牛津译林版how to better your writing (共20张PPT)
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牛津译林版9A Unit1 Know yourself Reading课件(共20张PPT)
Su Ning
• 2. Why did she give up her last job? Because she is active and energetic. In her last job, she could only work with numbers day after day. That was boring and made her unhappy.
• 3. Read and translate the sentences into Chinese. "Life is like a race. You either take the lead or fall behind. I'm ready to take on new challenges any time."
Passage 1:
( T ) 1. Though Wu Wei talks less, he does better than others. He’s quiet and doesn’t like to talk much, but his work shouts! What does “shout” mean here?
Liu Hao
Name Job Personalities Details " A miss is as good as a afford to mile. We can't ______ make anymistakes ________," said Mr. Liu. So he paysattention _______ to all the_______. details So he always works to high standards ____________ So he is easy to work with.
牛津译林版9A Unit1 Know yourself Comic strip and welcome to the unit课件(共20张PPT)
T : I’m polite and helpful. I often help my friends with their work. S1: I’m kind. Everybody wants to play with me. S2 : I’ m humorous. I can tell funny jokes. S3 : … .
S1 : What is … like? S2 : … .
Listen to the conversation and answer:
1. What is Millie’s personality? 2. Can Paul make a good accountant? Why or why not? 3. What does Sandy’s art teacher say about Sandy? 4. what is David’s personality?
modest Daniel is very clever, but he is _________ and never show off .
patient Mr Wu is _________ enough to repeat grammar rules for us .
creative Samuel is _________. He often comes up with new ideas.
It says some people are generous. It makes them feel good to share things with others.
Yeah, I agree.
I’m generous.
Yes, you are.
Hobo, you’ve eaten up my breakfast.
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In addition, I have some advices for you. For example, you had better not cheat customers. Besides, you’d better check the products carefully before deliver them to customers. Your customer Li Hua
____________________. (conclusion)
Wording 1. Your shop will become more and more famous. Your shop will become increasingly famous. 2. I will send it back to you and hope to get a new one.
2.只要你答应我的建议，我还会买你的东西的。
As long as you agree to my advice， I will buy your products。
假设你叫李华, 刚收到两周前在网上订购的一件 英国商品。打开包裹后，你发现质量有问题。请 用英语写一封投诉信，向店家反映。你的投诉信 必须包括以下要点： 1、商品名称、订购时间及价格 2、何时发现何种质量问题 3、你所希望的解决方式 4、改进产品或服务质量的建议
2.主动与被动 (我们)十分强调诚信的重要性。 Great emphasis should be placed on the importance of honesty. (你)必须采取有效措施应对现状。 Effective measures must be taken to deal with the present situation.
____________________. (conclusion)
Wording 1. Your shop will become more and more famous. Your shop will become increasingly famous. 2. I will send it back to you and hope to get a new one.
2.只要你答应我的建议，我还会买你的东西的。
As long as you agree to my advice， I will buy your products。
假设你叫李华, 刚收到两周前在网上订购的一件 英国商品。打开包裹后，你发现质量有问题。请 用英语写一封投诉信，向店家反映。你的投诉信 必须包括以下要点： 1、商品名称、订购时间及价格 2、何时发现何种质量问题 3、你所希望的解决方式 4、改进产品或服务质量的建议
2.主动与被动 (我们)十分强调诚信的重要性。 Great emphasis should be placed on the importance of honesty. (你)必须采取有效措施应对现状。 Effective measures must be taken to deal with the present situation.
牛津译林版模块1+Unit+2+Growing+pains(共20张PPT)
1. physical changes 2. psychological changes 3. how to fit in society
Three parts:
The main idea of each part Part 1: Many teenagers feel __lo_n_e_ly_and are
Planning
Leader’s name
research
Role1’s name write an outline of the report
Role2’s name Role3’s name Role4’s name
write the report provide art work for the report
pains?
1.Who are they ?
2.What kinds of the growing pains in the video?
3.How can we deal with these growing pains?
How to write a report
the topic
detailed information
Part 3:Growing pains do not _l_as_t_l_o_n_g__.
Preparing to write a report
1.Who are they ? 2.What kinds of growing pains in the video? 3.How can we deal with these growing
_go_i_n_g_t_h_ro_u_g_h__ many changes. These changes are part of __a_d_o_le_s_c_e_n_c_e___.
