高考英语作文概括、解析.

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高考英语写作范文解析

高考英语写作范文解析

高考英语写作范文解析引言高考英语写作是语言测试中最具挑战性的部分之一。

在有限的时间内,考生需要准确、流畅地表达自己的观点,并运用丰富的词汇和语法知识来构建一篇连贯的文章。

因此,了解和分析高分范文是提高写作能力的重要途径之一。

本文将解析高考英语写作范文,讨论其优点和值得借鉴的地方,帮助考生更好地准备和应对高考英语写作。

主体第一段:开门见山,表达清晰的观点好的范文应该在开篇就表述清晰的观点,让读者清楚地了解到作者要表达的中心思想。

例如,以下是一篇高考英语写作范文的开头:"Nowadays, more and more people choose to travel alone. Some people think it is a good way to relax and explore the world, while others believe it may bring more risks. In my opinion, traveling alone can be a valuable and rewarding experience if certain precautions are taken."这段开头非常简洁明了地表达了作者的观点——对于一个人带一定的风险,但如果采取一些预防措施,独自旅行可以是一种有价值且有回报的经历。

通过这样清晰的表达,读者可以立即知道文章将探讨的问题以及作者的观点。

第二段:论证观点,举例说明在范文的第二段,作者首先给出了一个论点,并通过具体的例子和细节来支持观点。

例如,以下是范文中的一段:"First of all, traveling alone allows individuals to fully immerse themselves in new surroundings. When traveling with others, it is natural to rely on them for companionship and support, and this may prevent us from fully experiencing and appreciating our surroundings. On the other hand, when we travel alone, we have the freedom to explore at our own pace and to choose our own destinations. We can spend as much time as we want in a particular place, and we can change our plans on a whim. For example, during my solo trip to Japan last year, I came across a small town that was not on my itinerary. Curiosity got the better of me, and I decided to spend a day exploring the town. As a result, I had a unique and unforgettable experience that I would not have had if I had been traveling with others."这段论证了独自旅行使人们能够充分融入新环境的观点。

高考英语试卷作文分析

高考英语试卷作文分析

一、作文背景高考英语作文是高考英语试卷的重要组成部分,旨在考查学生的英语写作能力。

今年的高考英语作文以校园生活为主题,要求考生围绕“校园文化活动”这一话题,写一篇不少于100词的短文。

二、作文要求1. 描述校园文化活动的重要性;2. 分析校园文化活动的种类和形式;3. 结合自身经历,谈谈参加校园文化活动的体会。

三、作文分析1. 话题选择今年的高考英语作文以校园文化活动为主题,贴近学生生活,有助于激发学生的写作兴趣。

校园文化活动是学校文化生活的重要组成部分,对于培养学生的综合素质具有重要意义。

这一话题既考察了学生的语言表达能力,又考察了学生的思维能力和文化素养。

2. 结构安排一篇优秀的英语作文,结构清晰、条理分明至关重要。

本文从以下三个方面展开:(1)引言:简要介绍校园文化活动的重要性,引出下文。

(2)正文:分析校园文化活动的种类和形式,结合自身经历,谈谈参加校园文化活动的体会。

(3)结尾:总结全文,强调校园文化活动对学生成长的意义。

3. 语言表达(1)词汇:运用丰富的词汇,使文章更加生动形象。

如:activity、cultural、participate、organize等。

(2)句式:运用多样化的句式,提高文章的阅读价值。

如:一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时等。

(3)语法:正确运用语法知识,确保文章的准确性。

如:时态、语态、主谓一致等。

4. 写作技巧(1)审题:仔细阅读题目要求,确保文章紧扣主题。

(2)构思:在动笔前,先构思文章的大致框架,有助于提高写作效率。

(3)修改:文章完成后,认真检查语法、拼写、标点等错误,确保文章质量。

四、总结高考英语作文是考查学生英语综合能力的重要环节。

今年的高考英语作文以校园文化活动为主题,贴近学生生活,有助于激发学生的写作兴趣。

在备考过程中,学生应注重积累词汇、提高语法水平,并掌握一定的写作技巧,以提高作文质量。

高考英语作文(新课标卷)深度解析

高考英语作文(新课标卷)深度解析

高考英语作文〔新课标卷〕深度解析【题目】书面表达〔总分值25分〕〔注意:在试题卷上作答无效〕假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢送各国学生参加。

