【金版教程】2016届高考英语二轮复习练习(2)：第四部分专题一短文改错

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四川省金堂县2016高考英语二轮复习短文改错训练(4)

四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（4）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

【参考答案】4.Last weekend, my mother and I went to ∧ shoe shop to buy a pair of newashoe for me. When we got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But theshoes talkingsalesgi rl didn’t understand that the foreigner was saying. They looked verywhatworrying. So I decided to help them. I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her worriedby English. I learned that the lady came from Australia and want to buy a pair of in wantedrunning shoes. I told this to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when shetook her shoes. All of them expressed their thanks to me. And I felt happily that IBoth happycould help others.短文改错（满分15分）文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

2016届高考英语第二轮短文改错练习4

浙江临安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习（5）及答案短文改错。

Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was!Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.【参考答案】2.【小题1】vary改成various【小题2】spent改成took【小题3】under改成with【小题4】he改成we【小题5】去掉back【小题6】put后面加it【小题7】annoying改成annoyed【小题8】explained后面加to【小题9】is改成was【小题10】stand改成standing短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高考英语二轮复习短文改错编练高三全册英语试题_02

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校江西2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错编练（2）短文改错。

Dear Jim,I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.Yours,Li Hua【参考答案】1.Dear Jim,I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you somethingabout the changes in my writingschool.You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it usednoto be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy towastell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building,inin it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there arewhichall kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sportsBesides well facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.haveI believe my school∧ become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.willYours,Li Hua短文改错。

2016届高考英语二轮复习：短文改错分层训练 Word版含答案

)My soccer coach retired inlast week. I wanted to do anythingsomethingspecial for him at his retirement party. My mum makesthe betterbest biscuits in the world, so I decidedecidedto ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic stepstepsof baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really wellgood. Myonly mistake was that I dropped some on the floor afterwhen/whileI was packing them up.At atheparty，my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them andjoked, “I might have to retire again next year just ∧toget some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoyenjoyingthe biscuits with happy laughter!B.(2015·四川卷)Hi, Janice，It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案：Hi, Janice，It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ∧toshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I telltold you last time, I made three new friendfriendshere. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time singsingingin karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me manymuch. And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact, I don'tlike to go anymore, sobut I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. HowWhatdo you think I should do? If you。

金版教程2016高考英语二轮复习训练：2-1 记叙文b Word版含解析

建议用时：45分钟Ⅰ.完形填空[2015·山东青岛联考]In an old city of Hungary, there used to be a boy who was very rich and clever but nothing could make him feel happy. He had almost everything a boy could ever want, so he was only__1__in the most rare objects. One day his parents bought him a very strange __2__. When the boy went to see his reflection (影像) in it, he looked very __3__. He tried smiling, __4__ his reflection continued with its sad expression.The boy went off to buy sweets and lots of toys. __5__，he came home as happy as he could be, but he __6__ looked sad in that mirror, “What a(n) __7__ mirror! It's the first time I've seen a mirror that didn't __8__ properly！”That afternoon he went out to buy some toys and on his way he saw a little girl who was __9__. The boy went over to see what had __10__ to her. The little girl said that she couldn't find her parents. Together the two children set off __11__ them. As the little girl wouldn't stop crying, the boy spent all of his money buying her sweets to __12__ her up. After much walking, they __13__ her parents who were looking for her, very worried.Then the boy said __14__ to the family. When seeing the time, he __15__ to head for home without toys and __16__. In his room, to his great surprise, he found a(n) __17__ face in the mirror. And so he understood the __18__ of that mirror. The mirror could only reflect the __19__ feelings of its owner. He felt really happy at having __20__ that little girl.一个男孩儿几乎可以拥有他想要的一切东西，可一面神奇的镜子告诉他，他并不快乐。

