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第二讲│任务型作文之一——写好文章概要从近五年江苏高考分析,高考书面表达主要考查读写任务型作文。

读写任务型作文的写作内容一般分为两部分:写作内容一为摘要写作,即概括短文大意;写作内容二,就某个主题发表个人看法。

“读写任务”是“读”和“写”的有机结合,“读”的材料是为后面的“写”提供情景;同样,“写”也是对“读”的材料的思考和延伸。

读写任务型作文主要以记叙文和议论文为主。

从近五年江苏高考书面表达来看,都是议论性的读写任务型作文。

如何写记叙文概要记叙文体的阅读材料,在写概要前,除明确文章主题外,还应抓住六个要素:when,where,who,what,why,how。

在这六个要素中,所占内容比重较大的是what,学生最容易犯的错误就是把what写得太详细。

一般来说,记叙文的故事概要可以用这样的模板来表示:1.没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要要素:人物——事件——结果2.篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要要素:人物——事件——结果——启示记叙文摘要可以用下列句式开头:The writer tells us his experience...The author shares his experiences...From the passage,we know that...The passage tells us that...当然,不是说每个故事概要都包含how或why,有时两者选其一即可。

请阅读下面短文,然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。

A__father__came__home__from__work__late,tired__and__exhausted.He worked day and night,hoping to earn more money for his onlychild.His__5-year-old__daughter was waiting for him at the door.“Dad,how__much__do__you__earn__an__hour?”asked the daughter.“Why do you ask that?”“I just want to know.Please tell me how much you earn an hour.”“If you really want to know...I earn$20 an hour.”“Oh,” the little girl replied with her head down.Looking up,she said,“Dad,may__I__borrow__$10?”The father became angry.“Go to bed right now! Think about how selfish you are.I work hard every day,but you just want to buy your silly toy!”The little girl quietly went to her bedroom,feeling sad.After an hour or so,the father calmed down and started to feel sorry because she really didn’t ask for money very often.So he went to his daughter’s room and gave her $10.The little girl jumped from the bed.“Oh,thank you,Dad!” She was really happy indeed.Then she took out her own savings and said,“Dad,I have$20 now.Can__I__buy__an__hour__of__your__time? Please come home earlier tomorrow.I__would__like__to__have__dinner__with__you.”[材料分析]这是一篇小女孩想购买父亲的时间,渴望得到父亲陪伴的记叙文。

首先我们先找出记叙文的六要素:列出了要点之后,我们就可以用自己的话将要点组织起来,概括成一段约30个词的通顺文段:In this passage,the writer mainly tells us about a little girl,who wanted to buy some time from her busy father so that he could accompany her.请用约30个单词概述短文信息的主要内容。

Once there lived a very rich and powerful king.All the people in his kingdom were afraid of him.But was he happy? No,he was always ill and unhappy.His money and power could not help him.The doctor in his kingdom could not cure him,either.He was so angry with them that he had their heads cut off.One day two famous doctors from another kingdom came to his palace.“If you can cure me and make me happy,” said the king,“I will give you all the gold you can carry.”The first doctor examined the king.He found nothing wrong with him so he said to the king,“You only think you are ill and that makes yourself unhappy.”The king was very angry when he heard this.He told his soldiers to cut off the doctor’s head.The second doctor knew he had to be careful.“Oh,king.You will be well if you wear the shoes of a man who is always happy.”he said.The king was pleased with his answer and thought that the doctor was very wise.He gave the doctor a bag of gold. The king asked hundreds of people if they were always happy.They all said they were sometimes happy and sometimes sad.At last he met a beggar who said that he was always happy.“Give me your shoes quickly,”said the king.“And I will make you a very rich man.” The beggar laughed,“I am sorry,”he answered,“I never wear shoes!”【参考答案】As the above story goes,the king,who was rich and powerful,was not happy at all while the beggar claimed he was always happy,indicating that wealth doesn’t mean happiness.如何写说明文的概要说明文通常会有明确的主题句,先抓住关键词,并根据各段落的主题,有序地组织语言,完整地表达出文章的中心内容。

