四级英语写作:应用文写作(图表-漫画)
例文分析:
参考范文:
• The period 1995-2005 witnessed a rapid increase in the number of people in City X traveling abroad. As can be seen, in 1995, only about 10,000 people in this city went overseas while in 2000 this number quickly rose to 40,000. In 2005, however the number of overseas traveler surged to over 120,000, which is more than 10 times as many as that
of 1995. (变化)
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This change can be accounted for by a couple of
factors. First, along with social and economy progress, the
living standard of the Chinese people has been greatly
It’s good for our nation’s progress. (结论)
• 这个表格里有20多个数据,乍一看让人眼花缭乱,其实从纵横向 比较极有规律.横向比较,不难发现粮食(grain)的消费量逐年 下降,5年间减少了4%,而牛奶(milk)的消费却逐年增加,肉类 (meat)也在增加;纵向看,milk和meat变化趋势相同,占总消费 的比例在增大,而grain比例变化正相反.从而归纳出一个总的 变化规律:grain的消费量在减少,而milk和meat的消费量在增 加.
enhanced, so they have enough money and time to travel
abroad. Meanwhile, more and more people want to enjoy
themselves and broaden their vision by visiting overseas
historical places and experiencing exotic cultures. (原因)
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Overseas travel has a pro源自ound effect on both
individuals and the society. It can widen our people’s
四级应用文写作
——图表、图片及书信
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Contents
图表、图片作文写作常识 图表、图片作文写作方法 图表、图片作文写作模板 图表、图片写作实战演练
图表作文写作常识
• 图表作文是大学英语四级考试写作题中常出现的题型,它 是利用图表如graph, diagram, chart, table, picture 等中的统计数据来阐述论题的文章.
• 相对于表格,2002.6 CET4(Student Use of Computer)的柱形图显得简洁 明了,信息集中.该图的横向 为日期(90,95,2000),纵向为 大学生每周使用计算机的时 间,只有一类事物,没有不同 事物的比较.关键考虑计算机 应用与日期的关系:随时间递 增还是递减?或时增时减?柱 形图清晰显示出这样一个变 化特点:随着时间的推移,大 学生越来越多地使用计算机 .(见图2)
图表、图片作文写作步骤
Introduction
第一步 尽量用一句话把图表反映的问题或现象或趋势归 纳出来,放在开头表达清楚。 第二步 挑选有代表意义的数据点进行详细描述 第三步 回归传统作文
图表作文写作方法
开头写法
1.对比分析,寻找数据的变化规律 图表作文通常要论述某个论点,因此,所提供的数据资料一
般都是有规律的.但这些数据是一些零散的信息,需要我们总结 和归纳.关键就是对比数据之间的关系,包括横向和纵向的比较: 从横向看,同一类(如事物A)数据随时间变化是升还是降,升降的 幅度多大;从纵向看,不同类别(如事物A、B、C)的变化是相似 还是相反,从中寻找规律. 以91.6 CET-4: Changes in People's Diet in China 为例( 表1).
2. 筛选数据
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图表提供的资料数据是否需要在文中一一列出?应选择或忽略哪
些数据?引用数据的目的在于更有力地阐述论点,就像论据有主次,数
据也应选择具有典型性和代表性的数据一样,不必一一列出.以表1为
例,列出1986-1990每一年grain的消费量只会显得繁琐、重点不突出.
试试这句话:The percentage of grain consumption decreased
gradually, from 49 per cent in 1986 to 45 per cent in 1990.
简明扼要地说明变化趋势是递减,两端数据49%和45%足已说明变化趋
势.又如milk和meat的变化,都说明同一观点:人们的经济收入增加了,
生活水平提高了,能够消费得起价格较高的肉奶食品.这样,描述milk
• 图表作文大体可以分两类: • 一、单纯描写图表中数据的变化特点,最后归纳总结,即纯
说明文 • 二、先描写数据变化,再分析变化背后的原因,最后是笔者
的个人看法、预测未来发展趋势或提出解决问题的方法, 即说明+议论. • 后者在最近几年的四级考试中出现较多,是科普文章常用 的写作方法,既考查了学生的写作能力,又要求有较强的观 察力、分析力和想象力,是很好的测试形式
horizons, promote friendship and enhance cultural
interaction. In the meantime, it can also boost our social
economy and make our society more prosperous and dynamic.