请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:1.自我介绍〔包括英语能力〕;2.参加意图〔介绍中国、了解其他国家〕;3.希望获准。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

【三步构思法】〔即:分别从结构、内容、语言上对作文进行构思——结构上,要迅速分析本文应该分几段、每段应该写“几层〞;内容上,要看哪些内容是“题目要求〞你必须写的、哪些内容是可以发挥的,以及怎样发挥最“简单好写〞;语言上,用“亮点提纲大法〞拟提纲,笔者曾总结过40种简单实用效果好、高端大气上档次的遣词造句技巧;大家应注意在技巧选取过程中应尽可能防止重复。

〕一、结构:书信体〔开头段+中间段+结尾段〕二、内容:几乎毋须发挥,将“题中所给的内容〞完整表达出来即可。

〔“自我介绍〞方面可适当发挥一下〕三、语言:见【亮点提纲大法】【亮点提纲大法】注:所谓“亮点提纲大法〞指的是“用语言亮点列提纲〞——提纲中只写每段每句想要使用的语言亮点,包括遣词亮点和造句亮点。

第一段:写“书信开头段四件事〞。

第二段:1、a brief introduction2、Living in Detroit...3、the vice chairman4、No one can deny...第三段:1、take part in2、It’s a fabulous chance for me to…//it做主语3、...,which... //尾巴句型,表示“...,这件事...〞第四段:1、look forward to + sth2、Hopefully,...【李辉老师范文】Dear Sir or Madam,How are you doing? My name is LiHua, a high school student currently studying in China. I learnedon the Internet that a summer camp was going to be held in Singapore, which attracts me a lot. So, I am writing to apply for the chance.//首段四件事:问候à自我介绍à写信背景à写信目的。

高考英语写作全解析

高考英语写作全解析

高考英语写作全解析英语作文作为高考英语考试中的一道重要题型,是考察考生综合运用语法、词汇、句型等方面知识的重要手段。

下面将从分析题目、构思内容、拓展议论等多个方面对高考英语写作进行全面解析。

1. 分析题目在参加高考英语写作时,首先要仔细阅读题目,明确写作要求。

通常题目会要求考生就一个具体话题或问题发表议论,如“Is it importantto learn a foreign language?”、“Should students be allowed to use mobile phones in school?”、“What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?”等。

考生需要理解题目含义,抓住关键词,明确写作方向。

2. 构思内容在写作之前,可以通过列提纲、思维导图等方式构思内容。

首先确定立意,明确自己的观点;其次提出论据,支持自己的观点;最后进行总结和展望。

以“Is it important to learn a foreign language?”为例,考生可以从交流、就业、文化等方面展开论述,提倡学习外语的重要性。