如果是分析型说明文,概括时要找出文章所说明的现象、产生的原因及解决的方法或建议,然后用自己的话将这些信息重组起来。

请阅读下面短文,然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。

Urban public bike service isn’t a new ernment-sponsored__public__bike__systems__have__been__introd uced__into__many__cities__in__China.Mobike,a__new__kind__of__public__bike__rental__service,started__in__Shanghai__and__has__expanded__to__Beijing. People can use this service by scanning the QR code(二维码) on the bike to unlock the smart lock.The standard cost of this service is 1 yuan per 30 ers can pay with popular mobile payment methods such as Alipay and WeChat.Mobike now has more than 10,000 bikes in Shanghai,allowing most riders to find a bike anywhere within a diameter(直径) of 300 meters.Many people ride a Mobike for a short trip,such as from home to the subway,subway to the work place or to a grocery store.Experts say Mobike is a good supplement(补充) to the public bike rental service since city people are now fond of “Green Riding”,and environmentally-friendly means of transportation.Just because of this,the__company__providing__the__service__is__increasing__the__number__by__hun dred__every__day.[材料分析]短文的开头和结尾(画线句)为中心句。

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高考英语二轮复习:书面表达题组 Word版含答案

高考英语二轮复习:书面表达题组   Word版含答案

请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

凿壁偷光写作内容:1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

写作要求:1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。

评分标准:内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and being on the right track.Writing 3(·郑州市质检二)假定你是李华,下面四幅图画描述了发生在你上学路上的一件事情,请根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文。

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书面表达选看(2)书面表达训练你是高三学生李华,进入高三以来你发现你的同桌李雷总是抄作业,为此你很担心。

所以借此次月考为契机,请你为他写封信1. 客观分析抄作业的主要原因 (太难;懒,没兴趣;完成以愉悦老师)2. 分析抄作业的危害(坏习惯:违反学校规定;失去独立思考的能力)3. 提出解决方法(合理安排时间;有问题请教老师同学)注意:1. 字数100词左右2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;Dear friend,I am worried about you because ____________________________________________________ Yours sincerelyLi hua【参考范文】Dear friend,I am worried about you because I find you copy others` homework occasionally. It is agreed that we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. Moreover, lazy and uninterested in our lessons, some students copy others` homework not only to finish the assignments but also please our teachers.Copying others` homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it is against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. For another, copying others` homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think. So I would like to give you some suggestions. You should firstly arrange your time and homework reasonably. At the same time, if you have difficulties, you can turn to teachers and classmates for help.YoursLi Hua书面表达训练假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Bob 给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解一下中国高中生对于大学的选择意向,于是你在班里进行了一次调查。

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第一编专题五第1讲按要求升级下面的考生作文(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华。

你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。

请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

考生习作Dear Eric,I’m writing to invite you to join our school team. ①Students have told me that our school team is recruiting new members. ②I know that you like playing table tennis,so I want to know whether you would like to join it.③Team members not only get trained after school every day,but are often offered chances to watch table tennis competitions. ④That has done good to me. If you are interested in it,you can visit the school website to sign up before the closing date,June 15.I’m sure it will be a great choice if you join the school team.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 我来提升作文升级第一步让词汇高级亮丽利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇1.told→ __informed__2.like→ __be keen on__3.want to know→ __wonder__4.chances→ __opportunity__5.do good to→ __benefit/be of benefit to/be beneficial to__6.sure→ __convinced__作文升级第二步让句式丰富多变按要求升级句式并将黑体词语替换为升级后的词汇1.利用被动句改写句①__I have been informed that our school team is recruiting new members. __2.利用分词作状语升级句②__Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis,I wonder whether you would like to join it. __3.利用倒装句升级句③__Not only team members get trained after school every day,but are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions. __4.利用非限制性定句从句合并句升级为倒装句后的句③和句④__Not only team members do get trained after school every day,__but are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions,which has benefited me most. __ 誊写升级后的作文__Dear Eric,I’m writing to invite you to join our school team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. __Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis,I wonder whether you would like to join it.Not only team members do get trained after school every day but are also often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions,which has benefited me most. If you are interested in it,you can visit the school website to sign up before the deadline,June 15.I’m convinced it will be a great choice if you join the school team. ____Yours sincerely,____Li Hua___。

