地道英语写作 (1)
英语考研作文范文(精选十一篇)
英语考研作文范文(精选十一篇)英语考研作文范文(篇一)Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to1) inform them about the details, and2) encourage them to participate.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not use your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead.Do not write your address. (10 points)【范文】My dear classmates，May I have your attention, please? On the evening of January 4th, 2023, namely, this Friday night, we will hold a charity sale at the school auditorium for the purpose of helping the children who need help.Those kids who come from remote areas lack proper and fine education. Our assistance can improve their lives and even may change their destinies. Some stars, local industrial bosses and all thestaff of our school will attend the activity.I trust that everyone has a kind heart and believe that our help can really make a big difference. Thank you very much for your kindness and I am looking forward to seeing you on time.Yours sincerely,Li Ming(注：电子邮件的格式可以采用“齐头式”，即为了换行方便而每行开头都以顶头的格式对齐。
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要点如下：1.初次见面不要站的太近或触摸陌生人；握手互致问候。
2.要有时间观念，准时约会。
3.在外吃饭时AA制。
4.在餐馆，旅馆等接受服务时付小费。
词汇提示：have a date with sb和某人约会；go Dutch (with sb) (同某人)各付各的费用
注意： 1.词数120左右，开头已为你写好。
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4.为了提高你的学习成绩，你最好和Mary保持最远的距离。（一句多译）
地道英语写作教程(上册)-unit 5
The value of figures of speech
They contribute to the ornament of style
In spite of different special character or effects, they all have one thing in common, and that is, they do good beyond anything else to the decoration of style. Some figures create a picture before the mind; others satisfy the sense of proportion; others decorate the subject by contrasting it with some other, like or unlike; and thus in various ways they appeal to the aesthetical sensibilities.
Definition
As for figures, there are many observations which show us the attractiveness of them and people’s love for them. Jay Heinrichs described figures of speech as the ways of changing ordinary language through repetition, substitution, sound, and wordplay.
Introduction Lexical stylistic devices Syntactical stylistic devices Phonetic stylistic devices Key to Exercises
【小站教育】雅思写作素材分享：地道俚语
英语常用俚语汇总英语俚语是一种非正式的语言，通常用在非正式的场合，所以在用这些俚语是一定要考虑到所用的场合和对象，最好不要随意用这些俚语。
下面是一些常用的俚语。
Aa bird in the hand is worth two the bush 一鸟在手，胜似二鸟在林a blank slate 干净的黑板（新的一页，新的开始）a bone to pick 可挑剔的骨头（争端，不满）a cat nap 打个盹儿a chip off the old block 大木头上砍下来的小木片（子肖其父）a chip on one"s shoulder 肩头的木片（自卑感，因为自卑而爱找别人麻烦；喜欢向人挑衅）a cake walk 走着去吃蛋糕（很容易的事）a headache 头痛（麻烦事）a knock out 击倒（美得让人倾倒）a load off my mind 心头大石落地a nut 傻子，疯子a pain in the neck 脖子疼（苦事）a piece of cake 一块蛋糕（小菜一碟，易事一件）a pig 猪猡a shot in the dark 盲目射击（瞎猜）a short fuse 引线短（脾气火爆）a sinking ship 正在下沉的船（越来越糟糕）a slam dunk 灌篮（轻而易举的事）a slap in the face 脸上挨了一耳光（公然受辱）a smoke screen 烟幕a social butterfly 社交蝴蝶（善于交际，会应酬的人）a stick in the mud 烂泥中的树枝a thick skin 厚脸皮a thorn in someone"s side 腰上的荆棘（芒刺在背）a turn coat 反穿皮袄的人（叛徒）an uphill battle 上坡作战（在逆境中求胜）a weight off my shoulders 放下肩头重担ace 得满分（得到完美的结果）all ears 全是耳朵（洗耳恭听）all thumbs 满手都是大拇指（笨手笨脚）an ace up my sleeve 袖里的王牌an open and shut case明显的事件ants in one"s pants 裤裆里有蚂蚁（坐立不安）Bback in the saddle重上马鞍（重整旗鼓）back on track重上轨道（改过自新）backfire逆火（弄巧成拙，适得其反）ball and chain 铁球铁链，甜蜜的枷（老婆）beat a dead horse 鞭打死马令其奔驰（徒劳）beaten by the ugly stick 被丑杖打过（生得难看）beggar can"t be choosers 讨饭的谈不上挑三拣四bet on it 下这一注稳赢（有把握，无疑）bet your life 把命赌上（绝对错了）better half 我的另一半between a rack and a hard place 进退维谷（前有狼后有虎）big headed 大脑袋（傲慢，自大）bigger fish to fry 有更大的鱼要炸（有更重要的事要办）bite off more than one can chew 贪多嚼不烂bite the bullet 咬子弹（强忍痛苦）birds of a feather flock together 羽毛相同的鸟总飞成一群（物以类聚）blow up in you face 在眼前爆炸（事情完全弄砸了）bologna 胡说，瞎说break a leg 折断一条腿（表演真实，演出成功）break the ice 破冰（打破僵局）bright 聪明，灵光brown nose 讨好，谄媚bug somebody 使人讨厌bull in a china shop 瓷器店里的蛮牛（笨拙的人，动辄弄坏东西的人）bump into 撞上（巧遇）burn bridges 烧桥（过河拆桥）burst your bubble 扎破泡泡（打破人的幻想，煞风景）bury one"s head in the sand 把头埋在沙里（自欺欺人）butterfingers奶油手指（抓不稳东西的人）butterflies in my stomach肚里有只蝴蝶（心里紧张，七上八下）buy the farm买下农场（死了）Ccall it a night 一日事毕，可以睡觉了can"t teach an old dog new tricks 老狗学不会新把戏cash in my chips兑换筹码（睡觉，就寝）chicken 鸡（胆小鬼）circle the wagons 把篷车围成一圈（严阵以待）clean up one"s act 自我检点，自我改进come down in bucket 倾盆大雨come down in sheets 整片整片地下（倾盆大雨）cool your lips 冷静下来cost someone an arm and a leg 要花上一条胳膊一条腿（代价昂贵）count on something /doing something 这事靠得住count your chickens