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2013上海中考英语作文【篇一：2013年中考英语作文案例】how to protect yourselfself-protection is a lifelong topic. earthquakes are the most dangerous disasters because they are unpredictable. if you are outside when an earthquake happens, find an open place.apart from tall structures, electric wires can also be dangerous. if you are in a building, hide yourself under a desk or a chair at once. don’t be afraid because the most powerful part of an earthquake lasts for only a minute. as soon as power lessens, rush to the ground carefully. you should never use lifts in this situation. actually the death rate of an earthquake is quite low and it can be still lower if you know the right methods of escaping. i wish that everybody will be safe during earthquakes. 7+8+4believe it or not, we may confront with many accidents such as natural disaster, electric shock and so on. thus, it’s essential for us to be careful in daily life and calm down when something happens. for example, electricity brings us convenience, but it can also be the killer. we must remember these points to protect ourselves from danger. first, never touch the electrical appliances with wet hands. second, don’t use too much equipment at the same time, this may cause a fire. if we are more careful, we can enjoy more from what the electricity brings us and live a happier life.8+8+3self protection is very important in my daily life. it can prevent me from getting hurt. for example, if a fire breaks out in my apartment, i need to calm down and call “119” as soon as possible. if the rescue team can’t arrive in time, it’s w ise to cover my nose and mouth with a piece of wet cloth. and it’s crucial to take the stairs instead of an elevator. only by doing things mentioned above can i get myself out of danger. 8+8+3life is colorful but full of danger, so our students mustlearn some basic skills to prevent ourselves. for instance, when a fire breaks out, i can try to put it out by myself if it isn’t very big. but if it is out of control, i must dial 119 to ask forhelp immediately. i should stay calm and tell the firemen wherei live clearly. it’s not a wise choice to use the lift. i should use the stairs instead. to cut long story short, we must learn howto protect ourselves correctly, and then we can live a happier life. 8+7.5+3peaceful as china is, we can’t emphasize th e importance of safety too much. as far as i’m concerned, it’s necessary for teenagers to learn how to protect ourselves.for example, when there is an earthquake, please calm down! it’s the most important. try to get out of the building and keep yourself from huge things. stay with others. it’s by no means frightening because you are not alone.to put everything in a shell, if you are in danger, be brave and calm. just believe thateveryone will be safe. 8+8+3recently so many earthquakes happened all over the world and caused many damages. it’s necessary and important forus to know how to protect myself. as far as i’m concerned, the most important thing we should do is to keep calm when an earthquake happens. if we’re at home, hide in the bathroom where has plenty of pipes because it can make sure your safety. in addition, try to ask others for help and never give up. only in these ways can we prevent ourselves fromdanger.8+7+4nowadays, people are likely to face dangerous situations. one great harm comes from natural disasters. i’d like to take an earthquake as an example to explain how to protect ourselves. first, we’re supposed to calm down when an earthquake strikes. second, stay under a piece of stable furniture so as to prevent ourselves from getting injured. more importantly, when wehear rescuers come, make some noise to catch their attention. to sum up, when we find ourselves in danger, we ought to protect ourselves or ask others for help, for we have every reason to save our own lives.8+7.5+4it is generally assumed that protecting oneself is a must for teenagers. danger is far more than accidents in sight. when i’m online, for example, there is hidden danger, too. to prevent myself from cheating, i never give my personal information, even not to the net-pals i’ve known well. and if necessary, i change my passwords regularly. what if a net-pal ask me out? i’ll turn to my parents for help and meet the net-pal with them.in some senses, trusting others is not suggested, especially strangers. so all in all, it’s never too much to be careful and that’s the key of protecting myself.8+7+4as a teenager, learning