2025届高考英语二轮复习五年2020—2024年高考英语真题专项分类汇编:书面表达(含答案)

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考点8 书面表达—五年(2020—2024年)高考英语真题专项分类汇编一、【2024年新课标卷】假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。

请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:1. 你完成的作品;2. 你的感想。

注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Yours,Li Hua二、【2023年新课标卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。

请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议。

注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,I’m Li Hua from Class3._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua三、【2022年新高考卷】假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

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高考英语二轮书面表达话题为主训练02及参考范文 试题

2021高考英语二轮书面表达〔话题为主〕训练〔02〕及参考范文制卷人:打自企;成别使;而都那。

审核人:众闪壹;春壹阑;各厅……日期:2022年二月八日。

方案举行英语作文竞赛,主题为“We need Advice from Older Generations〞。

请根据以下要求写一篇作文:你遇到了困难或者问题,不知该怎么办。

你去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到理解决。

要求写清楚下面三点:1.当时面临的困难或者问题是什么?2.你获得的指教是什么?3.结果如何?注意:1.作文总词数为100左右;2.不能在作文中出现所在的校名和本人姓名,否那么本节判为零分。

【参考范文】略人们完成工作的方式通常有两种:HY完成与完成。

两种方式各有特点。

请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team〞为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:1.HY完成:自行安排、自己解决问题2.完成:一起讨论、互相学习3.我喜欢的方式及理由注意:词数100~120,文章的题目和开头已给出〔不计词数〕。

Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done.*************************************************完毕第二节书面表达〔满分是25〕根据下面提示写一篇短文1.简述以下现象:〔1〕安康之重要人尽皆知。

〔2〕许多青少年不注重安康问题,假期尤甚。

长时间是看电视,通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。

导致的危害如:影响视力,身体虚弱,缺乏人际交往。

2. 简述你的看法,提出你的建议。

要求:〔1〕内容完好,层次清楚,语言流畅。

〔2〕词数120左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:交流communicate;心理安康 mental healthHave a healthy lifestyle【参考范文】Have a healthy lifestyleAs we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle.*******************************************************完毕书面表达 (满分是25分)下面这幅图片描绘的是一幅反映十一黄金周交通堵塞及交通压力问题的场景。

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广西苍梧县2016高考英语书面表达二轮基础选编(5)书面表达某学校将在本周日举行A­level 水平测试,以了解学生的学习情况,并对学生的未来发展进行预测。

请根据题目要求写一个通知,号召学生参加本次考试。

1.时间:10月20日周日上午8:00~11:00;2.考生只需准备一只2B铅笔即可;3.到外语组李老师处报名。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.通知的标题和下发单位已给出,不计入总词数。

A­level Examination________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English OfficeOne possible version:A­level ExaminationA­level Examination is coming soon, which will be held from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m. on Sunday of October 20th. A­level Examination is the entrance examination to the university of the UK.If you want to study in the UK, it is good for you. After the examination, you will be given a personalized assessment. It will tell you what level of university you can be admitted to. If you are interested in this examination, please sign up to Mr. Li, who is at the English office.If you are determined to take the examination, nothing should be prepared in advance except a 2B pencil.Wish all of you good luck!English_Office书面表达假定你是李华,今天下午3时,你在学校参加了消防安全讲座。

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第三讲│任务型作文之二——写好拓展句和结尾句如何围绕主题句展开拓展句概括后要根据要点来写作,文章的一个段落通常包括主题句和拓展句两部分(有的还有结尾句)。

其中,主题句一般位于段首,提出段落主题、确定段落发展方向及展开模式,而拓展句则用以阐述、论证、支持主题句的要点,使段落更加丰满。

一般来说,围绕主题句展开拓展句的模式有以下几种:1.解释原因例如:在大城市工作有什么好处。

Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing,which means better opportunities and more conveniences.It’s easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself.2.列举支撑点例如:我们如何做才能改善环境。

If we want to improve environment then we need to change the way we behave.On the one hand,we need to buy appliances that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them.On the other hand,to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases have on our atmosphere,we should plant more trees.3.举例例如:成长环境对学生的影响。

