious, he gives me an impression that he disliked me. However, at the end of the term, when I was giving a speech to him, he kept smiling to me. This warm and kind smile kept me confident and it also made me understand him. He became a teacher I admire. It is the smile that eliminated the psychological obstacles between us and it shortened the distance between us.
Smile is really powerful. It can make people understand, support and trust each other, thus eliminating the distance between two people. In today’s society, smiles are needed because we demand a harmonious social environment. Everyone should try to be more friendly and care more about others. Only doing this can we live in a better world. So, please remember to smile more to others.
8分
Nowadays it is easier for us to meet more and more people who even didn’t know us. How can we make friend with them as fast as possible. A smile may be is the
shortest distance between two people.
In my point of view, some one’s first sight is important for others to recogonize him. A person who is always smiling would easy to be regarded as easy going and warm heart. Otherwise he may be thought as curious. Second, smiling can cheer others up. In the daily life, we are always expecting someone smile to us when we feel disappointed. We will soon form a good relationship between us. Last but not the least, smiling can also calm yourself down when you meet strangers or someone important. For example, when you are going to attend an interview or make reported to your new boss, it is good for us to smile before your speeching. Others will think that you have prepared for it and are worth to trust.
Because of the three reasons I have told before, I deeply believe a smile is the best way for us to make friends and shorten the distance between others.
5分
I agree the point that “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.”
For example, when you go to the shopping mall, every shop assistant smile and say welcom to our shopping mall, you will be in a good mood. When you shopping in the mall, you will feel comfortable. Second, if you go to travel around the world, you stay a hotel. This hotel forget to change the bedsheet for you. You feel angrey, and you want to complaint bad service, their hotel general manager go to your room he smile and apologize to for this thing, he promise this thing will not be happen again. Although he agary before, you still forgive him, cause you see his smile, you think he is sincely. Third, when two lovers fall in love, they should be start from smile. A nice smile could be warm two people’s heart, also short two people’s distance.
From above things it is not difficult to find that “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.” A smile could be slove many things. When you angry, a smile could make you happy. Please smile every day, you life will be better than before.
2分
We can doing every thing to people we know. We can talking everything funny or sadly to friends. But if we find new people in life. What can we do. what is the shortest distance between two people? The answer is smile.
When people sadly with something, give he a smile important than everything. the smile like sunlight. It cut through the gloom of the battered things and can give he hope. Smile can through people’s heart that if we can not talk something to people. A smile is the shortest distance two people that is truth. If you want make some new friends. I feel sure smile with them frist is very important. Smile can make you look kindly friendly and sunny. Obvrously smile is the shortest distance between people to people. If we in different background and different place. I make sure smile to every people is true. Smile can make people friendly and can slove every hardly things.
I think smile like hug, like shake hands are very important to people. It can make everything easy and make the world easy. So a smile is the shortest distance to people.
2013年6月RANGE-FINDERS(CET-6)说明（随记）：
题目：“A smile is the shortest distance between two people.”
字数：150-200 （学生实际写作时，要想表述完整、丰富，可能会超过规定字数。）
把握标准：1.You can cite examples to illustrate your point.（不是You must cite…..；学生是否举例不做硬性要求。）
2.有没有题目无所谓
切入点：框架、思想（内容）表达是否清楚、语言、句式等。
总体情况：此次作文较往年水平略有下降。跑题的较少
具体说明：
14分：论证过程、框架比较好；分别以自己的故事和别人的例子支撑；条理清楚；显像的是隐性错误（乍一看挺好，读读就有些问题）。
闪光点：….. injecting vigor into…. （第一段）
I was confined to…. （第二段）
….. brightened up the days for…. （第二段）
…..the nurses treated the patients with smiles （
Such is the power of smile. （第四段）
不足：the misfortune people （第三段）
…..the nurses treated the patients with smiles （第三段；意思表达不太清楚）
…..and volunteers served with smiles, comforting and encouraging the survivors （第三段；有些别扭）
11分：语言平平，读起来比较顺畅，有几处小的错误不影响理解，个别地方表达不清楚。
错误：The power of smiles can make persons understand….（第一段；persons）….gain….relationship（第一段；搭配不好）
However, at the end of the term, when I was giving a speech to him…（第二段；
giving a speech to him表达不清楚）
….kept me confident （第二段；搭配问题）
He became a teacher I admire（第二段；became a teacher表达有问题，暗示以
前不是teacher；admire时态错误，比较隐蔽）It is the smile that eliminated the psychological obstacles between us….（第二段
最后一句；psychological obstacles表达不清；
us表述不合适，作者有psychological obstacles，
老师没有。）
Only doing this can we…….. （应为Only by doing this…..）
eliminate重复使用率较高
8分：隔三岔五出现严重错误【如连动结构（典型的8分档结构错误）、拼写错误、主谓不配合、词汇能力较差、上下文连贯不清等】，有些地方表达思想不清楚。
would easy; warm heart; expecting someone smile; make reported; before your speeching;
A smile may be is the …..; between others
第一段第二、三句；第二段拼写，第二句尤其糟糕
5分：基本切题,表达思想不清楚，隔三岔五有对的，错误多数为严重错误，词汇能力很差。2分：乱七八糟、支离破碎
Samples说明：
Sample A-10（14分）: hold….nationality （搭配问题）
pick up….mood （搭配问题）
Sample A-9（13分）: 比较严重的错误：…gived…（第二段）; an bridge（最后一段）
…instead of a person who lacks love to work, to people and to life
（第二段；下划线处有些问题）
effectively bringing belief between each other.（第四段末尾；表述不
清楚）
但文章整体框架比较好
Sample A-4（11分）: 前面差点，后面好些。第一段没有引入smile。
Sample A-7（8分）: 前面差点，后面好些。
Sample B-1（14分）: 题目为Smile, A Brave New World，此篇文章题目略偏差，但文章较好。
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I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus. Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same. More and more students are plaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of may other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.
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