贵州省遵义县2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达品析(4)

贵州遵义县2016高考英语书面表达二轮品析（4）书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华。

为了加强大家的消防安全童识，你校邀请消防员在学校大厅举行了安全知识讲座。

请给美国朋友彼得写一封信，简述活动情况以及你的感受。

要点如下：1.活动时间：上周三下午3点；2.讲座内容（典型火灾案例，如何火灾自救，提问互动等）；3.你的感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,I’m writing to tel l you something about the lecture held in our school.作文参考范文Dear Peter,I’m writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school.In order to arouse our safety awareness, our school invited a fireman to give us a lecture on fire safety. It was held at our lecture hall at 3 p.m. last Wednesday.First of all, some videos about fire accidents were shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman told us how to react in case a fire should occur. Finally, a Q&A session was arranged to answer the related questions and help us get a better understanding of fire safety.Thanks to the lecture, I’ve learned how fast a fire can grow and what littletime we may have to react. So destructive is a fire that each of us should be cautious in our daily life to prevent it from happening.yours,第二节书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华。

你的好友John给你发来电子邮件说他最近刚去了美国一所中学学习，但对那里的生活很不习惯，为此他感到非常苦恼。

请你给他回一封电子邮件，提几点建议。

内容要点：1. 尊重当地风俗习惯，积极融入当地人生活；2. 主动和美国学生交流，和他们交朋友；3. 和朋友们一起参加户外运动；4. 注意自己的言行举止，和朋友坦诚相处。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语意通顺；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John，I’m really glad to hear from you and know how you are getting along._____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________Keep in touch.YoursLi Hua第二节书面表达One possible version:Dear John，I’m really glad heart from you and know how you are getting along. I think itis common for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some advice for you.First of all, you should respect local customs and try to involve yourself inthe lives of the locals. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romansdo.” Secondly, don’t forget to communicate with American students and make friendswith them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What’s more, i t is better for youto take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and havefun. Last but not the least, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest whengetting along with your friends.I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there.Keep in touch.Yours Li Hua第二节书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友Tom的来信。

他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。

请你根据下面的提示用英语写一封回信，介绍你校的做法并发表你的看法或建议。

学校已采取的措施你的看法或建议1. 各方面安全教育，增强安全意识: 如食品、交通…2. 安全监督：如与家长及时沟通，…3. 保安人员管理：如增加保安人员数量, 明确职责…4. 对外来人员：来访出示证件、登记等…………注意：(1) 信的开头、结尾已给出、不计入总词数。

(2) 词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：安全意识 awareness of safety 登记register(vi.) 保安 security guardDear Tom,I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.____________________________________________________________________________We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.Yours,Li Hua 第二节书面表达Dear Tom,I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.So far many measures have been taken to ensure the students’ security in and out of our school. The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized several school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety about food, traffic and so on. By communicating with parents often and in time, our school can supervise and ensure our safety. Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty. Stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. The students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. For example, once we smell something unusual, we should report it to the school guard immediately. In my view, our school has been doing pretty well and we are looking forward to more effective measures.We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment. Yours,Li Hua（2014新课标I）假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。

下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation【考点】考察应用文（书信）写作【写作指导】本文属于应用文中的书信，李华写信给英国的一个培训中心询问暑假培训的详细内容。

使用第一人称和将来时为主的时态。

要点：1.你计划去英国学习英语；2.看见了对方的广告，引起你的注意。

想询问具体信息。

3.该校培训班的开始日期，班级规模，周课时，费用以及食宿方式。

4.期待对方的回信。

写作时要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句等高级句式。