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托福写作时间不够用?!三步帮你解决

托福写作时间不够用?!三步帮你解决

托福写作时间不够用?!三步帮你解决托福写作时间不够用,肿么办?别急,天道小编这里有三个新托福写作的步骤可以帮助各位考生们解决这一问题呦!还请同学们能够仔细阅读!如需了解更多托福考试资讯,欢迎访问天道教育托福相关频道!新托福写作考试中,考生的时间紧任务重,因此想要出色的完成就必须要掌握一些很有用的托福写作方法。

我们在托福考试写作时间分配上可以分为以下几步走,希望对大家的托福写作时间分配上不至于走向极端。

步骤 1审题、确定托福立场、列出理由(只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由,防止遗忘),最少3分钟最多5分钟。

要避免两个极端:a.用时太少,理由没有想清楚就开始写,不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清,还会引起行文中频繁的修正,欲速则不达;b.用时太多,不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来。

其实想出两条之后就可以动笔,各个理由的例证可以写到该段时边思考边写。

这一点你不必怀疑,只要你的思维还是正常的,一定能做到。

步骤 2新托福写作正文最少时间22分钟最多26分钟:a.各段写作时,注意对段落的不同部分给予不同的重视。

主题句给予最大重视,注意炼句,别说你不想写主题句,主题句可以使读者和本人更清晰该段落写什么。

各段中支持性细节写作不必遵循相同的模式。

有n种选择可供参考:1.举具体事例;2.说对方相对缺点;3.使用数据;4.使用假想例子;5.使用类比、比喻、引用等修辞手段来论述。

哪一种你最容易想出来,就用哪一种。

b.考前将文章开头、结尾、例证、让步等各种句型背熟练,并且练习和模考时把他们用熟,要象做完型填空一样对待考场作文。

别试图在考场上再去临时决定比如哪种开头好,怎样结尾好。

使用自己选种的套话。

c.当被告知还有5分钟结束时,一般你应该已经写到最后一条理由,或者已经在做结尾。

要确保文章有结尾段(不排除将它和最后一条理由的末段结合在一起的可能性)。

步骤 3托福写作检查需要1-3分钟,有侧重点地检查:a.句法:确保每句话是完整的,有谓语,且简单句只有一个谓语。

托福写作如何拿满分

托福写作如何拿满分

托福写作如何拿满分在托福写作中,如何拿满分是很多考生关注的问题。

下面将从准备阶段、写作技巧和时间管理等方面,探讨如何在托福写作中取得高分。

一、准备阶段在考前的准备阶段,应提前了解托福写作的评分标准,熟悉各个分数段的要求。

此外,还可以参考真题,了解不同种类的写作题型和常见的话题范围,积累相关的词汇和论证素材。

同时,多做练习题,加强对语法和句子结构的掌握,提高写作水平和思维能力。

二、写作技巧1.明确观点和论证在写作时,首先要明确自己的观点和论证思路。

可以通过列举事实、给出例子、引用权威数据或专家观点等方式,来支持自己的论点。

同时,要注意逻辑清晰,论证完整,避免重复和不相关的内容。

2.合理组织篇章结构在写作中,合理的篇章结构是很重要的。

可以采取常用的三段式结构,分为引言、主体和结论部分。

引言可以提出问题或引入话题,主体部分可以展开分论点,结论部分可以总结观点,并提出展望或建议。

3.灵活运用句式和词汇为了提高作文的表达水平,可以尝试使用多样化的句式和词汇。

避免重复使用相同的句子结构和词汇,可以通过使用一些高级词汇和复杂句型,来增加论证的深度和说服力。

4.多角度思考问题写作时,可以从不同的角度思考问题,并给出多个方面的论证。

这样可以更充分地展示自己的思考能力和对问题的理解。

同时,也可以通过对比不同观点,给出自己的主张,并进行有力的支持和辩驳。

三、时间管理在托福写作中,时间管理是至关重要的。

首先要仔细阅读题目,并根据需要进行思考和列出提纲。

然后,合理安排时间,保持思路清晰,不要陷入细节和罗列事实。

主要精力应集中在观点和论证上,控制好时间分配,确保每个段落都有足够的篇幅和论证。

综上所述,要在托福写作中拿满分,需要在准备阶段掌握评分标准和了解题型特点,在写作技巧上合理组织结构、明确观点和运用丰富的语言表达,同时要合理管理时间,充分展示思考和论证能力。