before they hatch 蛋还没孵化，先数小鸡（未雨绸缪）crock 破瓦片（无用之物，废话）cross the line 跨过线（做得太过分了）cross that bridge when we come to it 到了桥头就过桥（船到桥头自然直）cry over spilled milk 为泼了牛奶而哭（为过去的失败而懊丧）cushion the blow 给垫着点儿（说话绵软一点，以免打击太重）cut to the chase 抄捷径去追猎物（不绕圈子，开门见山，单刀直入）Ddaily grind 例行苦事，每天得干的苦工days are numbered 来日无多dead center 正当中deadend street 死路，死巷子dog 狗（丑八怪）domino effect 多米诺骨牌效应don"t hold your breath 别憋着呼吸（别期望太高）don"t look a gift horse in the mouth 赠马不看牙（收人礼物别嫌好道歹）down to the wire 最后关头down under 南边（常指面半球的澳洲）downhill from here 从此都是下坡路（自此每况愈下）drop the ball 掉了球（失职）Eempty nest 空巢（儿女长大离家）every cloud has a silver lining 乌云也有银边（祸兮福所倚，塞翁失马）Ffall into place 落实，就绪fender bender 撞弯保险杠的车祸（小车祸）fight tooth and nail 爪牙并施，拚命抵抗fine line 细线（微妙的差别）fish out of water 如鱼离水flash in the pan 淘金盆里的反光（空欢喜一场，好景不长）fork in the road 岔路framed 被陷害，遭栽赃full throttle 加足马力Gget a foot in the door 一脚已经进了门里（获得立足点，占一份）get hitched 拴起来（结婚）get off on the wrong foot 起步便错（第一印象不佳）get the ball rolling 让球滚起来（动起手来）get/give the green light 绿灯亮了（获准行动）give the shirt off one"s back 连衬衫都肯脱给人（慷慨成性）go one step too far 多走了一步（做得太过分了）go out on a limb 爬高枝（担风险）go overboard 过火go to hell in a hand basket 坐着吊篮下地狱（一坏不可收拾）go to one"s head 上头上脸，冲昏头脑go under 沉没（破产）goose bumps 鸡皮疙瘩grasp for straws 抓稻草（绝望中的挣扎，快要淹死的人连漂浮的稻草也抓）guts 胆子Hhot 惹火have one"s cake and eat it too 既想留着蛋糕，又想吃（既要鱼，又要熊掌）hindsight is 20/20 事后的先见之明hit stride 脚步走顺了hit the books 撞书（用功）hit the hay 倒在稻草上（睡觉、就寝）hit the jackpot 中了头彩hit the road 上路hold the key to my heart 掌管我心灵的钥匙hold your horses 勒住你的马（慢来）hang somebody out to dry 把……晾起来了（把……坑苦了在欣赏欧美电影时，是否会发现很多英语俚语都很有趣。
地道英语作文范文
地道英语作文范文English:Living in an English-speaking country, it is important to use authentic English in our writing to effectively communicate with others. Using slang, idioms, and natural expressions can make our writing more interesting and engaging. For example, instead of saying "very good," we could use phrases like "top-notch" or "outstanding." Additionally, it is crucial to be aware of cultural references and use them appropriately. These elements not only enhance the quality of our writing but also help us connect with a wider audience. Therefore, practicing using authentic English regularly will not only improve our language skills but also make our writing more compelling and effective.中文翻译:在一个英语国家生活，使用地道的英语在写作中有效地与他人交流非常重要。
使用俚语、习语和自然表达可以使我们的写作更有趣和吸引人。
例如，我们可以使用诸如“top-notch”或“outstanding”之类的短语代替“very good”。
17073-7地道英语写作教程(上册)(第2版)-张清-答案
Unit 11.（1）beneficial （2）good （3）profitable （4）healthful （5）healthy2. Omitted3. smug: 沾沾自喜的，自鸣得意的，表现出对自己或自己的处境令人反感的满意与自以为是的自大。
这个词体现出小镇人过度的自我满足，具有很强的讽刺意味。
如果用satisfied, content 等词就表达不出这个效果来。
placid: 强调的是安静、不被外界打扰，而且有自满、自足的意思。
这个词进一步描写出小镇人自我知足、与世隔绝的状态。
bake 一词的应用形象地强调了夏日太阳的灼热和干燥。
4. crack town on→ crack down onlake allowances for → make allowance forkeep abreast with → keep abreast offar dry from perfection → more dry than perfectionsin → thin5. Noun phrasesrelaxation, entertainment, and education; pressure, challenges, or concentration; Casablanca or Sleepless; first-run movies, rock and classical music concerts, and specialized sports events; colors, numbers, and letters;Verb phraseswe can use television to relax, to have fun, and to make ourselves smarter; to access and learn from all the information resources on the Internet; buy or rent movies to show on their television sets through DVD players or VCRs; see and hear; we like to criticize it and search for its flaws;Mixed phrasessoothing and restful; leaves viewers refreshed and ready to take on the world againUnit 21)12 simple sentences (简单句), 4 complex sentences (复合句), 5 compound sentences (并列句)；如语篇所示，2) More simple sentences than the other are used in the essay.A good companion is better than a fortune, for a fortune cannot purchase those elements of character which make companionship a blessing（并列）. The best companion is one who is wiser and better than ourselves, for we are inspired by his wisdom and virtue to nobler deeds（并列复合）. Greater wisdom and goodness than we possess lifts us higher mentally and morally.（简单句）“A man is known by the companion he keeps.”（简单) It is always true.(简单) Companionship of a high order is powerful to develop character.简单 Character makes character in the associations of life faster than anything else.