冲刺2013江苏高考英语写作高分优化策略_(2013-5-5)
江苏省2013届英语作文范文大汇总(4-5)
倡导人们在日常生活中要注意节约粮食，就餐时，要吃光盘中的饭菜。
你的笔友Lily想了解一些关于“光盘行动”的情况，请阅读下面信件，根据要求写一封回信。
Dear David,Five years have passed by since we last met in Nanjing. A campaign called Clearing Your Plate is reported to be very popular throughout many big cities in China. It sounds very interesting. Could you please tell me what Clearing Your Plate exactly means? Why do people launch the campaign? And how is it going in your city? Besides, I'd like to know your opinion about it.Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Yours truly,Lily 注意：1．根据来信内容，结合实际，适当发挥。
2．词数150左右。
回信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
One possible version:Dear Lily,Very glad to hear from you. As for the campaign called Clearing Your Plate, it's proposed by some citizens with the purpose of building a resource-saving and environment-friendly society.Several reasons contribute to the launch of the campaign. Firstly, while dining out, we tend to order more food than we can consume which inevitably causes waste and has aroused public concern. Secondly, people in poverty-stricken areas suffer starvation, some of whom even die of hunger. If we save food, their sufferings can be relieved to some extent. Thirdly, people have realized saving food is a good virtue and can be beneficial to sustainable development of society as well.During the Spring Festival, people in Nanjing took effective action. Almost all restaurants put up signs saying you can order half portion as you wish andencourage people to take away the leftovers. Personally, I'm in favor of the campaign because by doing so, we will develop the good habit of saving food and respecting others' labor. Thus, an all-round and well-off society can be established.Best regards,Yours faithfully,David（海安中学高三上第二次月考）（题干缺）One possible version:Cooperation, which has always been a hot topic, plays a very important role in today’s world. But not everyone knows how to cooperate well.In the picture, we can see two men are trying to make a bench together. Bothof them are working hard, sweating a lot. But obviously they are fixing the legs on opposite sides.Seeing the picture, I can’t help thinking how ridiculous it is. The two men work as a team and both of them do make their efforts. But unfortunately they just mind their own business without communicating with each other. It appears to me that they are not cooperating in an effective way. Working without cooperation leads to inefficiency.But how can we cooperate more effectively? From my point of view, cooperation call s for effective communication, without which people will do things blindly. We should exchange ideas with our partners and work out a careful plan before taking actions. Otherwise, all the efforts will be in vain, just like what the two men do in the picture.（阜宁中学、大丰中学高三上期中联考）2011年，在严格禁止酒驾后，中国道路交通事故死亡人数仍居世界第一。
2013高考英语(阅读理解)倒计时冲刺50天(5)
2013高考英语（阅读理解）倒计时冲刺50天（5）及答案阅读理解技法指导3．主旨大意题主旨大意题常见的命题方式有以下几种：(1)The best title/headline for this passage is ______.(2)The passage(or the first paragraph)is mainly about ______.(3)What is the main idea/topic/purpose/subject of the passage?(4)Which of the following titles best summarizes the main idea of the passage?(5)The passage chiefly discusses/deals with ______.(6)Which of the following best states the theme of the passage?(7)The passage mainly tells us that ______.(8)Which of the following can best sum up the passage?(9)What's the best/most suitable title of this text/passage?如：(2012·湖南高考，C篇)Harvard researchers have created a tough，lowcost，biodegradable (可生物降解的) material inspired by insects' hard outer shells.The material's inventors say it has a number of possible uses and someday could provide a more environmentally friendly alternative to plastic.The material，made from shrimp (虾) shells and proteins produced from silk，is called “shrilk.” It is thin，clear，flexible and strong.A major benefit of the material is its biodegradability.Plastic's toughness and flexibility represented a revolution in materials science during the 1950s and '60s.Decades later，however，plastic's very durability (耐用性) is raising questions about how appropriate it is for onetime products such as plastic bags，or shortlived consumer goods，used in the home for a few years and then cast into a landfill where they will degrade for centuries.What is the point of making something that lasts 1,000 years?Shrilk not only will degrade in a landfill，but its basic components