人教版高中英语必修1 How to write a letter of advice
人教版高一英语必修一Unit1如何写求助信 共38张PPT
学习 I am not good at English listening.I can not understand what teachers say in class.
表示“不擅长”的词组 be short in
be not good at be weak in
精神 I feel lonely,I can't get
He is cute(可爱的)so we all like him. 他很可爱所以我们都喜欢他。 He is so cute that we all like him. 他如此可爱以致于我们都喜欢他。 He pretends to be cute so that we all like him.为了让我们都喜欢他，他假装很可爱。
along well with classmates.
What's wrong with this sentence?
I feel lonely,
大家好我是一个独立 的句子。
I can't get along well with classmates.
大家好我也是一个独立的句 子。
两个句子一般有这两种关系1.并列关系
My mother bought many interesting books so that I can fall in love with reading.
In order to make me fall in love with reading, my mother bought many interesting books.
so:所以，后加结果 so…that:如此…以致于，后加结果 so that:为了，以便，后加原因
意思等同于in order to do
高一写作How to weiter a letter of advice
Yours, ______
Dear ________ 建议信的模式 It is nice to receive your letter. You have asked me for my advice about your problem.Here is my advice. Firstly, it is important to_____________(建议1） If you do this,___________________(建议1的原因). Secondly, you should ______________（建议2) . In this way, You can_____________(建议2的原因). At last, it would be a good idea to _____（建议3）。 By doing this, you can_____________(建议3的原因) I hope you will find these ideas useful.
4. join club/ join in activities
4. make more friends
Your for Xiao Dong How toadvice join the advice and its reason into a sentence
Reasons: Advice： 1. get to know different 1. join in discussions people and let them see you and show interest in others’ are friendly ideas 2. find classmates with 2. ask people their likes and the same interest dislikes 3. let others know more 3.share your feelings with about you others 4. make more friends 4. join club/join in acticities Useful sentence patterns(可用到回答的句型）
高中英语必修1 Unit 1 Writing—Write a letter of advice
Would you please have some special smart phones designed and produced f or the old?
Yours， Li Hua
本课结束
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Period Five Writing—Write a letter of advice
PART 1 技法点拨 PART 2 写作训练
Hale Waihona Puke PART 1技法点拨
◆写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来 针对收集的一方存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议，从而达到帮助对方解 决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
1.首段：表明写作意图。首先应该简单地就对方对自己的信任表示感谢， 亦可表明自己的诚意。建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自 己的立场作解释。
2.主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对 具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是 提建议。
5.人口老龄化使得我们国家老年人越来越多。 The aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people. 6.老年人组成了一个庞大的消费群体。 Those old people make up a big consumer group.
◆组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词 左右的英语短文。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I’m a high school student and I’d like to make a proposal today. Smart phones become more and more popular with people but these smart phones are difficult for many old people to operate.So I wonder if your company could make some special smart phones that are easy to use for the old. Firstly，the aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people，who make up a big consumer group.Secondly，most old people are eager to catch up with the development of science and technology.A smart phone will be of great help in some way.Thus，old people need their own smart phones.