英语四级图表+图画作文讲解及参考范文
英语四级图表和图画作文讲解及参考范文一、图表作文图表作文也是四(六)级考试中常见,而且被认为是一种较难的作文形式。
图表作文就是把非文字信息(通常为各种图表表示的数字信息等)转换成文字信息的一种作文。
它要求我们用文字来描述非文字性的图表或对图表显示的关系作解释说明。
第一节图表作文的出题形式和写作要领一、图表作文常见出题形式图表作文一般在题目中给出作文的标题和一个或几个统计表格、圆形图、曲线图或条形图,有时还用英文或中文提纲的形式给出提示,要求我们:1)用文字描述图表,客观解释图表中所传递的信息,并找出某种规律或趋势;2)就图表中所反映的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或后果。
图表作文着重说明事实,常常是通过对图表中所反映的具体数据的说明、分析、比拟,对某种事物或现象的事实或变化情况等加以说明,并提出结论或看法。
因此,图表作文常常采用议论文体的写作方法。
写好图表作文,关键在于能否读懂图表中所提供的信息,把握各信息间的联系,用准确流畅的语言把这一信息表达出来,并就这一信息发表自己的看法。
二、图表作文的写作步骤写图表作文时,要注意遵循以下步骤:1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系;2)确定文章的主题思想,构思出文章的根本框架,筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据;3)编列文章的提纲;4)根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡;5)检查与修改。
三、图表作文的篇章结构写图表作文时,常采用三段式的陈述方式。
文章的第一段往往分析图表中的数据变化反映什么问题或趋势,概述图表所揭示的信息。
第二段分析造成这一问题或趋势的原因。
第三段那么展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的方法或建议。
这一结构可以简单地表述为:第一段:概述图表反映的主题思想〔总趋势+极端值+特点,时态〕第二段:分析产生的原因第三段:展望未来或提出方法或建议模板一①总的趋势②图表具体描述③剖析图表所揭示的含义④理由一⑤理由二⑥理由三⑦理由四⑧总结⑨前景预测As can be seen from the table, the past decade has witnessed dramatic changes in①______. While ②_______. It is obvious from the table that③_________.What contributed to these changes? I think the reasons are as follows. To start with,④______. Secondly, ⑤______ . What’s more, ⑥ _______. Last but not lease, ⑦________. In conclusion, ⑧_________. Moreover, ⑨ ________.模板二①描述图表②分三方面解释原因③下结论1) During the period from _______to _______, ________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to _______.2) We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. First,____. Second, ____. Third, _____.3) ___.We are happy to see that things are becoming better and better nowadays. We can imagine that ___.模板三①描述图表②解释图表③补充解释1) During the period between _______ and ________, ________ declined abruptly from_______ to ________, while ________ increased sharply from ________ to _______.2) Several reasons can account for this phenomenon. Compared with _________ is much cheaper and more convenient__________ . Apart from that, _________.3) However, there are still a number of people who _________, generally for two reasons. On the one hand,________. On the other hand, ________.1.图表类型:table 表格; chart 图表; diagram图表或图解,示意图; graph图表, 曲线图; column/ bar chart柱状图; pie graph饼图2. 描述:show; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal 显示; represent表现,描绘3.内容:figure数字; statistic统计值; statistics [用作复]统计, 统计数字[资料], 统计表number; percentage; proportion● 表示数据上升:increase, rise, ascend, core, surge, go up, climb, mount, level up下降: decrease, fall, drop, descend, decline, reduce ,lessen, level, down平稳: stable, steady, remain steady/stable; /maintain/keep/be the same as/similarto ; little/hardly any /no change波动: fluctuate, fluctuation, rise and falls, up and down占: occupy,take up,account for, gain而: while, however, whereas , on the other hand, actually/in fact相比: by contract, on the contrary, likewise, compared with最高点: the highest, the top, the summit, the peak, the most最低点: bottom, less, least, rock bottom最低点例句Prices have hit rock bottom. 价格已达最低水平平均: mean平均值, average趋势: tendency, trend, inclination预见: prediction到达顶峰: mount to比例:20 per cent , 20%one in three, 1/3one out of every four,1/4有一个稳定的过程: a stable period can be seen表示变化程度的词:sudden/suddenly 突然的,意外的rapid/rapidly 迅速的,飞快的,险峻的dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的,生动的significant/significantly 有意义的,重大的,重要的sharp/sharply 明显的,急剧的steep/steeply 急剧升降的steady/steadily 稳固的,坚决不移的gradual/gradually 渐进的,逐渐的slow/slowly 缓慢的,不活泼的slight/slightly 轻微的、略微地stable/stably 稳定的表示范围:from…to… between…and… for …to …多长时间直到表示程度:almost adv. 几乎,差不多nearly adv. 几乎,密切地approximately adv. 近似的,大约just over 刚超过exactly adv. 正确地,严密地precisely adv. 正好精确地;清晰地●常用词和短语significant changes 图中一些较大变化noticeable trend 明显趋势during the same period 在同一时期grow/grew 增长distribute 分布,区别unequally 不相等地pronounced 明显的average 平均no doubt 无疑地corresponding adj. 相应的,通讯的represent vt. 阐述,表现overall 体上讲except 除外in the case of adv. 在…的情况下in contrast 相反,大不相同in conclusion adv. 最后,总之in comparison 相比之下inversely adv. 相反地,倒转地in general 通常,大体上,一般而言rang from…to 从…到…不等excessive adj. 