【托福写作备考】写作训练分析及范文(二)
【托福写作备考】写作训练分析及范文（二）
新托福写作中我们该尽量让文章言简意赅，用词精准。
根据国外学者的调查统计，一个以句号结尾的英语句子，单词的数量最好不要超过20个，否则的话，句子偏长，听话人的注意力有可能不集中，漏听一、两个单词，从而影响对整个句子的理解。
以下内容中，我们就通过实例为大家分析托福写作的一些经典范文。
Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose
to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each
choice.
参考分析：
选择和很多朋友在一起
(1)获得更多的信息。
一两个朋友的信息是有限的，而很多朋友带来很多信息
(2)有更大的乐趣。
开生日PARTY，请很多朋友，这样家里更热闹
(3)能够学习更多人的思维方式，或者团队精神。
因为一两个相近朋友的思维比较一样，而
未来我们要和很多不同的人一起工作，很很多朋友在一起对于培养思维和团队精神很有帮助。
参考范文：
One or two friends, or many friends?
I cannot imagine a person who hasn’t enjoyed the company of a friend. Friends
are very precious and therefore, we constantly love and cherish them. Spending
time with friends has always been regarded as a wonderful thing to do with no
doubt. However, one might choose to spend time either with one or two close
friends or a number of friends.
Certainly, there is a difference between the enjoyment gained by spending
time with our few close friends and the delight obtained by hanging out with
many friends. When we are spending time with our close friends, we can feel a special closeness and bond with them. With the company of intimate friends, we can be more open and true to ourselves. Although with few people around the scope of our activities is limited, it is compensated by the satisfaction that we gained from the warm atmosphere.
If a person doesn’t like the joy attained from the company of just few close friends and wants to extend his activities with more friends, he can choose to spend time with many friends. When a group of friends gather together they can engage in many group activities such as playing games and sports, and travel to
new places. This enjoyment doesn’t necessarily require close relations among the
group members. Being sociable and outgoing is good enough to create a pleasant ambiance for everyone.
I’d rather choose to spend my time with one or two close friends than being with a number of friends. With my close friends around we don’t really have to do anything in particular together. For us the significance lies in the fact that we are together, sharing our time. As the saying goes, “I can spend hours without uttering a single word with my friend and I’d have the best conversation ever..”。
【必备资料】托福TPO2独立写作题目及范文——教育投资
【必备资料】托福TPO2独立写作题目及范文——教育投资在托福写作练习过程中，相信TPO材料中的作文题目都会是大家的首选练习材料。
但是，对于每个题目仅仅只是练习写还是不够的，有针对性的解析和指导性，才会让TPO材料更有其使用价值。
那么，下面我们就为大家带来TPO写作材料的系列解析内容。
托福独立写作题目及范文：教育投资Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just asimportant as classes and libraries and should receive equal financialsupport.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1p: 先强调大学的功能( miniature of the society) 肩负大学生平衡发展的重任，需要保证足够的投资2p: 学生喜欢运动，运动有利于学生身心健康。
3p: 学生喜欢参加社会活动，参加社会活动能拓展学生的人际网络。
4p: 政府和财政部门应该重视对体育设施和公共设施的建设，为学生创建良好物质条件。
类似题目The best way the school spends a gift of moneyYour school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best wayfor your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.(建图书馆or建体育设备)Should school buy computers or books?Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students orbooks for the library. Which should your school choose to buy — computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.(买书)托福独立写作范文：范文提纲：支持，1) Good health is prerequisite for future success. Essential for study. E.g. several middle-aged teachers and researchers suffer from diseases, and some even die. A great loss.2) Through sports activities, student can benefit mental. cooperation and competition combined harmoniously.3) Save money in the long run. medical expense are patronized by governmentand this is a heavy burden.Both libraries and sports activities are indispensable for university, so itis wise for universities give the same amount of money to their studentactivities as they give to their libraries.反对，The main responsibility of a university is to develop a student’s academic ability.1) depending on the time students spend on studying and sports, which is 8 to1 per day. Studying environments is more important. Libraries designed to accommodate students as well as books while sports facilities need not be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries.2) pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. New facilities are expensive to buy and maintain. well-trained staff and working extra during exam period in lib than sports.3) students are happy to organize their own sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school.。
托福独立写作预测及思路解析（2）
托福独立写作预测及思路解析（2）2017托福独立写作预测及思路解析2.政府过度的'关注科技发展，而科技发展有给人们的健康带来了负面印象。
虽然科技发展确实改变了人们的生活，但同时也使得人们的生活方式变的不均衡，饮食习惯变的不健康。
具体例子可以说人们过度依赖科技产品，且快餐的出现，饱受争议的转基因食品的出现都使得人们的饮食习惯出现很大的弊病。
3.让步段：确实政府已经开始提倡健康饮食，但是力度依然不够7. some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do you prefer?选有限的几次大的任务：1.对于学生有好处：学生可以被解放出来，会有更多的时间精力投入自己想做的事情(因为不需要一直去准备各种测试)。
举例子，可以说大学生更应该注重能力的培养，而不是书本上的知识，如学市场的学生，除了课本知识，社会实践与公司实习更重要。
如果时间被花费在很多的小的任务上，那么久没有时间积累社会经验和培养职业技能。
2.对于老师有好处：老师可以被解放出来，因为不用在课堂一直讲与考试或者作业相关的内容。
举例：大学老师因此会有更多的精力投入研究，老师也可以在课堂中不用只讲解考试的内容，可以多分享一些补充知识，对于学生未来的就业更有帮助。
8. Movies and TV programs made in your own country are more interesting comparing to movies and programs made in other counties选他国：1. 情节好，特效好国内电影主题单一，国外电影多样化，科技发达阿凡达一个残疾人被送去潘多拉星球，伪装成当地人，帮助地球人入侵这个星球，但是讽刺的是，他爱上了当地的公主，最后和当地人结盟了，把地球人击退了。
托福独立写作范文TPO2
托福独立写作范文TPO2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.With some changes of social values nowadays, the importance of always telling the truth is in relationship is questioned among the public. However, as far as I am concerned, I still strongly believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationships. Generally, telling the truth helps to build up and maintain trust for work and love.First of all, always telling the truth creates trust between clients and companies, between employers and employees, and among colleagues. For instance, when I was an intern at an insurance company, I heard from my manager about an event which caused a lot of loss to our company. There was a client whose car was hit in an accident. According to his contract with our company, he could receive little insurance payment. However, in order to get more money, this client lied to prevent our employees from investigating the scene. He took the pictures of his “broken” car, and he changed some details of the pictures of the pictures on his computer for exaggerating his loss in that accident. As a result, our company paid him a great deal of money. Later, our company realized the scandal and accused him for his crime. He finally got severe punishment and lost support from all insurance companies. Although this client was punished for his misdeeds, our company suffered great loss in the whole case. Therefore, telling the truth is the most important consideration at work, for it not only helps to build us trust between new business partners, but also maintain trust during the cooperation, which brings more benefits and convenience at work, or even make oneself involve in more serious troubles.Secondly, love also requires telling the truth. Love is a kind of fantastic affection which brings two strangers together or even leads them to be a couple. Therefore, telling the truth is the most important consideration in this relationship, because it creates and maintains trust between lovers or couples, which can keep their love or marriage for longer time. It is quite common that one of the lovers tells lies to the other, which destroys their love or even their marriage. If a man meets a female friend by himself in the evening, but he tells his girlfriend or wife that he worked overtime, the result may turns out rather terrible when his girlfriend or wife knows the truth later. This man may tell a white lie to avoid some meaningless quarrel, but this actually triggers more misunderstanding. Therefore, telling the truth at first-time is more appropriate and correct to maintain a relationship, especially the relationship of love. Telling the truth should always be the most important consideration in love. And the worry about its results can be removed by the techniques of telling the truth may hurt people’s feelings. If a doctor tells his patient the truth that he is diagnosed with cancer, the patients may lost his hope and give up his family easily. In this circumstance, telling the truth seems not appropriate. However, if telling the truth more euphemistically, the patient may accept his disease more easily. Nevertheless, telling the truth to the patient’s family is still a right decision. Therefore, telling the truth is still a very important consideration in relationships.All in all, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationships, for it creates and maintains trust among people, which brings more harmony and peace to the whole society.。
托福作文第二篇模板
托福作文第二篇模板Introduction。
In today's fast-paced world, the ability to communicate effectively in English is more important than ever. Whether it's for academic, professional, or personal reasons, having strong English language skills can open doors and create opportunities. In this essay, we will explore a template for writing a successful TOEFL essay. By following this template, test-takers can improve their chances of achieving a high score on the TOEFL writing section.Paragraph 1: Introduction。
The first paragraph of the essay should introduce the topic and provide some background information. This is also where the writer should state their thesis or main argument. For example, if the prompt asks the test-taker to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city, the first paragraph should briefly introduce the topic and clearly state the writer's position on the issue.Paragraph 2: Supporting Point 1。
托福写作各种练习（5篇范例）
托福写作各种练习（5篇范例）第一篇：托福写作各种练习admittedly, frankly speaking, needless to say, in consequence, on the contrary, to my delight, to sum upWilliam Shakespeare, George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, Franklin Roosevelt, Abraham Lincoln, Bill Gates, Christopher Columbus, Neil Armstrong, Louis Armstrong, Dwight D.Eisenhower, Margret Mitchell, Marilyn Monroe, O.Henry, Pearl S.Buck, John F.Kennedy, Theodore Roosevelt, Thomas Edison, Alexander Fleming, Ernest Hemingway, Henry Ford, Ezra Proud, Walt Disney, Celine Dion, Whitey Hustonthe Statue of Liberty, the Boston Tea Party, the Yangtze River, the Mississippi River, the Pulitzer Prize, Mount Rushmore National Memorial, the Rocky Mountains, Mc Donald’s, Harvard, Princeton, Yale University, Chairman Mao, the late Chinese premier Zhou, Tibetthe speaker, the lecturer, the professor, the listening material, the lecture, the talkthe writer, the author, the reading material, the writing, the passage科学技术的发展使人们能够非常轻松地学习知识Scientific development has made leaning knowledge very easy for people.With scientific development, it has become quite an easy thing for people to gain knowledge.The society undergoing such swift development, people are able to gain knowledge in an unprecedented easy way.越来越多的人意识到环境保护的重要性More and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment.The fundamental effect ofenvironment protection has been considered by increasing number of people.It has been realized by more and more people that preserving the environment has become an extreme urgency.我认为在我们社区建工厂是不好的I don’t think building a factory in our community is a good thing.I completely oppose to the proposal that a factory be built in our community.From my point of view, building a factory in our community is everything other than beneficial to our community.由于年龄的关系，父母亲对孩子的了解有时还不如他们的同伴Because of the age, parents sometimes have a worse understanding over their chil dren than children’s partners.Children’s parents sometimes do not acquaint themselves with them as their friends do as the consequence of their old age.Sometimes parents just don’t understand their children as well as the partners of their children do since they are older.要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力，他们的工作效率会有很大提高If each member in the group does his best, their efficiency will improve dramatically.The working efficiency of a group will be apparently raised in case that all the members try their best.The ascent of efficiency of a group is a certain consequence of an atmosphere that everyone tries his best in working.语言环境对外语学习的影响是很大的Language environment has a big influence on learning a foreign nguage environment plays a significant role in foreign language learning.The language environment is to foreign language learning what the foundation is to a skyscraper.我们要像保护自己的亲人哪样保护野生动物We must protect wild animals as we protect our relatives.We should protect our family, so should we do to the wild animals.Wild animals deserve our protection just as our relatives do.我们从电视上学会了好多有用的东西We have learned a lot of useful things from television.Immense number things of great use we get have come out from TV.Numerous things we learned that are beneficial to us are from television.我赞成政府花钱进行外太空探索I strongly agree that the government spend money to carry out outer space exploration.I will applaud if outer space exploration be put forward by the government.I go along with the decision that the government pay for the cost of outer space exploration.如果人们愿意在太空探索上面多花一些钱，人们就会在不久的将来更多的享受高科技给我们的生活带来的便利If people are willing to spend more money on space exploration, people will soon enjoy the convenience high technology brings to our lives.With more money spent on the exploration to the outer space, more convenience brought about by high technology will be exposed to people before long.When people pay more for the outer space exploration, more convenience is surely the consequence.强健的体魄是实现伟大理想的前提Strong body is the prerequisite of realizing great dreams.You can hardly achieve a great goal unless you have a physical fitness.You can fulfill your great dream only in the case of you have a robust build.偶尔的失败有时候会有助于日后的成功Occasional failure sometimes contributes to later success.Sometimes success is consequence of occasional failure.Occasional failure is sometimes beneficial to later success.IMPORTANT SENTENCE STRUCTURES:1.The lecture discusses … which differs from the main idea in the reading that….2.The professor made the point that … The reading, in contrast, held a different view.3.Another important point showed in the listening material is that … but the readingpresents a conflicting ideathat…4.Finally, the professor stated that… which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who said that…5.In general, the professor discussed the problem of … that the reading viewed in a contrary angle.6.According to the lecture, …, on the other hand, the reading material said that…7.The professor made the point that … on the contrary, the writer demonst rated an idea that …8.The lecture supports/ illustrates the idea that…9.The lecture contradicts/ refutes/ is contrary to/ is the opposite of the idea that…10.Contrary to the belief in the passage that… the professor says that…11.The professor refutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that … by saying that…第二篇：托福写作素材经典练习官方网站：托福写作素材经典练习书籍是我们最为沉浸而永恒的朋友;是最易接近和才华横溢的顾问;是最为耐心的良师。
2024托福写作范文赏析整合
2024托福写作范文赏析整合在2024年的托福考试中，写作部分还是会是同样的难点。
为了让各位考生更好地备考，我们整合了以下几篇经典的范文，供大家参考学习。
1. 题目：Do you agree or disagree with the statement that self-driving cars will become the primary means of transportation in the future?范文：With the rapid development of technology, self-driving cars have become a well-talked topic around the world. Some people believe that self-driving cars will become the primary means of transportation in the future because of the advantages they bring. However, other people hold a different view. From my perspective, although self-driving cars have many advantages, they are unlikely to become the primary means of transportation in the future.First and foremost, self-driving cars still have some problems that need to be solved. For example, they cannot cope with extreme weather conditions or complex roadsituations. It is hard to imagine a self-driving car maneuvering through a flooded road or a narrow alley with alot of pedestrians and cyclists. Additionally, self-driving cars cannot replace all the functions of traditional cars.For some situations, such as off-road trips or extreme sports, traditional cars with manual control will still be theprimary choice.Moreover, the cost of self-driving cars is still high. At present, only a few people can afford to own a self-driving car, and the price of it will remain high for a long time. Therefore, self-driving cars will not become the primary means of transportation for most people, especially in developing countries.Last but not least, there are still many people who enjoy driving their cars. Driving on your own gives you a sense of control and freedom, and it is a joy that cannot be replacedby a machine. Even if self-driving cars become more prevalent in the future, there will always be people who prefer driving their own cars.In conclusion, self-driving cars have many advantages,but they are unlikely to become the primary means oftransportation in the future. They still have some problems that need to be solved, such as their inability to cope with extreme weather or complex road situations, and their high cost. Moreover, there are still many people who enjoy driving their cars. Therefore, we should not overestimate the importance of self-driving cars.2. 题目：Do you agree or disagree with the statement that advertisements are manipulative and should be banned?