人教新教材英语必修1Unit1 练习1：Writing—Write a letter of advi
Writing—Write a letter of advice基础巩固练Ⅰ.单词拼写1．He put the apples on a round (盘子)．2．I hope that my story can inspire you to start your own reading (冒险)．3．In his (青年时期), he had shown great promise.4．Let’s create a (一代) of kind caring children.5．(成年人) are not the only ones who care about this issue.6．There are clear reasons why (专家) advise people to eat the insects.7．His strange (举止) made the police suspicious.8．The Winners Club is a bank account intended for (青少年)．Ⅱ.选词填空attracted to； focus on； concentrate on；worried about；addicted to1．This year our meeting the question of children’s rights.2．The manager his job，so he did not hear the loud noise outside his office.3．Many middle school students begin to smoke and they are cigarettes easily.4．making mistakes，I want you to give me some advice.5．Certain metals are a magnet(磁石)．素能提升练Ⅰ.阅读理解Getting good at a sport is difficult enough.Mastering one and then reinventing yourself after moving halfway across the world is another story，but Abigail Fernandes is doing just that.The 17yearold student was a good shooter while studying in Britain.But when she moved back to Hong Kong，China，life suddenly felt a little empty without the eight hours a week of shooting training she’d become used to.“I decided to go for a sport that might help me get fitter and allow me to protect myself in the future，”she explains.With its high intensity(强度) exercise，and chances to build strength，boxing fit the bill perfectly.“Boxing teaches you patience，but best of all，a hunger to learn，”she said.“The values and lessons the sport teaches you can all be used in both your daytoday life and education.”Now，she has been boxing for just a little more than three years and loves the challenges that this sport offers. She trains 10 hours a week with her coach Jim，who has helped her to grow as an athlete(运动员) and a person.Though she has made great progress，she thinks being able to deal with hits in the ring is her biggest challenge.“When you get hit in the ring，it’s so easy to burst into tears and give up，but this gets you nowhere，”she says.“I want to be able to take hits and accept them. These are skills that can only be learned through countless sessions(课) of sparring(拳击)．The first time I sparred I cried，so I’m proud of myself for never turning down a sparring session，”she says.Abigail says that though her training is pretty boring，she’ll keep practicing as she looks for a competition where she can put her skills to the test.“I have a long way to go，”she says，“but I want to learn everything this sport has to offer！”1．When did Abigail start boxing?A．When she studied in Britain.B．Before she became a shooter.C．After she came back to China.D．While she traveled half the world.2．Why did Abigail decide to box?A．To protect her family.B．To prove her athletic ability.C．To earn a living in the future.D．To make her healthy and strong.3．What is Abigail’s opinion on boxing?A．It is too dangerous.B．It is a waste of time.C．It changes her values.D．It helps her in many ways.4．Which of the following words can best describe Abigail?A．Clever but very shy.B．Lovely but careless.C．Brave and hardworking.D．Honest and warmhearted.Ⅱ.完形填空It was only in the eighteenth century that people in Europe began to think mountains were beautiful. __1__ that time, mountains were __2__ by the people living on the plain, __3__ by the city people, to whom they were wild and __4__ places in which one was easily __5__ or killed by terrible animals.Slowly, however, many of the people who were living __6__ in the towns began to grow tired of __7__. They began to feel interested in looking for things which could not be explained, for sights and sounds which produce a feeling of fear and excitement. __8__, in the __9__ century, people began to turn away from the manmade __10__ to the untouched country, and particularly __11__ places where it was dangerous and wild. High mountains began to be __12__ for a holiday.Then, mountainclimbing began to grow popular as a sport. To some people, there is something greatly __13__ about getting to the __14__ of a high mountain: a struggle against nature is finer than a battle __15__ other human beings. And then, when you are at the mountain top after a long and difficult __16__,_what a __17__ reward it is to be able to look __18__ on everything within __19__！At such time, you feel happier and prouder than you can ever feel __20__.1．A.After B．InC．At D．Before2．A.loved B．likedC．feared D．observed3．A.however B．furtherC．sometimes D．especially4．A.exciting B．interestingC．dangerous D．alone5．A.broken down B．lost6．A.unhappily B．lonely C．comfortably D．easily 7．A.them B．it C．themselves D．that 8．A.Yet B．So C．However D．But 9．st B．recent C．eighteenth D．early 10．A.country B．houses C．town D．planet 11．A.to B．atC．in D．for 12．A.important B．right C．necessary D．popular 13．A.pleasant B．interested C．dangerous D．terrible 14．A.foot B．spot C．top D．tip 15．A.with B．to C．against D．between 16．A.fight B．climb C．walk D．running 17．A.surprising B．satisfactory C．disappointing D．astonishing 18．A.behind B．up C．down D．around 19．es B．minutes C．seeing D．sight 20．A.above B．belowⅢ.书面表达假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想在他的学校以“Chinese poetry”为主题举办一系列活动，他写信向你求助，请给他回信，提供至少两条建议。
人教版高一英语必修一作文写作《How to write a letter of advice》
题材：a letter
人称 Person (The first/ third person…)
时态：Tense (the simple present tense) 要点：…
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。 参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?