通过不断练习和积累,相信大家一定能在托福写作中取得高分。

托福独立写作没写完怎么办

托福独立写作没写完怎么办

托福独立写作没写完怎么办有一些考托福的朋友问托福独立写作没写完怎么办?我们该怎样提高我们的写作速度呢?下面小编与你分享。

托福独立写作:三招攻克时间不够用的难题一、夯实基础,熟能生巧。

对于备考时间充足的考生来说,扎实的基本功是冲刺托福写作高分的不二法门。

独立写作时间不够用的原因可以归结为以下两类:一是打字速度慢,不适应基于计算机输入的考试形式;二是题目不熟悉,审题、列提纲和安排文章结构等环节浪费了大量时间,导致有效输入正文的时间不够。

针对这两类问题,建议考生在日常练习中不要盲目练习、只顾低头写文章,要有的放矢,适当增加一些基础训练。

打字速度慢的考生可以下载一些练习打字的软件,通过寓教于乐的练习提升输入速度、提高输入的正确率。

题目不熟的考生可以仔细研究近三年托福考试写作部分的真题机经,每道题目都列出提纲,矫正逻辑偏差和理解误差。

由于托福考试写作部分的题目题材重复度高,熟悉机经真题的考生在考试过程中可以在审题、列提纲、安排文章结构、和全文通览检查等环节中节省大量时间,把更多的时间留给正文输入。

二、合并同类,调整顺序。

托福独立写作满分标准中明确指出:“文章结构合理,论证展开充分,并具有一致性、统一性。

”因此为确保文章结构完整,考生可以熟练运用一些小技巧,适当调整行文顺序。

一篇结构完整的文章包括开头段、正文段和结尾段三个部分,其中开头、结尾各1段,正文段可以安排3或4段。

而开头、结尾部分内容相同,需要考生表明观点、简述理由。

大量实践和考生反馈证明:文章结构不完整,尤其是缺少结尾部分,是导致低分的一个重要原因。

另一方面,托福iBT考试基于计算机输入信息,这也就突破了使用传统纸质试卷答题的很多限制。

考生可以在计算机答题区域内的任意位置输入信息,既不影响美观,也不受传统纸质试卷的空间限制。

因此,建议考生可以先输入开头段,再输入结尾段,最后在中间插入正文段。

这样做有两个好处:一是保证文章结构完整,即使时间不够用,也只有最后一个正文段论述不充足,结尾段却完整的重述了观点,不会对得分产生太多影响;二是开头、结尾内容表述类似,同样的观点再说一遍,有利于提升打字速度,节省思考时间。

写作文是先立意还是先构思

写作文是先立意还是先构思

写作文是先立意还是先构思审题。

立意,选材语文是一门基础文化课,相对于数学、英语这两门文化课来说,语文是比较容易学的课程,但是大多数人在语文考试中很难取得优异的成绩,这是什么原因呢?结合从教几年来的语文教学实践,我在此谈谈自己的一些看法。

一份语文试卷,题型可能多种多样,但概括起来,无非是两大项:一是基础知识部分,这包括书本上学的知识和与书本有关的课外知识;二是作文。

很多学生在自学、备考语文时,往往著重的就是基础知识,把老师课堂上大的、写下的全部记下来,那么在考出这部分内容时,就很少在这上面安打;而对于作文却不作注重,指出不就是写下一篇文章吗,东兎西比拼就变成了。

其实,这恰恰就是本末倒置了。

在语文试卷中,作文总是单独列为一项,分数在整份试卷中的比重最大。

有的学生在基础知识部分做得好,但作文不一定写得好;相反,作文写得好的学生,前面基础知识部分通常也不会差到哪里去。

近几年来,试卷中的作文大多数就是话题作文,这往往就是为学生进行M18x、想象提供更多一个既有开放性又存有约束力的“话题”,学生在写下这类作文时,充分发挥的余地很大,但必须写下一篇存有水准的文章,也不是一件易事。

