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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）
四级英语写作应用文写作(图表-漫画)公开课获奖课件百校联赛一等奖课件
2) 描述详细数据变化
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increase/decrease by...
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increase from ... to...
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increase steadily from...
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There was a marked increase
in ...
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There has been a rapid
increase in ...
hand, ...On the other hand, ...
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The rapid growth of ... owes much to...
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lie in
• (2) In recent years, the time students using computers has increased greatly. (2023.6 CET-4)
• 第二段分析引起变化旳原因,主题句一般表达引起这种变化旳 原因有几点.例如:
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(1) There are many factors that have stimulated this huge
place in ...
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From the above table it can be seen that...
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As it is shown in the table,...
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According to the graph, ...
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It is clear from the table that ...
increased 4%.
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总之,挑选有说服力旳数据,主要是首尾两端数字或其增减值.
3. 强调数据间旳关系,突出变化
• 发觉数据旳变化规律,引用了经典数据,还须进一 步强调突出这种变化,使论证更有力.以 "Student Use of Computer"为例,有学生写到:But in 2023, students spent nearly 20 hours per week on the computer. This number was ten times that of 1990 and five times that of 1995. 像这么用倍数或百分 比更能阐明问题,给人留下深刻印象.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
公开课-高中英语写作课件
英语写作训练
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
The paragraph
为了丰富同学们的课外生活，你校英语协会将举办 音乐周活动，其中一项活动为征文比赛。请你根据以下 提示The benefits of listening to music为题写一篇英 语短文参加征文活动：
1.听音乐有助于减轻压力； 2.听音乐能消除烦恼，有助睡眠； 3.听音乐给人灵感，培养创造力。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：灵感inspiration
典型病例
1.单词拼写问题 2.名词的单复数问题 3. 主谓一致问题 4.时态和语态问题 5.代词(主格、宾格)问题
6.Chinglish现象
A Sample Writing(范文欣赏) The benefits of listening to music A large number of people like listening to music.Listening to music is beneficial to us in many ways. To begin with, since stress is the cause of many illnesses, we can reduce the risk of getting these diseases by listening to music that we like.Secondly, listening to music is an effective way to remove worry and it is also helpful to a good night's sleep.In addition, listening to music can provide us with inspiration and help develop our creativity, which will play an important role in our future success. In general, listening to music will make us live better.
人教版高一英语必修二Unit2 写作课 公开课课件(共22张PPT)
Writing
Liu Di
Hunchun No.1 High School
Fu Yuanhui
Chinese Women Volleyball Team
Heroes
UnVkonoluwnnteHeresroes
Volunteers
What qualities do you think a volunteer should have ?
so that; noBTtoeobsbneidelcygea…isunbs;wueF;tiintahalslloy…;
I'm eager to be a volunteer, _b_e_ca_u_s_e_I want to be part of the Olympics. Besides, I'm _n_o_t_o_n_l_yhelpful____b_u_t_also hard-working,__s_o__th_a_t I am sure I will offer the best service to the athletes in the games.
Firstly, I promise I should try to serve our guests and athletes from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Chinese history so that I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our culture. What's more, as we all know, English, which is an international language, will play an important role in communication during Olympics, and I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
Liu Di
Hunchun No.1 High School
Fu Yuanhui
Chinese Women Volleyball Team
Heroes
UnVkonoluwnnteHeresroes
Volunteers
What qualities do you think a volunteer should have ?
so that; noBTtoeobsbneidelcygea…isunbs;wueF;tiintahalslloy…;
I'm eager to be a volunteer, _b_e_ca_u_s_e_I want to be part of the Olympics. Besides, I'm _n_o_t_o_n_l_yhelpful____b_u_t_also hard-working,__s_o__th_a_t I am sure I will offer the best service to the athletes in the games.
Firstly, I promise I should try to serve our guests and athletes from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Chinese history so that I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our culture. What's more, as we all know, English, which is an international language, will play an important role in communication during Olympics, and I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
七年级下册英语写作公开课课件
仿写例文1 I’m a middle school student .I ____ in a small village. On school days, I usually _____ up at 6:00, I ______ home ___ 6:30 in the morning .My school is about 5 kilometers _____ my home. I _____ to school _____ bike. It _____ me half an hour to _____ to school. The bike ____ is very interesting, It’s good exercise.
ride the/a ________ walk to
交通工具 （介词类）
1.乘公共汽车去 2.乘地铁去 3.乘火车去 4.坐小汽车去 go by_______ go on ______ 5.骑自行车去 6.走路去
Stage 2:
连词成句
某人
• • • •
其他词汇 乘 交通工具去 哪里
1.我乘______去学校。 离开家 乘公交才之行 _____to school. I take the 锻炼 to school by_____. I go 住在一个小村庄 2.他乘____去学校。 He takes the ____to school. He goes to school by_____.