(简单) Purity begets purity, like begets like; and this fact makes the choice of companion in early life more important even than that of teachers and guardians(并列)It is true that we cannot always choose all of our companions, some are thrust upon us by business or the social relations of life, we do not choose them, we do not enjoy them; and yet, we have to associate with them more or less. (复合)The experience is not altogether without compensation, if there be principle enough in us to bear the strain.(复合) Still, in the main, choice of companions can be made, and must be made.(简单) It is not best or necessary for a young person to associate with “Tom, Dick, and Harry” without forethought or purpose. (简单)Some fixed rules about the company he or she keeps must be observed. (简单)The subject should be uttermost in the thoughts, and canvassed often. (简单)Companionship is education, good or not; it develops manhood or womanhood, high or low; it lifts soul upward or drags it downward; it minister to virtue or vice.(并列) There is no half way work about its influence.(简单) If it ennobles, it does grandly, if it demoralizes, it doesn’t it devilishly.(复合) It saves or destroys lustily.(简单) Nothing in the world is surer than this. (简单)Sow virtue, and the harvest will be virtue, Sow vice, and the harvest will be vice.(并列) Good companionship helps us to sow virtue; evil companionship helps us to sow vice. (并列)2. （1）When somebody shows up, he tells you to come right in.（2）The communication is built on a high-speed track for society is linked by those smart sciences.（3）If a person is obese, he/she should consider changing their diet and lifestyle, rather than doing a liposuction.（4）People cannot avoid making unknown mistakes, however, we can choose the correct attitude towards them.（5）If you always help others in trouble, the society will become warmer and more harmonious.3.（1）Gradually, the couple are fed up with each other, which leads to an extramarital affair.（2）People who are having an affair shows no respect for his or her mate.（3）Smile is really meaningful. So never forget to smile.（4）Blindness is a state both physically and mentally.（5）What’s worse, some of them have done something dangerous which threatens our safety of life and property.（6）This is an urgent problem.（7）On the one hand, no matter how good quality a cigarette owns or how expensive it is, one thing remains that plenty of poisonous substances are encompassed in it such as nicotine, tar and cadmium.（8）It is because the wealthy people have more power and money to be released on bail and have much knowledge of taking advantage of the loophole in law which leaves the poor and racial minorities in a disadvantage position.（9）But we do not come to school just for studying.（10）One of us need to have a new dimension to it.4.（1）and （2）so （3）otherwise（4）and (5) but5.①The students were protesting, so the report was canceled.②Flying is relatively safe because air traffic is closely controlled.③Tigers were common long, long time ago, but they are now increasingly rare.④Obviously, judging a person is extremely complex due to various unreliable factors.⑤The communication is built on a high-speed track because society is linked by those smart sciences.Unit 31. (1) The president has made the following announcement: students who need financial assistance may apply at the Student Affairs Office.(2) As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.” So if you prepare in advance, you will succeed.(3) Glancing through the paper entitled Why Not Play Truant, Mr. Smith frowned angrily.(4) The professor said, “Confucius says, ‘Do not impose on others what you do not desire yourself.’ This is a very good principle of moral conduct.”(5) Seventeen years ago this month I quit work, or, if you prefer, I retired from business.(6) Molly Herman, who lives next door, got a raise.(7) I waited for him; moreover, I saved him a seat.(8) She enjoys reading Shakespeare’s plays and has read Hamlet, Romeo and Juliet, King Lear and The Verchant of Venice.(9) They unlocked the cabin and carried in our furniture: a couch, four chairs, a table, and two beds.(10) The dungeon (really the basement) haunted us.2. (1)This new creation will make the people able to jailbreak their devices easily, and moreover this software will unlock some new features.(2) Nevertheless, we all know that performance is a key ingredient of programming.(3) This is your new manager Jack.(4) It is because our spare time is very limited.(5) For the source of pressure, most of time, is that a task should be finished in short time.