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英语四级范文解析英语四级成绩分析

英语四级范文解析英语四级成绩分析

英语四级范文解析英语四级成绩分析听力:249,这个分很不错了,但是六级听力很难得,一般都只能拿130-180,要好好加强下阅读:249,这个分有些差,我四级阅读是242,六级一般阅读分都是210-145的综合:70,56分已经不错了,如果六级还能拿到50多,就是高分了写作:142,91有些低了,加强一下都能拿100多的好了。

祝六级好运了,不要怕,你这成绩拿520分应该行的一、“功能段落”突破CET写作。

“To be or not to be: that is a question.”莎士比亚如是说。

冲刺阶段,背模板还是不背?我的答案:背,但绝不是盲目的背。

整篇背诵模板不是最有效的方法,因为模板的写作思路是固定的,然而很多时候试题的命题思路可能与所背模板思路不同。

因此,可能导致“所背非所考”,甚至导致文不对题,生搬硬套。

但是,无论英语四六级写作话题如何变化,一般都对应三个或两个汉语提纲。

只要按提纲要求去写相应的内容段落,就做到了紧扣主题。

历年写作提纲可以总结为六种功能段落:现象描述、危害分析(弊)、原因分析、建议措施、观点阐述(观点的本质为利弊:支持方观点等于分析“利”,反方观点等于分析“弊”)、意义阐述(利)。

下面,本人结合近年真题展示功能段落内容:xx-06:Online Shopping1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题3.我的建议解析:本次英语四级对应四个段落分别是:现象、观点(利、弊)和建议。

该类作文可以被称之为:观点对比型作文,对比的内容重点在利弊分析上。

xx-12:How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……解析:该题目只有两个提纲:现象和建议,可以添加一个功能段落:原因。

这样这篇作文就是“三段论”的形式:提出问题(负面现象描述)、分析问题(原因)、建议措施段。

英语四级作文范文及解析

英语四级作文范文及解析

英语四级作文范文及解析Title: The Impact of Technology on Education。

In recent years, technology has profoundly transformed the landscape of education, revolutionizing how students learn and teachers teach. This essay will explore the various ways in which technology has impacted education and analyze its advantages and disadvantages.Firstly, one of the most significant benefits of technology in education is its ability to enhance access to information. The internet has become a vast repository of knowledge, allowing students to access a wealth of resources at their fingertips. With online libraries, academic databases, and educational websites, students can conduct research and study materials beyond the limitations of traditional textbooks.Moreover, technology has revolutionized the way lessons are delivered and classroom interactions occur. Interactivewhiteboards, educational software, and multimedia presentations have made learning more engaging and dynamic. Teachers can incorporate videos, simulations, andinteractive activities into their lessons, catering to different learning styles and fostering student engagement.Furthermore, technology has facilitated personalized learning experiences. Adaptive learning platforms use algorithms to analyze students' learning patterns and adapt the content and pace accordingly. This personalized approach ensures that students receive tailored instruction, addressing their individual strengths and weaknesses.Additionally, technology has expanded the horizons of education beyond the confines of the classroom. Online courses and distance learning programs have made education more accessible to learners worldwide. Students can now pursue degrees and certifications from prestigious institutions without geographical constraints, opening up opportunities for lifelong learning and professional development.However, despite its numerous benefits, technology in education also poses certain challenges. One of the primary concerns is the digital divide, wherein students from disadvantaged backgrounds may lack access to the necessary technology and internet connectivity. This disparity can exacerbate existing inequalities in education, widening the gap between privileged and underprivileged students.Moreover, there are concerns about the overreliance on technology and its potential to diminish critical thinking and interpersonal skills. As students become increasingly dependent on digital devices for learning, there is a risk of neglecting essential skills such as problem-solving, collaboration, and communication.Furthermore, the rapid pace of technological advancements poses challenges for educators in terms of keeping up with new tools and trends. Teachers require ongoing training and professional development toeffectively integrate technology into their classrooms and maximize its benefits.In conclusion, technology has undeniably transformed education, offering opportunities for enhanced learning experiences and expanded access to knowledge. However, its implementation must be accompanied by efforts to address issues such as the digital divide and ensure that students develop essential skills beyond technological proficiency. By leveraging technology thoughtfully and inclusively, we can harness its full potential to create a more equitable and effective education system.。