how to protect myselfvery important. it’s common to meet various problems in my daily life, such as car accidents, losing my way, fire and so on. firstly, i should prevent myself from doing something dangerous. what’s more, if i can’t solve the problems by myself, i will ask others for help. parents or friends will be good choices. most importantly, ifi’m in danger, i’ll calm down as sons as possible and think about how to get out of the trouble. protecting myself as much as possible, life will be better and safer! how important protecting myself is! 8+7.5+3there is no doubt that nothing else is more precious than life, so it’s definite ly important to protect myself. first of all, i never give out my personal information to strangers. second, i seldom go to places where i’m not familiar with. it’s also wiseto hang out with friends or parents instead of traveling alone, especially at night. besides, i ask the police for help if necessary. all in all, calming down when trouble comes really plays a role. 8+7.5+4it’s widely known that self-protection is a basic skill for teenagers. for instance, some essential ways must be clearly kept in our mind to avoid the risk of being cheated. firstly, we should remember to keep personal information secret especially when meeting strangers. additionally, strangephone calls mustn’t be trusted without certain checks. moreover, whenever our security is threatened, asking the police for help is a good choice. in summary, only by raising the awareness of protecting ourselves can we avoid being cheated. let’s learn to protect ourselves!8+7.5 +4nowadays, the things which are paid most attention to aretee nagers’ rights and safety. due to the development of technology, more things may fascinate teenagers deeply and eich their lives. meanwhile, teenagers are more likely to be hurt in the society---both physically and mentally. how disturbing it is!to prevent ourselves from bad people, the following tips are needed. firstly, never talk to strangers unless it’s needed. this reduces the chances of bad people to get close to us.secondly, never share our personal information on the internet, so that we can be safe from online criminals.last but not least, stay calm and call the police if we find ourselves being followed by strangers.can’t we be safer with the tips above?8+8+3as a teenager, the most important is safety. but how can i protect myself in my daily life?first, i can ask for help. if i play football and hurt my leg. the most useful way is call for my parents. they will take me to see a doctor.on the other hand, keeping calm is also necessary. i will not feel worry when i am in danger. try to protect myself in a correct way. in all, it’s important to protect myself. because the future won’t be bright without safety. 8+5.5+2that is no denying that protect myself is very important. so we must learn how to protect myself. there are several reasons for it. to begin with, i ask neighbour for help, if my mother and my father outside. apart from the view mentioned above i shouldn’t ask for with don’t familiar man. last but not leant i hold firm believe that nothing is more important than to protect myself in danger! 6+4+0protecting skills is necessary in our life. some day, i watched tv at home. suddenly, i smiled something. oh! the fire was damaging my blanket. i am so frightened and cryed. then, i told me that i should calm down. so, i fetched a lot of water and water it.at last, i saved my house. i think when we in danger, keep calm down is important.7+4 + 0how to protect myself? in my opinion in danger i need protect myself. first i ask police for help me, second i may have a problem to my one of danger. third i will prevent to my father from room. i was not easy because i knew my in danger to protect myself. it’s a goo d idea to my opinion, at last i protect myself. 3+2+0【篇二：上海市历届中考英语作文题目】上海市历届中考英语作文题目2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人2004leave school 毕业时分2005 growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼2006 i have a dream 我有一个梦2007 a story about my parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事2008love around me 爱在我身边2009i want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么2010im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪2011i’m a member of .... 我是……的一员2012if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议2013 how to protect myself 如何保护自己2014 this time next year 明年此时【篇三：上海中考英语作文】上海中考英语作文学习资料一.评分标准上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。

