冰果英语智能作文系统

冰果英语智能作文系统4篇14分以上作文仅供参考学习作文序列号12991得分：14.1 / 15分制您提交的作文：标题：The tenth assig nment正文：My Suggesti ons to En glish TeachersTo begi n with I think it n ecessary to make a small summary of the great deal of things thatI ' ve learnt during this semester. It can be divided into three parts according to the respective courses. First of all, the English reading and writing course has greatly trained such skills of mine, the expla nati ons give n by the teacher was in explicit En glish, followed by nu merous good examples of phrases. Apart from some exercises w e' ve done on class,every stude nt was required to complete an essay weekly, which furthermore improves our writing skills.Person ally, I think I ' ve ben efited most from the on li ne course, which provides me with aplatform on which I can fully practice my liste ning and readi ng, especially whe n I have touse logic and reas on to do exercises and tests on it.Besides, on the oral English class, I ' ve been granted of a wonderful opportunity to make a presentation in public, a formal one which I ' ve never tried before. It ' s really exciting to deliver such a speech, which has bee n a very reward ing experie nee.So here, I ' d like to give some advice on each course so that they can better live tostudent ' s academic expectations.The liste ning class is really good; tha nks to the moder n facilities the school has give n us.We always enjoy the En glish videos displayed before and after class, but I think if there were a rest ing time betwee n class and class, the stude nts would be more concen trated on the whole. In addition, if the records listened on class were played only once, in the same form of the CET exams, I believe we ' d be better prepared for those tests.The oral class is my favorite, so I hope there would be more interaction between student and teacher. It comes well if we can play some word games together, and we can com muni cate easier with each other.As for the reading and writing class, I strongly suggest that the teacher could introduce usmore En glish movies, as long as it does not con flicts with the requisites of the course.That will add points to the whole impressi on of the class, as many stude nts just lacksufficie nt atte nti on and in terest.得分：14.1 / 15分制评语：Con gratulati ons. Nobody is perfect but the Ian guage in your essay is pretty good.You've succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Your essay shows thatyou are very kno wledgeable about the topic.收起作文序列号12990得分：14.4 / 15分制您提交的作文：标题：The ninth assig nment正文：Cars in the CityCars, a s a very significant way of transportation in today ' s society, are introduced to moreand more urba n families year after year. It ' s not un com mon of there being more tha n onecar in a single medium-class family. The possession of a car is almost essential for every in come earn er, i n order to satisfy the in creas ing n eed of movi ng more convenien tly andefficie ntly around the city.Either to go to school or go to work, going by car will certainly save a lot of time, besidesbeing provided a rather comfortable space despite a terrible weather.However, with the rising petrol price, cars are becoming a financial burden for theirown ers, not to men tio n the cost of the car itself. Neglect ing all this, the best adva ntage ofcars is weake ned with the un bearable long traffic jams that drive all of us crazy.It is just one side of the problems that cars are caus in g. In stead of favori ng a bettertransportation atmosphere, it is becoming the number one culpable for today ' s traffic problems. Everything that ' s too excessiisesurely bad thing, so do cars. Too many carscreate congestion, harming the traffic ' s health.Apart from that, the gases that a car discharges are usually harmful to the environment.The carb on dioxide, for example, con tributes to the global warmi ng, which leads toen viro nmen tal crisis of more serious ness.Therefore, acti ons should be take n in order to rid the problems that cars are caus ing.Fist of all, we should be fully aware of the con seque nces of owing a car. I n fact, owing acar is like having a ch ild. You have to be responsible for it. If you won ' t use it very often,you' d better choose a public means of transportation rather than a personal vehicle.Secon dly, the gover nment should provide more public tran sportati ons for citize ns, such us buildi ng rail-way lin es, hiri ng more taxis, providi ng more buses, etc. In this way, people would be willing to use them, which are cheaper and convenient. If more people do this, there would be more free spaces in our cities, without the pressure of buildi ng more park ing lots.Last but not least, we need to protect our environment. Restoring its original state may bedifficult, but if we plant more trees and buy less cars, I think the day when we ' ll see a more beautiful world is not very far.得分：14.4 / 15分制评语：Nobody is perfect but the Ian guage in your essay is pretty good. Your essay showsvaried structure and wide range of vocabulary. Your essay shows that you are verykno wledgeable about the topic. Con gratulati ons.