Three parts:
The main idea of each part Part 1: Many teenagers feel __lo_n_e_ly_and are
Planning
Leader’s name
research
Role1’s name write an outline of the report
Role2’s name Role3’s name Role4’s name
write the report provide art work for the report
pains?
1.Who are they ?
2.What kinds of the growing pains in the video?
3.How can we deal with these growing pains?
How to write a report
the topic
detailed information
Part 3:Growing pains do not _l_as_t_l_o_n_g__.
Preparing to write a report
1.Who are they ? 2.What kinds of growing pains in the video? 3.How can we deal with these growing
_go_i_n_g_t_h_ro_u_g_h__ many changes. These changes are part of __a_d_o_le_s_c_e_n_c_e___.
译林英语选修十Unit1How to write a good essay (共33张PPT)
方法一: 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.
Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. To improve his English, he studies hard.
1. 句子缺谓语 2.主谓不一致
Common
mistakes
a) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.
b）The building like a match box.
3.时态错误
4.词性混用 5.介词误用 6.冠词误用 7.名词的数混淆 8.动词用法错误 9.习惯用法错误
writing correction
before correction
after correction
①I was so lucky to take part in the trip. It started on December 20th and ended on December 30th. ②There were thirty-five high school students. They came from different schools. ③I went to London. ④In London, I learned a lot about the history and culture of Britain.
牛津译林版9A Unit3 Teenage problems task课件(共20张PPT)
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
You also worry about exams. Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam, so you always feel stressed. (2)____________________ Why not talk to them and
Task 2: How to write a reply about how to deal with problems?
1. How many parts are there in the writing plan? 2. What are they?
the structure of the reply
5. If you are feeling stressed, you should _____. a shout at people b keep quiet c share your problem with somebody 6. The problem of stress gets worse when you _____. a keep it to yourself b relax and take a holiday c ask for friends’ help
Tip
Before writing, it’s necessary to
organize our ideas first. When writing
a reply about dealing with problems,
we need to tell others two points: • problems • suggestions
You also worry about exams. Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam, so you always feel stressed. (2)____________________ Why not talk to them and
Task 2: How to write a reply about how to deal with problems?
1. How many parts are there in the writing plan? 2. What are they?
the structure of the reply
5. If you are feeling stressed, you should _____. a shout at people b keep quiet c share your problem with somebody 6. The problem of stress gets worse when you _____. a keep it to yourself b relax and take a holiday c ask for friends’ help
Tip
Before writing, it’s necessary to
organize our ideas first. When writing
a reply about dealing with problems,
we need to tell others two points: • problems • suggestions
各单元话题英语作文写作指导牛津译林版初中英语九年级上册
译林版初中英语九年级上册全册各单元话题英语作文写作指导集锦九上Unit1 Know yourself写作指导【话题呈现】假如你是Andy，是九年级一班的一名学生，你们的班主任是来自美国的Mr Parker。
你们准备选新班长，你想向班主任老师推荐你的好友Jacky。
请你结合在本单元中所学到的知识，给Mr Parker 写一封推荐信。
要求80—100 词，信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。
【谋篇布局】在构思这封推荐信时，你可以从以下三个方面考虑：首先，说明你想推荐谁并概括性阐述理由；其次，具体阐述被推荐人的优秀品质并举例说明；最后，总结并说明自己的期望。
【佳文共赏】Dear Mr Parker,I’d like to remend Jacky as our new monitor. I think he has many strong qualities for this position.Jacky is quite a hardworking boy. He often works extra hours for the class. I think he is organized, too. He is good at making good plans. And it is very important for a monitor to be organized. He is also creative and can always e up with wonderful ideas. Moreover, he is always willing to share his ideas with others. He is brave and confident. He is able to make powerful speeches in front of many people.I think Jacky’s personality and abilities can make him a good monitor. I hope that you can agree with me.Yours,Andy【好句摘抄】读完【佳文共赏】中的佳作，请你找出来你认为出色的句子并抄写在横线上。
牛津译林版how to better your writing (共20张PPT)
My biggest problem is homework is too much.
My biggest problem is that I have too much homework.
The biggest problem is the exam/homework.
too many exams too much homework
What can you do? What can we learn? How do you feel?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic... ...and so on/ such as.../for example among/ of all the ... We can... It is a good chance to... feel happy/enjoy myselves... time seems to go faster...
I feel tired the next day.
task 2 What's the biggest problem as a junior student? tip: reason 阐述理由 tip: conjunctions 连接词 Why can't you get high marks? I am not good at … I am not interested in… I find it is really … How do you feel about it? sad, unhappy, worried, stressed(有压力的)...