2013年上海中考作文

2013年上海中考作文【篇一：2013上海市中考优秀作文】1、今天，我想说说心里话春天的芳香可以引出莺歌燕舞，雨露的滋润可以渲染万紫千红，父亲的爱如琼浆般浇灌我，使我茁壮成长??今天，我想告诉父亲：“爸，我会好好爱你！” 那天一放学刚到家，就看见老爹身穿围裙，戴着袖套蹲坐在垃圾筒旁，整只手都伸入筒中，翻寻着，那样子还真像拾荒的流浪汉。

堂堂七尺老爹怎能流落如此地步，呜呼哉！走近发现，父亲身上全被汗水浸透了，豆大的汗珠直落入筒中，直到他突然跳起，用拇指和食指捏着小黑球，高兴得像个孩子，说：“刚才在找我闺女胎毛呢！被吸到吸尘器里了，还好找到了。

”霎时，心中一股暖流，父亲的爱虽不似大漠孤烟，长河落日般雄浑，也没有母爱轻舟淡月的细腻，他的爱深沉见于心底，我却忽视了，自己原来一直被父亲视若珍宝。

“父亲，对不起。

”那刻起我决定好好爱他。

当天晚饭后，我趁着父亲和母亲下楼半小时的散步，想为父亲做些事，便涮起了碗。

我小心拿起那安详地躺在池中的小盘子，滴入洗洁精，擦拭了起来。

谁知，“当”一声，滑到了地上，我庆幸那顽强的盘子只缺了一个口子，可笨手笨脚的我又划伤了手掌。

正巧又被上楼的父亲看到我手忙脚乱、“血染厨房”的场面。

父亲只是沉默，没有责怪我，赶紧拿来了“邦迪”，又送我去医院。

一直折腾到了十点。

父亲拍了拍我的肩，温柔道：“早点睡吧！爸最需要什么，你懂的。

” 那天，我欲说还休，今天借着说心里话，我想告诉父亲：“爸??我只是想为你付出些，下次我一定好好干，成为您的骄傲！”又是一个蒙太奇镜头，画面切换到了我的最后一个“六一”节那天。

爸在家挑选了好久的领带，最终选定了红色的那条，照着镜子“臭美”道：“爸帅不？很像克林顿吧！”他身穿那套重要场合穿的西装出席了我们的活动，我作为了优秀学员发表了演讲，当最后一句“我感谢四年来父亲的陪伴”话音刚落，席中那一抹火红激动地跳起——没错，正是我的“克林顿”父亲。

他挑着眉毛，似乎在炫耀：“瞧，这是我闺女！”我看出父亲格外高兴与自豪。

2013上海中考满分作文

喧嚣与繁杂，成了这时代的通病；炒作与呵斥，演绎了诸多的新闻；悄悄地提醒，来得实在正是时候；心灵鸡汤，抚慰了一颗躁动的心灵。

你悄悄地提醒我，我悄悄地提醒你。

让我们真正和谐地奔向美好的明天！你的真诚，是那么地感人；你的善意，是那么地清纯；你的美德，是那么地高尚；你的一个悄悄地提醒，是那么神奇、那么地能够扭转乾坤。

不需要三令五声，不需要大张旗鼓，不需要声嘶力竭，不需要文山会海，也不需要十二道金牌，更不需要强力推进，只需要你一个悄悄地提醒，就足够改变我的命运。

在我迷茫的时候，你一个眼神，充满了鼓励；在我失意的时候，你一个开心的笑容，传递了信心；在我失败的时候，你一条短信，燃起了我的激情，萠葠だ提醒，胜过那雷霆万钧。

小时候，我顽皮地下河洗澡，是妈妈大声地喊我回家，并给了我一次悄悄地提醒——“不要做水鬼的孩子！”在我的心里烙下了深深的印痕。

小学的时候，下大雨，我的油纸伞使劲地转来转去，看那水珠成圆圈状飞洒，忽然一阵大风起兮伞飞扬，戳破了同伴的油纸伞，我吓得不知道怎么办才好。

是父亲悄悄地提醒——“快去，与那同学换把伞。

”在我的心理播下了善良的种子。

当年中考前夕的时候，一次体育课，我不小心把脚踝骨扭了，老师把我背到医院，同学们也纷纷看望我，面对紧张的复习，我急得不知如是好。

是班主任悄悄地提醒我——“相信自己，我能行！”在我的心田上绽放了一朵盛开的莲花。

工作以来，面对那些不太听话的孩子们，总希望他们端正态度，明确目标，改进方法，千方百计地提高成绩，养成问了礼貌的习惯和优良的情操。

有时候就悄悄地提醒——“在危险的边缘，不要滑得太远。

”也让许多的孩子们铭记在心。

贪污****，是缺乏有人悄悄地提醒——党纪国法之外的一个悄悄地提醒；失去理智，是缺乏有人悄悄地提醒——冲动就要受到惩罚的悄悄地提醒；心生邪念，是缺乏有人悄悄地提醒——忠言逆耳利于行的悄悄地提醒。

忠诚于事业，忠实于家庭，忠贞于爱情，忠爱于大自然，钟情于人生——让我们互相多一点悄悄地提醒！快乐是对童年棒棒糖的美好回忆，快乐是让出座位时他人微笑的回报．快乐是付出艰辛努力时手捧奖杯的泪水．快乐是在游泳时和朋友们嬉戏打闹．快乐是在游乐场里兴奋的尖叫声．从一年级到现在我有过很多的快乐回忆。

