商志考研英语写作笔记(2012打印版)

大作文

第一段

How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____. (这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)

______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下

图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while 这个单词) Simple as it looks, its intended(或者用implied) meaning goes far deeper what on earth（究竟）does the drawer（作者）really aim to convey.

第二段

What the image above vividly mirrors（名词用做动词）goes far more than a simple image, instead, it carries（有）a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.（本文的主旨）There are upsetting (如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除) parallels today in our contemporary community, and an acquaintance of mine may serve as a good example.______.(用一两句话来举例)Another telling example is my former colleague, who___.（另外一个例子，如果字数够就不用再举）

第三段：

Much can be done. To begin with the schools and the mass media should develop noble and worthy values and qualities among people, doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.（of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的句子，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）What is more, the authorities （当局）should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是

讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote) such practices. In conclusion ,all the society should actively more sustained（持续）and concerted （一致）offorts. Although we still have a long way to go ,a promising start has begun, and a happy, healthy and harmonious （和谐）society may be not be far behind.

注意事项：

1不要写题目

2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副，单数还是复数

3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画

卡通cartoon 也可以用以下几个picture image drawing illustration

图画Photo 也可以用以下几个picture image photograph

以前学过的,重复下: Dear sir\madam,

Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter and I'm writing to present my

complaint\inquiry\apology concerning sth. that……There's an array of factors contributing to this. For one thing,……For another,……

There are a host of aspects I'll offer here……

I'd be most grateful if you can reply me at your earliest convenience and any

favorable considerations will be greatly appreciated.

Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2009商志作文模板

大作文（单号版）（讽刺类型）

What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above,……in contrast,…….What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey? Simple as the image is, the implications mirrored are apparently far-reaching. Initially, such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide- spread social concern. Nowhere in the history has the issue of……been talked so much as in our society today. In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story and similar events happened and happening are heard or reported in nearly all aspects in our life. Additionally, the painter intends to convince us that a package deal of programs should be initiated to reverse the grim situation---launching a nationwide education campaign, setting up relevant laws and regulations, and the list goes on.

To conclude, it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases. And it is imperative actions be taken to curb such practices. There is reason to believe that as long as all the society, the authorities and the mass media and individuals involved, make concerted effort to strive hard, such upsetting stories will ultimately terminated or at least reduced.

如果是多个漫画，要改成复数。

如果是非讽刺的，第2段里的Additionally,到后面都删除，改成Let's come to an example

concerning an acquaintance of mine, which serves well as a good example to the point……

第3段的curb改为ensure

最后一句such upsetting……全删除，改为we can maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious

society as we all wish.

漫画作文类

第一段:

1、How/what thought-provoking the above

cartoon/picture is!

2、As is vividly presented in the drawing.。。。。。。。。As can be seen from the drawing，。。。。。.

第二段:

1、what is the symbolic meaning of the drawing?

或者what on earth can we learn from the drawing?

2、it is far beyond any reasonable about that what the drawer really intends to convey is far reaching

/profound.

3、by depicting this image, the drawer attempts to expose/convince us/advocate that……

4、the picture reveals a serious problem in…(方面),and more and more similar events happened and happening are heard or reported in our society as well as life.

5、to make the point event clear . let’s come to an example concerning…….

第三段:

1、judging from all evidence offered above ,we may come to the conclusion/conclude that it is high time +虚拟语气的从句(we took effective measures to……/ we enhanced the awareness of the people to tread the better/ much importance were attached to this kind of phenomenon)

2、what we should do now is to

3、only in this way, I do believe, can we live-in a harmonious society.

4、as /so long as……

5、there is every reason to believe that …

高联商志10考研作文班笔记

第一种开头：

Whoever in front of this image(s)/cartoon/picture will be greatly shocked/striked. How amusing and interesting it is! What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that _____对漫画笼统地描述___ 。______从微观上再描述一下_____ Odd and funny as it looks . Such happenings are far from being rare and we cannot afford to ignore them.

Odd and funny as it seems to be, such stories (story)/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practice are so pervasive that we cannot afford to ignore them.

第二种开头：

What an interesting an enlightening painting it is! It is indicative of a serious yet common social phenomenon : _____对漫画笼统地描述___ 。______从微观上再描述一下_____. However ridiculous and farfetched it looks (seems to be); the drawer intends far deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.

第三种开头：

How amusing and enlightening the above illustration is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help laughing : _____对漫画笼统地描述___ 。______从微观上再描述一下_____. Simple as it looks, its intended (implied) meaning goes much deeper .What on earth does the drawer really aim to convey? __________._____________while (完全相反时用in contrary) ______________。（描述两个方面）

第二段：

Obviously we can easily define what the painter subtly intends to reflect (communicate) to us. The strong and clear message suggested is that ____主旨________。According to recent survey conducted by CCTV(Chinese Academy of social Sciences/Xinhua News/China Daily/People’s Daily/Fudan University/Peking University /Tsinghua University) 28.6%(自己随便写) people ______主旨__________（或用一种笼统地切题方法如are following this tide）It is alarming that a growing number of similar events are occurring .