are used as fertilizer(肥料)，and so will enrich the soil.Shrilk has great potential，the inventors said.Materials from which it is made are plentiful in nature，found in everything ranging from shrimp shells，insect bodies to living plants.That makes shrilk low cost，and its mass production possible should it be used for products demanding a lot of material.Work on shrilk is continuing in the lab.The inventors said the material becomesflexible when wet，so they're exploring ways to use it in wet environments.They're also developing simpler production processes，which could be used for nonmedical products，like for computer cases and other products inside the home.They're even exploring combining it with other materials，like carbon fibers，to give it new properties.66．Paragraph 1 of the passage is mainly about shrilk's ______.A．remarkable designB．interesting nameC．major featuresD．basic elements剖析：C 主旨大意题。
万变不离其宗——浅谈2013年江苏英语高考试卷及备考建议
巧．从上述分析可 以看 出，听力不管怎 么变化 ，还是不会脱离 其 时训练过 的细节理解题 、逻辑推理 题 、主 旨大意题 、词 句意义 其中对推理判 断题 的考查特别多．就拿篇幅最长 、问题最多 的 Ｄ
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江苏高考英语作文2013
江苏高考英语作文2013The high school entrance examination in Jiangsu is a very important event for students. It not only determines their future academic path, but also brings a lot of pressure and anxiety.The exam covers a wide range of subjects, including Chinese, mathematics, English, and other elective courses. Students have to spend a lot of time and energy preparing for the exam, and the competition is fierce.Many students feel stressed and overwhelmed during the preparation period. They often have to sacrifice their hobbies and leisure time to focus on studying, which can take a toll on their mental and physical health.However, the high school entrance examination is not just about academic performance. It also tests students' ability to handle pressure and manage their time effectively. It is a valuable experience that can help themgrow and mature.After the exam, students feel a sense of relief and accomplishment. They can finally relax and enjoy their summer vacation, knowing that they have done their best.In conclusion, the high school entrance examination in Jiangsu is a challenging but rewarding experience for students. It helps them develop important skills and prepares them for the future.。
2013江苏高考作文考前指导
有盲子过涸溪，失坠，两手攀木楯，兢 兢握固，自分必坠深渊。过者告曰：“无怖， 第放下即实地也。”盲子不信，握楯长号。久 之，手惫，失手坠地。乃自哂曰：“嘻，蚤知 是实地，何久自苦耶？”
立意：①学会放手 ②走出思维的定势，战胜自己。 ③要善于听从别人的意见。
以果溯因法
训练三
• 材料： • 古代有一个渔翁，一天，在井里网捞了两条大鲤 鱼；第二天，在井里捞到了三条鲫鱼；第三天，仅 仅捞到了几只米虾；第四天，第五天……什么也没 捞到，这是为什么呢？
②构思要巧。构思中比较容易被忽略的是写作的角度。好 的切入角度容易出彩，容易表现自己独特的感受、认识和 写作者的个性。选取一个小的切入点，对材料进行深入挖 掘，写具体，写深刻，往往能够以小见大，写出好文章。 构思要耐心：不假思索就能想到的东西先写在草稿上；稍 加思索想到的也写上。花上几分钟，列出提纲，绝对严禁 胡编乱造。即使编写故事也要做到“大胆想象，自圆其 说”。 ③谋篇出彩。开头要引人（开门见山，直截了当；制造悬 念，引人入胜；提出问题，引人注意；说明情况，交待背 景），结尾要有力（画龙点睛，发人深思；总结全文，照 应开头；叙述结束，自然收尾；抒发情感，引起共鸣）。 开头结尾忌讳冗长、拖沓，废话太多。
6．回头反观，弥补不足。主要有三方面的任务：一是看 审题是否恰当，如有偏差可施行强矫正，在结尾部分充分 解说你写的内容与题目或材料的关系，一旦跑题就不及格 了；二是看标题、字数是否少，不写标题，按评分规定扣 2分，字数不足（50字1分）；三是看是否有错字（1个错 别字1分）、病句。这三个方面可以说是作文中的硬伤， 扣分无形之中往往是双扣分，我们要尽可能地避免。 考生在考试书写上要做到三清——卷面清洁、字迹清楚、 笔画清晰。四不——不写潦草字，不写异体字、自造字， 不规范的简化字，不添减笔画。
2013高考英语(完形填空)倒计时冲刺50天(5)
2013高考英语（完形填空）倒计时冲刺50天（5）及答案完形填空解题步骤1．跳过空格、通读全文、把握大意。
先跳过空格，通读短文，获得整体印象，弄清文脉、抓住主旨，较好地把握短文大意。
要在理解短文的基础上判定选择，切忌仓促下笔。
2．结合选项、综合考虑、初定答案。
在理解全文的基础上，再结合所给备选项细读全文，联系上、下文内容，注意从上下文的语法结构和词语搭配及从选择项中寻找解题的提示，以词、句的意义为先，再从句子结构入手，根据短文意思、语法规则、词语固定搭配等方面综合考虑，对备选项逐一进行分析、比较和筛选，排除干扰项，初步选定答案。
3．瞻前顾后、先易后难、各个击破。
动笔时要瞻前顾后、通篇考虑、先易后难。
对答案比较明显直接的、自己最有把握的先做，一下子不能确定答案的，先跳过这一空格，继续往下做，最后回过头来再集中精力解决难点。
这时可结合已确定答案的选项再读一遍短文，随着对短文理解的深入，可以降低试题的难度，提高选择的正确率。
4．复读全文、逐空验证、弥补疏漏。
完成各道题后，把所选的答案“代入”原文，再把全文通读一篇，逐空认真复查，看所选定的答案是否使短文意思前后连贯、顺理成章，语法结构是否正确，是否符合习惯表达法。
如发现错误答案或有疑问的，应再次推敲、反复斟酌、做出修正。
（三）（2012·深圳二模）In the future，schools will teach at least one thing we do not teach today：the art of selfdiscovery.There is nothing more __1__ in education.We turn out students from our universities who know how to give answers，but not how to __2__ questions.Our students do not really get into the centres of wisdom in our culture.They __3__ universities with skills for the workplace，but with no knowledge of how to live，or what __4__ is for.They are not taught how to see.They are not taught how to listen.They are not taught the great __5__ of obedience.They are not taught the true art of __6__.True reading is not just passing our __7__ over words on a page，or __8__ information，or even understanding what is being read.True reading is a __9__ act.It means seeing first，and then using the __10__.Higher reading ought to be a new subject.As we read，we should try to getsomething new.I meet people in all __11__ of life，and most known in the fields of literature and science，who，though professionals，do not __12__ read what is in front of them.They only read what is __13__ known to them.I suspect this is happening now，even as you read this __14__.All our innovations（革新），our discoveries，our __15__ come from one source：being able first to see what is there，and what is not；to hear what is said，and what is not；but also to think clearly.1．