2013年初中中考满分作文

2013年初中中考满分作文高分作文肯定不是临场训练出来的，而是平时修炼出来的，它需要你平时多阅读，多观察，多积累，提升我们的境界，锤炼我们的思想。

文章恰如人的影子，人的境界提高了，思想独立了，文章自然也立竿见影。

下面是小编给大家带来的2013年初中中考满分作文，欢迎大家阅读参考，我们一起来看看吧!2013年初中中考满分作文1：平凡撑起世界暗淡的天空，寒风凛冽。

漫长的水泥路上人群了了无几，显得格外冷清。

早晨，我去上学，妈妈说：“今天气温要下降，把大衣穿在外面吧!”从暖和的楼道里走下来，刚出楼门，一股寒风扑面而来，我立刻感到一股寒意，好象一下子来到了北极。

“啊——糗”我打了一个喷嚏。

就在这时，我看见一辆拖拉机的主人站在马路旁，他的鼻子冻的通红，脸色灰暗;他的手插在衣服两边的口袋里，身体不停地晃动着。

过了一会，来了一个五十多岁农民模样的人，他骨瘦如柴，身上穿着一件蓝色的大衣，下身穿着一条淡色的长裤。

他那顶黑帽子同那油光发亮的脸简直叫人分辨不出来，一双目光柔和的眼睛显得很突出，在嘴角上带着微笑时，露出微微发黄的牙齿。

手背粗糙得像松树皮，裂开了一道道口子，手掌上磨出厚厚的老茧。

他拽了拽棉被上的四个角，回过头来大声的吆喝起来：“卖菜喽!新鲜的蔬菜喽!有芹菜、青菜、包菜、西红柿……”哦!原来他们是从农村到我们小区卖菜的。

厚厚的棉被掀开了一角，我立刻把目光朝向了棉被下的蔬菜，棉被下有着各种各样、五颜六色的蔬菜。

翡翠一样晶莹的大白菜，女孩子脸蛋一样娇红的西红柿，鹅黄色的韭黄，翠绿色的蒜苗，他们都是那么鲜嫩欲滴。

我快步跑上前问道：“伯伯，这些蔬菜都是从哪儿运来的?”“杏林啊。

”“哇，好远啊，他们肯定很早就要起来……”我自言自语的嘀咕了起来。

那个伯伯似乎看出了我的心思，笑着说：“我们四点半到五点就要起床。

”“那么早，要是我的话……”我又犯起了嘀咕。

因为上学时间紧迫，我又顶着寒风走着，当我再次回头的时候，我发现他俩还在热情百倍的吆喝着，还在不断的扯着棉被捂着他们心爱的蔬菜。

中考作文之2013上海中考语文满分作文

2013上海中考语文满分作文【篇一：2013年中考语文大作文】2013年中考语文大作文23．阅读下面的文字，任选一题，按要求作文。

（60分）也许你不富有，但你有一个温暖的家，这就够了；也许你不聪明，但你有一股拼搏的劲儿，这就够了；也许你不出众，但你有一颗热爱生活的心，建就够了??也许你很听话，但这可能还不够；也许你取得了一些成绩，但这可能还不够；也许你有一个美好的梦想，但遣可能还不够??题目一：这就够了题目二：这还不够要求：（1）诗歌除外，文体不限；（2）不少于600字；（3）文中不要出现含个人信息的地名、校名、人名等。

书写（5分）根据作文书写评定，要求卷面整洁，书写规范、工整。

这就够了当你这个人还真真切切存在，那点良知还在你火热跳动的心间时，这就够了。

——佚名朋友拉着我坐在镜前。

她幽怨地指着镜中的自己：“你看，大脸盘，黑皮肤，小眼睛，大嘴巴??真不知道我这张大众脸，什么时候能出众，站在人群中一下就能被认出来啊！”我一脸无奈地看着她，拍拍她的肩膀，打趣道：“嗨，那你明天搽点白粉，做出点淑女气质再来学校呗！”真没想到，朋友居然照我的话做了！她收敛了往日“男人婆”式的锋芒，挺着胸，迈着小步，微扬下巴，一副舍我其谁的清高模样。