范文：Advertisements are an indispensable part of our daily lives. However, there is a growing concern that advertisements are manipulative and should be banned. From my perspective, I partially agree with the statement that advertisements are manipulative. However, I do not think that they should be banned completely.Firstly, advertisements are manipulative by nature. Advertisers use different techniques to present their products in the most appealing way, and they often exaggerate the benefits of their products while minimizing their drawbacks. This is understandable, as the goal ofadvertisements is to attract consumers and boost sales. However, this can also lead to unrealistic expectations and disappointment when the product does not live up to the advertisement.On the other hand, advertisements can also be informative and educational. Advertisements can provide valuable information about new products, services, or events. They can also raise awareness of social issues or health problems. For example, some public service announcements can be very effective in promoting safe driving, healthy lifestyle or environmental protection.Moreover, advertisements can also provide entertainment. Many commercials use humor, music, or other creative elements to capture our attention and evoke our emotion. They can be an enjoyable part of our daily lives and can even become a cultural phenomenon.In conclusion, advertisements are manipulative by nature, but they are not necessarily bad. They can be informative, educational, and entertaining. We should not ban advertisements completely, but we should also be aware of their manipulative nature and use critical thinking when weencounter them. As consumers, we should choose products wisely based on our own needs and preferences, instead of being swayed by advertisements.。
新托福写作范文(热门4篇)
新托福写作范文第1篇Task：It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.托福写作模板范文参考：We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.新托福写作范文第2篇Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people saythat computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：Some universities require students to choose a variety of subjects; others only require students tospecialize in one subject. I deem the first one as the premier choice. Among countless factors,there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity that students should take classes in many subjects is that theycan make full use of the abundant resources that a university has to offer. A university has plentyof educational and research resources. It is a very good idea to make full use of these valuableassets while studying in the university. The best way to achieve this is to take a variety of subjectsas much as possible. Through learning these courses, a student can get access to knowledge andresources in different areas. On the contrary, if a student only specializes in one subject, he willnot have a chance to get access to other resources offered by the university.Another reason can be seen by every person is that by choosing many subjects students can broaden their knowledge and make a solid foundation for their future concentrated study. Whatever the student will concentrate on in his senior years in college, it is necessary that hechoose a wide range of subjects to build the knowledge foundation. Take the field of BusinessManagement for example, the student has to acquire knowledge in writing, accounting, economicsand human resource management before he can successfully start his major concentration argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because studentscan be more adaptable in their future career if they choose a variety of subjects during theiruniversity study. It is obvious that the development of modern society requires people with inter-disciplinary and comprehensive knowledge. If a student chooses a variety of subjects in hisuniversity study, and gained a breath and width of knowledge, he will be more adaptable to therequirement of the society, and be able to easily adjust to many kinds of jobs. This will benefit hisfuture career.In a word, taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that studentsshould take classes in many subjects in a university.新托福写作范文第3篇满分托福综合写作范文In 1990, new rules and guidelines were adopted in the United Kingdom that has changed the whole field of Archaeology in that country. The new guidelines improved the situation in all there areas discussed in the passage.First, the new guidelines state that before any construction project can start, the construction site has to be examined by archaeologists to see whether the site is of archaeological interest or value. If the site is of archaeological interest, the next step is for the builders, archaeologists and local government officials to get together and make a plan for preserving the archaeological artifacts, either by building around them or by excavating and documenting them properly before the construction is allowed to proceed.Second, an important part of the new guidelines is a rule that any archaeological work done on the construction site will be paid for by the construction company not by the government.The construction company has to pay for the initial examination of the site, and then for all the work carried out under the preservation plan. This is a whole new source of financial support. The funding from construction companies has allowed researchers to study a far greater range of archaeological sites than they could in the past.Last, the new guidelines provide a lot of paid work for archaeologists, work that didn’t exist before. Expert archaeologists are now hired at all stages of the process to examine the site for archaeological value, then to help draw up the preservation plan to do the research in a professional scientific manner and finally to process the date and write reports and articles. The increased job and career opportunities in Archaeology have increased the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, which is now the highest it’s ever been.新托福写作范文第4篇Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group ledby a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作满分作文范文：There are a lot of views whether the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Differentpeople has different viewpoint. In my opinion, a group led by a tour guide is the best way totravel. The argument for this view goes as follows:In the first place, there are many advantages when people travel in a group. First, people will notfeel boring in a long trip. People can talk, laugh and make joking like a big family. Second, thegroup will help you a lot when you have any emergency. The people in the group could help youfigure out the awkward situation that will be unimaginable when you travel alone. Third, with thegroup discount, such as the discount for airplane ticket, the hotel, and the admission ticket,travelers can save a lot of money when they use the group discount.In the second place, there are many advantages too when people travel led by a tour guide. Thetour guide will arrange all the details about the trip in advance. The traveler need not worry aboutwhere to find the hotel, where to rent the car, and how to find the direction. It will make the trip a little bit easy. Another advantage is that led by a tour guide will save much time than travelingalone. With the professional knowledge, tour guide will make the smartest schedule. I wouldnever forget that one of my friend, a city tour guide in the Shanghai, China, said that she can leadtraveler to visit the whole city by one day which people should spend two or three days to finishit.In conclusion, there are many advantages when people travels in a group led by a tour guide, suchas save money, save time, do not feel boring, and is easy to take care of. Therefore, I stronglyagree that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.。
托福独立写作范文三两招突破独立写作系列
托福独立写作范文三两招突破独立写作系列为了让大家更好的预备托福考试，我给大家整理一些托福考试作文小技巧，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。
托福独立写作范文| 三两招突破独立写作系列(一)写作范文今日一招：“四两拨千斤”解读：一句话完成“对比”性的争论“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to work for a business owned by someone else than to work for a business owned by your family.”我们以【立场：work for a business owned by someone else】为例，展现这一招“四两拨千斤”：先争论对方的劣势：假如work for a business owned by my family，可能会让我感到不适。
If I work for a business owned by my family, the atmosphere of the company may feel strange, making me uncomfortable. This is my case, actually. I declined the offer from my uncle’s company for theconsideration that since I may be recognized as the nephew of the company’s owner, other staff may show a defensive attitude and gesture when they work with me. They may exchange ideas behind my back, and although those ideas may not be bad words about the company, they would not involve me in the discussion. Meanwhile, the office may be a stressful place, because there in their eye is a spy or a snitcher, which is me. I do not think that I could feel comfortable working in such an environment as my coworkers would behave with too much discretion in front of me.至此，我们发觉，我们充分争论了对方的不利之处。
托福写作真题分析与范文
2017 年01月07日托福写作考题回忆综合防止海龟减少的办法是否有用阅读：有3种办法防止海龟减少1建立金属围栏，防止海龟蛋被素食者吃掉2禁用塑料袋，海龟吃了塑料袋，消化道会被堵塞3把传统渔网改成只能捕鱼而不会限制海龟的，海龟被渔网捉住，会溺水听力：上述办法都不行1. 金属围栏会阻碍小海龟的磁场发育，海龟靠磁场导航，找食物，找配偶，找地方产卵。
没有发育好的磁场，海龟根本无法生存，繁衍。
2. 限制塑料袋或许有用。
问题是，现在海里已经有成千上万的塑料袋了，即使分解成了小片，一样会危害海龟。
所以限塑解决不了燃眉之急。
3. 改进的渔网，渔民会拒绝使用，因为网到的鱼会减少，收入会减少。
即使有法律规定必须使用，渔民也会趁没人使用传统渔网，回到岸上再换成改进渔网。
Sample Answer:When it comes to the decrease of sea turtle’s population, the reading putsforward three solutions to prevent this tendency. However, all these threesolutions are regarded as invalid in the listening.First, the idea that building a metal fence will work. Not as it puts in thereading, the listening argues that the mental fence will hinder the developmentof magnetic field which exerts influence on the growth of the little seaturtles. The listening further illustrates that sea turtles rely on magneticfield to navigate, find food and mates as well as find a suitable place to layeggs. Without a fully developed magnetic field, they cannot live and reproduce.As to the second measure of a ban of the plastic bags, the listening stillrefutes it. As a matter of fact, there are already thousands of plastic bags inthe sea, which, although decomposing into small pieces, still pose great threatto sea turtles. Therefore, the ban of plastic bags is not the point.Lastly, the reading calls on to transform the traditional fishing nets intothose catching only fish but not sea turtles. Unfortunately, the third solutionis not able to work well. The listening explains that the fishermen will refuseto use the transformed fishing nets for they will catch fewer fish and thus geta decreased income. Even though relevant laws are enacted, the fishermen willapply the traditional fishing nets before replacing them with the transformedfishing nets on shore. （247 words）You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a group. Doyou think a person's honest is the most important characteristic for being aleaderSample Answer:Regardless of the increasingly complicated relationships among modern people,honesty is still regarded as the most cherished characteristic when it comes toevaluating others around us. Therefore, it is not beyond our expectation thatsomeone gives priority to honesty when selecting a leader for a studentorganization. According to my preference and experience, there are other twofactors that are more worth noticing.To begin with, the ability to plan and organize is the most essentialcharacteristic for a student leader for the sake of a smooth progress of thestudent affairs. In other words, competent leaders are those with detailedplans and clear goals in their mind. Otherwise, the whole group will easily getlost on the way and lose the impetus to strive for their common goals. Bymaking a detailed plan and carrying it out step by step, a group leader is notonly capable of pushing forward and complete the preset projects but also ableto keep the team members away from distrust and anxiety. For example, if aleader of English Association is going to conduct an English speaking contest,he is required to figure out the concrete process of a speaking contest, thecost related to the applied facilities as well as the assignment for eachindividual in the group.Besides, whether the candidate for the student leader masters the art ofcommunication is also worth noticing. It is no denying that the leader of astudent organization is exposed to various chances to interact with groupmembers encompassing students of distinct personality