虽然这样,但话题作文并意味著可以随便写下。

出题者依然有一个评判标准,因此考生也不能任意去写。

也就是说,不管出题者还是写作者,都具有一定的限制性和较大的自由性。

乍一看,这两个特点似乎矛盾,其实不然。

出来卷人的限制性是无法胡乱命题,不能不考量社会的因素和学生的情况;而自由性则整体表现在命题方式可以有效率多样:给材料或给题目,托福记叙文或托福议论文,托福一篇或托福多篇。

写作者的限制则相对多一些,话题、考场、时间等都是限定和制约写作的因素。

当然,考生也不是一点自由都没有,写作角度的确定、材料的选择、技巧的运用等,还是可以在一定程度上由自己敲定的。

下面就平时作文教学中学生在文学创作时发生的一些情况,谈一谈如何写下不好话题作文。

练或考试中领到作文题时,千万不能不提思索动笔就写下,必须必须存有恰当的步骤。

新东方托福写作:学会用好机经

新东方托福写作:学会用好机经

新东方托福写作:学会用好机经为了关心大家备考托福写作,提高托福分数,下面我给大家带来新东方托福写作:学会用好机经,来学习一下吧!新东方托福写作:学会用好机经!口语一二题预备时间十几秒,托福写作一共也就30分钟,但是最少300词,建议写到400词。