3. 拓展议论为了提高作文质量,考生可以适当拓展议论,增加论证的深度和广度。

可以引用专家观点、数据统计、个人经历等方式进行论证。

通过对比、举例、解释等手段,使文章更具可读性和说服力。

4. 精选词汇在写作过程中,注意使用精准、丰富的词汇,不要过分依赖简单常用词语,也不要滥用高难度词汇。

适当运用形容词、副词等修饰词语,使句子更加生动形象;同时注意语法结构的多样性,避免句式单一,增加文章的表现力。

5. 注意细节写作过程中,要注意细节处理,包括标点符号的使用、句子结构的合理性、逻辑性等。

确保文章结构清晰,层次分明,逻辑严谨;注意段落之间的连接,使整篇文章内容连贯,不呈现跳跃的情况。

通过以上全面解析,相信各位考生对高考英语写作有了更深入的了解。

高考英语专题复习:概要写作5篇及参考答案全套

高考英语专题复习:概要写作5篇及参考答案全套

高考英语专题复习:概要写作5篇及参考答案全套一I’d gone snowboarding in France with my little brother, and what we lacked in skill we made up for in enthusiasm. That day, fresh snow had been falling, and we were in high spirits. We stopped near the top of an off-path section that went through forests. I let my brother disappear into the trees ahead, figuring I would soon catch up.I began to pick up speed when I was suddenly thrown off balance. Just as I was regaining control, I ran into the trunk (树干) of a large tree.It was like hitting a solid wall. The pain was instant. I knew immediately that my back was broken and quickly realized the situation could get very serious. Nobody would be coming past. There was no phone signal. It was snowing and cold. If I waited, I would probably be rescued eventually. But the chance of freezing to death before that happened was too high for me to risk staying put.I tried to stand but fell down and almost blacked out with pain. I managed to get the board off from my feet and moved it under my stomach so I was lying on it. I faced down the mountain and used the board to slowly drag and slide my body down the steep (陡峭的), tree-lined slope (斜坡).It took about two hours before a skier found me and I got help. The mountain rescue team came, with my brother arriving shortly afterwards.I couldn’t feel my hands or my toes from the cold, but the relief at knowing I was safe was immense (极大的).A helicopter took me to hospital. I had broken one of my backbones, so I had an operation where the doctors inserted plates. The constant pain was agonizing, but it wasn’t as bad as seeing the pain and worry I put my family through.The recovery road was tough, but I was lucky. Gradually, I was able to walk, then swim, then cycle and then run. I haven’t been back to the slopes yet, but it might happen someday –I will, however, be sticking to the paths.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案I went snowboarding with my brother but didn’t expect that I would have a bad accident. I lost balance and hit the trunk of a tree while catching up to my brother and injured my back. Aware that things would get worse if I waited, I placed myself on the board and slid to the bottom of the slope. I was eventually rescued. Now that I have recovered, I might go back to challenge myself again.二During such stressful times, anything we can do to reduce our worries is a positive thing. As such, routines, even boring ones, can be a useful way to bring us peace of mind.It’s harder to get back into good habits if you take too much time off. If you stop exercising or go off your diet, you can lose what you’ve accomplished, as many of us have. Maybe it’s time to re-establish your good habits and develop some new ones.Even though my heart wants to fly to Europe and walk the near-empty streets of Cannes (戛纳) right now, I can’t. None of us can, so we have to find other ways to be content. I can get into being a homebody (喜欢待在家里的人), especially with the internet, but I would prefer to do more.We used to go out a lot, but that has stopped. No restaurants, parties or gatherings of any kind. I am seeing clients (客户) only on the internet. Adhering to health recommendations means finding new things to fill our lives, but some old routines will also do nicely if we maintain them.If you’re used to working with many people and are now on your own, the sense of isolation can be especially hard. This is also true if you are alone with no family close by. It’s important to develop a system that feeds your mind and emotions and makes good use of your time.Your life won’t fall apart, not if you don’t let it. Maintaining your routines, keeping up a good diet and getting some daily exercise will make this period much easier.As long as you’re putting out positive energy, you are helping others as well as yourself. We are all going to have to get creative as this pandemic keeps us socially distant.It’s also important to maintain human connection. Remember to reach out to others if you are alone –this is what social media was invented for. It is allowing us to stay connected. Right now, those connections are worth their weight in gold.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案:Routines, new habits and human connection are important for people, especially during the pandemic. Stuck at home, we have to seek other ways to stay happy. Besides maintaining our routines, keeping up a good diet and exercising daily, we can develop new habits to please ourselves. It also helps to stay connected with people via social media. We should help not only ourselves but others as well.三Last week, my younger brother visited me for five days. To ensure (保证) I could spend as much time with him as possible, I worked extra hard during the weekend before he arrived.It amazed me how much I could accomplish when I had a strong motivation to be efficient.During the week, I put in a couple of hours in the mornings to handle pressing issues (问题) and then spent the afternoons and evenings going out with him. Once again, I was surprised to realize just how much free time was available to me if I consciously (有意识地) chose to be more effective while working.This made me think of Parkinson’s Law: Work expands to fill the time available for its completion.I realized then that I’d given myself more time than necessary for work, and as a result, I ended up spending a lot of time procrastinating (拖延) and entertaining myself online.How might things change for me, I wondered, if I chose to commit to more social and recreational (休闲娱乐) activities, made them priorities (优先事项) and was motivated to finish work quicker?I realize not everyone has flexibility (灵活性) in their work schedules, but I believe we could all create more time for ourselves if we were motivated to cut out the choices that don’t match our strongest desiresand intentions.Maybe it’s zoning out in front of the TV or searching the web. If there’s one thing that’s consumed my time the most, it’s researching how I actually want to spend it.I believe what English musician John Lennon said is true: Time that you enjoyed wasting was not wasted. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with using technology if we’ve consciously chosen to do it. However, we owe it to ourselves to get out in the world and explore different possibilities –to be playful, curious, engaged and just to be. Perhaps it would be easier to do that if we asked ourselves: How can I be more effective? Can I minimize what I am currently doing? How can I start using the time I’ve created in a way that will excite and inspire me?Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案I completed my work more efficiently to make time to accompany my brother when he visited me. I was amazed at how much more efficient I could be. I was also reminded of Parkinson’s Law and how to manage time better. First, we should learn to prioritize things in our life, making sure to cut out those that don’t match our desires. Second, it’simportant to remember that time is not wasted if it is spent doing something you enjoy.四My boss recently asked me, “Do you know why I hired you? Because you didn’t sell yourself. You didn’t tell me, ‘Look how experienced I am.’You emailed me and said, ‘I researched your website and saw how many amazing vets (兽医) you have, and I want to learn from them,’and that’s why I hired you. You showed vulnerability.”So, what is vulnerability? For me, vulnerability means putting your fear of embarrassment aside and allowing personal growth. I believe vulnerability is a pathway to success. Vulnerability has traditionally been viewed as a weakness in the workplace. The very thought of exposing your weaknesses is terrifying. However, we can change the views surrounding it. I’m talking about the vulnerability that strengthens courage and success as a vet.After graduation, I started working in a clinic where I thought I would have support. However, I didn’t have the help I required. I quickly became exhausted. Within 18 months, I didn’t want to be a vet anymore.During this period, I realized without the support I wanted, I was potentially making mistakes I wasn’t even aware of. Was I treatingpatients effectively? I wouldn’t know, because I had no one to ask or help.I decided to be vulnerable. I accepted that I was unhappy, living with poor mental health and lacking important knowledge. I wanted to find somewhere I’d be able to continue building my knowledge, not as an average vet, but as a good one. After two and a half years working as a vet, I have finally found a place where I get the support I need. My point is: don’t stay where you are unhappy. Be vulnerable and have the courage to accept when you’re unhappy. Find somewhere that will support you and push you to do better.Vulnerability shouldn’t be considered a weakness because it allows personal growth. Vulnerability should be viewed as a strength. To be vulnerable allows you to show people that you cannot always be perfect. Being vulnerable is not a liability (不利因素) in the workplace. It is the ability to show people that you are human.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案:Vulnerability is generally considered a weakness, but I believe it facilitates personal growth and leads to success. I quit my previous job for the lack of support I needed. To find a way out, I decided to accept my unhappiness and admitted my vulnerability. Eventually, I got my ideal job because of my positive attitude toward vulnerability. I learned from my experience that vulnerability is actually a strength.五I woke up with drool (口水) on my pillow this morning. I wouldn’t have minded except it wasn’t mine. The alarm clock rang, and I reached over to turn it off. As I laid my face back down on the pillow, I felt the wet, slimy (黏滑的) drool on my pillow case. I opened my eyes and saw a smiling, panting (喘气的), furry face gazing down at me. I tried to get up, but she was too fast. My face was suddenly covered in kisses with one going straight up my nose and another right in my ear. I laughed, reached out and picked up the eight-pound love machine and held her away from my dripping (湿透的) face. It was just another morning in a life with dogsWhy do we welcome them into our homes and our hearts? We knowthat we are most likely going to outlive them and have our hearts broken when they age quickly and pass away after ten to fifteen years. We know that there will be vet (兽医) bills, flea baths and enough fur to make a vacuum cleaner cry. We know that our ears will ring from the barking, that we will be picking up poop (大便) every single day and that we will never get to finish a full sandwich again.Yet, when we are feeling down or blue, there will always be a soft head on our lap needing to be pet. When we get home after a long day’s work, there will be a happy face at the door waiting for us. Our lives will be full of balls to throw, bellies (腹部) to scratch, and love and loyalty that will warm our hearts and uplift our souls.For thousands of years, dogs have been our best friends. They remain one of the greatest gifts life has ever given us. Even if they can’t love us for the rest of our lives, they will always love us for all of theirs. Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案:Every morning I am woken up by my dog. Her drool on my pillow and kisses all over my face make me laugh. Even though there are many disadvantages of having a dog, I still want to keep her by my side. My life is more beautiful because of her. Dogs are the best friends of human beings.。

