2018年6月的浙江读后续写题浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文

合集下载

指向思维品质提升的读后续写教学——以2018年6月浙江省高考英语作文为例

指向思维品质提升的读后续写教学——以2018年6月浙江省高考英语作文为例

指向思维品质提升的读后续写教学——以2018年6月浙江省高考英语作文为例概述:作为一名中学英语教师,我一直致力于提升学生的思维品质和写作能力。

2018年6月浙江省高考英语作文,题目为“绿色上网”,以此为例,我将介绍一种有效的教学方法——读后续写教学,来能够帮助学生在提升阅读理解的同时,提高思维品质和写作技巧。

一、什么是读后续写教学?读后续写教学是一种以阅读为基础的写作教学模式,要求学生在阅读一篇文章之后,根据作者的提示和引导,续写一个或多个段落来完成全文。

二、为何选择读后续写教学?读后续写教学能够锻炼学生的思维能力和创造力,培养他们的逻辑思维和表达能力。

通过这样的教学模式,学生需要理解原文的意思,提取关键信息,寻找逻辑关系,并将其转化为自己的语言表达。

这对于培养学生的阅读理解能力和写作能力非常有效。

三、如何实施读后续写教学?1.选取合适的阅读文章:根据教学要求,选择一篇主题相关、适合读后续写的文章,文章越贴近学生的生活实际,学生就越容易产生对话和互动的兴趣。

2.教师示范解读:首先,教师应当示范解读原文,帮助学生理解文章内容和结构,提取关键信息。

这一步骤很重要,可以帮助学生掌握文章的主题和要点。

3.授予指导性问题:教师应当提出一些指导性的问题,引导学生进行思考和讨论,例如:“你认为绿色上网有什么重要意义?”,“你是否认同作者的观点?”等等。

这些问题可以激发学生的思维,帮助他们深化理解。

4.续写训练:学生在对原文理解的基础上,根据教师的引导,开始进行续写训练。

教师可以提供一些续写的提示或写作框架,比如:“请你续写一个段落,阐述自己对绿色上网的看法和理解。

”此时,学生应根据提示开始写作,可以自由发挥,也可以结合个人观点。

5.互相交流和评价:学生完成续写后,可以互相交流和评价,分享自己的看法和写作经验。

同时,教师也可以在这一过程中进行及时的反馈和指导,提供更多的写作技巧和建议。

四、读后续写教学的好处:1.激发学生学习英语的兴趣:通过读后续写,学生可以参与到写作的过程中,积极思考和表达自己的观点,从而增加对英语学习的兴趣。

2018年度6月浙江高等考试读后续写分析(父子骑马野外迷失)

2018年度6月浙江高等考试读后续写分析(父子骑马野外迷失)

His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
Sth. were out of sight. 4. 看见什么 We caught sight of sth.
Sth came into sight/view. 5. 策马前进 urge the horse on with a whip

2018年6月高考英语浙江卷读后续写真题解析及范文赏析(度假骑马迷路)

2018年6月高考英语浙江卷读后续写真题解析及范文赏析(度假骑马迷路)
读后续写真题
2018年6月浙江卷:度假骑马迷路
CONTENTS
目 录
1 试题再现 2 试题分析 3 写作思路 4 范文赏析
01 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 2018 试题再现
试题再现
读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读阅下读面下材面料短,根文据,其根内据容所和给所情给段节落进开行头续语写续,写使两之段,构使成之一构个成完一整篇的完析 2018 试题分析
原文分析
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the
chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃
03 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 2018 写作思路
理解材料
高中英语写作 新题型
阅读回下面答材下料面,几根个据其问内题容,和检所测给段一落下开你头是语否续读写两懂段了,原使材之料构成。一篇完整的短文。

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)(function() {var s = "_" + Math.random().toString(36).slice(2);document.write('');(window.slotbydup = window.slotbydup || []).push({id: "u3686515",container: s});})();2018年6月读后续写题型再次出现在浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节,该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

下面让我们一起来分析一下本次高考读后续写试题。

一给定材料和题目要求It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul,my dad’s friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn onmy farm,” he said. After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年6月浙江卷读后续写