Since students are brought up in different environments,they will have different habits and characters,which will cause many conflicts in daily life.In such cases,these youngsters will often act impulsively,quarreling or even fighting with his or her classmates because of some trivial things.They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students.What’s worse,they may find some excuses to hurt,beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them.4.比较和对比例如:是不是越快越好?Is it the faster the better? Many people believe that the faster the better,because they can save time in this way.However,others including me hold the opinion that,in many situations,the result is far less than being satisfactory and quite often goes to the opposites.Haste makes waste.5.细化主题句例如:你所喜欢的体育项目对你的影响。

高考二轮复习书面表达热点专题解答解析、考点详解.doc

高考二轮复习书面表达热点专题的正确答案、解答解析、考点详解姓名:_____________ 年级:____________ 学号:______________题型选择题填空题解答题判断题计算题附加题总分得分1.【题文】高考是全社会关注的大事, 学校和家庭表现尤为突出。

家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的”关怀”, 结果却给考生带来负面影响。

根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。

【答案】As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is “studying hard”. There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they don’t realize what a great pressure they have put on their children. It is the great pressure that often gets their children very anxious.So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last.【解析】略2.【题文】假如你是一名导游,请你结合下面一幅图画内容向游客介绍2010年上海世博会的主题、标志和吉祥物。

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江苏高考书面表达近五年考情分布从上表可以看出,近五年来,江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有真实性,越来越与生活实际紧密联系,内容包括日常生活、学校生活、社会文化等方面。

从2014年开始,江苏高考书面表达采用了一种新题型“读写任务型作文”,题型有创新,但对写作能力的要求和词数的要求等没有变化。

材料既有读写式的文字介绍也有图表,信息量大,这对考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力要求很高,同时,具有一定的开放性,便于考生写出紧扣主题的个性化内容,又能防止考生出现简单翻译写作要求中的句子的做法。

请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2—3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

【写作思路】本篇书面表达要求考生根据两段文字材料写一篇文章,针对“消费排名”现象论述自己的看法和观点,并阐述理由。

文章为任务型读写,属于议论文,主要使用第一和第三人称,一般现在时。

写作时应注意紧扣两段材料表达的主题,不可偏题,还应注意合理使用高级词汇和较复杂句型。

考生首先应当仔细阅读题干所提供的文字材料。

通读两篇文字材料可知,第一段材料为一对母子看了网上的评论后买回旅行箱,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好;第二段材料为一家人看了网评后去餐馆吃饭,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出网评的不可靠性。

明确以上事实后,再在此基础上明确文章的主题和结构,对“消费排名”现象作相关阐述。

本文可分为三段进行写作,第一段用30词左右概述材料的主要内容,提出文章主题;第二段论述对“消费排名”现象的观点并说明理由;第三段总结全文,再次点明主题。

在遣词造句上,应当注意合理使用连接成分,以提高文章的逻辑性,如在说明看法时可以用to begin with,what’s more,last but not least等;此外应尽量使用较复杂句型,如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构;在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装语序等。

【配套K12】高考英语二轮复习 书面表达(点睛)浏览(5)

2016(广东)花县高考英语(二轮)书面表达(点睛)浏览(5)短文写作(共1题;满分30分)请你根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。

A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.--- J. Burroughs注意: ①无须写标题;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例;④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

【参考范文】短文写作A possible version:It's a common sense that we are always encountering much failure in different stages of life. Under these circumstances, what matters most is not only our persistence but also our attitudes.In our daily life, however hard we try, failure will accompany us like shades. When it comes to this topic, unforgettable memories crowd in my mind. I once did so badly in a critical exam that I lost a precious opportunity to be admitted to a key senior high scho ol. I wasn’t aware of my laziness and carelessness. Instead, I thought the difficult exam and the neglect of my parents were to blame for my failure. I regarded myself as a stander-by and never learned to shoulder responsibilities for my own. It was my head-teacher's timely instruction that made me face difficult situation any time it appeared, after which I became more confident and diligent. The coming success made me popular among my peers. Never shall I forget this impressive experience.It can be concluded from the above mentioned that positive attitude makes a true man while being timid before misfortune results in a failure. Facing any failure bravely can achieve a great success.【湖北省天门市2014模拟】短文写作(共1题;满分30分)目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差,这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑。

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