高考英语:热点2 书面表达概要写作真题分析(含答案解析)

高考英语:热点2 书面表达概要写作真题分析(含答案解析)

新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化,其中英语写作分为两部分:第一节为应用文写作;第二节为读后续写或概要写作。

概要写作是综合考查考生的阅读能力和写作能力的题型。

概要写作的体裁以说明文和议论文为主,主要考查考生把握文章整体结构和概括文章主旨大意的能力,同时考查考生准确获取关键信息以及用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力。

考生掌握“概括、重组、成篇——黄金三步法”原则,助你轻松赢高分。

第一部分“5步”写作技法——做到信息提取“准”、要点概况“全”一、是什么——“概要写作”题型解读(一)“3个”命题特点体裁说明文、议论文、记叙文结构分总、总分、总分总、并列要点4个左右、准确、客观、衔接自然、内容连续60词左右的内容概要。

所选材料体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

考生需要在理解文章、把握文章中心思想的基础上进行信息整合,故该题型考查学生的综合语言运用能力,即阅读能力、分析查找能力、逻辑思维能力、理解判断能力及提炼概括能力等。

因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和写作,是二者的有机结合体,也是阅读理解和写作的沟通桥梁。

(二)“五档”评分标准档次描述第五档(21-25分)——理解准确,涵盖全部要点。

——能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。

热点02 书面表达概要写作二、怎么办——“5步”写作技法指导第一步:读文章——知晓体裁、明确主旨进行概要写作时,首先要阅读所提供的文章。

阅读文章的目的就是要确定文章的体裁和主题。

根据近几年浙江高考真题来看,所考查的概要写作原文多是议论文或说明文。

如:2019年6月浙江高考的概要写作原文是议论文,主题是父母应表扬孩子做事过程中的努力而非结果。

2018年11月浙江高考的概要写作原文是说明文,主题是报考大学之前要进行实地考察。

概要写作的三种体裁的结构如下:1、说明文:(1)引言(2)正文(3)结尾2、议论文:(1)引论(2)本论(3)结论3、记叙文:(1)引言(2)正文(3)结尾第二步:析结构——划分段落、确定要点阅读完概要写作所提供的文章后,应迅速分析一下文章的结构。

详细解析高考英文作文

详细解析高考英文作文

详细解析高考英文作文Sure, I can help you with that. Here's a detailed breakdown of the requirements for the high school English essay:Paragraph 1: The topic of the essay is introduced, and the writer's opinion or stance on the topic is briefly stated. The language used in this paragraph should be straightforward and to the point, setting the stage for the rest of the essay.Paragraph 2: A personal anecdote or example related to the topic is shared. This paragraph should use descriptive language and vivid details to draw the reader in and make the story come alive.Paragraph 3: A relevant quote or piece of research is presented to support the writer's viewpoint. This paragraph should be more formal in tone, using academic language and citing the source of the information.Paragraph 4: An opposing viewpoint is acknowledged and briefly discussed. The language used in this paragraph should be respectful and open-minded, showing an understanding of different perspectives.Paragraph 5: The writer's counterargument to the opposing viewpoint is presented. This paragraph should use persuasive language and logical reasoning to refute the opposing stance.Paragraph 6: A call to action or a suggestion for further exploration of the topic is made. The language used in this paragraph should be motivational and inspiring, encouraging the reader to take some kind of action or continue thinking about the issue.Overall, the essay should demonstrate a range of language styles and tones, from informal and personal to formal and persuasive. The lack of explicit transitions between paragraphs creates a sense of immediacy and keeps the reader engaged.。