2023年6月全国大学英语CET四级真题和答案解析(第二套)

2023年6月全国大学英语CET四级真题和答案解析(第二套)

2023年6月全国大学英语CET四级真题和答案解析(第二套)一、听力部分Section A1. 答案:B解析:根据对话,可以得知购物者向售货员咨询特价食品的价格。

2. 答案:C解析:女士询问男士是否去过广州,男士回答他正在那里工作。

3. 答案:A解析:对话中,男士提到他计划去参观一个建筑展览,女士则建议他去参观科技博物馆。

Section B4. 答案:A解析:女士在婚礼上生病,男士主动提出帮忙送晚礼服。

5. 答案:B解析:女士正在找工作,男士就女士关于工作的问题给出建议。

6. 答案:C解析:对话中,男士询问女士是否对比赛感到紧张,女士回答说她很兴奋。

Section C7. 答案:B解析:讲座中提到,人们使用社交媒体来建立和维护社交关系。

8. 答案:A解析:讲座中提到,过多地依赖社交媒体可能导致孤立和焦虑。

9. 答案:C解析:讲座中的例子表明,人们可能会在社交媒体上展示过度的积极情绪或幸福生活。

Section D10. 答案:D解析:广告说明了新产品的特点和价格,最后提到消费者可以在网上购买。

11. 答案:A解析:广告中提到,购买新产品的消费者可以获得额外的现金返还。

12. 答案:B解析:广告提到消费者可以在购买新产品时享受特别优惠价。

二、阅读部分Passage 113. 答案:C解析:根据文章第一段,大量研究表明,阅读对个人的心理健康有益。

14. 答案:A解析:根据文章第二段,阅读可以帮助人们减轻压力和放松大脑。

15. 答案:B解析:根据文章第四段,阅读可以帮助人们学习新的事物和扩展知识。

Passage 216. 答案:C解析:根据文章第一段,当地政府已经发起了一项计划,将现有的溪流修复为自然生态景观。

17. 答案:A解析:根据文章第二段,溪流的修复不仅可以改善水质,还能提供更多的自然资源。

18. 答案:D解析:根据文章最后一段,修复的溪流有望吸引更多的游客,促进当地经济发展。

Passage 319. 答案:B解析:根据文章第一段,数字支付正在变得越来越普遍,并在全球范围内快速增长。

新东方大学英语四级答案及解析

新东方大学英语四级答案及解析

新东方大学英语四级答案及解析第一部分写作【文章解析】第一段:简要描述图画内容;第二段:可以指出这幅图画所反映的问题(过度使用手机社交媒体)及造成的影响,或者第二段也可以分析此问题出现的原因有哪些;第三段:解决问题,并总结归纳,展望未来(如何正确合理使用手机社交媒体)。