2018年6月浙江卷读后续写

2018年浙江卷6月应用文作文及读后续写范文Dear sir,Hearing that you are hunting for some volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students, I am writing to apply for this position.I think I am qualified for this job and can be a suitable volunteer you need. First and foremost, I am a dedicated and enthusiastic person, always willing to help others. Secondly, Equipped with a good knowledge of oral English, I have no barrier in communicating with people. I have once won the first prize in the oral English contest in my school. What is most important is that I have worked as an interpreter in a foreign fund company, which has given me some work experience.I do believe, through this voluntary work, it will not only help me accumulate some social experience but also broaden my horizons.听说你们在招募志愿者去欢迎即将到来的外国学生,我写信申请这个职位。

我想我能胜任这份工作,也能成为你需要的合适的志愿者。

2018年_2018年浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

2018年_2018年浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

2016.9 浙江高考:One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江新高考英语读后续写指导与训练5-a vacation never before

浙江新高考英语读后续写指导与训练5-a vacation never before
2. According to the given sentence of Para.2(We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way ), what should be mentioned at the end of Para.1? We found that we got lost and felt worried.
Para.1 1. I was so frightened that I tried to stop the horse. 2. We found that we got lost and felt worried.
Para.2 3. I tried to find our way back to the farm house.
What did I do then? What did Dad say to me? What did Dad do then? How did they find their way back?
We returned safe and sound and I had a different vacation like never before …
训练5
【2018年6月浙江高考真题】
A Vacation Like Never Before
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

2018浙江新高考之读后续写continuation writing

2018浙江新高考之读后续写continuation writing
family affections; love from the daughter; to be remembered to be connected
3. Myra, the daughter (Para.2-3 ) Judging from the information in Para. 2-3 about Myra, what kind of person was Myra?
3. A question to ponder: “How to treat our parents”
“Listen to your father, who gave you life, and do not look down upon your mother when she is old.” Bible Proverbs 23:22
logic
+
creativity
Would Myra please her mother or let her down? They say….Everyone …kind…her daughter...? …rare occasions… …seldom… …a medal… … best clothes… excited… …Mrs. Morrison… Mrs. Grant… Johnnie... … slipper…cardigan…lamp…
Key words: rare occasions seldom wrote busy a medal for the aged
1. others
2. The old lady
3. Myra
Puzzle: Would Myra please her mother or let her down?
  1. 1、下载文档前请自行甄别文档内容的完整性,平台不提供额外的编辑、内容补充、找答案等附加服务。
  2. 2、"仅部分预览"的文档,不可在线预览部分如存在完整性等问题,可反馈申请退款(可完整预览的文档不适用该条件!)。
  3. 3、如文档侵犯您的权益,请联系客服反馈,我们会尽快为您处理(人工客服工作时间:9:00-18:30)。

2018年6月浙江省英语高考写作试题第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountain. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “an d keep tothe track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” My dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create amagic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右;2.至少使用5个短语中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文第一篇Cherie 老师Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!第二篇:Katie 老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly, “Dad! Look!” Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from the track Uncle Paul warned us tokeep. (86 words)We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm. (114 words)第三篇:Oz老师Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initial track Uncle Paul has warned us to keep. My dad held the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didn’t work.Our cowboy hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away leaving me and my dad lying on the ground.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the back. “We get lost, right?” I asked my dad, “Yes. But don’t worry, we’ll find the way back home.” We slowly walked towards the luminous direction.“I guess we’re late for supper.” Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad tried to make me laugh. At that time, we saw the river in front of us. “Dad, this is the river next to our farm house. We can follow the river to find our way home.”“Exactly! How clever you are!” Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came intoour sight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.第四篇:Niehai 老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It got such a fright that it rushed at a high speed. I, frightened too, grabbed the rein tightly. Minutes later, the horse was off the track and I found that there was no sign of my dad. In the middle of nowhere, I felt a wave of fear wrap around me .Worse still, the rain came pouring down and I was wet through. After seemingly long hours, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response , I shouted in a loud voice."Dad, I’m here!" Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me and we got reunited.(完)。

相关文档
最新文档