Modify your writing
My biggest problem is that I have too much homework.
The biggest problem is the exam/homework.
too many exams too much homework
What can you do? What can we learn? How do you feel?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic... ...and so on/ such as.../for example among/ of all the ... We can... It is a good chance to... feel happy/enjoy myselves... time seems to go faster...
I feel tired the next day.
task 2 What's the biggest problem as a junior student? tip: reason 阐述理由 tip: conjunctions 连接词 Why can't you get high marks? I am not good at … I am not interested in… I find it is really … How do you feel about it? sad, unhappy, worried, stressed(有压力的)...
Modify your writing
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among/ of all the ...
We can...
It is a good chance to...
feel happy/enjoy myselves...
time seems to go faster...
Modify your writing 修改作文
task 2 What do you like best about your school life? What's the biggest problemo better your writing
1.To learn to express ideas correctly. 2.To learn to use different ways to express ideas. 3.To improve our writing ability by editing (修 改)our drafts(草稿).
What can we learn?
How do you feel?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic...
...and so on/ such as.../for example
high scores/ It’s difficult to get a high score. high marks
Which do you like best? tip: 添加过渡词 Among/ Of all the activities, I like ...best. However, My favourite is.../...is my favourite. What can you do ? What can we learn? It’s a good chance to learn .... How do you feel?
different ideas
however, but, sadly,
tip: 添加转折词
It is a pity that...
task 2 What's the biggest problem as a junior student?
correct words and phrases is too much There are too many homework.
Students can improve their... skills.
task 1 What do you like best about your school life?
What do you think of your school life? What activities do you have? Which do you like best? What can you do?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? content My school life is very colourful. We have after-school activities and club activities. I like the club activities best. I am a member of the school basketball team. All of the members are friendly and good at playing basketball.
lead-in
What makes a good article? 结构清晰 clear structure
rich content sentence patterns words and phrases good handwriting
内容丰富 句型多样 用词准确 书写工整
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? My school is very beautiful. There are many trees near our classroom buildings and there is a big playground too. But I love the Reading Week best. 与问题无关 I like playing basketball and I have been a member of the school basketball club for one year. I am interested in having History lessons. 重点不突出
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? content My school life is very colourful. We have after-school activities and club activities. I like the club activities best. I am a member of the school basketball team. All of the members are friendly and good at playing basketball. What do you think of your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic... What activities do you have? We have after-school activities like…and so on. There are many after-school activities, such as…. ... For example, we have...
We can...
It is a good chance to...
feel happy/enjoy myselves...
time seems to go faster...
Modify your writing 修改作文
task 2 What do you like best about your school life? What's the biggest problemo better your writing
1.To learn to express ideas correctly. 2.To learn to use different ways to express ideas. 3.To improve our writing ability by editing (修 改)our drafts(草稿).
What can we learn?
How do you feel?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic...
...and so on/ such as.../for example
high scores/ It’s difficult to get a high score. high marks
Which do you like best? tip: 添加过渡词 Among/ Of all the activities, I like ...best. However, My favourite is.../...is my favourite. What can you do ? What can we learn? It’s a good chance to learn .... How do you feel?
different ideas
however, but, sadly,
tip: 添加转折词
It is a pity that...
task 2 What's the biggest problem as a junior student?
correct words and phrases is too much There are too many homework.
Students can improve their... skills.
task 1 What do you like best about your school life?
What do you think of your school life? What activities do you have? Which do you like best? What can you do?
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? content My school life is very colourful. We have after-school activities and club activities. I like the club activities best. I am a member of the school basketball team. All of the members are friendly and good at playing basketball.
lead-in
What makes a good article? 结构清晰 clear structure
rich content sentence patterns words and phrases good handwriting
内容丰富 句型多样 用词准确 书写工整
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? My school is very beautiful. There are many trees near our classroom buildings and there is a big playground too. But I love the Reading Week best. 与问题无关 I like playing basketball and I have been a member of the school basketball club for one year. I am interested in having History lessons. 重点不突出
task 1 What do you like best about your school life? content My school life is very colourful. We have after-school activities and club activities. I like the club activities best. I am a member of the school basketball team. All of the members are friendly and good at playing basketball. What do you think of your school life? colourful/ wonderful/ fantastic... What activities do you have? We have after-school activities like…and so on. There are many after-school activities, such as…. ... For example, we have...