(6) As long as being a rational consumer, the waste of money can be avoided, and then money can be saved by normal expenses.(7) Even there will be, the content that has been learned in middle school is pretty enoughfor them.(8) Life is a big container; we have to get along with others but also ourselves.(9) The distance you ride longer, and the price is higher.(10) My friends bought a lot of gifts for me, such as books, flowers, CDs and toys.(11) Laufer does not explicitly present each type of knowledge from the perspective of reception versus production, instead she (1990b, 2002) simply comments that these types of word knowledge could be active or passive.3. Nowadays, it is universally accepted that the issue of crimes is increasingly serious. But at the same time, controversy has arisen over whether the media should report the details of crimes. Some people assert that the media coverage of crimes details should be banned while others claims that such reports have their own advantages. As far as I am concerned, I would side with the former group.On the one hand, we should acknowledge that reports of criminal details may carry great risks. In the first place, they render many citizens afraid of crimes and worried about their own safety. Obviously, a lot of city residents will fear that the same crimes will happen to them, which can even lead to serious psychological problems. Furthermore, media reports of criminal details are unfair for the victims of crimes. The victims who have suffered greatly from these crimes would feel they were forced to experience a nightmare again. Above all, potential criminals can learn from such reports details to avoid mistakes, which may add to the difficulty the police have in capturing criminals.On the other hand, media reports of criminal details may carry certain benefits. The fundamental reason for this is that such reports keep the public alert to crimes. Should all these reports disappear from the media, it would be very hard for the public to know about the crimesoccurring in society. Even so, it can be noted that the news of crimes spread by the media is often exaggerated. Therefore, the public may have a hard time deciding how dependable an alarming crime report would be.To conclude, although detailed reports of crimes may have their own advantages, I firmly believe that they bring us great risks.Unit 41.1)Sports cars (require specific care and precise maintenance in order to keep them runningwell).2)Tonny probably is( the most irresponsible person I have ever seen).3)Expert in child-rearing agree that children (need both affection and discipline). (ibid, P106)4)Education in any society is (a mirror of that society).5)Eating in the Student Center Cafeteria is （a quite pleasant experience）.6)Jazz （reflects two contradictory facets of American life）.7)In fact, a turtle’s shell is( a great work of engineering and design).8)But Galileo’s greatest invention was( his telescope,) which enabled him to make somesignificant contributions to astronomy.9)We cannot expect to go through life (depending on others to do our thinking or to solve ourpersonal problems).10)People immigrate to a new country(for a variety of purposes).2. Keys to be open in this part.3. 1) C 2) D 3) A 4) C 5) BUnit 51. (1) a. George felt as worn out as the elbows on his work shirt.b. George felt as worn out as an old phonograph record.c. George felt worn out, like an old punching bag.d. George felt as worn out as the rusted Impala that carried him to work every day.e. George felt as worn out as an old joke that was never very funny in the first place.f. George felt worn out and useless--just another broken fan belt, a burst radiator hose, a stripped wing nut, a discharged battery.(2) Open(3) Open(4) Open(5) Open2. Nothing can be more imposing than the magnificence of English park scenery. Vast lawns that extend like sheets of vivid green (simile), with here and there clumps of gigantic trees, heaping up rich piles of foliage; the solemn pomp of groves and woodland glades, with the deer trooping (personification) in silent herds (personification) cross them; the hare bounding away to the covert; or the pheasant, suddenly bursting upon the wing: the brook, taught to wind in natural meandering or expand into a glassy lake (metaphor): the sequestered pool, reflecting the quivering trees, with yellow leaf sleeping (personification)on its bosom, and the trout roaming fearlessly (personification) about its limpid waters; while some rustic temple or sylvan statue, grown greenand dank with age, gives an air of classic sanctity to the seclusion. There are but a few of the features of park scenery…. (Washington, Irving)3.