【金版学案】2016届高考英语二轮复习第三部分写作知识第一章短文改错课件

the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits
with happy laughter!
解析：enjoy→enjoying 此处应为现在分词短语
作伴随状语。0
【例6】 (2015· 四川卷)We've been spending a lot of
探究三
语篇型
语篇的测试包括：上下文中的时态是否一致；上下文中的代词是否一致；上下文中的逻辑是否一致；上下文中的词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。【例8】 (2015· 新课标全国卷Ⅱ)Tony was scared and begun to cry. 解析：begun→began begin在此句中是不及物动词，故不用被动，应用一般过去时与was并列。
词的考查较多，知识覆盖面广。短文改错的句子长
度也趋于平稳，但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。
三、解题步骤短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误
的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，
也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查的角度可以概括为以下三个方面：
第三部分
写作知识
第一章短文改错
一、考纲要求新课标全国卷考试大纲说明明确指出：语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重要方面，因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输。应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准的一项重要内容。高考短
文改错主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确
性，考查考生的词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错题设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等。
解析：all kinds of “各种各样的” ，后接名词时不

2016届高考英语短文改错集训(2)及答案解析

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage 1Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then m y English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a largeair-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began tosearch for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇励志小故事。

高中英语真题-)2016高考英语短文改错二轮联练题

）2016高考英语短文改错二轮联练题短文改错Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to EmeiMountain in . As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _______mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. __ _____and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. __ _____since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. ______ _the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _____ __the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______答案及解析1. famous 前加 a。

mountain 为可数名词。

又是第一次被谈及，故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。

金版教程2016高考英语二轮复习训练：4-1 短文改错b Word版含解析

建议用时：45分钟Ⅰ.完形填空[2015·百校联盟核心卷一]I've never been an athlete. I've never been much ___1___ in sports since I stopped playing football. I tried tennis, softball, running and swimming, all of which unluckily ended in ___2___.I'm definitely not an athlete, ___3___ I try to do it, especially in my “mid-life” years. It brings a ___4___ to my mind: when did I hit mid-life? When I reached thirty, then forty, I thought my life was ___5___. When I hit fifty, I was excited, because I was ___6___ to join an organization called AARP. My husband was ___7___ excited and joined too!Fifty became the magic age. I knew that as long as I was in good ___8___，I'd probably have a good fifty years ___9___ me. Then came the illness.When illness hit me, I found that I actually ___10___ the solitude (独居). I was “experiencing” this midlife season, and no longer ___11___ every wonderful moment.It's not always ___12___. Washing a pile of dishes can take an entire day, but I don't push myself too much. So, I ___13___ to make the bed as I watch the rosy glow of dawn meet the rising sun. I have ___14___ to walk with my little dog. I stay with my happy dog, sniff the air and gaze out at ___15___ but study the sky.I get to ___16___ the day with a smile every morning. I get to say “good-night” to the sunsets. I've studied a lot of ___17___，in the last five years, and I've never seen two that were alike. I've gotten to ___18___ about the mysteries of life.I feed the birds, and I take great ___19___ in their multicolored hues (样子), especially in the spring. I laugh at myself, and take great interest in my life. For I have come to ___20___ what real health is.With REAL health, you truly have everything.本文是记叙文，讲述了“我”不断地经历体育运动中的失败，但“我”从不放弃享受生活。

2016届高考英语大二轮复习第四部分写作专题一短文改错精品优选公开课件

根据提示将答案写在横线上。
Step 1：通读全文，了解大意。 1．时态错误： think→thought 。由第一句可知是回忆童年的事情，故用一般过去时。 2．语态错误： Have been shown→have shown 。很多研究表明：全球变暖是一个非常严重的问题。本句应用主动语态，因此去掉 been。 3．人称一致错误： your→our 或 the 。本句的主语为 we，第一人称，因此把 your 改为 our，也可以改为 the。 4．行文逻辑错误： Much→Many 。rare animals 为复数形式，应用 many 修饰。
不作句子成分只起连接作用，且可以省略。
Step 3：通读全文，复查验证。主要关注基本语法规则的使用是否正确以及语义是否合乎逻辑，有无去词及加词错误。其他错误：1.________ 2．________
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2013～2015 全国新课标卷考点分析
年份名词动词形容词和副词代词冠词连词介词
1．文章选材特点短文改错的材料通常取材于考生自己的作品或类似于考生的随笔，且话题熟悉，篇章结构简单，符合中学生的认知水平，词数在 100 词左右，体裁多以记叙文为主。 2．能力测试特点短文改错突出检测的是考生写作能力中的校验能力，同时考查考生校验句式和对语篇的把握能力。因此，切不可把改错题完全当作对语法的考查。 3．考点设置特点 (1)错误类型集中在：错词、多词、少词三类。 (2)考查重点是从词法、句法和行文逻辑等三个角度考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。 (3)在改错时，尽可能保持原文面貌不变，且每句中最多有两处错误。
[解析] Neither→None 由后文中提到箭像下雨一样，可以推断出射出的不止两支，故此处不定代词应表示“(三者以上)都不……”，用 none。

