长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件共35张PPT)
高考英语写作高分秘籍
1. 审题到位，信息明晰 2. 词汇丰富，句式多样 3. 条理清晰，衔接得当 4. 书写美观，行文流畅
22 above
17
What makes a good composition ？
sentence frames
words
high-level
升级
Sentence frames
and disappointment. 原句: Motivation and diligence really matter
in language learning .
• What really matters in language learning
are motivation and diligence.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
only + /介词短语或when/if从句 倒装
原句：When you’ve been there, you will truly experienced the charm of the city.
With many cell phones to choose from, I
have no idea which one to buy. 原句：China has developed greatly. More and
more countries have trade contacts with our country.
• The price of mask has increased terribly, which worries a lot of citizens in America.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
定语从句
原句: The price of mask has increased
terribly, and this worries a lot of citizens
in America .
• The climate is so mild and sunny in Kunming that many tourists are attracted
to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
• So mild and sunny is the climate in Kunming that many tourists are attracted
language, the Americans and the British share many customs.
And I feel honored to have the chance to help you understand the Chinese idiom as well as its implication meaning.
Only when you’ve been there，will you
truly experienced the charm of the city. 原句: You can improve your oral English in
this way.
Only in this way can you improve your
• The Americans and the British not only speak the same language, but also share
many customs.
• Not only do the Americans and the
British speak the same language, but
oral English.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
主语从句 what
原句: I his face.
• What I saw from his face were sadness
to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
not only…but also…
原句：The Americans and the British speak
the same language, and they also share many customs.
介词短语 apart from/as well as
原句： The Americans and the British speak the same language, and they also share many customs.
InAapdadrittiofrnotmo speaking the same
实例示范
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
so… that …
原句：The climate in Kunming is very mild
and sunny, and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
With the great development of China,
more and more countries have trade contacts with our country. .
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
also share a large number of social
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
customs.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
介词短语 with +宾 (+宾补)
原句：There are many cell phones to choose from, and I have no idea which one to buy.
1. 审题到位，信息明晰 2. 词汇丰富，句式多样 3. 条理清晰，衔接得当 4. 书写美观，行文流畅
22 above
17
What makes a good composition ？
sentence frames
words
high-level
升级
Sentence frames
and disappointment. 原句: Motivation and diligence really matter
in language learning .
• What really matters in language learning
are motivation and diligence.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
only + /介词短语或when/if从句 倒装
原句：When you’ve been there, you will truly experienced the charm of the city.
With many cell phones to choose from, I
have no idea which one to buy. 原句：China has developed greatly. More and
more countries have trade contacts with our country.
• The price of mask has increased terribly, which worries a lot of citizens in America.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
定语从句
原句: The price of mask has increased
terribly, and this worries a lot of citizens
in America .
• The climate is so mild and sunny in Kunming that many tourists are attracted
to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
• So mild and sunny is the climate in Kunming that many tourists are attracted
language, the Americans and the British share many customs.
And I feel honored to have the chance to help you understand the Chinese idiom as well as its implication meaning.
Only when you’ve been there，will you
truly experienced the charm of the city. 原句: You can improve your oral English in
this way.
Only in this way can you improve your
• The Americans and the British not only speak the same language, but also share
many customs.
• Not only do the Americans and the
British speak the same language, but
oral English.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
主语从句 what
原句: I his face.
• What I saw from his face were sadness
to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
not only…but also…
原句：The Americans and the British speak
the same language, and they also share many customs.
介词短语 apart from/as well as
原句： The Americans and the British speak the same language, and they also share many customs.
InAapdadrittiofrnotmo speaking the same
实例示范
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
so… that …
原句：The climate in Kunming is very mild
and sunny, and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.
With the great development of China,
more and more countries have trade contacts with our country. .
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
also share a large number of social
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
customs.
长郡中学高三英语写作高分秘籍(课件 共35张 PPT)
介词短语 with +宾 (+宾补)
原句：There are many cell phones to choose from, and I have no idea which one to buy.
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高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
二、Examing the topic (审题)
审题，先审内容：1.列提纲，主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数，要求字数的20左右。 然后审时态：确定主要时态，建议不超过2中，时态越 多，越容易出错。 再审人称：写作时，不要搞混人称。 最后审题材：看是议论文，书信，还是图标类作文， 每种题材有一定的书写格式。
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主 要内容，写了一些无关内 容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有 限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内 容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
求助信开头：I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no choice but to turn to your help. 咨询信开头：I'm writing to ask your some relevant questions. 告知信开头：I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.