Stage 4: Have a try by yourselves!
自己试一试！
Who is the be的朋友的上学之旅。
姓名
年龄 花时 间
Tom
12 半小 时
家住 永川
学校 大安 中学
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满分作文展示1
Dear sir, I am writing to you for the mobileWhat of Dephone-S250 phone 引导的名词性从句 I bought on 20th Apr.,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. Taking into account all worse 这一过渡词的 what’s these factors China. above 非谓语动词作状语，意为 恰当使用，使文章衔接自然 What I want to say is that there is something wrong with “考虑到以上因素”，起到总结的 my mobile phone. First, the phone bell doesn’t ring at all. 作用，类似的表达还有；above all， What’s worse, it can’t be used to send short messages to in a word, to sum up, in summary, in others. Besides, because the product here has been sold out, conclusion, in short the salesman can’t change it for me. As the model of this There is something wrong part, mobile phone is new, there is no spare with which results in its not being 的地道表达展示语言积累丰富 repaired. Taking into account all these factors above, I require the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely
作文写作
假如你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司 更换，请根据以下要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。 要点： 1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新， 无配件，无法维修。 2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换 注意：1.要求以五句话表达 2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已写好 3.参考词汇；配件：spare part 型号：model Dear sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China 1 1 Thank you for your considerration. Yours sincerely
写作步骤
审题：时态------一般过去时 一般现在时 人称--------第一人称 文体--------应用文（电子邮件） 结构布局 •手机不响铃，不能发短信 •该产品已售完，无法更换 •型号新，无配件，无法维修 •公司应尽快予以更换 选用恰当的过渡词 furthermore, what’s more, and then, in addition,besides, for another, first, second, third 得分关键：句子衔接自然，层次清晰，行文连贯
学生习作1
学生习作2
满分作文展示1
Dear sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China. What I want to say is that there is something wrong with my mobile phone. First, the phone bell doesn’t ring at all. What’s worse, it can’t be used to send short messages to others. Besides, because the product here has been sold out, the salesman can’t change it for me. As the model of this mobile phone is new, there is no spare part, which results in its not being repaired. Taking into account all these factors above, I require the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely
句子翻译
二．恰当套用某些固定表达 1.手机不响铃，不能发短信 [一般句] The mobile phone can’t ring or send short messages. [优秀句] The mobile phone doesn’t work either in ringing or in sending short messages. 2.你的儿子已经长大，现在可以自己照顾自己了。 [一般句] Your son is old. He can look after himself now. [ 优秀句] Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
句子翻译
一．注意中文和英文两种语言的差异 1. 他们明天讨论这个问题 [一般句]They will discuss the problem tomorrow [优秀句]The problem will be discussed tomorrow by them 2. 老板已经卖光了手机 [一般句] The boss has sold out the mobile phones [优秀句]The mobile phones have been sold out by the b式“I found it didn’t work either--Dear sir, However表示转折的过渡词 I am writing to you for or---,简约有效 of Dephone-S250 I the mobile phone 使用恰当，类似还有----bought on 20th Apr.,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China. 这种结构要比because I found it didn’t work either in ringing or in sending short messages. However, unfortunately, are no sparethey couldn’t there I was told that parts change for a new one because mobile 表达简洁this model had phones of
句子翻译
三．适当运用非谓语结构 1.听到这个消息他们都高兴得跳了起来 [一般句]When they heard the news, they all jumped for joy [优秀句]Hearing the news , they all jumped for joy. 2由于不知道她的地址，我没法和他联系 [一般句]As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her [优秀句]Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
满分作文展示2
Dear sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.,2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China. I found it didn’t work either in ringing or in sending short messages. However, unfortunately, I was told that they couldn’t change for a new one because mobile phones of this model had been sold out. Later, I went to have it repaired. What’s worse,they told me this was such a new model of mobile phone that it could’t be repaired because of there being no spare parts. I request that your company should change it for me as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration Yours sincerely
been sold out. Later, I went to have it repaired. What’s worse,they told me this was such a new model of mobile phone that it could’t be repaired because of there being no spare parts. 语法使用准 I request that your company should change it for me as soon 确 as possible. Thank you for your consideration Yours sincerely