适当运用模板
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua
人教版高一英语必修一建议信《How to write a letter of advice》
Task 1: Brainstorming Watch the video and find the answer to the question.
1.What’s Riley’s problem? (Individual work) 2.What suggestions or advice would you give to Riley? (pair work)
sentence patterns
A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Dear Riley, I’m sorry that you are having trouble in making friends. ___________, the situation is easy to change if 1: you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: 2 Firstly, ___________ more outgoing and take part in your classmates’ activities. Then more classmates will know you and they will find that you are friendly and would like to make friends with you._______, you should 3 be helpful. You are welcome since you are always there 4 when others are in trouble. __________, you will also get happiness from helping others._______________, 5 __________________a good listener. ____________, 6 7 your classmates would like to communicate with ou whether they are happy or sad. Then, you will be good friends. I hope you will find these proposals helpful. Yours, Miss Zhao
人教版高一英语必修1Unit1 How to write letters of advice建议
Advice
reasons
1. to ask people their likes 1. to find classmates with
and dislikes
the same interest
2. to join in discussions 2. to get to know different
Firstly, ____________, because________. Secondly,
you’d better________________, because_________.
Thirdly,
you’d better
_________________. Only in this way can you __________. What’s more, _____.
Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Lihua
❖Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: ❖What is Xiao Dong’s problem?
Problems 1. He’s not good at communicating with people. 2. He finds it hard to make friendswith his classmates. 3. He feels lonely
第二段：
Suggestions
常见连接词——罗列观点
firstly, first of all, in the first place, to begin with, above all, for one thing
secondly, besides, moreover, in addition, what's more furthermore for another,
高中英语课件-人教版高中英语必修一how to write a letter of advice
Summary
What have we learned today?
Put your smartphone aside and cherish your time and people around you.
手机成瘾 smartphone addiction
sentence patterns A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Language sentence structure ★★
Make no grammar mistakes ★★ Handwriting clear and neat ★★
writing
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Suggestions: You can…/Why not…/You’d better…
I called the policeman and
wrote a letter of advice to the government.
Dear lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new
How many paragraphs did I write in the passage?
What is each paragraph about?
My letter
Structure
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to Para.1 your new school life in America. I'm writing this letter to purpose
help to make life more interesting. By doing this，you will be happier
with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours， Hou Tao
Analyze the structure of the letter
trouble adapting to your new school life your letter.
in America. I'm writing this letter to offer Having received your letter,I know...
my advice.
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…
Para.2 suggestions
help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly，it would be a
good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of
activities，which will help to make life more interesting.
What sentences did I use?
Can you use other sentences to express the same idea?
Original expressions
Other useful expressions
I’m sorry to hear that you are having I know you’re having trouble in…after reading
In the first place… Next…
be a good idea if you take an active part Lastly…
in all kinds of activities，which will help
to make life more interesting. By doing First of all...
offer my advice. Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can
problem
give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can
this，you will be happier with your new Second...
Original expressions
Other useful expressions
Firstly ， you should work hard at English ， which can give you more
To begin with…
opportunities to communicate with others. Besides…
school life in America. I'm writing this letter to offer my advice.
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more
opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly，why not make
By doing this，you will be happier with your new life
My letter I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Structure
Para.3 hope
Analyze the language of the letter
Secondly，why not make some friends？ Finally…
They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly，it would
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some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and
friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly，it would be a
good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will