面对我的惊讶和大笑，她装作视而不见。

我浑身不自在地陪着她在校园溜达。

碰见的熟人看到朋友大为讶异：“嘿，原来你这么漂亮了！”朋友优雅地打着手势，一边嗲声嗲气地低声回道：“哪里哪里??”真是不胜娇羞啊。

朋友心花怒放，喜形于色。

她本想夸耀一番，但碍于“淑女气质”，最终还是隐回去了。

走到学校工地旁，发现一圈同学围成一堆在看什么热闹，不时传来哈哈的大笑声。

我们挤进去一瞧，原来一位娇小的女生跌倒在一个积满了泥水的大坑里，满身泥泞，狼狈不堪，正伤心地掉眼泪。

朋友见状，愤怒地喊道：“你们是不是人啊？笑什么？小心老娘把你踢下去！”她一边说着，一边冲向水坑，将女孩拉出，细心地为她擦拭脸上的污水。

朋友一脚泥水，衣服和裤子都溅上了斑斑点点的污渍，先前好不容易作出来的淑女形象轰然坍塌。

2013上海中考作文

2013上海中考作文上海日新月异，历史文化悠久，是一个令众多外地人蒙受无穷魅力的城市。

今年，上海中考正式拉开了序幕。

这次考试，可谓弥漫着希望、创新精神、正能量的氛围。

一段历经磨难的时光终将过去，新的一年里，我们面对的是未知的未来。

这个属于我们的未来，不仅仅是中考考试的结果，更是日后的机遇、挑战和期望。

上海中考有它特殊的历史感和精神内涵，它把复杂多变的考题、成绩归结为现实生活中创新思想、勤奋努力和向上精神的体现，提供学子们跳脱单调的课堂教学，提升思想能力的机会。

上海中考的出现，把原来的传统和现代化结合起来，让学生们在中考的过程中学习到历史知识、文化素养，从而更加熟练和深刻地掌握文科的知识点。

可以说，上海中考的出现不仅丰富了学生的课外活动，也让考生能够在大量的试题中发现历史文化的精髓，能够更深入地体会到中国古代和现代文化的魅力。

上海中考是学生们追求梦想的起点，他们用充满激情和理想的精神去寻找自己的价值所在，不惧怕困难与挑战，像一只鹰，充满力量，向着梦想的地方奔去。

尽管上海中考考试时间分配得很紧，它仍然能让参加考试的学生们体会到真正的自我挑战，去激发内心的力量，展示自我的风采，让他们在经历激烈的竞争获得宝贵的成功，从而获得更多的机会。

上海中考作文必须要有文化底蕴、文字艺术、语言魅力和新颖思路，也就是说，考生们必须根据上海中考的精神，把文化素养和文字造诣揉合在一起，丰富自我思维，形成自己独特的视角。

这是一个让学生们绽放自己才华和智慧的风景，让他们在激烈的竞争中勇敢前行，在凝心聚力中勇往直前，让他们的未来充满希望。

2013上海中考已经过去，但我们的梦想还在延续，未来的路，我们依旧要用充满激情和希望，带着一颗豁达的心和一份朝气蓬勃的精神，去实现自我价值。

2013年上海中考语文英语作文

2013年上海中考语文英语作文Last summer, I had the opportunity to travel to Shanghai, the largest city in China. It was an exhilarating experience that I will cherish forever.From the moment I stepped out of the plane, I was surrounded by the bustling atmosphere and tall skyscrapers. The city's vibrant energy was infectious, and I couldn't wait to explore its many attractions.First, I visited the famous Bund. The majestic view ofthe Huangpu River and the iconic skyline of Shanghai left mein awe. The blend of historical buildings and modern architecture was truly mesmerizing. As I strolled along the Bund, I felt the rich history and culture that Shanghai hasto offer.Next, I ventured into the heart of the city, Nanjing Road. It is a bustling pedestrian street filled with shops,restaurants, and entertainment. The vibrant lights, colorful signage, and fashionable crowd made it an exciting place to be. I indulged myself in some shopping and tried delicious local cuisine.One of the highlights of my trip was a visit to the Shanghai Museum. This magnificent museum showcased a vast collection of Chinese art and artifacts. From ancient ceramics to exquisite calligraphy, each exhibit offered a glimpse into the country's rich heritage. I was particularly captivated by the delicate beauty of the traditional paintings.To truly experience the essence of Shanghai, I couldn't miss out on exploring the old streets of Xintiandi. The preserved Shikumen houses and narrow alleys provided a nostalgic glimpse into the city's past. The combination of traditional architecture, modern lifestyle, and trendy shops created a unique and vibrant ambiance.Another memorable experience was a visit to the Shanghai Disneyland Park. The magical world of Disney came to life with thrilling rides, enchanting parades, and captivating performances. It was a day filled with joy and laughter, making me feel like a child again.Throughout my trip, I was impressed by the kindness and hospitality of the people of Shanghai. Despite the language barrier, locals went out of their way to help me and make me feel welcome. Their warmth and friendliness left a lasting impact on me.In conclusion, my trip to Shanghai was an unforgettable adventure filled with culture, history, and excitement. The city's combination of rich heritage, modernity, and warm hospitality made it a truly remarkable destination. I hope to visit again someday to create more incredible memories.。

