小学六年级英语写作教案

精锐教育学科教师辅导教案

1.回顾上次课内容

一.（总）知识梳理

【知识梳理】

1.中考写作常见考查方式：

2.中考学生作文水平分析

根据历年中考阅卷老师总结，总体上来说，中考学生作文分为五类：

（1）优秀学生作文：结构清晰、开头语与结尾语短小精悍、能使用精彩句或词语,这是平时训练有素之结果，即为A类作文。

（2）中等偏上学生作文：结构蛮清晰，但是句子中出现少许语法错误，即为B类作文。

（3）中等学生作文：结构上稍有欠缺，句中有少许语法错误，即为C类作文。

（4）中等偏下学生作文：从结构上来说，阅卷者能看到学生所要表述的内容，但是语法错误铺天盖地，此类

5.作文常见错误——标题书写错误

文章标题（title）应写在纸的第一行的中间，和正文之间应隔一至四行。文章标题的第一个单词的第一个字母必须大写。标题中每一个实词的第一个字母也要大写。

错误标题：a good Friend of mine

正确标题：A Good Friend of Mine

文章标题一般由名词、名词词组、介词短语、动名词、动名词短语或句子来充当。当陈述句作为文章标题，末尾不用句号。但如果是问句，末尾应用问号；如果标题是感叹句或祈使句，句尾用感叹号。

错误标题：Make Our Country Green

正确标题：Make Our Country Green！

6.作文常见错误——审题失误

有些考生在审题时不够仔细，往往还没有看清题意就急于下笔，偏离了主题。例如，某省中考作文要求考生写一项自己最喜欢的课外活动。有些考生却将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“自己最喜欢的课外活动”的主题。根据中考作文的评分原则，若作文不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。请看下面的失误文章：

I’m a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. At school, my classmates and I ofte n take part in different school activities. I’m interested in computer science and I often take part in the computer activities in my school. At schoo l, many of my school friends enjoys ball games, racing, music, dancing, art and so on. I learn to get useful things from the Internet. I think it is important to learn to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. There is no doubt that computers will be more and more useful.

这篇文章通篇没有涉及课外活动这个主题，犯了审题不清的错误。

需要指出的是，有些学生虽然审题成功了，但又犯了扣题不紧的错误。文章中的一些句子与主题思想无关，违反了单一性的原则。中考英语书面表达题的篇幅非常有限，因此，考生在写作时务必要精心组织教材，紧扣主题。下面这篇文章就有扣题不紧的问题。

请你写篇报道，说明太白山旅游环境的变化。

要点如下：

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原文：

1.Write at least 50 words about the topic “The plan for the Open Day at my school (以“我校开放日的计划”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格）Suggested questions：

When will the Open Day be?

What will your parents do on the Open Day?

Do you like the Open Day? Why or Why not?

【答案】The Open Day will be on June 1st. On that day, my parents and I will go to school early. First, they will visit our classroom. Next, they will listen to the music in the music room. Then, they will look at the English Club noticeboard in the library. After that, we will play games together in the playground. Finally, they will talk with our teacher in the teachers’ office. I like the Open Day because we will have a good time.

【分析】The Open Day will be on June 1st. On that day, my parents and I will go to school early. First, they will visit our classroom. Next, they will listen to the music in the music room. Then, they will look at the English Club noticeboard in the library. After that, we will play games together in the playground. Finally, they will talk with our teacher in the teachers’ office. I like the Open Day because we will have a good time.

2.Write at least 50 words about the topic “A plan to visit…” （以“参观的…的计划” 题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

•When and where will you go there?

•Who will you go with? How are you going there?

•What are you going to do there?

•What do you think your visit will be?

【答案】A plan to visit Yu Garden

My cousin will come to Shanghai for a holiday this coming Saturday. I’m going to take her to visit Yu Garden. It’s far away from my home, so we will go there by bus, then by underground. Yu Garden is famous for local snacks. We can have different kinds of food there. My cousin likes shopping. So do I. I will buy something special for her. We can also visit many interesting places such as Chenghuang Temple, Jiuqu Bridge and so on. I’m looking forward to seeing her. I think we will have a good time.