(1) On the Internet, we can send e-mail messages, make phone calls, read all kinds of cartoon and go to the movies by ourselves.(2) On the Internet we can do shopping, booking tickets for the train or the plane and so on.(3) The Internet is both educational and relaxing in our life.(4) It widens students' knowledge and horizons, and meanwhile cultivates their independence and personalities, and even improves their foreign language competence easily and really.(5) Another benefit of studying abroad is cultivating students’ independence and building their characters.(6) In the contrary, the judicial interpretation of the Supreme People’s Court engaged not only in the abstract interpretation, but also in the law content amending and invalidating.(7) In view of the actual situation, we should strengthen the supervision of the NPC Standing Committee on Judicial Interpretation, strengthening the legislative interpretation and developing Law drafting, and amending revocation work.(8) He has to be a rapport builder and keeper, an active listener, an open minded and self-confident speaker, and so on.(9) So we could be more likely to make exercise as a regular part of our lives, rather than just to collapse in front of a screen every evening.(10) But this goal has been too difficult to achieve today; the existing laws prioritize economic growth rather than protect the environment.4.(1) I am scared of death. (hyperbole)(2) Last year Oxford University found me a visiting scholar. (personification)(3) His snoring is loud enough to awake the death. (hyperbole)(4) The spring breeze is kissing my face gently. (personification)(5) The treacherous sea has ruined many a steamer. (personification)5.(1) The Great Wall is made of the flesh and blood of numerous men in the history of China. (synecdoche)(2) He likes to chase skirts. (metonymy)(3) We six share the same roof in the students’ dormitory. (synecdoche)(4) He had to earn his daily bread by doing odd jobs. (metonymy)(5) The farms were short of hands during the harvest season. (metonymy)6.(1) Struggle and success stories are always encouraging, inspiring and instructing. (alliteration)(2) Mao Zedong passed away in 1976. (euphemism)(3) Optimists face life bravely in all cases: for rain or for shine, in sickness or in health, in difficulties or in smoothness. (antithesis)(4) We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. (Abraham Lincoln: Gettysburg Address) (euphemism) (5) It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of light, itwas the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct of Heaven, we were all going the other way… (Charles Dickens: A Tale of Two Cities) (antithesis)Unit 61.Part Ⅰ Several friends and I went to climb a steep mountain at night.Part Ⅱ With cliffy road and little light, we risked the danger of falling down the cliff.Part Ⅲ We were too scared to go on.Part Ⅳ We waited until daybreak and then climbed down.2-4 Omitted5.①It is about a terrible story of person-killing.②Yes, it is.③The narrator is the hero of the story, i.e. “I”.④It is told in the order of flashback.⑤The climax is when the old man was killed.Unit 71-4 Omitted5. EDABCFUnit 81. [Note: there are other possible answers–yours should be similar to these, but may not be exactly the same.]In the past, most women stayed at home to take care of housework such as cooking or cleaning. Women’s liberation has meant that this situation has been changed, and in modern society women are playing an almost equal role to men in employment. This has had significant effects, both in terms of the family, for example by improving quality of life and increasing children’s sense of independence, and also for society itself with greater equality for the sexes.The salary of a woman in her lifetime is generally much less than that of a man. She can nevertheless make a big addition to the family income. The most important result of this is an improved quality of life. By helping to keep a stable salary for the family, the pressure on the husband is much reduced, hence improving both the husband’s and the wife’s good