高中英语写作建议信课件[1]
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(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
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talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
人教版高中英语建议信写作技巧课件(共12张)
will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute of your stay here. I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far from my home. We can go swimming
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I am writing in reply to... I am writing to express my views concerning... I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about... I would like to suggest that... You have asked me for my advice with regard to. and I will try to make some conductive suggestions... You have asked me for some advice on how to improve. I will try to give some useful suggestions... You asked for advice concerning (with regard to). and I will try to make some suggestions... I have received your letter saying. I recommend that...
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I am writing in reply to... I am writing to express my views concerning... I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about... I would like to suggest that... You have asked me for my advice with regard to. and I will try to make some conductive suggestions... You have asked me for some advice on how to improve. I will try to give some useful suggestions... You asked for advice concerning (with regard to). and I will try to make some suggestions... I have received your letter saying. I recommend that...
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
罗列观点：
• Firstly/ First of all / To begin with/ In the first place/on the one hand/ For one thing…
• Secondly/ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ on the other hand/ For another/ Next…
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons
1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
join join in take part in
join 加组织，成为其中一员 join in 加入活动(小），游戏 join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人做某事的队伍中 take part in 参加活动（大） eg. ____jo_i_n___ the army ____jo_i_n___ me in playing football __jo_i_n__i_n_ the game
人教高中英语必修1Unit1建议信(共25张PPT)
A letter of
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
高中英语写好建议信课件
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式 1. I am writing to you for the purpose of … 2. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions. 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.
Sample writing 2
Dear Committee Members, I wish to make a suggestion about the kind of artwork that should go into our new gallery. As I have carefully researched the subject and have had many discussions with residents in our district, I believe my suggestion will be popular with most people. I have discovered that we have many fine artists in our district. We have many painters, both modern and traditional, some sculptors and a few excellent potters. We also have a group of people who meet regularly to practise traditional folk art. At present, none of these groups have a place to display their work. The gallery would provide such a place and would help people in the district to learn more about our artists. I believe a gallery of local art craft would encourage the artists and would also make others proud of our local talent. I do hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully,
高中英语建议信(共10张PPT)
❖ 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
假如你是李华，你的朋友Nathan将来你的 城市做一项调查研究，写信询问你相关注 意事项。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
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Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
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Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
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Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
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Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
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如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading 整 体 三 部 分
点题；一两个句子；概括性； 暗示性
2. Body
小结；呼应主题
书面表达如何写？
三 个
Step 1 List the key points
Step 2 Make sentences
步 骤
Step3. Form a passage and polish
B.建议信第二段常用句式。(提出建议，阐述 理由。） 1. Firstly, why not…? If you do this… Secondly, you should /can … Then/ That way, … Thirdly, it would be a good idea if … By doing this, … Last but not least, … 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that...
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is (表语从句) why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters (-ed过去分词用法), present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的开头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that (-ing现在分词用法) our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give you some suggestions.（写 作意图） What we need most (主语从句) are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----
• 5.I am writing to share some advice with you • 6.It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... • 7.I’m writing to offer you some advice about... • 8.In my personal opinion, it would be wise/helpful/ useful of you to take the following advice.
写作模式 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意 语气。 主体段落：提出建议并阐述理由。 结尾段：礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建 议的愿望。
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英 语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多 用一般现在时
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用语句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1.I am sorry to know that … 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.
Yours sincerely, Li Yue
写作训练： 假设你是李华， 你的美国笔友Jack正在位即将到来 的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写 信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封 信。 1.制定复习计划，树立信心 2.坚持锻炼身体。 3.保持良好睡眠 注意：词数100词左右 可适当增加细节，已使行文连贯
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建议 和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
Dear Jack: I am sorry to hear that you feel extremly nervous before an important exam. I’d like to give you some advice. First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second , take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don’t stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day. I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful. 3. I believe if you follow my advice, you’ll ...... 4.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.