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于是，“我”放慢脚步，细细感受生活，终于明白生命的真谛在于“真正的健康”。

1．A.interested B．defeatedC．attracted D．admitted答案：A考查动词。

由“I've never been an athlete.”可得提示，“我”停止踢足球后就没再对运动感兴趣了(interested)。

2．A.trouble B．prideC．surprise D．failure答案：D考查名词。

由unluckily可推知，“我”不是运动员，是因为“我”在这方面的尝试都失败了(failure)。

3．A.if B．butC．because D．though答案：B考查连词。

下文讲到，“我”到了50岁才开始醒悟，开始放慢生活的节奏。

但在30岁时，“我”还是在进行努力的尝试。

I'm definitely(绝对)not an athlete和I try to do it之间有转折关系，故用but连接。

4．A.voice B．desireC．question D．plan答案：C考查名词。

由后文的问题when did I hit mid-life？可知，“我”想起了一个问题(question)。

5．A.over B．hardC．desirable D．promising答案：A考查形容词。

在30岁、40岁的时候“我”不停地经历失败，“我”认为“我”的生活结束(over)了。

6．A.likely B．gladC．sure D．able答案：D考查形容词。

50岁的时候，“我”改变了以前的想法，是因为“我”能够(able)参加AARP了。

7．A.hardly B．especiallyC．actually D．merely答案：B考查副词。

由丈夫“joined too！”的做法可知，他对“我”能够参加AARP感到特别的(especially)高兴。

8．A.age B．chanceC．health D．dream答案：C考查名词。

由下文的“Then came the illness”可知，“我”认为只要“我”的身体好，未来还有很好的50年等着“我”去度过。

9．A.in face of B．in honor ofC．in terms of D．ahead of答案：D考查介词短语。

这50年是指未来的50年。

ahead of“在……之前”。

10．A.enjoyed B．fearedC．hated D．suffered答案：A考查动词。

由下文的“I watch the rosy glow of dawn meet the rising sun.”等做法可知，“我”喜欢这种独居的生活方式。

11．A.valuing B．noticingC．missing D．enjoying答案：C考查动词。

由下文的“but I don't push myself too much”，“我”不强迫自己像以前那样匆匆忙忙地过日子，说明“我”不想错过(missing)生活中的每个美好时光。

12．A.normal B．easyC．strange D．ordinary答案：B考查形容词。

下文的“洗碗要花上一整天”说明了“我”想要享受生活的愿望不容易(easy)实现。

13．A.try B．planC．decide D．forget答案：D考查动词。

“我”不想太催促自己(I don't push myself too much)，所以“我”会经常忘记(forget)整理床铺。

14．A.time B．feelingC．right D．patience答案：A考查名词。

“我”不强迫自己，“我”就有时间(time)去遛狗。

15．A.everywhere B．nowhereC．somewhere D．anywhere答案：B考查副词。

“我”现在不赶忙，只是享受生活。

“我”想看天空的时候，其他哪里也不看。

16．A.spend B．imagineC．greet D．live答案：C考查动词。

“我”现在以积极的心态迎接生活，不再像以前那样匆匆忙忙。

17．A.changes B．booksC．experiences D．sunsets答案：D考查名词。

前文的“I get to say ‘good-night’ to the sunsets”说明“我”对夕阳研究了(study)很多。

18．A.know B．worryC．look D．laugh答案：A考查动词。

前文的“I've never seen two that were alike”说明“我”了解了(know)生活的奥秘。

19．A.puzzle B．expectationC．delight D．need答案：C考查名词。

由下文的“take great interest in my life”可知，“我”很开心地(delight)看到鸟儿的样子。

20．A.wonder B．understandC．doubt D．teach答案：B考查动词。

由下文的“With REAL health, you trulyhave everything”可知，“我”已经懂得了(understand)真正的健康意味着什么。

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