在这么严酷的时间之下,我们真正说出来,写出来的内容,就是我们的实际能力。

换句话说,口语和托福写作机经,其实最大的作用,就是让我们能在事先想一下〔作文〕和口语的思路,口语的话,可以试试回答里面的几个题,也就是这样了。

最聪慧的托福写作机经使用〔方法〕,就是在考前花足够的时间,磨练自己的实力,口语的话,就是要矫正自己的发音,同时要多说。

作文的话,就是要让自己的作文写得更地道,这就是最好的方法!同时也只有这种方法,才能最大程度的提升自己的托福写作考试分数。

同时最可怕的就是,把每一次考试都当成自己最终一次考试,然后每次都是急功近利把全部盼望都放在短短几天的冲刺上,然后每一次都绝望而归。

说真的,在考前猛扑在托福写作机经身上,倒不如一开始就把今日这份资料打印出来,每天想几条写作的理由,这样比考前的机经、冲刺靠谱多了!不知大家读了上文,有没有受到启发,托福写作机经的使用不是单纯地背诵而已!2021年1月1112日托福写作机经小范围预报1. What is the most important thing for a country’s leader to assure the prosperity of the country?1) Creating more jobs for unemployed worker2) Increasing agriculture and lowering the food price3) Increasing access to affordable houseThe leaders of a country have no shortage of difficult decisions to make. For example, should they lead their countryto success by creating jobs, by promoting agriculture, or by ensuring housing is affordable? Leaders should certainly invest into all of those options, but I believe that the government should use most of its resources to lower the cost of housing.Ensuring low cost housing is better than creating more jobs because creating government jobs is only a Band-Aid solution. It offers a temporary solution, not a permanent one. If there’s a lack of jobs, then that’s a sign that the economy is hurting. If that’s the case, then low-cost housing would actually help more than the government creating unnecessary jobs. As the cost of housing comes down, people will have more disposable income. Businesses will grow, and thus will provide more jobs. It’s a win-win scenario.Similarly, lowering the cost of housing is also better than promoting agriculture in order to reduce the cost of food. While it is true that everyone must eat, it’s also true that everyone must live somewhere. The difference is that a country’s citizens must live in housing within that country, but they don’t need to eat food that comes from that country. These days, we import a large portion of our food from other countries. If a country’s agriculture isn’t providing enough food, then perhaps that country’s land just isn’t ideal for agriculture and it would be a waste of money to attempt to force more agriculture to happen. A better solution would be to focus on the problem it can fix: housing.Meanwhile, reducing the cost of housing is a realistic goal for a country to tackle, and it has long-term benefits that produces a natural boost to the economy. Housing takes up thelargest chunk of most people’s paycheck. For example, we learned in my personal finance class that people should expect to pay between 20% to 30% of their monthly salary on housing. With lower housing costs, people would be able to survive with a lower-end job. People would be able to afford imported food. The economy would improve because people would have more money to spend. This is the solution the government should focus on.In the end, government leaders should invest in the success of the country in every way they can. However, I think investment in lowering the cost of housing will bring the best results.2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Success in school and work, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.Nowadays, employers are highly selective: requiring employees to have both academic proficiency and social flexibility. Hence, to increase your chances of getting a desired job, having the ability to adapt to a changing condition is as important as having excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study. Academic data being equal, the ability to reduce conflict and increase participation is a decisive factor that contributes to your career success.To begin with, the ability to reduce conflict in school and work is partly the course of socialization going beyond the school curriculum. Whereas excellence in any field of study is essential, your success in work depends not only on academicknowledge but also on how to adjust to a changing circumstance. Therefore, it is advisable to learn to be able to adjust to a rather conflicting society because this kind of social flexibility can facilitate your interaction with other people. In other words, communicating respect for potential friends and mates is instrumental to avoiding conflict, particularly in the workplace. In reality, the process of learning this skill begins in school, in both verbal and non-verbal ways. It may be said that without acquiring the ability to reduce conflict, you may run the risk of becoming what is called a social ineptitude, far away from the spirit of teamwork.In certain respects, the success in school and work is a matter of the behaviorism to get flexible in social participation. Thus, you are supposed to learn to be as agreeable and acceptable as need be, mainly through taking part in (without intruding into) a variety of social activities, verbally as well as non-verbally. Verbally, you can increase participation by using the skill to say the right thing at the right time in the right place. It is because positive participation implies your good skill in listening as much as speaking. Similarly, in a non-verbal manner, you can increase participation by doing the right thing at the right time in the right place. In short, you had better adapt yourself to a changing condition or circumstance and behave correspondingly in the right behavior.Finally, worthy of mentioning is that, although socialization may differ from culture to culture, the rules are invariably related to skills to help reduce conflict and increase participation in school and work. Not underestimatingthe importance of having excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study, you ought to also learn those essential social skills to become successful in life. Academic proficiency and social flexibility should not be considered as something like black and white, you may just as well think that the job market is largely in the color of grey.托福写作的字数都有什么讲究新托福作文需要行文不啰嗦,〔句子〕应越短越好,假如一个字能说清晰的,就不要用两个字。

托福作文格式及写作注意事项

托福作文格式及写作注意事项

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托福intergrated_writing写作

托福intergrated_writing写作

新托福写作的task1部分是一个阅读,听力和写作于一体的综合写作题目。

广大考生如果想要在这个部分取得高分就必须从阅读、听力和写作三个方面着手,不断提高自己的英语能力。

这类题目会先给考生3分钟读一篇文章(大概200字左右),然后听一段关于对此文章的评论,结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文,典型的问法是:Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading。

听力结束后,阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分,考生便可以开始写作,写作时间为20分钟。

