高考英语书面表达分类精练

（一）掌握技巧：

（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。

（2）确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释、扩展。

写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

（二）巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词。

表示罗列增加

First, second, third；First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other han d,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with,

later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,表示解释说明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, in fact, actually

表示转折关系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,

表示并列关系

or, an d, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither…nor

表示因果关系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore,

as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)

表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较

be sim ilar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,

表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,

表示概括归纳

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion

第二部分：真题研读

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（2013年）假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）

2.象征意义

3.价格

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

【范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. n China, these knots stand for friendship ,love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

Li Hua.

（2014年）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是"十年后的我"、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。

1、家庭

2、工作

3、业余生活

【范文】

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

In ten years, I think I’ll be a reporter. I’ll live in Shanghai, because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it. I think it’s really a beautiful city. As a reporter, I think I will meet lots of interesting people.

I think I’ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don’t like living alone.

I’ll have pets. I can’t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small. So in ten years, I’ll have many different pets. I might even k eep a pet parrot! I’ll probably go skating and swimming every day. During the week I’ll look smart, and probably will wear a suit.

On the weekends, I’ll be able to dress more casually. I think I’ll go to

Hong Kong on vacation, and one day I might even visit Australia.

（2015年）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；

2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结语已为你写好。

【范文】

Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to t he nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

（2016年）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1．主题：环境保护；

2．展览时间；

3．投稿.

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June

15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people

to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

（2017年）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1．展览时间、地点；

2．展览内容。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Henry，

I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.

It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.

You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

第三部分：书面表达分类精练

◎应用文

【分类精练1】投诉信

你参加了某旅行社组织安排的云南六天游。以下是旅行社广告宣传与你参团后实际情

1. 写信的目的；

2. 行程安排、酒店住宿旅游广告宣传与实际情况的对比；

3. 要求退回30%团费, 否则将采取进一步行动。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to complain about the six-day trip to Yunnan organized by your travel agency. As it was promised in your advertisement, we would visit ten famous historical attractions of the local place. However, we only visited eight places of interest, tired of the boring journey as well.

Besides, it was claimed that we would enjoy the stay in a five-star hotel which was well furnished, but to our disappointment, we were arranged to stay in a poorly equipped hotel with no hot water supply. Please give 30% of my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Chen Ming

假如你是王林，李明是你的好友，他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋职（apply for a position）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。

词数110左右。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm.

He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyer ever since. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Chongqing, China. He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Chongqing city. His telephone number is . He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I’m sure he will be fit for the position.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Wang Lin

假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);

3.希望获准.

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Chairman，

I am Lihue, a student of school of Changsha, Hunan province. I learn from the internet that the International Students Organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore now, I am very eager to write to you to apply to this camp.

I think it will be a big chance for me to communicate with students from other countries, which will also improve my English very much .I can also make more friends and can learn the culture of other countries. All of this sounds so wonderful.

It will be my great honor if I can get your permission to take part in the summer camp, looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

假设你是李华，最近去英国参加了一起英语夏令营活动，住在家中，他们提供了你吃、住、旅游方面的帮助，请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢。

内容要点：

1.感谢Smith夫妇；

2.你的感受；

3.邀请Johnson夫妇来华旅游；

注意事项：

1.词数120~150；

2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,

How are you doing? I am writing these few lines to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for offering accommodation when I was in England.

When I look at those pictures, I just can’t help thinking of you. It was so kind of you to take care of me when I was not used to the weather there. Besides, you bought Chinese food for me, which really surprised me. What's more, I shall always remember those ancient stories you told me, considering that, they helped me know more about your culture and will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.

I wish to have chance to repay you. I will feel very honored and pleased if you can come to China for a visit and I will be your you kindly let me know if you can make it?

Thanks again for what you have done for me. May you be blessed in everything you do.

Yours truly,

Lihua

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1. 表示歉意；

2. 解释原因；

3. 另约时间。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.

Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning. And ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

假定你叫李红，家住

香港。你和几个朋友约定

星期六在中心公园聚会。

现请你写封信邀请Brown

女士参加，并根据下图告

诉她来中心公园的路线。

参考词汇：have a

gathering party(聚会)

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.

Yours,

Li Hong

【分类精练7】书面通知

1.必须包括表内所列内容，可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节，使其连贯、完整。

2.词数：100左右。

3.通知时间：4月24日

4.生词：植物园the botanical garden; 报名sign up for; 学生会the Students' Union

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Notice

The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two will go out for a visit on April 25. We'll first go to the museum to see an exhibition of Man and Nature. When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.

Our school bus will take us there. The school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 a.m.

Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Students’ Union before Thursday.

The Students’ Union

April 24

【分类精练8】日记（经历感受）

最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下：

1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；

2.你谈到了自己的梦想；

3.如何实现自己的梦想。

注意：1.总词数不少于100。2.不可逐条翻译。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

April 8 Monday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.

To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself

adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

【分类精练9】欢迎辞

假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

写作要点：

1.表示对客人的欢迎；

2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；

3.表达对客人的祝愿。

写作要求：

1.词数不少于100；

2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear American Guest,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.

As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part

in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.

I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.

【分类精练10】建议信

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Hi Worried:

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours，

Jamie

【分类精练11】求助信

假设你叫李华，现就读于加拿大的Toronto University。你的室友不讲卫.生，休息时间大声播放

音乐，随意动用他人物品，常带朋友喝酒喧闹。你为此深感苦恼，写信给好友李明求助。

注意：

1．信的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

2．词数：100左右。

3．可以适当增加细节．使文章意思连贯。

4. 参考词汇：卫生 sanitation

【审题谋篇】

【参考范文】

Dear Li Ming,

I am studying in Toronto University in Canada. Now I have a problem, which always troubles me, so I want to ask you for help.

Tom, who is one of my roommates, never pays attention to sanitation, leaving his things out of place. As he likes music, he often plays music loudly while others are having a rest. What's worse, he often brings some of his friends to our room to drink, talking and laughing so loudly that we can't have a good rest. Besides, what you can't imagine is that he is always using others” daily things without permission.

I have no idea what to do next. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua