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3．如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构” “较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置 疑，单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调， 缺乏生气和活力，而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩、生 动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定 语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用，可以使文章 的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。
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(二)样卷分析 [题目要求] 假定你是李明。上周末学生会组织部分学生去附近社区进 行了一次义务劳动，受到居民的欢迎。请你给校园英文报写一 篇报导。活动内容包括： 1．打扫卫生； 2．浇灌花木； 3．帮老人干家务。 注意： 1．词数80左右，题目已为你写好； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[评分标准解读] 1．如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点” 评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”，就 是要求考生在写作时要认真审题，确保要点“全而不漏”， 要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。 2．如何理解“应用了较多的词汇” 这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使用的多 样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词 的使用、短语的使用等。
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[思路点拨] 1．内容要点 (1)打扫卫生 (2)浇灌花木 (3)帮老人干家务
2．应用词汇和语法结构的情况 (1)时态以一般过去时为主； (2)使用与主题相关的词汇； (3)能够使用恰当的语法结构。 3．根据内容要点展开写作，使用恰当的连接词或者表达 法使文章内容连贯。
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未完成试题规定的任务。 —明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原 因可能是未理解试题要求。 第一档 —语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
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[应用文写作注意事项] 1．格式：掌握熟记，如书信，电子邮件。 2．套语：熟悉该文体常用的一两句套语及高频词汇，如感 谢信、求职信。 3．内容：包含所有给出信息，不作发挥，如通知、简历。 4．语言：符合该文体语言特点，如海报煽动性要强；邀请 信、感谢信、道歉信要诚恳礼貌；商务信函要正式、简洁、礼 貌等。
紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。
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基本完成了试题规定的任务。 —虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
第三档 —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影 7～9分 响理解。 —应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容 连贯。
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完全完成了试题规定的任务。 —覆盖所有内容要点。 —应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 第五档 13～15分 —语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力 使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较 强的语言运用能力。 —有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结 构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
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完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
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—应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构
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2．结尾用语 (1)We hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later. (2)We are looking forward to ... (二)感谢信 1．开头用语 (1)Thank you very much for ... (2)Many thanks for your ... (3)Please accept my sincere appreciation for ... (4)I am truly grateful to you for ... (5)Thank you again for your hospitable reception and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. (6)Many thanks for you generous cooperation.
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2016年10月开始的浙江新高考写作部分发生了新变化：写 作部分分为两节：第一节是应用文写作；第二节是读后续写或 概要写作。《考试说明》上明确表示：“两种形式在不同考次 不定期交替使用”。这两种形式的写作，对浙江师生，乃至全 国中学师生来说，都是十分新颖的，是前所未有的新题型。教 育部考试中心相关老师在《中小学外语教学》(教育部主管、 北京师范大学主办)2016年第1期发表文章《关于一年两考高考
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一、内在美 1．要点要齐全 根据评分标准，漏掉内容要点的要降低得分档次，因此 写作时要列出要点，避免遗漏。 2．用词要得体 用词讲究准确、得体。写作时需要考虑身份、语气、风 格等因素，也要考虑词义的褒贬。
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应用文写作并不是浙江省2016年新高考出现的新题型， 其在历年各省的高考中均有出现。但是，在词数要求上略有 差异。例如：2016年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达(写一封书信；词数要 求100左右)；2016年全国卷Ⅱ书面表达(写一封书信；词数要 求100左右)；2016年天津高考书面表达(写一篇发言稿；词数 要求不少于100)；2016年上海高考书面表达(写一封信；词数 要求120～150)等。
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2．结尾用语 (1)Many thanks to you for your...again. (2)It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say. (三)祝贺信 1．开头用语 (1)It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time. (2)Congratulations on your promotion/graduation/success/ progress/achievements. (3)I am delighted to hear that...
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[应用文写作常用句型] (一)邀请信 1．开头用语 (1)Will you do us the favor of joining our party? (2)May I take this opportunity to invite you to our university to give a lecture? (3)I’d like ... to come to dinner. (4)I am writing this letter to invite you to attend... (5)It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to visit this exhibition.
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4．如何理解“上下文的连贯性” 评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯 性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑”。此处所说的连贯性，是指段与段、句与句之间以 一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到在文意与 结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。
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[应用文写作常考类型] (一)信函 1．社交信函——感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、申请信、慰 问信、投诉信等。 2．商务信函——订单、询价等。 (二)其他 电子邮件、电话留言、简历、启事、通知、请假条、备忘 录、问卷调查等。
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英语试卷中读后续写的研究》中提到“读后续写题是在世界 范围内首次应用于大规模的利害考试”。“读后续写”试题 将于2016年用于高考综合改革试点省份的高考中，之后将随 着高考综合改革试点的推广在全国范围内使用。 综合以上分析可知，新高考更加重视考查考生高中阶段 英语基本技能的掌握情况，也注意考查考生进入高等学校继 续学习的潜能，目标是利用高考命题的导向功能推动新课程 的课堂教学改革。
3．错误要避免 近几年低分作文中会出现很多错误，像审题错误、词汇 错误、语法错误和中式英语等都是妨碍我们得高分的绊脚 石，应尽力避免。 4．词汇要高级 高级词汇的选用不仅给人新颖的感觉，而且能使阅卷者 相信考生具有这样的能力，从而给出高分。
2017高考英语作文范文【五篇】
2017高考英语作文范文【五篇】导读：本文2017高考英语作文范文【五篇】，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。
【第一篇：How to learn English well?】Once being in the village of world, we would often communicate others with English. Here are some suggestions about how to leare English well.As we aren't in the environment of English, listening and reading are more important for us to understand it. For example , making friends with foreigners is an effective way to improve the level of English. Accompaning with it, we receive friendship and feel happy. As for me, I have obtained many skills from translation between English and Chinese.So this is also a useful method.With the advices above, I sincerely hope everybody's English ability will hit on a new altitude.【第二篇：Self-Introduction】Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My name is Candy.and I am fifteen-year-old.Now I am studying in YuCai school.I like English.and I like listening ti music Very much.English brings me lots of fun.and music make me feel relax.I likethissentence:"nothing is impossible".So this is me.I hope to make friends with you all! 【第三篇：a course impressed me most in school】During my school life, there were so many great courses impressed me deeply.Among them the course which impressed me mot is the Science given by Mr zhang.At first,I'm not interested in this course.As time goes on,the course and teacher Zhang's lecture attracted me greatly. Dring the class ,for the fist time did i realized the nature is related closely to evereyone's life. I get t know everyone should gevote everyone's best to protect our natureand than can we live a healthy life with the nature.Secondly ,in his wonderful leatures Zhang cited many vivid examples which really happend so that we can grsped knowledge.All in all,this course have a great influence o me .I bellieve it will still have hve effects on me in the future. 【第四篇：It is never too late to learn】Success is something we all eager to embrace，however，it will not be achieved easily without pain. Learning is the best way to enrich ourselves and get ahead. In order to make our life more meaningful, it is never too late to learn.No matter what stage of life we are located in, to acquireknowledge is always necessary for us. For instance, when we work as a tourist to visit historic site, if we have prepared the information about the site, the traveling will be attactive and in the natural atmosphere. In contrast, it will be fade.In short, age has no relationship with learn, the saying "it is never to late to learn" will accompany with us all the life, and in turn the life is fill of fun. 【第五篇：Tourism】Recently, more and more people are glad to study Chinese ancient civilization, visiting famous old historic site is a part of the learning for many people think.Tourism brings about not only happiness but also knowledge. There are three reasons for this phenomenon. At the time of satisfing people's need of eat, both urban and rural have extra money to travel and enjoy their life. In addition, people who under huge pressure will relax theirselves by tourism. Finally, meeting new friends is an important purpose to improve the entertainment of visiting.Although tourism urges the development of economic, several negative problems follow with, such as rubblish、destruction of environment and so on. Only when we do it from ourselves can solve the problem.。
2017英语二作文范文
2017英语二作文范文2017年全国高考英语二卷作文范文：Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should。
1) describe the drawing briefly,。
2) explain its intended meaning, and then。
3) give your comments.范文：The drawing depicts a man standing on a small boat, trying to catch fish in a vast ocean. However, the man seems to be unaware of the fact that there is a huge fish swimming under his boat, which is about to capsize.The intended meaning of the drawing is clear: the manis too focused on the small fish he is trying to catch and has neglected the potential danger that is lurking beneath him. The drawing is a metaphor for the way we often liveour lives. We are so preoccupied with the small things that we fail to see the big picture, and we ignore the potential risks that may be lurking just beneath the surface.In my opinion, this drawing serves as a warning to us all. We need to be more aware of the bigger picture and not be so consumed by our daily routines and small problems. We should take the time to step back and evaluate our lives,to see where we are going and what potential dangers may be lurking just beneath the surface. Only then can we trulylive our lives to the fullest and avoid potential disasters.In conclusion, this drawing is a powerful reminder ofthe importance of seeing the big picture and being aware of the potential dangers that may be lurking just beneath the surface. We should all take heed of this warning and strive to live our lives in a more mindful and aware manner.。
高考英语二轮复习 专题五 书面表达 第一讲 靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达
层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语；2.句式单一，单句较多；3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子；4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语；6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。
高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。
因此，平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。
第一讲靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。
换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。
因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。
高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。
它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。
要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略[策略1]“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
①(2019·北京卷书面表达)I’m very glad to know that you’re coming to tour in China.→I’m more than delighted to know that you’re coming to tour in China.②(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.→I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.③(2019·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit for the job.→So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job.④(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.→As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.⑤(2019·天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.→I feel an urge to make my voice heard.⑥Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.→Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your English.⑦To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is alsorich and colorful.→To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.⑧(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.→Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.[策略2]更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。
2017年高考英语全国二卷作文范文
2017年高考英语全国二卷作文范文全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Prompt: Write an essay based on the following quote:"Ability is of little account without opportunity." - Napoleon BonaparteThe Road Less Traveled is Full of Opportunities"Ability is of little account without opportunity." This quote from Napoleon Bonaparte rings true across all walks of life. While we may possess immense talents and capabilities, without avenues to explore and apply them, our potential remains untapped. The path less traveled, though fraught with challenges, is rich with opportunities waiting to be seized by those willing to veer from the beaten track.In the academic realm, opportunities often lie beyond the confines of traditional classroom learning. The rigid structure and uniform pace of most educational systems can stifle the boundless curiosity and unique learning styles of students. Those who dare to venture off the well-trodden path, however, uncover a world of enriching experiences. Engaging in extracurricularactivities, participating in academic competitions, or pursuing independent research projects allow students to delve deeper into their interests and hone their abilities. By taking the initiative to explore these unconventional avenues, they cultivate critical thinking, problem-solving, and self-directed learning skills that will serve them well in their future endeavors.Moreover, the road less traveled fosters personal growth and self-discovery. Stepping out of one's comfort zone and embracing new challenges can be daunting, but it is precisely this discomfort that fuels personal transformation. Whether it's learning a new language, traveling to unfamiliar lands, or immersing oneself in diverse cultural experiences, these opportunities stretch our boundaries and broaden our perspectives. We gain invaluable insights into ourselves and the world around us, cultivating empathy, adaptability, and resilience – qualities that are essential in an increasingly interconnected global society.In the professional sphere, the road less traveled can lead to groundbreaking innovations and career advancement. While many choose the well-trodden path of conventional careers, those who dare to forge their own trails often uncover novel opportunities. Entrepreneurs who identify untapped marketneeds and develop innovative solutions have the potential to revolutionize industries and create lasting impact. Similarly, professionals who are willing to take calculated risks and explore unconventional career paths may stumble upon unique niches or pioneering roles that allow them to leverage their abilities in ways they had never imagined.Undoubtedly, the road less traveled is fraught with obstacles and uncertainties. There will be moments of self-doubt, setbacks, and failures along the way. However, it is these very challenges that shape our character and fortify our determination. By embracing opportunities that lie beyond the beaten path, we develop a growth mindset – an understanding that our abilities are not fixed but can be cultivated through perseverance and a willingness to learn from our mistakes.In conclusion, while ability is a precious asset, it is opportunity that unlocks its true potential. The road less traveled, though arduous, is paved with countless opportunities for personal growth, intellectual enrichment, and professional advancement. By mustering the courage to veer from thewell-trodden path, we open ourselves to a world of possibilities, where our talents can flourish and our dreams can take flight. As Robert Frost so eloquently penned, "Two roads diverged in awood, and I – I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."篇2A Brighter Future for All HumanityAs high school students nervously picking up their pencils for the most critical examination of their academic careers, we have found ourselves unavoidably pondering the future that awaits us. The daunting challenges facing the world today – from environmental degradation and resource depletion to conflicts, inequality and human rights issues – may seem overwhelming. However, I firmly believe that our generation has the power to create lasting positive change and build a brighter future for all humanity.One of the most pressing issues we must tackle is climate change and its devastating impacts on the planet. The scientific evidence is unequivocal – human activities such as the burning of fossil fuels and deforestation have caused a rapid increase in global temperatures, leading to rising sea levels, extreme weather events, loss of biodiversity, and other far-reaching consequences. If left unchecked, climate change could rendersome parts of the world uninhabitable and trigger widespread food and water shortages, mass migration, and social unrest.Fortunately, our generation is more environmentally conscious than ever before. We have witnessed the power of youth-led movements, such as the Fridays for Future strikes inspired by Greta Thunberg, in raising awareness and pressuring governments to take bolder action. As we enter adulthood, we must continue to advocate for sustainable policies and practices, such as transitioning to clean energy sources, promoting green infrastructure, and protecting vital ecosystems. Each of us can also contribute by adopting eco-friendly lifestyles, reducing our carbon footprints, and supporting businesses that prioritize environmental responsibility.Another critical challenge we face is the persistent inequality and human rights violations that continue to plague many societies. Despite significant progress in recent decades, millions of people around the world still lack access to basic necessities like food, clean water, healthcare, and education. Moreover, discrimination based on gender, race, ethnicity, religion, or sexual orientation remains a harsh reality for countless individuals, hindering their ability to fully participate in and contribute to their communities.As the future leaders and changemakers, we must strive to create more inclusive and just societies where everyone has the opportunity to thrive, regardless of their background or circumstances. This starts with cultivating empathy, respect, and understanding for diverse cultures and perspectives within our communities. We should also actively support organizations and initiatives that promote human rights, provide humanitarian aid, and empower marginalized groups. Moreover, as we pursue careers in various fields, we must strive to uphold ethical principles and advocate for policies and practices that prioritize human dignity and equality.Closely tied to these challenges is the need to foster greater international cooperation and conflict resolution. In an increasingly interconnected world, the problems we face transcend national boundaries and require coordinated global efforts to address. From combating pandemics and terrorism to managing refugee crises and safeguarding cyber security, no single country can tackle these issues alone. We must work towards strengthening international institutions, building trust and understanding among nations, and promoting peaceful dialogue and diplomacy to resolve disputes.As future citizens of the world, we should embrace our shared humanity and strive to build bridges across cultures, religions, and ideologies. By learning from diverse perspectives and seeking common ground, we can foster greater empathy, collaboration, and solidarity in addressing global challenges. Moreover, we should actively support efforts to promote human rights, democratic values, and the rule of law worldwide, as these are essential foundations for lasting peace and stability.Underpinning all these efforts is the critical importance of education and the pursuit of knowledge. Education empowers individuals with the skills, critical thinking abilities, and ethical grounding necessary to navigate an increasingly complex world. It also fosters innovation, creativity, and the exchange of ideas that drive social, economic, and technological progress. As we embark on our academic journeys, we must embrace lifelong learning and intellectual curiosity, constantly seeking to expand our understanding of the world and our role in shaping it.Moreover, we must advocate for equitable access to quality education for all, regardless of socioeconomic status or geographic location. By investing in educational opportunities, particularly for marginalized communities, we can unlock the fullpotential of human capital and unleash a wellspring of innovation and progress that benefits society as a whole.As we stand on the precipice of adulthood, the future may seem uncertain and daunting. However, we must not be paralyzed by fear or cynicism. Instead, we should draw inspiration from the countless individuals throughout history who have overcome seemingly insurmountable challenges through determination, courage, and a unwavering commitment to creating a better world.Our generation has been blessed with unprecedented access to knowledge, technology, and global connectivity. We have the power to reshape narratives, challenge entrenched systems, and reimagine solutions to the world's most pressing problems. It is up to us to seize this opportunity and work tirelessly to build a more sustainable, equitable, and peaceful future for all humanity.While the road ahead may be arduous, we must never lose sight of our shared hopes and aspirations for a brighter tomorrow. Through collective action, compassion, and a steadfast belief in the inherent dignity and potential of every human being, we can create lasting positive change and leave a legacy of progress for generations to come.篇3Prompt: Write an essay based on the following quotation: The greatest discovery of my generation is that human beings can alter their lives by altering their attitudes of mind. (William James, American philosopher and psychologist)The Greatest Discovery of Our GenerationIf someone had told me a few years ago that simply changing my mindset could radically alter the course of my life, I would have dismissed it as new-age nonsense. Yet, here I am, a living testament to the profound truth behind these words from the eminent psychologist William James. His assertion that "human beings can alter their lives by altering their attitudes of mind" has proven to be one of the most significant revelations of our generation, a discovery that has empowered countless individuals, including myself, to break free from limiting beliefs and forge our destinies anew.As I reflect on my own journey, I can vividly recall the darkness that once enveloped my thoughts. Plagued by insecurities and self-doubt, I found myself trapped in a vicious cycle of negative self-talk, convincing myself that I was not good enough, that my dreams were beyond my reach. This toxicmindset cast a long shadow over my aspirations, hampering my potential and stunting my growth. It was as if I had willingly donned a pair of tinted glasses, distorting my perception of reality and blinding me to the boundless possibilities that lay ahead.However, a pivotal moment arrived when I stumbled upon James's words, a spark that ignited a fire within me. Slowly but surely, I began to challenge the narratives that had held me captive for so long. Through conscious effort and a relentless determination to reprogram my thought patterns, I embarked on a transformative journey of self-discovery and personal growth.The first step in this process was to acknowledge the immense power of the mind and its ability to shape our reality. I realized that our thoughts are not mere idle musings; they are the architects of our existence, laying the foundation for our beliefs, actions, and ultimately, our life experiences. By cultivating a positive, growth-oriented mindset, I could unlock doors that had previously remained shut, shattering theself-imposed limitations that had once confined me.Armed with this newfound understanding, I began to actively challenge and replace negative thought patterns with empowering beliefs. It was a arduous process, requiringunwavering commitment and a steadfast belief in my ability to change. Each time a self-defeating thought crept into my consciousness, I consciously countered it with a positive affirmation, reminding myself of my inherent worth and potential.As I persisted in this practice, a remarkable transformation began to unfold. My self-confidence soared, and I found myself embracing challenges that I would have once shied away from. Opportunities that had previously seemed out of reach became attainable, as my mindset shifted from one of limitation to one of boundless possibility.The impact of this mental shift extended far beyond my personal life, spilling over into my academic and professional pursuits. With a renewed sense of determination and self-belief, I approached tasks with a heightened level of focus and dedication, consistently pushing myself to new heights. Obstacles that once seemed insurmountable became mere stepping stones on my path to success, as I learned to reframe challenges as opportunities for growth and self-discovery.Moreover, this mindset shift had a profound impact on my relationships and interactions with others. By radiating positivity and projecting an aura of confidence, I found myself attractinglike-minded individuals who shared my zest for life and desire for personal growth. These connections not only enriched my life but also provided invaluable support and encouragement, further fueling my journey of self-transformation.As I stand here today, basking in the warmth of my newfound empowerment, I am filled with an overwhelming sense of gratitude for William James's timeless wisdom. His words have not only illuminated the path to my personal growth but have also shed light on one of the greatest discoveries of our generation: the immense power of the human mind to shape our reality.In a world that often seems saturated with negativity and limitations, this realization serves as a beacon of hope, reminding us that we are not mere spectators in our own lives but active participants with the ability to write our own scripts. By embracing a positive, growth-oriented mindset, we can unleash our full potential and create the lives we truly desire.To my fellow students and peers, I implore you to embrace this discovery and harness the transformative power of your thoughts. Shed the shackles of self-doubt and limiting beliefs, and embrace the boundless possibilities that lie within you. Remember, the greatest change often begins with the smallestshift in perspective, and by altering your attitude of mind, you have the power to alter the trajectory of your life in ways you never thought possible.In closing, I leave you with a challenge: embark on your own journey of self-discovery and personal growth. Embrace the wisdom of William James, and let his words be the catalyst that ignites your own transformation. For in doing so, you will not only unlock your full potential but also contribute to one of the greatest discoveries of our generation – the realization that we are the architects of our own destinies, and the power to shape our lives lies within the depths of our minds.。
2017英语二卷作文范文
2017英语二卷作文范文Dear Sir or Madam,I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. As a frequent user of our university library, I have come to appreciate the vast resources and tranquil environment it provides for students. However, I believe there are areas where the library could be further improved to better serve the student body. I am writing to offer a few suggestionsthat I hope will be considered.Firstly, I have noticed that the library's opening hours are not sufficient to accommodate the study schedules of many students, particularly those who have evening classes orpart-time jobs. Extending the library's operating hours, especially during exam periods, would be a significantbenefit to those of us who rely on the library for late-night study sessions.Secondly, while the library's collection is extensive, there are certain areas where it could be updated. For instance, the section on modern technology and digital media could be expanded to include the latest publications and research materials. This would be particularly helpful for students and faculty members who are engaged in cutting-edge research in these fields.Additionally, the availability of study spaces, especiallyduring peak times, can be quite challenging. It would be greatly appreciated if more study areas could be created, perhaps by reconfiguring the current layout or by adding more seating in underutilized areas.Lastly, I would like to suggest the implementation of a more user-friendly online reservation system for books and study rooms. The current system can be cumbersome and often leads to confusion. A more streamlined and intuitive system would save students a considerable amount of time and frustration.I understand that implementing these changes may require time and resources, but I firmly believe that they would greatly enhance the library's ability to meet the needs of its users.I appreciate your attention to these matters and look forward to the potential of seeing these improvements in the near future.Thank you for your dedication to providing a valuable resource for our academic community.Yours sincerely,[Your Name]。
2017高考二卷英语作文
2017高考二卷英语作文Dear Friend,I am writing to share my experience and reflections on the 2017 National College Entrance Examination (Gaokao) English composition section, which was a significant part of the test that year.The prompt for the composition was to write a letter to a foreign friend who was planning to visit China. The letter was supposed to provide advice on what to bring and how to prepare for the trip. It was an opportunity for students to showcase their ability to communicate effectively in English, as well as their knowledge of Chinese culture and customs.In my letter, I began by expressing my excitement about my friend's upcoming visit. I then provided a list of recommended items to pack, such as a camera to capture the beauty of China's landscapes, a guidebook to navigate therich history and traditions, and appropriate clothing for the varying weather conditions.Furthermore, I emphasized the importance of learning a few basic Chinese phrases to facilitate communication and enhance the cultural experience. I also suggested that my friend should try local cuisine, as food is a significant aspect of Chinese culture.Lastly, I offered to be a guide during their stay, promising to show them around the city and introduce them to the local customs and traditions. I concluded the letter by expressing my anticipation for our time together and my friend's discovery of the charm of China.Writing this composition was a chance for me to reflect on the cultural richness of my country and to think about how to bridge the gap between different cultures. It was also a test of my English writing skills, requiring me to organize my thoughts clearly and express them in a coherent and engaging manner.I hope that my friend's visit will be a memorable one, filled with new experiences and a deeper understanding of the beauty and diversity of China.Best wishes,[Your Name]This composition is a hypothetical example of what a student might have written for the 2017 Gaokao English composition section. The actual content would vary based on theindividual student's experiences, knowledge, and writing style.。
高考英语二轮复习专题五 习题讲评 课二 Word版含解析
短文改错4步曲——再看句法技法一明确定语从句类型，关系词要分清1．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)They also had a small pond which they raised fish.解析：which→where或which前加in本句是含有定语从句的复合句，先行词是pond，引导词在定语从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where引导，相当于in which，故which改为where或在其前加in。
2. (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.解析：they→that/which分析句子结构可知，the things是先行词，其后是定语从句，从句缺少主语，指物，故引导词应用that或which。
3．(2016·四川高考)The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favorite.解析：what→that/which或去掉what先行词为The dishes，且定语从句中cooked后缺少宾语，故应用that或which引导定语从句，因其在从句中作宾语，也可省略关系代词。
4．(2018·陕西西安八校联考)I am a 25-year-old young man which graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.解析：which→who/that本句中含有定语从句，先行词为man，指人，且在从句中作主语，应用who或that引导。
5．There are many people think that wealth is better than health.解析：think前加who或think→thinking分析句子结构可知，people后为定语从句，先行词为many people，故用who引导该定语从句；因many people和think之间是主谓关系，也可以用现在分词thinking作many people的后置定语。
2017高考英语卷2作文
2017高考英语卷2作文It was a hot summer day, and I was hanging out with my friends at the beach. The sun was shining, the waves were crashing, and we were having a blast. Suddenly, I heard someone yelling for help. I looked around and saw a young boy struggling in the water. Without thinking, I dove in and swam towards him.As I reached the boy, I could see the fear in his eyes.I grabbed him and started swimming back to shore. It was a tough battle against the strong waves, but I refused to give up. Finally, we made it back to safety, and the boy was reunited with his family. It felt amazing to have been able to help someone in need.After the incident, I couldn't stop thinking about the fragility of life. It made me realize how important it is to cherish every moment and to always be ready to lend a helping hand. I felt grateful for the opportunity to make a difference in someone's life, and it inspired me to striveto be a better person.The experience also taught me the importance of being aware of my surroundings. It's easy to get caught up in the fun and excitement, but we should never forget to stay vigilant and be prepared for unexpected situations. It's a lesson that I will carry with me for the rest of my life.In the end, I was just grateful that I was in the right place at the right time. It was a reminder that life isfull of surprises, and it's up to us to rise to the occasion when the moment calls for it. I felt proud of myself for not hesitating to jump into action, and it was a day that I would never forget.。
高考英语二轮复习专题五书面表达第一节对点剖析精准增分课后综合提能
第一节 对点剖析 精准增分假定你是李华，你校交流生Tom 很喜欢中国象棋，并想向你学下中国象棋。
请你根据下面的要点给他写一封电子邮件：1．简要介绍中国象棋；2．表示乐意传授，并告知具体的安排(时间、地点等)；3．你的要求及希望。
第一步 审题谋篇1．审体裁：电子邮件2．选时态：一般现在时为主3．定人称：第一人称为主4. 绘结构：⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧ 开头——导语段：写信背景主体——主体段：介绍中国象棋、乐意传授并告知具体安排、提出要求结尾——收尾段：展示希望第二步 列提纲，要点全1．中国象棋可以追溯到古代，毫无疑问，对中国人们有重要影响。
①中国象棋可以追溯到古代 Chinese chess goes_back_to_ancient_times②毫无疑问，中国象棋对中国人们有重要影响 There is no doubt that Chinese_chess_has_a_great_impact_on_Chinese_people2．我准备本周六下午在学生中心教你如何下棋。
①我准备本周六下午在学生中心教你 I am_ready_to_teach_you_this_Saturday_afternoon_at_our_Student_Center②我教你如何下棋 I teach you how_to_play_it3．提前了解一些规则十分有益。
①提前了解规则 learn a few rules_about_the_chess_ahead_of_time②那非常有用 It_is_very_useful第三步 选句式，亮而雅1．我一听说你喜欢中国象棋我就下定决心尽我所能帮助你。
表达方式一：I__decided_to_assist_you_as_soon_as__I__had_known__you_have_a_preference_for_Chinese_chess. (as soon as)表达方式二：Hardly_had__I__known_that_you_have_a__preference_for_Chinese_ chess_when__I_determined_to_assist_you_with_all_my_might. (倒装结构)2．中国象棋可以追溯到古代，毫无疑问，对中国人们有重要影响。
2017高考全国2英语作文
2017高考全国2英语作文In 2017, the English essay prompt for the national college entrance exam was quite challenging. It required a candid and diverse approach to writing, avoiding the usual patterns of coherence and linearity. Here's my attempt at capturing the essence of the task:First off, let's talk about the excitement of exam day. You know, waking up early, feeling a mix of nervousness and anticipation. It's like that big game you've beenpracticing for, finally here! The atmosphere in the school was electric, everyone chatting and laughing to ease the tension.And then, there was the essay itself. Man, that was a beast! But it was also kind of fun, you know? Trying to figure out what the examiners were looking for, and then putting your thoughts into words. I remember scratching my head a few times, but then suddenly, an idea would hit me like a bolt of lightning!After the exam, it was all about relaxation. We wentout for lunch, celebrating the end of a stressful period. Everyone was talking about their answers, comparing notes.It was like a post-game analysis session, but without the winner or loser mindset.Looking back, that exam was a real turning point for me. It taught me that no matter how hard something seems, you can always find a way through if you just stay calm and focused。