【参考范文】Overreliance on One’s Mobile PhoneThe picture vividly illustrates a funny dialogue between a boy student and his math teacher. The boy is required to come up with the result of the equation on the blackboard. Instead of working it out on his own, he chooses to turn to the relative math app on his mobile phone.It’s widely acknowledged that students’ overreliance on mobile phones does much harm to their study. Firstly, it takes the place of students’ brainpower, undermining students’ thinking ability. Secondly, it corrupts students’ interest in the process of working out a problem by himself, leading them to the point that they show little enthusiasm in acquiring new knowledge. Finally, it makes students lose their competitiveness in the real world, unable to compete with students who really learn many skills by thinking, reasoning and most importantly by interacting with their teachers and peers.No doubt, overusing mobile phones should be limited in particular in the process teaching and learning in classroom. Only by systematic training of their brain and constant practice by themselves can they accomplish maturity and obtain skills necessary for success in their future life.第二部分听力理解【答案速查】【1-5】 D C A B C【6-10】 D C A D A【11-12】 C C B A C【16-20】 A B C C D【21-25】 C C A A B【26】vital 【27】battle 【28】divert 【29】usage 【30】devices【31】phenomenon 【32】community 【33】electronic 【34】similarly 【35】be beneficial for【听力原文】Section A【1】M: Father’s Day is around the corner and I’m thinking of buying a present for my dad. Any idea? I heard could get wonderful things by visiting online shopping websites.W: Yes, that’s true. If you check on some websites, there’ll be a top ten list of popular products. Then you’ll find one gift for your father.Q: What does the woman want the man to do?【2】M: What would you like for dinner? I think I’ll have rice and some vegetables. What about you?W: Don’t care about me. Just go ahead. I’m not hungry for the time being. I need to have a rest after so exhausting a busy day at work.Q: What will the woman most probably do?【3】M: The young man must have stolen something from that grocery store. See, he’s detained and being questioned by the security guard.W: Not really. He was buying something present in the store when the robbing happened.Q: What do we learn about the young man?【4】W: My head aches after staring at the computer screen for so long. I just can’t keep going with my term paper.
M: Do have a rest before continuing with your work. Otherwise, you may have problems with your health before you finish your assignments.
Q: What do we learn about the woman from the conversation?【5】M: How about going to a meal tonight with me, Janet? Then we can discuss how to get money for a new car.W: Ok, no problem. Our car is beyond repair. Let’s get one as soon as possible.Q: What did Janet mean?【6】W: We have to admit that social media is of much necessity. But there’re some problems with its use among the average people.
M: Of course. People are just busy using those social media websites. They haven’t realized that they’ve already wasted much time on them.Q: What does the man mean?【7】W: Hi, Mr. Pond, I am so sorry that I fail to finish typing your business letter on time. I mess up your appointment with our business partners. M: Never mind. The appointment has been postponed to the next week. You have plenty of time to get it done. I’m just about to tell you the news. Q: What’s the relationship between the two speakers?【8】W: Mark has been taking six courses this term, but it seems he couldn’t handle them well. He failed four of them in midterm exams.
M: Really? He deserves it. He would fare well if he hadn’t spent so much time playing online games.
Q: What does the man mean?Conversation OneM: You know, I’m always a fan of pop music, and I enjoy singing. The best travel experience in my life is also related to music and singing.W: Tell me fast. What’s it all about?M: That’s two years ago when I made a trip down to New York to participate in one of music competition.W: Wow, that sounds interesting. As a student in college, it’ll be a brilliant chapter in your life.M: I know, but it took much for me to make it there. In fact, I borrowed money from my friend to buy a plane ticket to get there. I felt uncomfortable with borrowing money from others.
W: I can imagine, owing a debt is not a good thing. But, anyway, you finally get to New York.M: Definitely. The competition was wonderful. All the participants enjoyed the competition. All the judges chose only the good comments on the performance of each singer.W: You must have got much encouragement from them to go on with your singing in the future.M: Absolutely. The judges are very encouraging. But the most enjoyable and exciting part of my trip there is that I made a lot of new friends who share the same hobby of singing with me.W: That’s really an unforgettable experience for you.Questions 9 to 11 are based on the conversation you have just heard.【9】Why did the man leave for New York two years ago?【10】How did the judges respond to the performance of the participants?【11】What impressed the man most during his experience in New York?Conversation TwoW: Here we have Professor Charles Binley with us today. He’s an expert on recruiting and hiring. My first question, Prof. Binley, what is the most frequent error job applicants make during a job interview?M: I’ve been in this field for many years. And I know deep in my heart that job interviews are very stressful to every applicant. However, the first error they tend to make is that they easily get too personal during a job interview.W: Too personal? You mean, they have wrong understanding of the dress code for a job interview?M: No. That means that they talk too much about their personal life stories. You know what, that’ll make the interviewers worry about whether they can keep job-related information in secret in their future job. So, my advice is that, they should avoid voluntarily offering too much personal information, just focusing on job-related topics.W: Good advice. Focus on job-related topics. Other common errors, Professor?M: The second common error is that many interviewees fail to research the company beforehand. Maybe, they’re busy taking part in one job interview after another. There’s no time for them to get enough information about the desired posts. The result is, they don’t know even the basic information about the company. I doubt that any employer prefer someone who knows nothing about what the company is all about.W: Actually, it’s easy for one to do this in this Internet age. One can get tons of information on the web. Isn’t it?M: Yes, it’s simple. But, for every applicant, it’s on the top of a must-to-do list. The last common error I want to expand on is that some applicants are passive in responding to the interviewers’ questions. That’ll make a negative impression on the interviewers. In the deep of their mind, you’ll be regarded as a passive employee in future.Questions 12 to 15 are based on the conversation you have just heard.【12】What’s the first common error made by job interviewees?【13】When you find your intended post in a company, what’re you expected to do?【14】What’s the result of being passive in responding to questions during a job interview?【15】What is mainly talked about by the two speakers?Section BPassage OneMy native land, Denmark, is a poetical land, full of popular traditions, old songs, and an eventful history, which has become bound up with that of Sweden and Norway. The Danish islands are possessed of beautiful woods, and corn fields: they resemble gardens on a great scale. Upon one of these green islands, Funen, stands Odense, the place of my birth. Odense is called after the pagan god Odin, who, as tradition states, lived here: this place is the capital of the province, and lies twenty-two Danish miles from Copenhagen.In the year 1805 there lived here, in a small mean room, a young married couple, who were extremely attached to each other; he was a shoemaker, scarcely twenty-two years old, a man of a richly gifted and truly poetical mind. His wife was ignorant of life and of the world, but possessed a heart full of love.On the second of April, 1805, a living and weeping child was born, and that was me myself, Hans Christian Andersen. During the first day of my existence my father is said to have sat by the bed, but I cried all the time. “Will you go to sleep, or lie there quietly?” it is reported that my father asked in joke. But, I still cried on. And even in the church, when I was taken to be baptized, I cried so loudly that the preacher, who was a passionate man, said, “The young one screams like a cat!” which words my mother never forgot.Questions 16 to 18 are based on the passage you have just heard.【16】How does the speaker’s hometown get its name?【17】What’s the speaker’s father’s profession?【18】What happened when Hans Anderson was baptized in the church?Passage TwoIn the 1960’s, women engaged 41 hours per week in total unpaid work, such as housework, childcare, family, and other duties, while men did 11 hours per week of total unpaid work. For women, 32 hours of this was dedicated solely to in-home work, while men contributed 4 hours a week solely to in-home work. By the year 2000, women had decreased their housework to 19 hours a week, while men increased their housework to 10 hours a week.However, women still logged 42 hours a week in unpaid labor compared to men’s 21 hours per week of unpaid labor. Interestingly, women may not resent this imbalance when they enjoy the work, and when they and their husbands feel they are especially competent at it. Some researchers do cite past research indicating that this imbalance is likely to be seen as acceptable, but much more of an imbalance is likely to be seen by one of the partners as unfair. After all, the woman performs more than 66% or the man performs more than 36%.The imbalance may be in part “real,” but also in part the result of rating differences. While men and women agree that the man does less housework in their home, wives rate their husbands as contributing 33% to the total housework, while husbands rate themselves as contributing 42%. Differences in ratings depend on who reports the housework, husband for both, wife for both, or husband and wife individually report their own housework, and what home activities are considered “housework”.Questions 19 to 21 are based on the passage you have just heard.【19】In the 1960s, how many hours did a woman spend on household chores?【20】Why does some woman love doing more housework than men?【21】What results in the differences in rating men’s and women’s share in doing housework?Passage ThreeA 31-year-old financial analyst from Queens fainted in front of an oncoming subway train. She survived but woke up to a whole new reality. “I opened my eyes and it was dark. And I thought I got home and I was waking up from a dream or something,” said Teena Katz, a subway accident victim.It wasn’t a dream. Teena Katz wasn’t home. And somehow, she wasn’t in pain. She was awake, alert, and crushed beneath a No. 7 subway train that broke both her legs.“I looked down and I saw that there was a big cut in my leg and an opening. And immediately I told whoever was speaking to me that I saw it but I wasn’t going to stare at it because I didn’t want to go into shock,” Katz said. That person was a doctor who was shocked to hear the 31-year-old financial analyst apologizing for delaying the train. Katz arrived back home Tuesday after a dozen surgeries and more than two-months in the hospital.Before the accident, her life was filled with activities like softball games, jogging, badminton. Now she faces a future of physical therapy, and necessary medical treatment. Even the mental hurdles are equally difficult to overcome.“I was also very independent. To now need help from someone for everything, is very hard for me,” Katz said. Questions 22 to 25 are based on the passage you have just heard.【22】What happened to Teena Katz?【23】What was Teena’s reaction to her wound in her leg?【24】What did Teena say to the doctor who was tending her?【25】How’s Teena’s life now?Section CThe whole world is accepting and adopting the ways towards the advancement of mobile technology. The youth is playing a 26. vital role in this. Our youth is concentrating on some bad choices and are not able to 27. battle the crisis of mobile phone abuse. Our youth are attracted to 28. divert their attention towards the internet and they are influenced and changed a lot by the 29. usage of internet. A few of them tend to use the internet or mobile 30. devices for knowledge, information, awareness and exposure but the majority of them appear to have misused the internet or mobile phones.The using of the mobile phones by young people has been a global 31. phenomenon in recent years. It is now a key part of young peoples’ daily lives, and on student 32. community it is more than a mobile phone alone. And a mobile phone is for the majority, the most popular form of 33. electronic communication. In fact, the mobile phone has turned from a technological tool to a social tool.Young people use the mobile phone in positive ways to organise and maintain their social networks. However, there are also negative impacts on young peoples’ peer relationships. 34. Similarly, the mobile phone has lead to changed atmosphere in the family, with issues of safety from a parental perspective. While functional coordination can 35. be beneficial for the family, other problems can arise such as financial difficulties, and over reliance on the mobile phone.【答案解析】1.【答案】D【分析】根据对话中女士说“If you check on some websites,… Then you’ll find one gift for your father”得出答案是C。