Nowhere in history has the issue of ______主旨_____ been concerted so much as in our society today(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情，此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来)

“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____，Says Dr. Sun Dong,

职务有：(用副职免得阅卷老师认识)

Vice-present of Xiamen University

Vice-director of the Sociological Research Center attached to Chinese Academy of social Sciences

Vice-dean of Sociology Depart of Fudan University

例句：Nowhere says Dr. Sun Dong, __职务_, “It is alarming such stories/upsetting/parallels are available in nearly all walks of life in our contemporary community.”Failure to realize the severity of the grim situation many significantly decrease our chances of success.

It is hard to imagine what our society would be like years later provided such practices go unchallenged. Indeed, the whole society should be made aware that any prompt actions of great benefit to all

第二段备用：

What the drawing conspicuously mirrors/illustrates goes far beyond/more than a simple drawing, instead, it

carries thought-provoking/important /striking implications.

举例子：The cartoon reminds me of a few interesting stories. A case in point is an acquaintance of mine who _______________. Another telling example is one of my former colleagues, who __________________. An acquaintance of mine may well serve as a good example _____________________.

表原因：What bring about/account for this strange phenomenon? I am strongly convinced that this is partly because ___________________, and this is partly because ___________________.

What ____上句话_______？Some many claim that this phenomenon results from_________________, while I am strongly convinced that the primary reason goes much deeper: _________________________.

第三段：

Much can be done. What tops the agenda, I deem, is to help/encourage people to develop positive and wholesome outlook on life as well as the word. Besides/what’s more, noble and worthy values and qualities such as courage, honesty, diligence and perseverance should be encouraged/fostered and cherished.

Additionally, we should appeal to the government to make sustained and concerted efforts to reverse/curb/promote the worsening trend. Only in these ways can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.

Although it is easier said than done, there are god reasons to expect that such a phenomenon can be terminally ended or at least reduced.

第三段备用1：

To solve the problem, I am strongly convinced that all of us should make sustained and concert efforts. For one thing, school and the mass media should serve as a counterbalance to this grim trend, doing their utmost to develop noble worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people to the growing threat of the worsening situation. For another, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.

Fortunately, due to attention has been paid and effective measures have been taken. Although we still have a long way to go, this, I believe, is a promising start . A campaign to _____主旨切题_______has begun , a happy, healthy and harmonious society may not be far behind .(历年真题阅读句子改写) 第三段备用2：

To paraphrase 18th-century statesman _____,“All that is needed for the prevalence of a misdeed is that good people do nothing .”

或：Just as an ancient Chinese philosophical book concludes, “All that is needed for the prevalence of a misdeed is that good people do nothing.”

The authorities, schools and mass media should forcefully and actively communicate their instructive and positive message to the public, lest similar misdeeds go unchallenged .If positive and effective measures can be well under way, it may not be long for us to get an easy breath and healthy society we all wish.

If good people do nothing, there is a real possibility that that such misdeeds turn into a dreadful handicap, thus posing a threat to the rapid growth of our society. 商志作文模板

讽刺意义（非积极意义）

What a thought-provoking and compelling drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above,漫画描述，in sharp contrast,漫画描述.What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?(或者What on earth the drawer really attempts to convey should be given profound consideration.)

Humorous and ridiculous as the image is,the drawing does mirror a common phenomenon of主题，and is apparently far-reaching.Initially,such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has arounded wide-spread social concern.Nowhere in history has the issue(of漫画主题)been talked about so much as in our society today.What's more, 主题not only results does harm to....and....,but also results in不利问题,Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package programs should be initiated to reverse the grim situation—措施（launching nationwide education campaign,setting up relevant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.）

Taking into account all the analyses above,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases.It is therefore,I think,necessary that immediate actions be taken to curb such practices (或者necessary that some effective actions be taken to curb such practices.On the one hand,.....On the other hand,....)As long as we pay more attention to it,make concerted effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least ease off.

非讽刺意义（积极意义）

What a thought-provoking and compelling drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above,漫画描述，in sharp contrast,漫画描述.What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?(或者What on earth the drawer really attempts to convey should be given profound considerition.)

Interesting and amusing as the image is,the drawing does mirror a common phenomenon of主题，and is apparently far-reaching.Initially,such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has arounded wide-spread social concern.Nowhere in history has the issue(of漫画主题)been talked about so much as in our society today.What's more, 主题not only results does good to....and....,but also促进加强深化主题.Let's come to an example concerning an acquaintance of mine,which serves well as a good example to the point.举1到2个与人有关的例子.

Taking into account all the analyses above,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases.It is therefore,I think,necessary that immediate actions be taken to ensure such practices.(On the one hand,.....On the other hand,.....)However,it is easier said than done.Only when you make concerned effort to strive hard and pay more attention to it,we can maintain a happy healthing and harmonious society as we all wish.

17句搞定考研英语作文

1.总共写十七个句子.

第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。

(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势

第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用“not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替“for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。

(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.

(5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法

第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。

(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is

demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done.

(5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

2.积极有利型的文章文章以团队精神为例子

第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.

(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替for example的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者

(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.

(2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

第三个段子首句谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.

(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor.

(6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.