高考英语作文详解说明文分析

高考英语作文详解说明文分析

高考英语作文详解说明文分析高考英语作文详解说明文分析随着高考英语作文考试的临近,许多同学开始备战了。

英语作文是高考中的重要部分,它考察的不仅是语法和词汇,更是表达能力和思维能力。

其中,说明文是一种常见的写作形式,本文将从结构、语言和写作技巧三个方面进行详解分析,帮助同学们更好地掌握这种写作形式。

一、结构分析说明文主要分为三部分:引入部分、主体部分和结束部分。

引入部分需要引出要说明的问题或现象,引起读者的兴趣,概括性地介绍文章的主要内容。

主体部分是介绍、阐述和说明的重点,需要详细的陈述事实、数据、原理和解释,让读者清楚地了解问题的来龙去脉。

结束部分需要总结文章的主要观点或结论,给读者留下深刻的印象。

二、语言分析说明文的语言应该准确、简明、清晰,语气应该客观、严谨,不应该带有个人的情感色彩。

在语法方面,说明文需要注意使用一般现在时和被动语态,注意主谓一致和时态的使用,避免句子结构过于复杂。

在词汇方面,需要注意使用简单明了的词语,不使用过于华丽的修辞手法,避免读者产生理解困难。

三、写作技巧在写作说明文时,需要注意以下几点:1.明确写作目的和对象,确定要说明的问题或现象。

2.选取合适的材料和数据,准确表达事实和原理。

3.注意文中的逻辑关系,使文章条理清晰。

4.使用丰富的标点符号,突出重点,引导读者理解。

5.检查文章的语言表述是否准确,是否有语法错误等问题。

范文:如何认真备考高考英语说明文写作呢?首先,我们需要了解说明文的结构,要清楚地把握引入部分、主体部分和结束部分之间的逻辑关系,确保文章的条理性和连贯性。

在语言方面,我们要注意使用简单明了的词语,使用一般现在时和被动语态等语法形式,避免句子过于复杂,带有个人情感色彩。

最后,在写作时,我们还需要选取合适的材料和数据,准确表达事实和原理,使用丰富的标点符号突出重点,检查文章的语言表述是否准确,是否有语法错误等问题。

只有在这些方面做得足够认真,才能写出优秀的说明文,为高考英语作文取得好成绩打下坚实的基础。

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一、概括的要求:
简洁明了,主题突出。

概括可采用总→分的形式,即第一句话是主题句,清楚明白地告诉了读者文章的写作目的(这句话举足轻重),后面的句子对主题句进行解释和支撑,主题之外的内容要
毫不吝啬地予以删除。

二、概括的方法:
1、使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式,或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意
思,如改变语态、肯定变否定等,避免抄袭原文句子。

2、议论性或论说文,概括时则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。

概括对方观点首先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无人称”来概括。

3、如果给的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,
不能拖泥带水讲细节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。

4、如果是说明性或描述性短文,就必须用概括性的文字说明一现象。

三、概括的写作步骤:
1、寻找关键词。

文章的关键词可结合“写”的任务中的“就……”主题发表自己
的看法的要求来确定。

如,要求你“以约120词谈谈你理想的大学生活”,那么所阅读
的文章的主题词就应是“college/university life”。

2、确定主题句。

文章的主题句首先可通过所给阅读材料的标题来确定,阅读材料的标题即是文章的论点或主题句。

没有标题的文章,我们就尤应注意议论文、夹叙夹论文
和说明文的第一段(总起段)和最后一段(总结段),或每一段的第一句或第二句(总
起句)和最后一句(总结句)。

没有主题句的需要自己组合。

3、重构主题句。

概括的主题句要归纳总结性强,能涵盖后面所有的支撑句的内容。

4、重组支撑句。

支撑句的意义在逻辑上受制于主题句,可以是补充过程或者提供
证据。

四、概括的形式:“主题句+支撑句”即“主题+主题的什么”。

文体主题句支撑句
议论文文章论点(一句)文章论据(两三句)
记叙文故事的写作目的/ 主题(一句)故事大意(两三句)
说明文说明的对象/ 观点/ 现象解释/ 分述
五、概括的常用句式:
记述文:“主题+故事简述”,其主要句型为:The story tells /emphasizes /focuses on the importance/ necessicities / advantages, disadvantages, reasons, ways,
ideas, …
议论文:“主题/论点+论据”,其主要句型为:论点/主题:The article mainly conveys the idea /discusses the problem/ reasons/ways/ideas,
importance/effect…/focuses on the idea/ tells us the fact that…论据:For example,… /such as…
说明文:“主题+解释/分述”,其主要句型为:主题:This article points out/
talks about/tells about the common phenomenon t hat…解释/分述:for example,…
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。


完Mike的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”, 内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点;
2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:
(1) 对中学生活的感受;
(2) 理想的大学生活;
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。