英语专业四级写作范文赏析

英语专业四级写作范文赏析

英语专业四级写作范文赏析英语专业四级写作范文的赏析可以帮助我们更好地理解和应用各种写作技巧和表达方法。

本文将通过对一篇英语专业四级写作范文的详细分析,帮助读者更好地掌握英语写作技巧。

(首段)介绍文章主题和背景本文所要赏析的英语专业四级写作范文是关于大学生选课问题的。

选课对于大学生来说是一个重要的决策,直接关系到他们的学业发展和未来职业规划。

本文将通过对这篇写作范文的分析,探讨其中的观点和写作技巧,以期提高读者的写作能力。

(正文一)观点阐述与论证文章首先针对选课问题提出了作者的观点:大学生在选课时应该注重实用性和个人兴趣。

紧接着,作者通过列举实际案例和数据来支持自己的观点。

例如,作者提到了一位同学在选课中因为追求高分而忽视了自己的个人兴趣,并陷入了学习的枯燥乏味中。

作者还通过引用调查数据显示,大部分大学生对于选课更看重的是实用性和个人兴趣,这进一步加强了作者的论证力度。

(正文二)方法分析与比较随后,作者在文章中提出了一些可供大学生选课的方法,并进行了详细的分析与比较。

作者首先推荐了参加课程展示会和听取学长学姐的建议,以获取更多关于课程的信息。

其次,作者提出了选择多样化的课程来拓宽自己的知识面和技能,同时提醒学生根据自己的能力和兴趣来选择适合自己的课程。

作者还特别强调了大学生在选课时需要制定合理的学习计划,以确保自己能够充分消化并掌握所学的知识。

(正文三)写作技巧分析在整个文章的撰写过程中,作者运用了许多写作技巧来增强文章的可读性和说服力。

首先,作者采用了个例法和数据论证相结合的方式,使得文章的论据更加可信。

其次,作者运用了排比和对比的手法,使得文章的逻辑关系更加清晰,并增强了文章的表达力。

此外,作者还使用了一些形象生动的词语和句子,使得文章更具吸引力和感染力。

(结尾段)总结观点并展望未来在文章的结尾部分,作者对整篇文章进行了总结,并进一步展望了大学生选课问题的未来发展。

作者再次强调了实用性和个人兴趣在选课中的重要性,并鼓励大学生们在选课时要对自己的兴趣保持敏感,同时注重对学科前沿的关注和学习。

2023年12月大学英语四级作文真题及解析(完整版)

2023年12月大学英语四级作文真题及解析(完整版)