traits. Therefore，it isof paramount importance for the leader to be possessed with the ability torelate well with others. More importantly, only by well coordinating therelations among the team members can the student leader be capable of ensuringthe smooth progress of the organization. To illustrate, if conflicts ariseamong team members during the process of crucial projects, the leader has theobligation to properly settle the disagreement by skillfully calming them downwith maybe witty words and then take measures to cope with the problems.Admittedly, it is indisputable that honesty should not be neglected in terms ofchoosing a leader. After all, honesty has a lot to do with obtaining trust andcreating a harmonious atmosphere among the whole group. It is natural thatpeople usually rely on an honest person without reservation. Nevertheless, itis still not wise enough to regard it as the most crucial factor in terms ofchoosing a leader for student organizations for honesty does not testify toone’s ability and competence in dealing with group projects.To sum up, taking the ability of planning and organizing as well as communication skills into consideration, it is too rash to put honesty first when choosing a leader for student organizations. (469words)2017 年01月14日托福写作考题回忆综合Whether the three methods to stop snakeheads from spreading is feasible.Reading：The reading raises three methods to stop the spread of snakehead fish because it threatens the ecosystem.1. Making laws to prevent people from transporting snakehead fish. Some people in the fish market will illegally transport or release unsold snakehead fish.2. Educating fishers to catch snakehead. If they recognize that people actually can eat snakehead as a food source, they will catch many to eat and to sell.3. Researching some poison to kill the snakehead. Though poison will also kill native fishes in the river, people can restock native fishes.Listening:The listening contradicts all methods proposed by the author of the passage and points out their potential problems.1. Even if people do not transport the snakehead, the spread will still continue. The reason is that there are already many snakeheads, and these snakeheads will move to other rivers even without human's efforts, because they can live and move on land as long as they are moist.2. Educating fishers to catch snakehead will not help stop the spread of snakehead. Conversely, it may lead to the increase of snakehead. Because when fishers realize they can make profit by catching snakehead, they will introduce snakehead to other water bodies and raise snakehead in order to catch more snakehead, even this is illegal.3. It is true that native fishes can be restocked; however, poison will alsokill some insects and micro organisms, which cannot be restocked. So, native fishes that feed on these insects and micro organisms cannot grow to their original size. This is irreversible.Sample Answer:The reading passage and lecture both talk about how to stop the spread of snakeheads and the professor contradicts all those method mentioned in the passage respectively.The first solution is to make laws to prevent people from transporting snakehead fish, according to the passage. However the professor gives opposite viewpoint that even if people do not transport the snakeheads, the spread will still continue, because there are already many snakeheads and they will move to other rivers by moving on land as long as they are moist. In other words, whether people transport them or not, they will still establish their population.Secondly, the professor fights against to teach fishers to catch snakeheads. Actually, when fishers realized that they can make profit by this way, theywill introduce snakehead to other water bodies and raise them in order to catch more, which may conversely lead to the increase of snakehead.As to the virus, professor also shows his strong disapproval. Even though the native fishes can be restocked, the poison will kill some insects and micro organisms, which cannot be restocked. Then there comes to an irreversible consequence that the native fishes, which feed on these insects and micro organisms, cannot grow to their original size.(207 words)独立As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.)2、Students must volunteer to work in the university’s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.( For example, students may help local primary school children with their homework.)Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university WhyGiven detailed examples and reasons. Use your OWN words, do NOT use memorized examples.Sample Answer:There is large quantity of students who spend their spare time to do volunteer work mainly as a consequence of the requirement of credit or some working experience. Still, that totally makes no sense. Even though I am not auniversity students now, given the choice, I would choose to learn some knowledge that different from my own major.Wide range of social circle is the first benefit when they learn various subjects. All what we do in the society like starting a business and fulfill the ambition in career depend on abundant social resources. The social circle, which provides the greatest help in promoting our work and life, needs to be set up when we are in the university. Various classes are exactly the way that create chances for us to meet friends in various fields. On the contrary, if restricted in own world, we get along with small range of friends who share the same skills and knowledge. When we meet some trouble in future career, it’s merely impossible to cooperate with them. For the sake of future development, making friends through this way is a great opportunity to expand our pool of companions.Aside from making friends who are separate from our core social circle, another advantage is that what we learn in other fields may have great contributions to our original major. There is no such subject that can establish without any other field. I am a sociological students, who