在下面的文章中我重点讲如何抓住阅读和听力的核心来构思写作思路从而写出一篇符合要求的好文章来。

1、阅读:找核心句子和关键词语这部分阅读的文章都是节选自一些学术文章,所以文字比较简洁,每个句子所包含你的信息量也会大一些。

和普通阅读文章一样,文章的首句即为整个文章的主题,接下来文章会围绕这个主题展开一些细节性的话题。

此外,还要把握文章的最后一段,和每个段落的一些关键词语,以判断作者的语气和态度。

在段落中间,一般情况下,第一句为主题句,后面就论据,考生注意表示转折和原因的副词“ but , because ,yet”等以确定作者的语气和对该话题的态度。

2、听力:判断说话人的语气,记录说话者的观点和支持性例子听力是这类考试的难点,但考生如果已经明白了阅读材料的意思,那么听力也变得不那么难了。

因为阅读部分已经揭示了听力的主题,考生需要做的就是判断听力文章的观点和阅读之间的观点,是相互支持还是反驳,支持/反驳的支持性例子有那些,这就是听力的重点。

鉴于听力的长度和难度,考生需要在听的过程中做笔记。

与阅读部分一样,记录关键词和句子,这些词语和句子往往存在于转折或者过渡词语的后面。

3、写作:关键词语不变,有合理的结合和恰当的过渡词语把听力和阅读部分的意思进行结合 4第一段:总结听力和阅读部分的主要观点In the listening material , the author pointed out a fact/phenomenon that -------------(指出听力文的重点,)which was opposed to ideas ----------(总结阅读部分的观点)in the reading materials .The reading passage asserts that….. However, the speaker totally refutes the passage by stating that…Disagree, disapprove, argue against, a total rebuttal towardsContradict, contrast with, refute, is the opposite of, be contrary to, ……Effective, cannot be the substitutes for第二段(3 小段):展开论述听力和阅读部分观点的分论点In the first place / firstly / to begin with , speaker believed that ------------(指出听力部分分论点内容) he reasons for his /her views were as follows , first ------------ second -----------(听力分论点细节),while the author in the reading material confirmed that ――――(阅读部分的观点)which was totally different from the viewpoints in the listening parts.1:听力的观点+论证细节----- 阅读的观点 +论证细节(it depends)2: 阅读的观点---- 听力的观点+论证细节Sentence patternsThe speaker points outThe reading material points outIt is pointed out by the speaker / lecturer / professor在ETS公开的综合写作评分标准中,给出了5分(即满分)作文的定义如下:A response at this level successfully selects the important information from thelecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading. The response is well organized, and occasional language errors that are present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content or connections.一、“点对点”的结构“点对点”的结构指的是把综合写作中的阅读材料和听力材料的每一个对应点都单独提炼出来用一个段落加以阐述。

如何改变写作中的滔滔不绝_提纲构思是关键

如何改变写作中的滔滔不绝_提纲构思是关键

如何改变写作中的滔滔不绝?提纲构思是关键托福成绩一下来,有的考生就纳闷了:为什么我觉得托福写作非常简单,我简直是一笔千行,下笔如有神,可是托福写作的成绩依然不高呢?这可能就犯了“滔滔不绝”的错误,托福写作最经典的高分标准是清晰,通顺,用简练的语言表述自己的思想。

下面是学习啦小编给大家带来的如何改变写作中的滔滔不绝,供大家参考!如何改变写作中的滔滔不绝?提纲构思是关键有一部分考生在考试时一见到作文题,便感到很对自己的胃口,觉得有很多内容要写。

于是乎千言万语涌上心头,写着前一句想着后一句。

往往前句尚未写完便接上了后一句,辛辛苦苦写了一大堆(甚至有的考生写了11个自然段)仍意犹未尽,结果是令判卷的老师头疼不已,无法继续往下看。

其原因就在于这种没有构思、未按提纲要求的作文章法太乱,评议质量差。

我国的传统作文题都是规定式作文,这跟TOEFL考试不一样。

因此,写作时必须按给定的提纲或提示去写,过于放任的做法是不可取的,更不要另有所图,滔滔不绝,这是进入实际操作前的一个基本认识问题,稍不留神就会出问题。

要控制这种“意识流”的写法,必须严格按照三点提纲来写。

假如第一段要求描述某个现象,务必不要先进入到原因分析,否则到了第二段该分析原因的时候就没东西可写了。

明智的做法是投其所好,该如何就如何,这一原则适用于所有的考试。

另外,有的考生一方面有话则多,一发而不可收,控制不了自己;一方面无话则隐,该说的话没有体现出来。

我们不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落:一篇200词左右的作文一般不会超过15 句话,把这15 句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大概只说那么几句话,绝不多说,事实上往往是说得越多,错误越多。

因此,顺着提纲走,每一段不要写得太多,点到为止,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。

托福写作常见陷阱很多学生可能词汇量不少,语言组织能力也不错,可是到了写作的时候却总是的不了高分。

这种情况主要是因为学生的思路还是过于闭塞或者主体不够突出等问题,那么下面小编就给大家总结了影响写作的三个大问题。

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托福写作先构思再写作节省写作时间托福写作考试中,我们要写完两篇*,其中一篇是综合写作,另外一篇是独立写作。