2023年12月大学英语四级作文真题及解析〔完好版〕2023年12月大学英语四级作文真题及解析〔完好版〕2023年12月大学英语四级考试已经完毕。

针对本次的四级作文话题“听比说重要”,今年的话题贴近生活,难度一般,方便同学们考场上展开阐述。

下面,我们给大家提供一篇参考范文,供参考。

As we all known, talking and listening are monly used in munication, but how can you talk without listening to others? Good conversation skills include much more than simply talking to others, listening is also a necessary quality of a successful person.I firmly believe that listening is of greater significance than talking. For one thing, If you can not listen correctly, you can not talk properly. Just imagine a world where everyone keep talking but nobody listening, it's useless to say anything then. For another, if you want to make achievement in socialsettings, relationships and business, one way to ensure your success is to be a great listener.2023年12月英语四级作文范文:活到老学到老2023年12月大学英语四级考试如期而至,今年四级作文题目之一是“活到老学到老”。

四级英语作文模板现象解释

四级英语作文模板现象解释

四级英语作文模板现象解释Title: The Phenomenon of Online Shopping。

With the rapid development of technology, online shopping has become a popular phenomenon in today's society. People can buy almost anything they want with just a few clicks on their computer or smartphone. This convenience has revolutionized the way people shop and has had a significant impact on the retail industry.There are several reasons why online shopping has become so popular. Firstly, it offers a wide range of products and services that are easily accessible to consumers. With the rise of e-commerce platforms such as Amazon, Alibaba, and eBay, people can now purchase items from all over the world without leaving their homes. This has opened up a whole new world of shopping possibilities for consumers.Secondly, online shopping provides convenience and flexibility. People can shop at any time of the day or night, without having to worry about store opening hours. This is particularly appealing to busy individuals who may not have the time to visit physical stores. Additionally, online shopping allows people to compare prices and read reviews before making a purchase, which can help them make informed decisions.Another reason for the popularity of online shopping is the availability of discounts and deals. Many online retailers offer special promotions and sales that are not available in physical stores. This can result in significant cost savings for consumers, making online shopping an attractive option for those looking to save money.Despite its many benefits, online shopping also has its drawbacks. One of the main concerns is the security of personal and financial information. There have been numerous cases of data breaches and identity theft, which has made some people hesitant to shop online. Additionally, there is the issue of counterfeit products and fraudulent sellers, which can lead to a negative shopping experience for consumers.Another downside of online shopping is the lack of physical interaction with products. Unlike in physical stores, people cannot touch, feel, or try on items beforemaking a purchase. This can lead to dissatisfaction if the product does not meet their expectations. Furthermore, the reliance on shipping and delivery can result in delays and potential issues with receiving the items.In conclusion, online shopping has become a prevalent phenomenon in today's society due to its convenience, accessibility, and cost-saving benefits. However, it also comes with challenges such as security concerns and the lack of physical interaction with products. As technology continues to advance, it is likely that online shopping will continue to evolve and shape the way people shop in the future. It is important for consumers to be aware of the potential risks and take precautions when engaging in online shopping.。

英语四级作文详细讲解

英语四级作文详细讲解

英语四级作文详细讲解"英文回答,"In the English CET-4 writing, it is important to pay attention to the structure and coherence of the essay. First, I would start with an introduction that clearly states my main idea or thesis. Then, I would use the body paragraphs to provide supporting evidence and examples to back up my thesis. Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Finally, I would end with a conclusion that summarizes the main points and restates the thesis.For example, if the prompt asks about the importance of learning a second language, I would start by introducing the topic and stating my opinion. In the body paragraphs, I would provide examples of how knowing a second language has helped me in my personal and professional life. I mighttalk about how learning Spanish helped me communicate with my colleagues from different countries at work, or howknowing French made my travel experience in France much more enjoyable. In the conclusion, I would reiterate the importance of learning a second language and encourage others to do the same."中文回答,"在英语四级写作中,重要的是要注意文章的结构和连贯性。

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Tips: 长短句结合,积累典型英语句式,克服母语干扰。 e.g. 常用英语句式
How to write well?
e.g. It is + 形容词/名词/被动+ that从句或to do
There be 句式
e.g. There are many people who agree to have a spoken English test.
There had never been any limitations to what Jimmy’s love could accomplish. (摘自新视野大学英语 Book 3 Unit1)
3. 内容:切题