were asked to learn some statistics that seems irrelevant but actually, help me a lot when I do some social researches. I might not finish my thesis before graduation if the professor had not ask us to take statistics c ourses. I really don’t see anything wrong with the students taking the courses that have no connection with their major whether they are truly interested in it or just for the sake of annual paper or examinations.Two years ago, I interviewed some of those students why they took volunteer work in holidays, I found the leading reason was that they wanted to accumulate working experiences. It sounds reasonable but actually, most students apply for the job that is far away from what they did voluntarily before. According to a recent survey conducted by my professor, who is a specialist in research of employment, no more than 7% involved students choose their final job as what their social practice did and most of them have totally different ideas from their original thoughts when they were in campus. Since the working experience from volunteer has no business to their final career, what is the rationale behind this choiceThere is nothing wrong with doing volunteer work in holiday. For the bestfuture development, though, learning different knowledge and skills is the better way to enrich our life. (469 words)2017 年01月14日托福写作考题回忆综合Whether the three methods to stop snakeheads from spreading is feasible.Reading：The reading raises three methods to stop the spread of snakehead fish because it threatens the ecosystem.1. Making laws to prevent people from transporting snakehead fish. Some people in the fish market will illegally transport or release unsold snakehead fish.2. Educating fishers to catch snakehead. If they recognize that people actually can eat snakehead as a food source, they will catch many to eat and to sell.3. Researching some poison to kill the snakehead. Though poison will also kill native fishes in the river, people can restock native fishes.Listening:The listening contradicts all methods proposed by the author of the passage and points out their potential problems.1. Even if people do not transport the snakehead, the spread will still continue. The reason is that there are already many snakeheads, and these snakeheads will move to other rivers even without human's efforts, because they can live and move on land as long as they are moist.2. Educating fishers to catch snakehead will not help stop the spread of snakehead. Conversely, it may lead to the increase of snakehead. Because when fishers realize they can make profit by catching snakehead, they will introduce snakehead to other water bodies and raise snakehead in order to catch more snakehead, even this is illegal.3. It is true that native fishes can be restocked; however, poison will alsokill some insects and micro organisms, which cannot be restocked. So, native fishes that feed on these insects and micro organisms cannot grow to their original size. This is irreversible.Sample Answer:The reading passage and lecture both talk about how to stop the spread of snakeheads and the professor contradicts all those method mentioned in the passage respectively.The first solution is to make laws to prevent people from transporting snakehead fish, according to the passage. However the professor gives opposite viewpoint that even if people do not transport the snakeheads, the spread will still continue, because there are already many snakeheads and they will move to other rivers by moving on land as long as they are moist. In other words, whether people transport them or not, they will still establish their population.Secondly, the professor fights against to teach fishers to catch snakeheads. Actually, when fishers realized that they can make profit by this way, theywill introduce snakehead to other water bodies and raise them in order to catch more, which may conversely lead to the increase of snakehead.As to the virus, professor also shows his strong disapproval. Even though the native fishes can be restocked, the poison will kill some insects and micro organisms, which cannot be restocked. Then there comes to an irreversible consequence that the native fishes, which feed on these insects and micro organisms, cannot grow to their original size.(207 words)独立As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.)2、Students must volunteer to work in the university’s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.( For example, students may help local primary school children with their homework.)Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university WhyGiven detailed examples and reasons. Use your OWN words, do NOT use memorized examples.Sample Answer:There is large quantity of students who spend their spare time to do volunteer work mainly as a consequence of the requirement of credit or some working experience. Still, that totally makes no sense. Even though I am not a university students now, given the choice, I would choose to learn some knowledge that different from my own major.Wide range of social circle is the first benefit when they learn various subjects. All what we do in the society like starting a business and fulfill the ambition in career depend on abundant social resources. The social circle, which provides the greatest help in promoting our work and life, needs to beset up when we are in the university. Various classes are exactly the way that create chances for us to meet friends in various fields. On the contrary, if restricted in own world, we get along with small range of friends who share the same skills and knowledge. When we meet some trouble in future career, it’s merely impossible to cooperate with them. For the sake of future development, making friends through this way is a great opportunity to expand our pool of companions.Aside from making friends who are separate from our core social circle, another advantage is that what we learn in other fields may have great contributions to our original major. There is no such subject that can