今天给大家带来了托福写作先构思再写作节省写作时间,希望能够帮助到大家,一起来学习吧。

托福写作先构思再写作节省写作时间一.如何构思*其实想必绝大多数上过辅导班的考友们都知道托福作文就是传统的,龙头凤尾猪肚子,这样的写作方式。

第一段表明自己的观点,然后接下来每一段一开始给出分论点,最后一段进行总结,就这么简单。

但是实际上,这是我们想的方向不对,总是在向很宏观的想。

这里的诀窍就是向细分领域想!当我们总是在想建筑对社会很好的时候,我们就是会很想象到理由以及例子,但是如果我们想得很细的时候,就发现好说了,比如我们可以说赵州桥,既有实用价值,也有观赏价值。

这就言之有物了!这是第一,减少构思的过程的时间,靠细分领域。

二.如何具体地表达出来在托福独立写作考试中,如果使用模板可以为你节约很多的时间。

也能帮助你快速地展开表达*。

如果按照你的*字数是400字来算,那么你的*中可能会有40-50个句子。

如果你把这40-50个句子都排成编号,从第1个句子到40个句子,也就是从*的第1句话到最后1句话,你都知道要写什么,并且知道要怎么去写,甚至是每个句子你都有很漂亮的句式,这样写出来的作文还怕得不到高分吗?再比如,这40-50个句子有一半都是固定的句式,那么就形成了自己的写作套路,那么就不用担心*写不完了。

想要快速写出*,也可以靠多做中译英的翻译练习,也会有所改进。

比如说,我们可以用一些网站上内容将我们自己的作文按照对方地道的原文进行修改,这样的方法,通过大量的进行中译英的转换,来增加我们的熟练度,这样就可以逐步削减我们的思考怎样表达的时间。

托福考试作文独立写作范文:小学生应多学科技吗Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-11years old) technology (like computer) than teaching music and art.托福写作范文参考:The question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the elementary schools should teach? ” has never failed to attract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when it comes to subjects like technology, or music and art. Some argue that school should spend more time teaching technology than music and art. Personally, I am not in favor of this position based on the following reasons.Admittedly, with the advent of internet and state-of-art gadgets like laptop, tablets, being able to use computers skillfully is being considered as a valuable quality. However, early exposure to computers and other kinds of technological products might bring lots of risks and problems to kids’ future development. Recently research by National Society of Psychiatrists shows that exposure to computers at an early age leads to addiction to computers when they grow older and obviously spending too much time in front of the computer can pose a threat to kids’ health, to be more specific, it leads to neck problems, nearsightedness, backache and even childhood obesity. Moreover, instead of getting addicted to playing on-line games and watching meaningless videos, kids should have spent more time focusing on their academic study, or even learning how to appreciate artwork or music. Indeed, spending more timelearning art and music not only benefits the kids, but also it is conducive the community as whole.First off, learning art and music at an early age helps to develop creativity and make the kids more imaginative. Actually, lots of scientific research in the psychological field shows that early exposure to art and music not only boosts academic achievement but also promotes creativity, self-confidence and school pride; kids who spend more time in learning art and music end up having higher analytical thinking and reasoning skills than kids who don’t.Additionally, spending more time teaching kids music and art can can benefit the whole community. Music and art are a very important part of people’s lives. They are necessary for people to express their emotions, like happiness, sorrow, and even anger regardless of cultural background, ethnicity, age and even gentle. It is very urgent to spend more time teaching kids knowledge about art and music since they bring change, facilitate innovation and help to unite the community. They are the reminder of the past and maker of tomorrow, they also help to convey ideas and different perspectives. More importantly, art and music have great cultural significance, by learning art and music kids will have a strong sense of cultural identity and sense of belonging to community,eventually the traditional values and culture can be passed down to the younger generation.To conclude, it is more advisable to spend more time teaching kids art and music than technology since not only can art and music benefit the individual kid but also it benefits the community as a whole.托福考试作文独立写作范文:政府为民众免费提供互联网服务(A/D) The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.点睛题目大意:政府应该为民众免费提供互联网服务。

此题较为简单,思路也有很多。

建议选择不同意,即认为政府不应该为民众免费提供互联网服务,因为一方面会加重政府的财政负担,另一方面会让更多人上网成瘾,进一步疏远人际关系。

写作参考一:With the advent of internet, people in growing numbers are getting addicted to logging onto the internet out of various purposes, which has aroused deeply social concern. Therefore, the issue of whether the bills of using the Internet should be paid by。

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