How to write well?
语言
词汇:exact, specific, complexity
Tips:弃用e.g第. 重一要反:im应p词orta,nt,注sig意nif课ica本nt, 中ess出en现tial的, 一 些经典词汇走出。房然间后:cwr进uaclik行alo, u积intdo极ifspth词eensr汇oibolme知(识gen反era思l) : 如:同义词法 slip out of the room (小偷)
基本句型: •主谓:I succeed. •主谓宾:I like Caicai. •主系表:ZY is smart. •主谓双宾:Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary. •主谓宾宾补:Tulongdao makes many people selfish.
How to write well?
常用的开头段的表达方法
• 使用引语(use a quotation) • 引用具体或粗略的数据 (use figures or statistics) • 提出问题(ask a question) • 给出具体实例或报道(offer relevant examples or reports) • 定义法(give definition) • 主题句法(use of topic sentence)
1四级考试作文要求:
《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定:四级大学英语写作考 试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的 短文;写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方 面的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。 其命题方式有:给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续 写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题, 文理通顺,表达流畅,地道,语义连贯,逻辑性强。
How to write well?
强调句:
e.g. It’s …that/who…
倒装句:
e.g. scarcely, on no account ,hardly 置于句首引起部分倒装 only+ 状语引起半倒装 表语+ as/though&’t go anywhere without him. (摘自新视野大学英语 Book 3 Unit1-para1) No… is/are more…than…
How to write well?
How to write well?
How to write well?
其他常用句式:
被动句:
e.g. It can be noticed that… It’s suggested that… Sb. is highly expected to …
It is 句式:
How to write well?
段落写作: 遣词造句是短文写作的基础,写作教学是从遣词造句开始 的。但是为了布局谋篇的需要,还必须学会把句子连接成 段落。段落是文章的缩影,写好了段落,才可能写出极好 的文章。段落是由若干彼此关联的句子构成的,通常用来 表达一个中心思想或者从某个角度对文章的主题进行阐述。 因此段落不是一组句子的任意堆砌,应该遵循一定的段落 发展规律。非英语专业的学生应该了解一些结构完整的段 落的写法,掌握一些组句成段的基本知识,能够恰当地使 用指代、重复、过渡和连接词等语言手段使写作更连贯、 质量更高。
大学英语四级写作专题
菜单
• 概述 • 四级考试作文要求 • 四级考试作文判断标准 • 四级写作得高分技巧 • 四级作文解析
概述
• 一篇好文章需要在三个不同的层面上进行选择:单词,句 子和段落。同时,对文章字数和主题思想也有严格的要求。 在这些要素中,不管是横向上还是纵向上,主题都具有统 帅作用,而句子处于最核心的位置。构思一篇文章可以句 子为基本单位。单词是句子的微观构成而段落则是句子的 宏观走向。数量合理的句子可以保证文章所要求的字数, 而彼此关联的句子又使文章遵循了统一性和连贯性的基本 原则,有助于明确文章主题。用词准确,合乎句法,变化 多样,衔接灵活的句式安排被认为是衡量写作质量的重要 标准。(e.g. 四级作文可以安排成10-12个句子。)
• 考试题型 • 应用文:口头作文(e.g. 介绍)、书信作文 • 论说文:提纲作文、图表作文 • 段首句作文:
四级考试作文评判标准:
审题,根据写作要求,拟出提纲。 具体可以考虑以下因素: 1. 语言:表达通顺、无重大语言错误 2. 结构:逻辑性,连贯性
e.g.并列:and/or 因果:because/in that, since/as, fo 转折:but/however 关联词:
常用的开头段的表达方法
• ●使用引语(use a quotation) 使用一段名人名言,或人们常用的谚语、习语,以 确定文章的写作范围和方向。 如: “Great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity, but to make them.” Colton, a great writer once remarked. But it still has a profound significance now. To a person, in whose lifetime opportunities are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success. 分析:开头引用Colton的名言说明“创造机会”对 于成功的重要性,点明主题。
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