establish without any other field. I am a sociological students, who were asked to learn some statistics that seems irrelevant but actually, help me a lot when I do some social researches. I might not finish my thesis before graduation if the professor had not ask us to take statistics courses. I really don’t see anything wrong with the students taking the courses that have no connection with their major whether they are truly interested in it or just for the sake of annual paper or examinations.Two years ago, I interviewed some of those students why they took volunteer work in holidays, I found the leading reason was that they wanted to accumulate working experiences. It sounds reasonable but actually, most students apply for the job that is far away from what they did voluntarily before. According to a recent survey conducted by my professor, who is a specialist in research of employment, no more than 7% involved students choose their final job as what their social practice did and most of them have totally different ideas from their original thoughts when they were in campus. Since the working experience from volunteer has no business to their final career, what is the rationale behind this choiceThere is nothing wrong with doing volunteer work in holiday. For the bestfuture development, though, learning different knowledge and skills is the better way to enrich our life. (469 words)2017 年02月18日托福写作考题回忆综合土星的卫星Titan有3个unusual features 难以解释。
【解析】TPO2托福综合写作阅读原文+听力原文+满分范文
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TPO2托福综合写作阅读原文文本：First of all, a group of people has a wider range of knowledge，expertise, and skills than any single individual is likely to possess. Also, because of the numbers of people involved and the greater resources they possess, a group can work more quickly in response to the task assigned to it and can come up with highly creative solutions to problems and issues. Sometimes these creative solutions come about because a group is more likely to make risky decisions that an individual might not undertake. This is because the group spreads responsibility for a decision to all the members and thus no single individual can be held accountable if the decision turns out to be wrong. Taking part in a group process can be very rewarding for members of the team. Teammembers who have a voice in making a decision will no doubt feel better about carrying out the work that is entailed by the decision than they might doing work that is imposed on them by others. Also, the individual team member has a much better chance to “shine”, to get his or her contributions and ideas not only recognized but recognized as highly significant, because a team’s overall results can be more far-reaching and have greater impact than what might have otherwise been possible for the person to accomplish or contribute working alone. TPO2托福综合写作听力原文文本：Now I want to tell you about what one company found when it decided that it would turn over some of its new projects to teams of people, and make the team responsible for planning the projects and getting the work done. After about six months, the company took a look at how well the teams performed.On virtually every team, some members got almost a "free ride" ... they didn't contribute much at all, but if their team did a good job, they nevertheless benefited from the recognition the team got. And what about group members who worked especially well and who provided a lot of insight on problems and issues? Well ... the recognition for a job well done went to the group as a whole, no names were named. So it won't surprise you to learn that when the real contributors were askedhow they felt about the group process, their attitude was just the opposite of what the reading predicts.Another finding was that some projects just didn't move very quickly. Why? Because it took so long to reach consensus; it took many, many meetings to build the agreement among group members about how they would move the project along. On the other hand, there were other instances where one or two people managed to become very influential over what their group did. Sometimes when those influencers said "That will never work" about an idea the group was developing, the idea was quickly dropped instead of being further discussed. And then there was another occasion when a couple influencers convinced the group that a plan of theirs was "highly creative. " And even though some members tried to warn the rest of the group that the project was moving in directions that might not work, they were basically ignored by other group members. Can you guess the ending to this story? When the project failed, the blame was placed on all the members of the group.TPO2托福综合写作题目说明及答案要点：Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and theirrelationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage.TPO2托福综合写作满分范文：The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened in reality. First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who worked hard were not given recognition they should have gotten. In other words, they weren’t given the opportunity to "shine". This directly contradicts what the passage indicates. Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of the number of people involved and their aggregated resources. However, the speaker talks about how the firm found out that groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed more time for meetings, which are necessary procedures in decision making. This was another place where experience contradicted theory. Third, influential people might emerge and lead the group towards glory or failure. If the influent people are going in the right direction therewould be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn into a dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might become less flexible in its thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed. 以上就是三立在线教育托福网为大家整理了TPO2托福综合写作阅读原文+听力原文+满分范文，大家可以边借助TPO模考软件听音频看看自己哪些地方听不懂，然后来看看原文，同时对练习托福听力精听也是很有帮助的。