feeling. Additionally, the things that can be bought by the family will also be raised. This means that the family can have enough money to buy more luxuries such as foreign travel and a family car.A further effect on the family is the promotion of independence in the children. Some might argue that having both parents working might be harmful to the children because of a lack of care by parents. However, such children have to learn to look after themselves at an earlier age, and their parents often depend on them to help with the housework. As a result, this teaches them important life skills.As regards society, the most significant impact of women going to work is greater sex equality. There are an increasing number of women who are becoming politicians, lawyers, and even CEOs and company managers. This in turn has led to greater equality for women in all areasof life, not just employment. Women are now allowed by law to vote, they can be in the armed forces, and they have legal rights to protect themselves against home violence or sex bothering or unfair treatment at work.In conclusion, the increasing number of women at work has brought about some important changes to family life, including improved quality of life and increased independence for children,as well as affecting society itself. It is clear that the sexes are still a long way from being equal inall areas of life, however, and perhaps the challenge for the present century is to ensure that this takes place.2.（1）Students who need extra money can hold down a fulltime temporary job during theirsummer vacation. （2）A person can also meet other people by going to parties. （3）In my opinion, people should write clearly. 3. This is definition essay.Introduction – Your definition of friendship. Try to begin your essay with a catchy opening, briefly introduce what your paper will be about. You will focus on three separate qualities that make up a good friend.2nd paragraph – Describe the first quality that makes up a good friend. You can provide specific examples from your own life. My most important quality in a good friend would be a good listener, who is always willing to give me advice and help me out whenever I am in need. Think about what matters most when you are choosing your friends.3rd paragraph – Describe the second quality that makes up a good friend. My second quality in any of my friends would be that they make me laugh and can cheer me up if I am feeling down. Once again, elaborate when you are writing. I would give you a specific example of when I was down, and ‘how’ my friends helped me feel better by making me laugh.4th paragraph or conclusion – Describe the third quality of a good friend. My third quality would be any friend of mine has to have similar values and beliefs as me, and enjoy the same pastimes as me, such as physical activities such as running or volleyball, and similar music tastes, etc. If you don’t write about a third quality, summarize what you have written so far. Your conclusion is similar to your introduction, just restate what you have already written and try to close or finish your paper with a strong statement such as : I don’t know how I would go on ifit weren’t for my friends. My best friends listen to me when I am in need, make me laugh whenI’m sad, and allow me to enjoy all of my favorite pastimes!4. Reasons why the youth drop out:•Didn’t like school in general or the school they were attending.•Were failing, getting poor grades, or couldn’t keep up with school work.•Didn’t get along with teachers and/or students.•Had disciplinary problems, were suspended, or expelled.•Didn’t feel safe in school•Got a job, had a family to support, or had trouble managing both schooland work.•Got married, got pregnant, or became a parent.•Had a drug or alcohol problemConcluding paragraph:One-third of the nation’s young people is a very considerable proportion,” says Barton. “Almost 45 years ago, James Conant, former president of Harvard, said that the dropout problem was ‘social dynamite.’ The explosion has occurred, and will continue to occur. This is seen in growing prison populations and increasing welfare costs; in ever lower wages; in a limited labor supply for, as we are told, an economy with an increasing appetite for educated workers; and in the likelihood of raising a new generation with dim prospects of doing better-and perhaps worst.5. Block Arrangement (four paragraphs)I. Introduction in which you state your purpose which is to discuss the differences between vacationing in the mountains or at the beachII. MountainA. ClimateB. Types of ActivitiesC. LocationIII. BeachA. ClimateB. Types of ActivitiesC. LocationIV. ConclusionPoint-by-Point or Alternating Arrangement (five paragraphs)I. Introduction in which you state your purpose which is to discuss differences between vacationing in the mountains or at the beachII. First difference between mountains and beaches is climateA. MountainsB. BeachIII. Second difference between mountains and beaches are types of activitiesA. MountainsB. BeachIV. Third difference between mountains and beaches is the locationA. MountainsB. BeachV. ConclusionUnit 91. d f a c b e2. (1) To begin with(2) for(3) Besides(4) Moreover(5) On the whole(6) Since(7) So far(8) but3. 1) The proposition is that mental health problems are common among young people. To consolidate his proposition, the writer applies evidential support, that is, statistics (up to 25% of children and young people under the age of 16 have a diagnosable mental health problem) and quotation from authorities (Department of Health estimates that between 10% and 20% of children will have a problem that is severe enough to require help). Obviously, it is an deductive demonstration.2)It is an inductive demonstration. The proposition is at the end of the text: nuclear technology shouldn't be denied or refused. To support his idea, the write use the strategy analogy: to compare the danger of nuclear power with that of a plane. In this way, the writer propose his argument by refuting the view of his opponent.4. referenceAs far as I'm concerned, it's a good idea for schools to ask students to evaluate their teachers.For one thing, students' evaluation informs teachers of how students react both to their teaching methods and to them as individuals. Teachers can not only improve the quality of teaching and instruction by weighing the criticisms but also get encouraged by favorable comment and praises from the students.For another, it's helpful for school administrators to get well informed. With students' opinions on their teachers and their lectures, it is easier for the policy makers to make an objective evaluation on the operation of the school and to make wise decisions in administration. However, good administrators know that student evaluations need to be reviewed with a keen eye for prejudice and adolescent attitudes.What's more, evaluating teachers is beneficial to students themselves. Making students' voices heard and valued is not only a way to improve teaching and learning, but also a demonstration of democracy. It encourages students to be independent thinkers and decision makers. Further more, evaluating their teachers urges students to think about the roles that teachers and students should play in teaching and learning, thus, help them to realize their responsibility for the efficiency of learning and to make progress.。
高考英语写作提升“努力做某事”可以怎么说？地道写作表达积累
高考英语写作提升“努力做某事”可以怎么说？地道写作表达积累一谈到“努力做某事”，很多同学只能想到try to do sth。
那么除了try to do sth，我们还可以用哪些表达呢？1.strive to do sth我们联系工作话题造个句：Many people strive to strike a good balance between work and life, but few of them achieve it.许多人努力实现工作与生活的平衡，但很少有人实现。
我们再联系近视话题造个句：Over the past few decades, the world, especially East Asia, has seen a stunning rise in the rate of short-sightedness. And a growing body of evidence has suggested that the main underlying reason for this is the fact that children spend large parts of the day indoors. Therefore, to prevent more children from suffering from myopia, parents and schools should strive to encourage them to engage in outdoor activities more frequently.在过去的几十年里，世界各国尤其是东亚地区的近视率以惊人的速度增长。
越来越多的证据表明，造成这一现象的主要原因是孩子们大部分时间都呆在室内。
因此，为了防止更多的学生近视，家长和学校应当努力鼓励学生多参与户外活动。
2. make an effort to do sth / make efforts to do sth比如：Though several fast-fashion companies have made efforts to curb their impact on labor and the environment — including H&M, with its green Conscious Collection line — Cline believes lasting change can only be effected by the customer.尽管多家快时尚公司已经努力地去控制他们对劳工和环境的影响——包括H&M公司，它推出了“绿色环保”系列产品——克莱恩认为只有消费者才能带来持久性的改变。
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阴谋论者，粉红水壶事件是。。。阴谋？哥们是政治系的吧？
If you ask me there never really was a pink Tupperware bottle. It's all a government
or just chilling with some ice cold beers.
