2019高考英语短文改错练习(四)

短文改错专练（四）

李仕才

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A

My mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to p ush her car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.

B

One morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as

it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.

C

I was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.

D

There was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, ever ything went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.

E

Time and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that