高考英语复习 短文改错汇编三

高考英语复习短文改错汇编三55.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。

短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Alice, my closest friend, devotes many energy to her lessons all day long. She is always oneof the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy some pop songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As an enthusiastic volunteer, she has successful organized varieties of voluntary activities. We paid visit to a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed by the staff in the home. Win honour for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.答案及解析：55.本文介绍了作者最好的朋友Alice是一个品学兼优的好学生。

考查词的用法。

energy是不可数名词，用much来修饰，所以many改成much。

考查时态。

表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，所以made改成makes。

考查代词。

Alice总是愿意帮助其他人。

表示“其他人”，所以other改成others。

考查副词。

修饰动词organized，用副词，所以successful改成successfully。

考查固定短语。

pay a visit to参观，是固定短语，所以paid后加a。

考查连词。

上个月我们参观了敬老院，并且在敬老院附近捡拾了一些垃圾。

表示并列关系，所以so改成and。

考查主语从句。

what we did是一个主语从句，引导词在从句中作did的宾语，所以that改成what。

考查非谓语动词。

Win与其逻辑主语Alice之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以win改成winning。

56.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所造英语句子，请你修改你同桌写的以下句子。

每句中只有一处错误。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

61. A number of volunteers is willing to help the old during their free time.62. Now when people refer to England you find Wales including as well.63. Wearing a dress is in the place for a wedding ceremony.64. He became inspiring when he thought about helping ordinary people.65. The poor boy had no other choice but cry in the street.答案及解析：56.61. is 改为are62. including 改为included63. 去掉the64. inspiring 改为inspired65. 在then 后加did.单句改错61. 句子主语是volunteers，复数形式，所以后面的谓语动词用复数形式，故把is 改为are。

62. 句中Wales 与include 为动宾关系用过去分词作补语。

句意：当人们提及英格兰你会发现威尔士也被包括在内。

故把including 改为included。

63. 句意：结婚典礼上穿礼服是合适的。

in place合适的，故去掉the。

64. 句意：当他想到帮助普通人时，他产生了灵感。

主语是人，所以用情感动词的-ed形式，故把inspiring 改为inspired。

65. 句中but前面没有实义动词do的各种形式，所以but后面的动词不定式要加to。

故在cry前加to。

【名师点睛】but做介词讲时的用法：but用作介词时，其后常跟不定式做宾语，不定式是否带to的判定方法是：but之前有行为动词do 的其中一种形式时，but之后就不带to；but之前没有行为动词do 时，则把to加上。

例如：I can do nothing but wait. She did nothing but watch TV all the day. 她整天除了看电视什么也不做。

He is so poor and has no choice but to drop school. 他太穷了，没有别的选择，只有辍学了。

57.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I went to London for a visit two weeks before. While walked in Hyde Park one morning, I found an ID card of a Frenchman on the ground. There is nobody around, so I figured that it was best to pick them up. The moment I got back to my hotel, I searched for the owners online, and found a Facebook account that exact matched his picture. It was happened that his phone number was in the account, but I sent him a message with a photo of the ID card. He wrote back to me with no time. And next day he picked up the ID card from the hotel’s front desk.答案及解析：57.I went to London for a visit two weeks before. While walked in Hyde Park one morning, Iago walkingfound an ID card of a Frenchman on the ground. There is nobody around, so I figured that it waswasbest to pick them up. The moment I got back to my hotel, I searched for the owners online, and it ownerfound a Facebook account that exact matched his picture. It was happened that his phoneexactly 去掉number was in the account, but I sent him a message with a photo of the ID card. He wrote backsoto me with no time. And∧next day he picked up the ID card from the hotel’s front desk.in the1.本句是一般过去时态，所以“两周前”应该用ago，故把before 改为ago。

2.句意：一天早上我在Hyde Park散步期间，我在地上发现了一张法国人的ID卡。

表示主动关系，用现在分词做时间状语，故把walked 改为walking。

3.因为说的是两周前的事，所以句子用一般过去时态，故把is 改为was。

4.根据an ID，可知“把它捡起”，故把them 改为it。

5.寻找ID卡的主人，是单数形式，故把owners 改为owner。

6.副词修饰动词，故把exact 改为exactly。

7. happen是不及物动词，无被动语态，故去掉happen 前的was。

8.句意：碰巧他的电话号码在账单上，所以我发给他ID卡的照片。

此处是因果关系，故把but 改为so。

9.固定词组：in no time立刻，马上，故把with 改为in。

10.next day指将来的某一天；the next day指过去某一天的第二天，故在next 前加the。

【名师点睛】happen的有关用法happen的用法主要有以下三种：1. "sth.+happen+地点/时间" ，意为" 某地/某时发生了某事" 。

例如：An accident happened in that street.那条街发生了一起事故。

2. "sth.+happen to+sb."意为" 某人出了某事(常指不好的事发生在某人身上)" 。

例如：A car accident happened to him yesterday.昨天他发生了交通事故。

What happened to you?(=What was wrong / the matter with you?)你怎么啦？3. "sb.+happen+to do sth."意为" 某人碰巧做某事" 。