因为写作内容中已规定了你将进行的演讲的标题“Preparing Myself for College Life”,而且还要求以120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,所以,毫无疑问,此阅读材
料的关键词为“College Life”。

而此阅读材料主要表述Mike对大学生的看法或认识,是一篇夹叙夹议型的发言稿。

此发言稿共有三段,其中,第一段讲述了适应大学生活的
困难,第二段则阐述了适应期过后大学生活的优点,在第三段中Mike对大学生活提出了一个建议。

而且,我们不难从文中找到主题句:第一段:The toughest part on me a t first was the general adjustment.第二段:Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it.第三段:One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. 找到主题句后,我们所要做的就是用自己的
语言将这些每段话的主题句串联成文,从而我们得出如下概括:
In his talk, Mike talks about how hard it was for him to adjust to college
life and that he finds college life interesting after his tough adjustment. Also, he advises college students to be active on campus. (37 words)
解读“读写任务”的概括技巧
来源:08-09学年度第一期作者:清远市华侨中学何燕萍 2008-11-06
关于读写任务的概括,许多学生觉得茫然,不知该从何下手。

其实,读写任务
的概括并不难。

从2007年和2008年的高考卷中,我们不难发现,所给的阅读材料
在长度上、难度上都不能达到阅读理解题型的难度要求。

一般说来,读写任务中所
提供的阅读材料词数不超过250(2007年所提供的阅读材料有238词,2008年则
为186词),要求概括的内容不超三段(2007年只有一段话是要求概括的,而2008年则有三段),而且是生词极少、句型相对简单、几乎每一位学生都能理解的文章。

因此,各位学生首先要增强信心,相信自己能很好地理解所给的阅读材料;再者,
应了解概括的要求并掌握一定概括技巧,从而更出色地完成任务。

一、概括的要求:
简洁明了,主题突出。

概括可采用总→分的形式,即第一句话是主题句,清楚明白地告诉了读者文章
的写作目的(这句话举足轻重),后面的句子对主题句进行解释和支撑,主题之外
的内容要毫不吝啬地予以删除。

二、概括的方法:
1、使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式,或使用不同的句子结构表达同
一意思,如改变语态、肯定变否定等,避免抄袭原文句子。

2、议论性或论说文,概括时则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。

概括对方观点首先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无人称”来概括。

3、如果给的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什
么,不能拖泥带水讲细节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。

4、如果是说明性或描述性短文,就必须用概括性的文字说明一现象。

三、概括的写作步骤:
1、寻找关键词。

文章的关键词可结合“写”的任务中的“就……”主题发表
自己的看法的要求来确定。

如,要求你“以约120词谈谈你理想的大学生活”,那
么所阅读的文章的主题词就应是“college/university life”。

2、确定主题句。

文章的主题句首先可通过所给阅读材料的标题来确定,阅读材料的标题即是文章的论点或主题句。

没有标题的文章,我们就尤应注意议论文、夹
叙夹论文和说明文的第一段(总起段)和最后一段(总结段),或每一段的第一句
或第二句(总起句)和最后一句(总结句)。

没有主题句的需要自己组合。

3、重构主题句。

概括的主题句要归纳总结性强,能涵盖后面所有的支撑句的
内容。

4、重组支撑句。

支撑句的意义在逻辑上受制于主题句,可以是补充过程或者
提供证据。

四、概括的形式:“主题句+支撑句”即“主题+主题的什么”。

文体主题句支撑句
议论文文章论点(一句)文章论据(两三句)
记叙文故事的写作目的/ 主题(一句)故事大意(两三句)
说明文说明的对象/ 观点/ 现象解释/ 分述
五、概括的常用句式:
记述文:“主题+故事简述”,其主要句型为:The story tells /emphasizes /focuses on the importance/ necessicities / advantages, disadvantages,
reasons, ways, ideas, …
议论文:“主题/论点+论据”,其主要句型为:论点/主题:The article mainly conveys the idea /discusses the problem/ reasons/ways/ideas,
importance/effect…/focuses on the idea/ tells us the fact that…论据:For example,… /such as…
说明文:“主题+解释/分述”,其主要句型为:主题:This article points out/ talks about/tells about the common phenomenon that…解释/分述:for。

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