论述性或说明性文章的段落写法及通用写作素材版本2

论述性或说明性文章的段落写法及通用写作素材第二段的写法1.分析原因，用罗列法。

（30 words）(a) The phenomenon is due to a couple of factors.(b) Several factors can account for this phenomenon. First, the rapid economic development/the rapid advances in science and technology enables people to (原因1). In addition, there exists a perception among some people that (原因2). Most importantly, (原因3).2.分析优点和缺点。

(38 words)On one hand, we can benefit enormously from the practice. First, (优点一). In addition, (优点二). Most importantly, (优点三).However, on the other hand, the practice/phenomenon may create some problems. First, (缺点一). Worse still/To make things worse, (缺点二).第三段写法1.得出结论：利大于弊或弊大于利；再提出建议。

( 90 words)(a) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that, on balance, the advantages of the practice/idea of v-ing are more than/ outweigh the disadvantages.(b) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that, on balance, the idea /practice of v-ing does more good than harm to us.Therefore, we should make greater effort to（结论）. It is true that over the past years we have made much progress in … , but, in my opinion, there are several things we should attach importance to. First, individuals may (建议1：个人角度). And (建议2：机构角度). Most importantly, the authorities concerned should (建议3：政府角度). Looking ahead, I am convinced/confident that as long as we take a sensible and responsible approach towards this issue, we will (展望未来).2.得出结论：利弊共存；再提出建议。

( 82 words)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that it is hard to determine whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or vice versa. Therefore, we can predict that this growing trend/shifting trend will continue over the years to come. However, there are several things we should attach importance to. First, individuals may (建议1：个人角度). And (建议2：机构角度). Most importantly, the authorities concerned should (建议3：政府角度). Looking ahead, I am convinced/confident that as long as we take a sensible and responsible approach towards this issue, we will (展望未来).3.针对不良现象的措施。

( 76 words)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that if we remain blind to these problems which will do great harm to our society/daily lives, we would suffer very serious consequences. Therefore, it is time something was done to cure the problem/put an end to this practice/phenomenon. First, effective law should be made and enforced to punish those who…/prevent … More importantly, sound education should be popularized to enhance the public awareness of the harmfulness/necessity of V-ing. Only in this way can we (展望未来).作文通用素材原因篇与金钱有关的原因：--With the improved living standard as a result of economic development over the past decade in Chinese mainland, growing numbers of Chinese people can afford to …-- As more and more Chinese people have achieved prosperity, they are no longer content to live the way they used to live / not satisfied with “feeding themselves”. -- With more money in their pockets, they are not satisfied with goods or services with low price but low quality. Instead, they seek to enjoy quality life.--Because of the hit of the economic recession, many people find they cannot afford to …--During the recent financial crisis, people tend to tighten their belts and give importance to saving money.-- Many people have to give up their old habit/mode of consumption. As a result, they become more careful with spending. They come to realize that a penny saved is a penny earned.-- Even middle class people feel obliged to budget their money/ spending very carefully. They find it necessary to cut down on any unnecessary expenses/costs.与科技有关的原因：--With the advances in science and technology, there is/has been a higher level of research and development of new products. And this results in new products coming out faster and faster.--The advances in medicine has enabled people to cure some serious diseases which were incurable in the past.--Innovation in technology has brought about various improved versions of digital products.--The rapid technological advances cut down the amount of time used in household chores. As a result, people have more leisure time.与观念有关的原因：--People’s perception and conception of (consumption/thrift/money) is changing significantly.--More and more businesses and companies no longer see profit as their sole goal in the operation of business.与宣传有关的原因：--Businesses and companies make greater effort/ invest greater resources to launch ad campaigns about …--The media are willing to give plenty of publicity to …--Many people are more likely to be influenced by advertisements in various与教育有关的原因：--Parents don’t focus on test grades. Instead, they have come to realize the importanceof all-round development in the child.--Some parents are worried that (part-time jobs) may reduce their children’s amount of study time.--Many parents take grades very seriously. In their eyes, nothing is more important than a good score on test.--Many parents fail to see the necessity of encouraging children to participate in various activities outside of classrooms.--Quality education is more and more popular, such as encouraging students to remain independent / to think for themselves.--Young workers find it is increasingly necessary for them to “refuel themselves”(充电)与职场有关的原因：--Many workers find they are always under great pressure—pressure to get promoted, pressure to get ahead of others, pressure to buy the best thing, pressure to send kids to the best school, etc.--Many staff members find office politics a double-edged sword.与道德有关的原因：--Many people have a feeling that there is a decline in moral values.--In the wave of commercialization, many people get lost and become money-oriented/conscious.--In some people’s eyes, some qualities/ virtues h ave been out of style/date.后果和影响--Urban construction brings about a damaging impact on historical sites.--If no effective remedy were introduced, it would become difficult for people to live a safe and comfortable life.--If the situation continues, nature will lose its balance in the long run--More and more natural resources are occupied by humans, which threatens existence of wild species．--Those substances will spread to soil, water as well as air, making lands used to bury or compile e-waste completely barren and desolate.--Deforestation has caused huge environmental losses.--Buildings of poor quality are putting people’s lives at risk.--Unfair recruitment deprives capable people without privileged background of the chance to get great career opportunities.--Blind pursuit of stars will distract students from study.--Rounding up wild animals will break the ecological balance.--The increasingly serious food quality problem will endanger social stability and safety.--Greediness for wealth will poison social atmosphere.--Lack of face-to-face communication will hamper /undermine /impair the development of interpersonal relationship.--Lacking honesty does harm to a company’s healthy growth and makes it unable to survive in the competitive society.--Any attempt to evade responsibility will make it impossible to effectively solve existing problems.解决措施--It is high time to ban smoking from all public places. No one has any right to damage or hurt other people--Shoppers should be urged to recycle their Christmas cards as part of a campaign to help reduce carbon emissions.--Hopefully, through students’ participation, better school atmosphere can be created.--It is suggested that the plan be sufficiently flexible, to allow for possible changes.--It is beneficial to persuade shoppers to bring their own reusable bags with them on shopping trips．--The radical solution is to reconstruct the atmosphere of emphasizing honesty.--The officers should offer effective supervision and impose harsh punishment on those who pollute scenic spots.--Necessary laws and regulations should be adopted and enforced to protect aged peoples’ benefits.--Moral education should be promoted and laws and regulations should be tightened to ensure that young people fully take responsibility towards parents.--The department concerned should strengthen the management of producing procedure.--We should make a reform on current methods of creating superstars.--People should regulate their own behaviors and prevent others’ im proper conducts. --The aged people should be encouraged to fight against mistreatment by using the legal weapons.--People should be educated to realize the value of a trust-worthy economic and social environment and voluntarily protect it.--Tour guides should be encouraged to expand income channels to avoid only depending on tourists’ purchases for their revenue.--The admiration should be controlled within a reasonable range with effective measures.。