过多的,过分的,额外lower v. 降低,跌落elapse vi. 〔时间〕过去,消逝category n. 种类government policy 政府政策market forces 市场规律measure n. 尺寸,方法,措施v.估量,调节forecast n. 先见,预见四、图表作文常用的句型(1)常用的开篇句型(即概述图表内容时常用的表达法)①According to the table/pie chart/line graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that … 根据该表/图,我们可知……②The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ represents/points out) that … 该表/图说明……③As we can see from the table …As can be seen from the line/bar graph …As is shown (illustrated/indicated) in the pie chart …如表/图所示,……(2) 描述增减变化常用的句型①Compared with … is still increased by …②The number of … grew/rose from … to …③An increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of …④In … the number remains the same/drops to …⑤ There was a very slight (small/slow/gradual) rise/increase in 1990.⑥ There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/ dramatic) drop(decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in 1998/ compared with that of last year).来看一篇范文:⑴ From the graph, we can see that the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. ⑵ The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. ⑶ The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. ⑷ From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸ After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. ⑹Therefore, it’s obvious that car a ccident in Walton city declined in 1990.⑴主题句/概述表格反映的内容⑵—(5)反映交通事故的变化情况(6)小结:总结表格数据反映的总趋势⑺There are several reasons for the decline. ⑻ First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. ⑼ It provided that in summer every car must be air-conditioned. ⑽ As a result, the highest rate in August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. ⑾ Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic. ⑿ Finally, the city administration made great efforts to heighten people’s awareness of observing traffic rules.⑺主题句⑻原因/措施一⑼解释措施一/次要辅助⑽采取措施一后的结果⑾原因/措施二⑿原因/措施三⒀With all these new measures, I’m sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year.⒀总结:展望未来的情况第二节图表作文样题与样文举例样题一:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend Their Holidays. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline given below:1、根据上表,简要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化;2、请说明发生这些变化的原因;3、得出结论。
英语四六级图表图画作文模板
四六级图表图画作文写作思路、模板与范文图画作文写作思路是固定的:描述图片、阐明观点、给出建议。
第一段,重点描述图画内容。
对图画内容的描述可以用图画中人物的对话。
简要描述即可,不用发散或挖掘。
也就意味着,事实上你若看不懂图画中的某些文字,其实没关系,照抄就好。
第二段,阐明观点。
观点在题干中往往会给得很清楚,这就说明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的对话更重要。
阐明观点之后的思路与一般的四六级提纲型写作一致:可以先举例说明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的影响等。
末段,除了总结观点外,一般还可以提出建议。
这段的写法无论是图画、图表还是提纲写作,都差别不大。
图画作文模板:It seems to me that the cartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________(图画内容),which reveals ____________(稍作评价).In my perspective of view, ____________ (表明个人观点)。
Apparently, ____________(将个人观点和图片内容相结合,得出观点。
)For one thing, ____________(从社会角度论证). For another thing, ____________(从个人角度说明). For example, ____________(自己、朋友或他人,只要自己知道或听过的例子).Last but not least, ____________(从反面角度谈论). As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________(建议或措施).Only in this way can we ____________(展望结果).In conclusion / To my understanding, ____________(再次表明观点或态度). We should ____________(进一步说明个人的观点).范文:以2013年6月英语四级作文为例Which Is More ImportantAs can be seen from the picture above, there is a conversation between ason and a father. The father told his son that it is more important to empty the dustbin than to worry about disposing of nuclear waste, that is to say, small things go first when dealing with big things. I’m definitely on the father’s side in this and I’m sure I’m not alone.A case in point is the successful launch of ShenZhou 10 spacecraft, which excites everyone and makes every feel proud of China. Behind this great event there are a host of detailed things, called petty things, conducted by millions of scientists, who have devoted themselves to the mission. It is the petty things that contribute to the success, which reminds us of the significance of small things. We also take ourselves for example. It is acknowledged that before running