A．technical B．important C．serious D．common2．A．afford B．tell C．repeat D．ask3．A．attend B．enter C．leave D．enjoy4．A．learning B．working C．living D．thinking5．A．art B．theme C．idea D．style6．A．listening B．speaking C．reading D．writing7．A．lips B．arms C．hands D．eyes8．A．gathering B．delivering C．sending D．passing9．A．native B．creative C．detective D．sensitive 10．A．appreciation B．imagination C．presentation D．instruction 11．A．walks B．kinds C．sides D．items12．A．generally B．obviously C．actually D．deliberately 13．A．even B．forever C．still D．already14．A．topic B．page C．subject D．book15．A．creativity B．possibility C．program D．project（三）1．B technical意为“工艺的，技艺的；专业的”；important意为“重要的”；serious 意为“严肃的，认真的”；common意为“普通的，通常的”。
2013江苏卷英语作文
2013江苏卷英语作文Title: Actions Speak Louder than WordsIn today's fast-paced society, where words often fly freely but deeds may lag behind, the timeless adage "Actions speak louder than words" holds truer than ever. This saying serves as a powerful reminder that real progress and meaningful change stem from concrete actions, not merely from eloquent speeches or empty promises.Picture One: A Symbol of EmptinessPicture one vividly depicts a man attempting to attach a banner to a lonely tree, surrounded by barren stumps. The banner, proclaiming a celebratory message for Earth Day, stands as a stark contrast to the desolate landscape it overlooks. The man's efforts, though well-intentioned, appear futile against the backdrop of deforestation and environmental degradation. This image symbolizes the limitations of mere declarations and the need for tangible actions to back up such words.Picture Two: The Power of ActionIn stark contrast, picture two showcases a heartening scene where a couple joyfully plants saplings in fertile soil. Their smiles radiate the satisfaction and hope that come from taking practical steps towards restoration and renewal. The act of planting trees embodies the essence of "Actions speak louder than words" – it is through such humble yet profound gestures that we can truly make a difference. The Essence of ActionThe message conveyed by these two pictures is clear: In the face of global challenges like climate change, deforestation, and pollution, mere words are insufficient. We must move beyond lip service and engage in meaningful actions that can lead to sustainable change. This applies not only to environmental issues but also to other aspects of life, such as charity work, social justice, and personal growth.Practical MeasuresTo translate this wisdom into practice, individuals, communities, and governments alike must adopt a proactive approach. We can start by reducing our carbon footprint, conserving natural resources, and participating in tree-planting initiatives. Furthermore, supporting environmentally friendly policies, advocating for sustainable practices, and educating others about the importance of action are all vital steps towards creating a better future.ConclusionIn conclusion, "Actions speak louder than words" serves as a guiding principle that urges us to move beyond mere declarations and embrace practical solutions. By taking concrete steps towards positive change, we can transform our words into meaningful actions that resonate deeply within ourselves and in the world aroundus. Let us remember that it is not what we say but what we do that truly matters in shaping a better tomorrow.。
2013江苏卷高考作文
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2013江苏高考英语写作 高分优化策略
江苏省镇江第一中学 周 林
一、评分标准及阅卷流程
(一)评分标准 第五档(很好) (21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复 杂结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言运用 能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 上档：24-25 下档：21-23
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53. appear 54. whole 55. careful 56. ability 57. rich 58. angry 59. attractive 60. despite 61. sharp 62. unbelievable 63. famous
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