2013年中考满分作文欣赏：2013年的春天,我真累

2013年的春天，我真累
人之所以感到累，特别是心累，是因为总徘徊在坚持与放弃之间，迟迟没有做出一个抉择。

——题记
上课铃又响了，回到教室的座位上，面对桌面上垒起高高的一叠书，我真累。

每天漫无目的地学习、吃饭、睡觉，起床再接着学习、吃饭、睡觉，天天如此，兜了一圈又一圈，真累!
到底是怎么了，怎么会如此之累，像是身体的全部精力都被魔鬼吸走了一样，整日无精打采，说是行尸走肉，我想也不为过。

可是身体里的那个小精灵，它拼命地挣扎着、反抗着，我能听见它的呼声：“我不允许你堕落，不允许你失去动力。

”
是啊，原本那个浑身充满斗志，拥有美好梦想的我哪去了，是什么拖住了我梦想的脚步?
原来是累，是心累。

而人之所以心累，是因为总徘徊在坚持与放弃之间。

家庭对我寄予的期望，让我想坚持，面对厚厚的永远读不完的书，我想放弃，朋友和同学的鼓励，我想坚持，面对一道道解不完的难题，我想放弃;想起那曾经为自己精心编织的美好梦想，我想坚持，但面对外界形形色色的诱惑，我想放弃。

心里的魔鬼与小精灵一直在斗争，我夹在中间，着实感动累，真累。

2013年的春天，一边犯着春困，一边啃书，可是不知道什么时候，已不知不觉地进入了梦乡。

梦里，我看见了很多年后的自己，干练的短发、整洁的套装，正从容不迫地和客户谈论我的经济学。

同桌敲敲桌子：“喂，老师下来了。

”被她的一句话从梦里拉回了现实。

可是回想起那个梦，突然让我精神抖擞，那不就是我想要的未来吗?如梦初醒。

为了最初的梦想，我要坚持，无论如何都要到达梦想的彼岸。

2013年的春天，我真累，但2011的夏天，我应该重振旗鼓，高扬梦想的风帆。

我的美好!。

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2013年上海中考满分作文：悄悄地提醒
悄悄地提醒
喧嚣与繁杂，成了这时代的通病;炒作与呵斥，演绎了诸多的新闻;悄悄地提醒，来得实在正是时候;心灵鸡汤，抚慰了一颗躁动的心灵。

你悄悄地提醒我，我悄悄地提醒你。

让我们真正和谐地奔向美好的明天!
你的真诚，是那么地感人;你的善意，是那么地清纯;你的美德，是那么地高尚;你的一个悄悄地提醒，是那么神奇、那么地能够扭转乾坤。

不需要三令五声，不需要大张旗鼓，不需要声嘶力竭，不需要文山会海，也不需要十二道金牌，更不需要强力推进∠∠∠∠∠只需要你一个悄悄地提醒，就足够改变我的命运。

在我迷茫的时候，你一个眼神，充满了鼓励;在我失意的时候，你一个开心的笑容，传递了信心;在我失败的时候，你一条短信，燃起了我的激情∠∠∠∠∠萠葠だ提醒，胜过那雷霆万钧。

小时候，我顽皮地下河洗澡，是妈妈大声地喊我回家，并给了我一次悄悄地提醒——“不要做水鬼的孩子!”在我的心里烙下了深深的印痕。