Please distraught student, you must let go. Cherish the times you had with the bottle and
enjoy the memories. If you need to discuss this issue further, then I suggest you talk
the pixels, I've as in my time. It's obviously a stock
photo of a pink Tupperware bottle. If you Google "Tupperware bottle, model
We'll be seeing you...
这位没看明白，看来是国际学生：
SORRY EVERYONE
i'm afraid i have to ask somethings, Does anyone can tell me what is Tupperware pink
bottle? is that a bottle is pink and made by Tupperware
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Learning Objective
After learning this unit, you will be able to 1.define the kinds of college application writing, 2.grasp the elements of college application writing, 3.understand the basic structure of college application writing, 4.write 4 most frequent types of college application writing.
Requesting for Admission Form
Structure of a requesting letter for admission form
Conclusion (final paragraph) ● expressing gratitude for the reader’s attention to the letter ● acknowledging the inconvenience of the request
Requesting for Admission Form
Structure of a requesting letter for admission form
Introduction (first paragraph) ● a very brief introduction about yourself ● your purpose of writing this letter
I would greatly appreciate your sending me the application materials and any special information for international students.
Sincerely, Li Ming
Graduation Certification and notarization Graduation Certification Graduation Notarization
Requesting for Admission Form
Structure of a requesting letter for admission form
Introduction (first paragraph)
Body (next paragraph)
ConclusionBiblioteka (final paragraph)
Requesting for Admission Form
Structure of a requesting letter for admission form
Body (next paragraph) ● your background and goals ● how you meet the requirements of the university’s program ● how your background and ambitions coincide with the mission of this program.
Date of Issue:
Graduation Notarization
General Introduction
Graduation notarization is the formal document to make the certificate of graduation official.
制作单位：中国政法大学
Unit 11 College Application Writing
Requesting for Admission Form Graduation Certification and Notarization Personal Statement Letter of Recommendation Key to Exercises
Graduation Certification
General Introduction
A certificate of graduation is a formal document attesting to the truth that you have succeeded in finishing the 4-year course and graduating. It is a very important evidence of your academic ability while you are applying for university abroad.
Graduation Certification
Sample:
NOTARIZATION
This is to certify that the preceding duplicate is in accordance with its original copy of Graduation Certificate (No.950001)issued to Xu Yang by Peking University in July 2013. Both the official seal of the above-mentioned university and the signature of President on the original copy are found genuine.
Notary (Signature): Beijing Notary Public House (Seal):
People's Republic of China May 7, 2014
Personal Statement
• General introduction
• Significance of personal statement
General introduction
A requesting letter for admission form, a sort of business letter, asks the reader for such specific information as admission form for college application. Since such a letter requires a response, it is essential to make the letter specific, clear, concise and friendly so that the reader understands it easily and provides the information you need.
• Structure of a personal statement
• Points to note
Personal Statement
General introduction
Personal statements are about who you are, what has influenced your career path so far, your professional interests and where you plan to go. Its purpose is to persuade the admission committee that you are an applicant who should be chosen. It should make you yourself stand out from among a sea of similarly qualified candidates.
Graduation Certification
Sample:
Certificate of Graduation Certificate No.:＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊
This is to certify that Mr. Guo Rui, born on June 14th, 1990, has been majoring in Information & Computer Science in Shandong University from September 2008 to July 2012. Upon completion all the courses required by the four-year undergraduate program with qualified scores, he is qualified for graduation.
In accordance with Regulations on Academic Degrees of the People’s Republic of China, Mr. Guo Rui has been awarded the Bachelor’s Degree of Science.
President (Signature): Shandong University (seal):
Graduation Notarization
Content of graduation notarization
●The opening sentence is usually “This is to certify that…”,”This is to certify as follows:” ●What is notarized? ● Notarization number, ●Notary &seal ● Notary office & seal ● Date of notarization