您需要注意这些单词的拼写：tran sportatio ns,收起作文序列号12359得分：14.8 / 15分制您提交的作文：标题：The Eighth assig nment正文：Getti ng to know the World Outside the CampusThere ' s an increasing necessity for college students to learn how to integrate themselvesto the society in n ear future. Today whe n you en ter a Chin ese uni versity, especially awell-k nown on e, it gives you the impressi on that most stude nts are mainly absorbed intheir studies, leavi ng no time to explore the world outside the campus.Whether or not this con stitutes a mayor risk for their future career developme nt is not theonly worrisome issue. What is more alarming is the fact that some students are losing aspirati ons not only in studies but also in their future positi ons in society.There is, fortun ately, a wide range of ways for one to lear n to in tegrate into the society.The public media for example, provides an explicit i ntroducti on for the in dividual to find out what everyth ing happe ning everyday is about, and is also persuasive in the way that it en courages stude nts make their minds to become part of the society from now on.Ano ther two ways to lear n about the society are volun teeri ng and social practice. Both of them can help the student get rid of his immaturity, and sign for a lighten experience of help ing others. The minute the stude nt join in such activities, he will get access to a wealth of kno wledge about i nterpers onal relati on ships, someth ing he would n ever becomeacqua in ted through textbooks.Besides, the volun teeri ng experie nces will greatly cha nge the judgme nt of the in dividualtoward society. Because there is still a lot to be done, and every effort offered will beappreciated, the stude nt will be more committed to serve the society in the future.I think sometimes we stude nts tend to overestimate our ability to in tegrate into society.The fact that our current lifestyles are relatively relaxed in comparison with ourhigh-school ones makes us more likely to be contented with what we already have, andforget the purpose we resolved to effort.Therefore I think the first thing I should do is to take the matter of become part of societyseriously. After all, there ' s-tnoblo o w that tells me the right way to get involved, butonly that unique experience I'd create myself. The situation urges me to act so that I mustwaste no time to pick up all that knowledge through volunteering, social practice, the pubicmedia, daily com mun icatio ns with others, etc.Only by being conscious of what we lack can we put the effort to make up for that debility,which in this case, is our in sufficie nt connection with the society outside our campus.得分：14.8 / 15分制评语：The Ian guage in your essay is effective, keep it up. You have a wide range ofsentence structure and vocabulary. It's evide nt that you have covered the points requiredin your writing and showed strong writing skill. Congratulations.您需要注意这些单词的拼写：debility,收起作文序列号12014得分：14.1 / 15分制您提交的作文：标题：The sixth assig nment正文：Cheat ing in exam in ati onsThe incidence of cheating at school is rising sharply these years. Actually cheating isbecoming a nightmare, not only for perceptive teachers, but also for students who don ' twant to follow this trend.Reasons accounting for the issue of cheating are various. On the one hand, many stude nts are un der the pressure of a society that cares too much about the grades of the in dividual. People tend to judge a pers on by his achieveme nts rather by his efforts. Thus, some stude nts try to get high marks whatever the method. They cheat on exams, and even on daily assig nmen ts. Of course there are other examples of stude nts who really have a tough time in their studies. In some way they just don ' t fit learning. Though they tryhard they cannot obta in a satisfactory mark. So they sell out to convenience and cheat, too.All in all, we ' re livi ng in a time whe n people have a lot of things to dem on strate about themselves. It is likely that the credit we achieve is n ot in direct proport ion with our sacrifices, so why not go the easy way? Why not cheat in stead of work ing hard for nothing?On the other hand, cheating is kind of being fashionable. There are honest students who don' t want cheat, but are seeing other people doing this all the time. It is unfair that the former get the same mark as those who did without effort.So they start cheating inevitably. However, the problem of cheating can be confronted and defeated if we put our heart into it. It is a matter of integrity. Therefore, as students we should follow the inner compass of our conscience. We should know clearly the boundary between the illicit and the moral. We can decrease the rate of cheating through the following ways.Firstly, if we have problems while studying, we mustn ' t yield to the temptation of stealingother p erson ' s intellectual property by copying their homework or exam papers. Instead what we should do is to seek help from teachers, and with their understanding and assistance we ' ll progressively move on.Secondly, if we 're already relying on cheating, we should stop faking right away. Don ' tgive yourself excuses for doing such a thing. We ' d better use that energy of cheating onour classes, and try to absorb the important points the teachers give us. I good performance at class will ensure a high mark on exams.So when we ' re caught in a dilemma whether to cheat or not, we should hold firmly to our integrity, because that is the choice of a mature person, our actions surely speak louder than our grades. 得分：14.1 / 15 分制评语：Congratulations. The language in your essay is effective, keep it up. You've succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Your essay has thorough development of the thesis.。