罗列要点，在句子之间加上连接词 结尾段：Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.If there's anything else I can do for you,please let me know.
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
二、Examing the topic (审题)
审题，先审内容：1.列提纲，主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数，要求字数的20左右。 然后审时态：确定主要时态，建议不超过2中，时态越 多，越容易出错。 再审人称：写作时，不要搞混人称。 最后审题材：看是议论文，书信，还是图标类作文， 每种题材有一定的书写格式。
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主 要内容，写了一些无关内 容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有 限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内 容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
求助信开头：I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no choice but to turn to your help. 咨询信开头：I'm writing to ask your some relevant questions. 告知信开头：I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.
罗列要点，在句子之间加上连接词 结尾段：Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.If there's anything else I can do for you,please let me know.
高考书面表达高分策略一课件(共45张PPT)
江苏高考英语高分写作“三美”标准 一、书写美 二、语言美 三、思维美
“书写美“
英文书写大方、圆润、自然
整洁卷面
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
“字体丑陋的的作文，没有机会展示自己 的灵魂。“
评分原则:
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档 次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最 后给分。 3. 词数少于130或多于170的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和 语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应 视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
原词 hard break pay attention to happy more and more achieve accept choice difficult
替换词 diligently violate / disobey attach importance to delighted / pleased an increasing number of accomplish; fulfill acknowledge option; alternative demanding; troublesome
二、陈述不如倒装妙
1. Time is very precious, so we can’t afford to waste it. 2. We should never take dishonesty as a slight thing. 3. As long as we work together, we can develop
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
《M10U2language》课件-湖南省长沙市长郡中学高三英语总复习(共50张PPT)
friends（of） our age.
和我们年龄相仿的朋友
Should aged parents be sent to nursing homes?
年老的父母
The population is aging globally.
It will probably take ages to find a parking space.
Words:
edition retire pension hurricane tough slip ambulance herb seagull boom
mobile flexible Oceania inn elect swap rent accountant clerk waitress privilege
Should aged parents be sent to nursing homes?
年老的父母
The population is aging globally.
V.变老
It will probably take ages to find a parking space.
很长时间
He started playing piano at an early age.
年老的父母
The population is aging globally.
V.变老
It will probably take ages to find a parking space.
He started playing piano at an early age.
age
Also, I know that we will get good medical care and will be surrounded by
高考英语作文技巧PPT课件
3）To sum up , I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
THANK
பைடு நூலகம்
YOU
SUCCESS
2019/4/22
常用句子
• I take it for granted that they will support this idea. • It is true that we must make our greater efforts; otherwise, we cannot catch up with the developed countries. • We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard. • To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice. • As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book. • As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
表达个人观点的用语
• • • • • • I think I firmly believe that … In my opinion, Personally speaking,… As far as I am concerned, … From my point of view, ….
高考英语高分写作指导(非常实用).ppt
• Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever • →smart • →wise • →bright • →intelligent
• 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。
• puters are very important in our life.
• puters play a very important role in our life.
2、地道原则
［原文］Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级)
二、主动句与被动句的互换。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★
• The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.
三、 将陈述句改为感叹句。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★
1. To prevent the pollution is very important．
How
！
2. She is a clever girl．
高考英语写作技巧PPT课件
自然、紧凑。
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2
I、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1 .Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to / struck me. 2. As a result , the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out to be a failure. 3. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
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Practice makes perfect
某考察团正在农村参观考察，假定你是接待人员,请 根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍该村情况：
1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。
2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比 以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。
3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经改建过。新建的 教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿 童在此免费就读。
Weak as I am, I’ll ………..
3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(虚拟语气） I couldn’t have passed ……. but for /without…….
Had you not helped me, I wouldn’t have passed…… 4. I won’t believe what he says. （状语从句）
This village is a small one consisting of 100 families and about 500 people. Since 1978, it has seen great change in many fields such as: life and education. Therefore, people here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)
home. • D、关于
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位
•
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化，学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够，来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 （1）将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位
•
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化，学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够，来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 （1）将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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高考写作提升提高英语书面表达的方 法和技 巧PPT-P PT执教 课件【 推荐】
The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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高三英语高分写作指导中小学PPT教学课件
a part of
bad effects / influences
should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid
the opposite facet.
aspect We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入 语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替 换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点， 作文怎么会不得高分呢！ 1.individuals,characters, folks代 (people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替 bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代 替eg.An army of college students indulge
current society as a fashion are appealing to growing
now
sb. be interested in sth.
individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been more and more people
impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.