we must learn to stand and walk building up a solid foundation for running. Although walking is considered as a trifle while running is treated as a great thing, walking is the first step.As an old saying goes, one can’t make a big success without bing self reliant. So we should keep it in our mind that before accomplishing important tasks, perform small tasks. Only in this way can we make the highest eminence.The Importance of the Basic Learning SkillsAs what is vividly shown in the picture, many college students have the same doubt as the one in the picture that is whether that stuff will be outdated when they graduated and began to work. That stuff, as we can see from the picture, refers to the basic learning skills such as mathematics we learned when we were in primary school. It also reveals a phenomenon in the college that there are a great number of students, who question the practicability of their subjects because they are too simple to be helpful with their occupation afterwards.Does that mean these subjects are useless? Definitely not. These subjects are like the foundation of a building. Though they are commonplace even invisible, they are of vital importance. Mastering these basic skills we can grasp the fundamental elements of learning ability. As an old saying goes like this, high buildings rise from the ground. Only if we lay a solid foundation, we can’t set up a high building. in another word, do you think it is feasible to let a person learn English without learning a, b, c? orWith what was said above, we can draw a conclusion that the basic learningskills are quite essential to both our whole study and the work we will take after graduation. Thus we should pay more attention to the basic subjects and master the ability required at the further career.The Importance of Reading LiteratureLiterature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers. So they always ask their students to read as many as literary works. Just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student, saying: “Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.”It is of great significance for us to appreciate literature due to the following reasons. Firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. The more experience you gain, the more knowledgeable you are. Secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. The stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. Lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation. The beautiful and moving scenes shown in the literature are helpful for one’s mental health.In short, literature is indispensable in our life. We, students, should catch our time to read more literatures.图表作文的定义:图标阐释类作文就是要求考生描述图表或图画中的数据或画面,解释这些数据或画面所反映出的变化、现象或者问题,并对其产生的原因、影响或存在的问题进行分析说明。
英语四级漫画式作文写作攻略
英语四级漫画式作文写作攻略近年来英语四级考试中作文多为漫画作文及图表作文,令很多考生猝不及防,顿时乱了阵脚。
本文拟从审题、布局和主体段的论证方法三个角度提出四级漫画作文的写作攻略,以帮助考生应对这种比较特殊的写作题型。
第一、读图审题四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。
因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。
考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。
此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。
下面就来逐一梳理2021年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
题目一Directions: For this part,you’reallowed 30 minute s to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceofdoing small things before undertaking something big. You should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words.审题:本题的漫画中有一对父子。
儿子说:“Dad,I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste.”爸爸说:“If you can empty the dustbin here, you can doanything.”这幅漫画传达的是一个人生道理:想做大事,要先从小事做起。
一屋不扫,何以扫天下?如果考生没有从漫画中看出这层意思,也可以结合写作指令express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertakingsomething big看出这一点。
大学英语四级写作讲解应用文
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The cartoon deeply illustrates a social issue which is catching more and more attention from the general public currently. What prove to be the reasons leading to it? 3 reasons stated as follows can be taken be accountable for it. First and foremost,(阐释具体的现象或原因) more importantly, (阐释具体的现象或原因), last but not the least.
大学英语四级写作
Review
漫画作文写法
第一段:描图, 第二段:对图画所反映的现象进行解释, 第三段:个人就此发表看法或提出观点。
第一段:描图: 对图画的内容进行具体的描述好句子)
1.What a vivid cartoon it proves to be! 2.The underlying meaning embodied in it can not be underrated, in that the cartoon reflects a not uncommon social issue, from which we can clearly observe that… 3. How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children.
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(完整版)大学英语四级作文——漫画作文
满分为15分,分5个等级,即14、11分、8分、5分、和2分,阅卷 人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分) 相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数, 即可加一分(即9分)或减一分,不得加或减半分。具体评分标 准为:
A 14分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无 语言错误。
As far as I know, it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills. At first, mastering basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for learning advanced skills. Basic skills are a floor, not a ceiling. Students must learn them first so that they can move on to various advanced skills. What’s more, learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and enhance self-esteem. Individuals with basic skills are likely to be more confident and active.
To sum up, we should think highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills that guarantee our wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use of those elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basic skill will never be outdated.
大学英语四级图表类写作
So from the analysis, we can draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a bettler life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health.
3. 上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间:1990年(2hours),1995 年(4hours), 2000(20hours), 请描述变化:
4. 请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以 说明)
5. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难和问题。
第一章节
0 第一季度 第二季度 第三季度 第四季度
东部 西部 北部
Bar graph
Pie chart
Line graph
Line graph
谋篇方法
一.先描写数据变化 二.再分析变化背后的原因 三.最后是笔者的个人看法,预测未来的发展趋势或提
出解决问题的方法。
如何写好图表作文
• 对比分析,寻找数据的变化规律 • 举例(1991.6)Changes in People’s Diet • Directions: • For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition
table
一.State the changes in people’s diet(饮食)in the past five years;
四级英语写作:应用文写作(图表,漫画)
常用句式、词汇
• • • • • • • • • • • 1) 总括性描述 As can be seen from the table, great changes have been taking place in ... From the above table it can be seen that... As it is shown in the table,... According to the graph, ... It is clear from the table that ... The survey shows/suggests that ... According to the figures given in the table ... A study showed ... As you may see from the diagram,... The two charts above tell us something about ...
图表、图片作文写作步骤
Introduction
第一步 尽量用一句话把图表反映的问题或现象或趋势归 纳出来,放在开头表达清楚。 第二步 挑选有代表意义的数据点进行详细描述 第三步 回归传统作文
图表作文写作方法
开头写法
1. 对比分析,寻找数据的变化规律 图表作文通常要论述某个论点,因此,所提供的数据资料一 般都是有规律的.但这些数据是一些零散的信息,需要我们总结 和归纳.关键就是对比数据之间的关系,包括横向和纵向的比较 :从横向看,同一类(如事物A)数据随时间变化是升还是降,升降 的幅度多大;从纵向看,不同类别(如事物A、B、C)的变化是相 似还是相反,从中寻找规律. 以91.6 CET-4: Changes in People's Diet in China 为例( 表1).
2021年6月四级作文模板-图表图画型范文(7)
2021年6月四级作文模板:图表图画型范文(7)四级作文题目:Film Is Giving Way to TVIt can be seen from the graph that the rate of car accidents in Walton City experienced rises and falls in 1990. From January to March last year it increased by 45%. From March to June it dropped by about half the previous rate. From June to August there was a steep rise of 50%. After that, however, there was a steady decrease.There are several reasons for this improvement, but the following are the most critical ones. First, new traffic regulations have made drivers more careful. Second, more people are using bicycles for transportation. Finally, in the later part of the year good weather made the roads safer to drive on.I am confident that there will be even fewer car accidents in Walton in the future. First, major roads have been repaired and the number of public buses has been increased in the past few months. Moreover, a traffic safety campaign has made all the local people more aware of the dangers of unsafe driving.第 1 页共1 页。
漫画四级英语作文
漫画四级英语作文I love reading manga. It's so fun and exciting tofollow the adventures of the characters. The artwork is amazing and the stories are always so engaging. I can spend hours just getting lost in the pages of a good manga.The characters in manga are always so unique and interesting. I love how they each have their own personalities and quirks. It's fun to see how they interact with each other and how they grow and change throughout the story. Some characters are funny, some are serious, and some are just plain cool.One of the things I enjoy most about manga is the action. The fight scenes are always so intense and well-drawn. It's like being right in the middle of the action, feeling the adrenaline rush as the characters battle it out. And it's not just the physical action that's exciting, but also the emotional and psychological battles that take place.Manga covers a wide range of genres, from romance to fantasy to science fiction. There's something for everyone, no matter what you're into. I love being able to explore different worlds and stories through manga, and it's always exciting to discover new series to dive into.I also appreciate the creativity and imagination that goes into creating manga. The artists and writers come up with such unique and compelling stories, and the artwork is always so detailed and expressive. It's inspiring to see the passion and talent that goes into making manga.。
8.19 四级图表漫画类范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words butno more than 180 words.首段:图画描述(引入图画)This/There/It/Given is a simple/funny but thought-provoking/enlightening cartoon/picture/drawing. (图画描述:人/物+动作+环境+文字) the youngster/guy/boy/child/son expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”. To his surprise/shock, his father points at the dustbin, telling him that if he can empty the dustbin there, he can do anything.二段:图画主题+现象+意义(图画主旨) This picture/cartoon/drawing, obviously/apparently, can be naturally associated with/linked to the critical importance/significance of doing small things. (主题评论) That is to say/To be specific, if youngsters intend to/want to/dream to/aim to/target to achieve success, it is advisable/ sensible/ vital/ indispensable/ necessary/ intelligent/ wise/ well-advised for them to begin/start with little jobs. (现象概述) In the contemporary/present-day society, it has become a trend for a host of/a large number of/ quite a few teenagers/young people to ignore/neglect tiny things in life, such as cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人+感受) Meanwhil e/In the meantime/, an increasing number of/a growing number of young people find it rather useless or unnecessary to deal with these things.(举例) A case in point/A typical example is the boy in the picture. However/Nonethel ess/Whereas, (意义) it is these small tasks that enable/help/ensure/rend er youngsters to accumulate/ buil d up/ master/ gain/ obtain/ acquire adequate/sufficient/ ample precious/valuable knowledge, ability/capacity/competence, skills and experience. (万能总结) Intelligent/Wise/rational people in large numbers, as a matter of fact/in fact/ actually, have come to realize/recognize/be aware of the vital/critical significance of these small things.(补充举例2)Just taking a l ook around, we can notice/see/find a great many young people like the boy in the picture.(意义句补充) Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our enthusiasm/ passion for success, and helps us to make progress.尾段:观点+建议+展望(观点:尾段首句万能) I, as a college student, am convinced that it is of great necessity/it is exceedingly necessary for youngsters to enhance/strengthen/improve/boost our overall/comprehensive quality by doing small things. (万能建议) Thus/Hence/Accordingly/As a result, we shoul d educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate/foster/ develop this positive awareness and habit. (展望1:)We, trying our utmost to do so/sparing no efforts to do so, may witness/see a hopeful and promising future of our life/work/study. (展望2:) Do bear in mind: small progress every day leads to a big success./We shoul d bear/keep in mind that a big success comes from/originates from /stems from everyday small progress.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on kids’understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.【试题解析】阅卷发现:很多同学写只写了“手机对学生的影响”,但其实不然。
